<Reverb> Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 Oneker! Run! Run! You're Doomed!Can't wait for the next comic Oneker.~Gravity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted May 29, 2012 Author Share Posted May 29, 2012 (edited) Ok guys about the place where my comics are set, its set on an island on Spherus Magna in the ocean bit.LinkThe Island is called New Mata Nui.The story is set after the events of Mata Nui vs Teridax.I'll put the locations in soon. Edited May 30, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted May 30, 2012 Share Posted May 30, 2012 Hehe, new Mata-Nui. It's back! xDLove the concept of the idea of where it takes place. Hope maybe you'll put backstory of the island?....~Gravity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 1, 2012 Author Share Posted June 1, 2012 I haven't started working on the next comic yet because my computer mouse is being a bit faulty, like its working fine and then suddenly it stops working. I have to plug it out and plug it back in again.If it keeps doing this my dad will buy me a new mouse. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 2, 2012 Author Share Posted June 2, 2012 Ok finally here's the next comic! Click here! and the Memory scan animation scene.I don't want to talk about why the animation scene is in the comic right now.My faulty mouse has gotten really annoying like when making I was making this comic, it always kept stopping and I had to plug it out and back in again. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 My worst nightmare fulfilled...I HATE mcdonalds... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 2, 2012 Share Posted June 2, 2012 Hehe, Mcdonalds.Love the new Memory Scan animation. I would love to see more animation from you.~Gravity Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 3, 2012 Author Share Posted June 3, 2012 (edited) Next Comic! Click here!This comic show's Milly's last name. Edited June 3, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vataki Posted June 3, 2012 Share Posted June 3, 2012 (edited) I loved how her scream shakes the entire house. I'd also like to say the new image in your signature seems very interesting. Edited June 3, 2012 by Vataki Teridax naw man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted June 3, 2012 Share Posted June 3, 2012 That's it.....I'm getting my shotgun, see you guys in a bit.And yeah, adding the shaking building to her scream was pretty awesome. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 3, 2012 Share Posted June 3, 2012 hang on while I get my AUG A3... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 (edited) Hey guys! I'm working on the next comic right now so I decided to show you a clip of it!Ptolemaios you might get excited about this. Edited June 4, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 Wow, I haven't posted here in a while. Well, I guess now's the time, right? ANYWAYS, I like the new series you've got going on right now. It's getting a bit heated now that those two "Men Matoran in Black" have taken someone in. I like the whole concept of it all. You are also developing the character "Milly" in exceptional ways which has shown throughout the saga. You've done a very nice job, Oneker. I'm sorry I can't get to giving you a critique for each and every comic, but now that I've gotten a bit extremely far behind, it would take a very long post to critique them all. P.S. This stupid troll that has been ravaging around my computer keeps striking through my words, so sorry for the over usage of the strike-through.P.P.S Heck, I live in Russia. So make my character wield an AK-47 if you need to (Which is a nice way of saying that you totally have to put my character in the comic with an AK-47).-Rez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 4, 2012 Author Share Posted June 4, 2012 Wow, I haven't posted here in a while. Well, I guess now's the time, right? ANYWAYS, I like the new series you've got going on right now. It's getting a bit heated now that those two "Men Matoran in Black" have taken someone in. I like the whole concept of it all. You are also developing the character "Milly" in exceptional ways which has shown throughout the saga. You've done a very nice job, Oneker. I'm sorry I can't get to giving you a critique for each and every comic, but now that I've gotten a bit extremely far behind, it would take a very long post to critique them all. P.S. This stupid troll that has been ravaging around my computer keeps striking through my words, so sorry for the over usage of the strike-through.P.P.S Heck, I live in Russia. So make my character wield an AK-47 if you need to (Which is a nice way of saying that you totally have to put my character in the comic with an AK-47).-RezThanks Reznas!and here's the next comic! Click here!It might not be the end of Milly.You will have to find out soon. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
<Reverb> Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 (edited) Hehe, Crossbucks. I wish she was gone for good.(BTW, You forgot to update the topic post with some of the newer comics...)~Gravity Edited June 4, 2012 by Gravity Caiox Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 4, 2012 Share Posted June 4, 2012 excellent...now she is no longer a problem Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 5, 2012 Author Share Posted June 5, 2012 Ok here's the next comic! Click here!I really need a new computer mouse! 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 Shes rich enough to afford a android? Well... that stinks. I was sure that Ptolemic was the reigning hero of the arc.Lie detector, eh? As long as Damuk has a needle then hes good. All he has to do is press the needle against his fore finger to which somehow helps trick the lie detector. I think it has to do with blood pressure or something (Since blood pressure as well as other things are monitored via wires on the person.)~Soran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sir Ptolemic Of Zyglak Posted June 5, 2012 Share Posted June 5, 2012 That's it...let's see here, ah yes, Milly-seeking bullets... