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Shadix

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This is where you post your story pieces. If you have questions about what to write about and whatnot, post them here too. Please wrap in spoiler tags so the comment page isn't the length of Florida. :P

 

Angel Bob:

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Chapter 9: Desert of Sorrows

 

Cutscene: Atero

 

Onua squinted his eyes against the sun.

 

“I don't know how your Po-Matoran stand it,” he grunted. “It's so hot out here in the light!”

 

“Maybe that's because we're in a desert,” Pohatu chuckled. “Still, it's not Po-Wahi... that's for sure.”

 

“Hmm. Certainly not Po-Wahi,” Onua nodded, “for Po-Wahi was never strewn with ruins.”

 

“What?” Pohatu asked, following Onua's gaze. Indeed, at the Toa of Earth's feet rested a cracked stone structure, with writing engraved in it.

 

“That's no language that I know of, but I seem to be able to read it,” Onua continued. “It says, 'A'...'T'... 'E', 'R', 'O'. What's 'ATERO'?”

 

“Dunno,” Pohatu shrugged. “Let's look around... see if there are any clues.”

 

They searched for a few minutes, burning in the red-hot sun. Suddenly, Onua gave a cry of shock.

 

“What is it, brother?” Pohatu asked, running to Onua's side. The Toa of Earth was staring down at something thin and bleached-white. With a surge of nausea, Pohatu recognized it as a skeleton.

 

“What kind of a skeleton is this?” he asked. “The proportions are all wrong... it's not a Matoran, it's definitely shaped more like a Toa. Well, Lewa or Tahu, that is. But it's the wrong size... and it's got nostrils, like some sort of Rahi...”

 

“It's an alien,” Onua grunted. “That's the only solution. We're on another world, and we're in the middle of a dead desert.”

 

Pohatu looked around. Indeed, the air was stale, the sand too scratchy, and the sun too ferocious. The rocks were sinister... ruins were scattered everywhere, the ruins of a city... and so were the alien skeletons.

 

“What happened here?” Pohatu asked.

 

“How should I know?” Onua frowned. “But if I catch up with the alien monster that did this...”

 

“Good for you,” a gruff voice said from behind them, “you just did.”

 

Cutscene: Lord of the Skrall

 

Both Toa whirled, to see a tall, black-armored being, wielding a broadsword and shield. Some crude launcher was strapped to his belt, and there were flashes of green in his scratched, rusted armor.

 

“Makuta?!” Pohatu bellowed. “What are you doing here?”

 

The being laughed – a horrible, rasping sound. “I am not the Lord of Shadows, Toa fools. I am only his servant... but one to be feared. For I am the mighty Tuma, , last of the Skrall Lords, and leader of the Rock Tribe!”

 

“Well, I am Pohatu, Kolhii Champion of Po-Koro, Toa guardian of Mata Nui, and wielder of Stone!” the brown Toa bellowed.

 

“And I am Onua, Wisest of the Toa, wielder of Earth,” the black Toa said. “You would be wise not to challenge us. We have bested your master, and we shall again!”

 

“The Makuta has not met you,” Tuma frowned. “He knows of you, for sure – your are two of the Toa Mata, a fabled Toa Team sworn to protect his weakling brother, Mata Nui. But he has never fought you. You have not woken, for you are not needed.”

 

Onua was confused – a happening unheard of until now. “How do you know of the Makuta, anyway?” he asked. “And why are we unneeded? Even now, Mata Nui lies in slumber, struck down by the Makuta himself. It is our sworn destiny to awaken him, the Great Spirit, and you stand in our way. Prepare to be cast aside.”

 

“Good luck with that,” Tuma sneered, tensing for battle.

 

*insert standard brawl: Pohatu and Onua versus Tuma in a two-stock battle.*

 

Cutscene: Tuma's Escape

 

The Skrall Lord staggered back, wounded from Onua's savage attack. Pohatu charged forth to strike at him, but the ebon-armored titan simply sneered and raised a curious device in his hand. With the press of a button, he had disappeared from the scene, leaving Pohatu to smash headlong into a boulder.

 

“Oof,” the Toa of Stone grunted, collapsing into the sand. “Now where's he gotten to? Is this some trick of Makuta's?”

