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#1 Offline The Legendary TNT

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 06:08 PM

This is something I made one night when I was building...something else entirely. It's supposed to be Vezok before he became two beings. Now I'm no Chro when it comes to MOC-ing, but for me, that's pretty good. C&C would be much appreciated. Enjoy!

 

PS. The fifth picture is what the torso looks like with the Rahkshi feet and the head taken off.


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#2 Offline ChroXumo

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 06:55 PM

Pretty neat MOC! That's a nicely constructed torso. I like how you used the Barraki spines in addition to the original Piraka headpiece.

Perhaps there's some way you could armor the lower body? Also, I do feel like the arms could use a little work... the claw looks good though.

 

Now I'm no Chro when it comes to MOC-ing,

What's this? A reputation? :lol:


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#3 Offline Baltarc

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 07:04 PM

It looks pretty good overall; the torso in particular is nicely constructed. The mata blue rahkshi feet somewhat disrupt the color scheme, however. I believe that part comes in dark blue as well; that would probably look better. The various patches of black, gray, and silver look a bit odd, but on the other hand, given Vezok's background, it's likely that he wouldn't have all his armor shiny and intact.

 

What's this? A reputation? :lol:

 

Please. Your MOCs are some of the best on this site, and you post a new one like once a week. Any reputation you have is incredibly well-deserved.


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#4 Offline Mohamed Marei

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 07:56 PM

Hmmm...

Torso construction looks good, but the Rahkshi blue kinda disagrees with the rest, and the axle down the middle looks a tad bare. Not half bad though; the mechanics you've used on the torso are actually pretty decent. A bit more armor might have helped a lot.

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#5 Offline ChroXumo

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 08:37 PM

What's this? A reputation? :lol:

Please. Your MOCs are some of the best on this site, and you post a new one like once a week. Any reputation you have is incredibly well-deserved.

Why thank you. I'm flattered.  ^_^ 


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#6 Offline Watcher on the Walls

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Posted Apr 13 2013 - 09:59 PM

Interesting MOC. I like how you made the torso, but it looks sort of hollow and thin front the side compared to other sets/bodies. The legs are quite nice as well.

What's this? A reputation? :lol:

Please. Your MOCs are some of the best on this site, and you post a new one like once a week. Any reputation you have is incredibly well-deserved.
Why thank you. I'm flattered.  ^_^ 
I agree. I don't understand how you have the time/patience/skill/pieces to make those.

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#7 Offline AdaptingChaos

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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 12:24 AM

I like the leg and chest design! Wish they had dark blue rahkshi feet tho :(

Anyways great moc tho I think the arms are to simple, but overall great design! :D


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Posted Apr 14 2013 - 06:44 AM

I like the leg and chest design! Wish they had dark blue rahkshi feet tho :(Anyways great moc tho I think the arms are to simple, but overall great design! :D

They do...they come in Krekka.

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#9 Offline Rooster Nui

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Posted Apr 15 2013 - 09:08 PM

Torso construction is fantastic. I also love the use of the spines.


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#10 Offline The Legendary TNT

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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 03:36 PM

Thanks, I'm glad you all like him! He was built out of mostly random pieces in a parts bin, until I started to really get carried away. And yes, Chro, you make some of the most amazing MOC's ever. I was a little afraid to post this one since I figured you had raised BZP's MOC-ing standards.


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 07:30 PM

I was a little afraid to post this one since I figured you had raised BZP's MOC-ing standards.

Discouragement? That's the kind of thing I don't want. I initially didn't feel like posting MOCs because of creations from people like Sparkytron, Ballom, and Fsnorglepuff. Eventually you can make a name for yourself, I guess.

Anyway, I can see I'm getting off-topic again. One suggestion to fit the overall bulkier feel- maybe some armor on the lower legs?


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Posted Apr 16 2013 - 09:40 PM

I like the look a lot - it's fairly titanesque.

 

Aside from the little bits of red, I'm seeing a rather large gap in the lower torso. A few pieces of armor attached to the connection points near the hip area should do wonders to cure his evisceration.

 

Mata blue and Metru blue can work together, but the only Mata blue I'm seeing is in the upper torso. I believe those Rahkshi feet came in Metru blue (though I'm not sure of that). If they didn't (or if you don't have them), I'd spread some more Mata blue around the rest of the MOC to the armor looks integrated and not like a chest pad.


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Posted Apr 17 2013 - 04:58 PM

The feet and the hands are the best IMO.


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