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 6, 2012 Author Share Posted June 6, 2012 Here's the next comic! Click here!I think the Nireda's Cousin Saga has ended for now but Milly hasn't gone home yet.Errors:In this comic the sky is daylight but in one of the previous comics showing sky, the sky was at sunset. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 @ sun error: perhaps the planet's rotation is retrograde. IE clockwise where the earth's is counter-clockwise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 6, 2012 Share Posted June 6, 2012 Here's the next comic! Click here!I think the Nireda's Cousin Saga has ended for now but Milly hasn't gone home yet.Errors:In this comic the sky is daylight but in one of the previous comics showing sky, the sky was at sunset.I deeply despise lie detectors. Poor Damuk. mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 8, 2012 Author Share Posted June 8, 2012 (edited) Here's a Comic I made! Click here!Its not to do with my comics series. Edited June 9, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 8, 2012 Share Posted June 8, 2012 Here's a Comic I made! Click here!Its not to do with my comics series.The horror... the horror... mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 9, 2012 Author Share Posted June 9, 2012 (edited) OK here's the next comic! Click here!The seriousness starts to happen.I'm thinking of changing the title again.Post please! Edited June 9, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 this is a very interesting turn of events. I think that, during the course of this arc, you should release any other aliens they captured, I agree with the latter thought as well, but I can only think of "The Adventures of Oneker," and it sounds lame. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 (edited) this is a very interesting turn of events. I think that, during the course of this arc, you should release any other aliens they captured, I agree with the latter thought as well, but I can only think of "The Adventures of Oneker," and it sounds lame.The new title i'm thinking of is "The Feline Chronicles" is it good? Edited June 10, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Reznas Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 To be honest, I really don't find a need for you to change the title of your comics. The current title is just fine. But if you do really want to, I'd change it to something that doesn't have the word Feline in it, considering you've already used that in your current title. Perhaps something that has to do with extraterrestrial beings except using the word alien, of course. Or you can do something like, "The Accounts of Oneker", or something like that. But you don't have to listen to all my ranting, just do what you find best.Now, onto the comics. I somehow have gotten behind again. Just blame that evil troll of mine. He's been eating away a lot of my time. No, seriously, he ate a bunch of my time. But don't worry, he's asleep at the moment, so I have some time to critique your comics. First off, it is so relieving to see Milly out of the picture a bit. I was afraid I would actually use that AK47 of mine. But thanks to Ptolemaios, I didn't have to. Secondly, these "Matoran in Black" are getting serious. I am enjoying this little saga you have going on right now. I honestly have nothing to critique, Oneker. Keep up the good work! -Rez Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 10, 2012 Share Posted June 10, 2012 OK here's the next comic! Click here!The seriousness starts to happen.I'm thinking of changing the title again.Post please!P.A.C.A.X., hmmmm? More like P.E.R.I.S.H.E.D. in my book. mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 10, 2012 Author Share Posted June 10, 2012 (edited) OK here's the next comic! Click here!The seriousness starts to happen.I'm thinking of changing the title again.Post please!P.A.C.A.X., hmmmm? More like P.E.R.I.S.H.E.D. in my book.It was hard thinking of an organization name for them. :PI was originally going to call it H.O.X.L standing for: Hunters of Extraterrestrial Life. Edited June 10, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dr. Giggles PhD Posted June 11, 2012 Share Posted June 11, 2012 OK here's the next comic! Click here!The seriousness starts to happen.I'm thinking of changing the title again.Post please!Cool, I hope kitty oneker gets away before they capture him. ~ Noobicorn Inc ~ And follow Noobicorn Inc. on Twitter @noobicorn ! ~ Dr. Giggles ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 15, 2012 Author Share Posted June 15, 2012 (edited) Here's an announcement! Click here!Its i've been suffering from hay fever! Click here!The next comic is completed just need to put the speech bubbles in! Edited June 15, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 17, 2012 Author Share Posted June 17, 2012 OK here's the next comic! Click here!Thank you Soran for helping me find the Tree's in the 3rd, 4th and 5th panels.Didn't know what speech to put in the last panel.Post please! 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted June 18, 2012 Share Posted June 18, 2012 i've seen what they do... Teridax was appalled. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 19, 2012 Author Share Posted June 19, 2012 (edited) OK here's the next comic! Click Here!Post please! Edited June 19, 2012 by Feline Oneker 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 24, 2012 Author Share Posted June 24, 2012 OK here's the next comic! Click here!Can you post this time please! 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 24, 2012 Share Posted June 24, 2012 OK here's the next comic! Click here!Can you post this time please! OMG A dog silhouette!And visions are not always good. mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted June 26, 2012 Author Share Posted June 26, 2012 (edited) Next Comic! Click Here!The Silhouette person may be revealed in the next saga I think. Edited June 26, 2012 by Oneker: Toa of Felines 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Athmos Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 Cat vs. Dogs? I think I saw this coming... WIP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 Three dogs, I see. Try turning into a lion. mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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