 

“I think not,” Onua frowned, “more like alien technology. But let us continue onwards; it is vital to right the wrongs here and return to the island of Mata Nui.”

 

*insert level: The Desert. New enemies: Vorox, Zesk, Sand Bat (miniboss). Oh, and how's this for music?*

 

*no ending cutscene*

 

*STAGE CLEAR reward: none*

 

Talos:

 

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Chapter 12?

 

Cutscene: An unexpected detour

 

Onua: We need to find Tuma, perhaps he will have answers for us on this alien world. Maybe we can leave this place as well, I quite dislike it here.

Pohatu: Is the sun getting to you Onua?

Onua: Lets just get moving.

 

*Onua and Pohatu begin running across the desert after a few seconds of sustained running a portal suddenly opens up in the ground Onua stops but Pohatu has yet to catch up*

 

Onua: Whoa!

Pohatu: what is it brother?

Onua: Stop running! Look out!

 

*Pohatu collides with Onua and they both fall into the portal*

 

Cutscene: Unexpected resistance

 

*Both toa fall from the sky to the ground, reminiscent of their entrance to Teridax’s cave*

Onua: For the love of Mata-Nui…..

Pohatu: Ugh, we have got to stop making entrances like this, not on is it bad for our health but it is not exactly stealthy either….

 

*several enemies previously fought appear all around, Multiman brawl begins*

 

Cutscene: Welcome to Odina [NOTE: It would be very easy to make cameos here on Odina because we could be very flexible with appearances of Generic Dark Hunters]

 

*An armor clad being runs towards the toa*

 

Generic Dark Hunter: State your business on Odina.

Onua: We recently fell from that portal up there*points up*, I am Onua and this is Pohatu.

Pohatu: Surely you have had problems with these things lately.

Generic Dark Hunter: We have toa, *grins* be glad we recently allied with The Order or I would have killed you both.

Pohatu: Killed us?!

Generic Dark Hunter: Yes, you two of all beings must know of this place…*scowls*…although you look rather different from what I have heard…

 

*several other portals open, spewing out enemies of all kinds[Enemies will be decided by someone else]

 

Generic Dark Hunter: Here we go again….

Onua: Brother look! The portal is closing!

Pohatu: Oh no…we have to get out of here!

*Level start, you have a time limit to get to the portal, jump from platform to platform facing resistance all the way*

 

Cutscene: Leaving so soon?

 

*Pohatu climbs into the portal Onua is about to follow when the Generic Dark Hunter intervenes*

 

Generic Dark Hunter: Toa, catch!

*Onua turns in time to catch a small device*

Onua; What is this?

Generic Dark Hunter: It is a device I stole from one of our friends over there, but I recalibrated it to open a portal like the one up there that will lead to Odina, so you can come back here any time. So if you need any assistance just start it up.

Pohatu: Onua? The portal is closing….

Onua: Thank you Hunter, I would wager that I will see you soon…

*Onua climbs into portal and the level ends*

 

Level clear

No reward

 

 

 

If you have done writing or plan to, please submit it to me and I'll add you to the list.

 

-S

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Actually, I promoted Talos to Fourth-in-Command, shoving Omega out of that rank and down to Fifth-in-Command. :D

 

And he's also official Co-Author, yeah.

 

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Chapter 23: The Factory

 

Cutscene: An Unforgiving Land

 

The portal opened in the sky. Again. Pohatu once more found himself hurtling towards unforgiving ground.

 

"Not again!" he cried, and focused on changing the rock-hard plain to a more comfortable sand pit.

 

"Well done, brother," Onua commented after climbing out of the sand. "I'd grown tired of smashing into your rocks."

 

"Yes, well done indeed," Talos grinned, hovering to the ground with his jet pack.

 

"Cheater," Pohatu grimaced at him.

 

Onua quickly changed the subject. "Hunter, what is our mission in this strange world?"

 

"Ah, yes! Our mission. I'd nearly forgotten," Talos stammered. "Our mission is to locate the source of these mutation capsules--"

 

Suddenly, his eyes widened behind his helmet as he realized something important. Nobody had thought to cushion the landing of the mutation capsule and the wormhole device.

