I'll make sure he sticks to that, guys. =P (Or try to, at least.)
Well, I would've given this to you earlier, but thanks to various things (*glares at wi-fi*), here it is now.
Page 10: The scene with Rivnak works a bit better this time around, partly because Ak's sword isn't comically oversized and partly because Ak looks legitimately angry about Rivnak being there. (Also your style has improved a lot, but I've said that many times before =P)
Page 11: For some weird reason, I'm finding the fact that background character fell out of her seat face-first really funny xD
Page 12: And now she's running away. (I don't blame her at all.) Also, Nemesis looks really sinister in that first panel. =P