 

Staring, dumbstruck, at the scattered bits of metal strewn on the rocky ground, it took him some time to utter his words of dismay.

 

"Grrrrghdffll!" he eventually growled.

 

"There goes our transport," Pohatu said. "Nice job."

 

"Fear not, Hunter," Onua said, placing a claw on Talos's shoulder. "We shall find a way back yet; but first, our mission."

 

*insert level: Outside the Factory. Playable characters: Talos, Onua, Pohatu. New enemies: Turrets (both must be destroyed to gain access).*

 

Cutscene: No Escape

 

Once the three heroes had stepped inside the factory, the doors slammed shut behind them. "Emergency lockdown," a mechanized voice called. "Doors sealed."

 

"This rather buggers our escape plan," Pohatu muttered.

 

"But," Talos said, pointing - "welcome to the factory."

 

Machinery was in constant motion around them. Robots and weapons of all kinds rolled off the assembly line - but most notably, mutation capsules.

 

"There must be some sort of generator that powers this place," Talos muttered.

 

"Over there!" Pohatu shouted, pointing towards a gigantic metal machine, connected to all the rest of the room's consoles.

 

"Good eye, Toa," Talos nodded. "Let's go shut it down."

 

*insert level: The Factory. Playable characters: Talos, Onua, Pohatu. New enemies: defense drones, generator (must be destroyed to finish).*

 

Cutscene: Defense Protocols

 

"We made it!" Talos shouted. "Now let's shut this down once and for all!"

 

"Why is there sand all over the floor?" Pohatu mumbled, but nobody paid him any attention.

 

"Warning," the voice of the factory said. "Intruders detected in generator room. Activating defense protocols."

 

The sand that Pohatu had mentioned began to flow towards the center of the room, rising up in a maelstrom of energy. Before long, a figure could be seen taking shape.

 

"That's not sand," Talos said. "Well, rather it is… but it's also a Kranua."

 

Onua and Pohatu stared at him blankly.

 

"A specialized Vahki unit," Talos explained bleakly, "retired for its brutality… and lethal methods."

 

"Ah," Pohatu said, as the Kranua stared down at them with madness in its robotic eyes. The robot took one step forwards, and the whole room shook.

 

"I don't believe I'm going to like Vahki very much," Onua said.

 

*insert boss battle: Kranua. Playable characters: Talos, Pohatu, Onua.*

 

Cutscene: Newcomers

 

The Kranua stumbled backwards, systems failing. Soon, it began to dissolve into sand - and that sand was sucked into the fan of the generator. A horrible scratching and grinding noise sliced through the air - and then the voice spoke once more.

 

"Generator overheating," it said calmly.

 

A red light flashed, an alarm blared and the generator shut down.

 

"Excellent," Talos grinned, even as the lights went out. Not missing a trick, he switched on his helmet lights.

 

"It might be excellent for you, but I can't see!" Pohatu yelled.

 

"Shush for a minute," the hunter said quietly. "I'm picking up some energy signatures… one is like nothing I have ever seen before. We need to go check it out; perhaps we could find an ally."

 

"Or an enemy," Pohatu whispered.

 

"That's a risk I am willing to take," Talos replied. "Let's get moving."

 

*STAGE CLEAR reward: none.*

Pshaw. Anymore, your only 2nd in command because you took the position of head story writer before anyone else could. Just wait until we get into making the levels themselves.

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Actually, from the start 2Tie saw me as the most helpful and therefore highest-ranking (besides her/him/it). :D

 

Anyways, I won't have to bother with making the levels. That's your job. XD

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Well, it takes a lot of hard work to get people actually working on stuff. Which reminds me - GET TO WORK!

 

I enjoy my higher authority. :P

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Well, it takes a lot of hard work to get people actually working on stuff. Which reminds me - GET TO WORK!

 

I enjoy my higher authority. :P

 

Well, I have no work to do so: HA.

 

Also: The two energy signatures that Talos detects in the last chapter I'm guessing are Gresh and smiley, unless someone proves me otherwise. Just FYI.

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...and i enjoy my high-EST authority.

probly won't be on this site that often... but my computer isn't blocked from the B:NG forums.

 

-2Tie, over and out.

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