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Timelady Gallade

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  1. For hair try Shapeway. I think a guy made the ORIGINAL IGNIKA from Shapeways.
  2. BTW Never put a glow in the dark sets next to your bed. It'll freak you out!
  3. Well I'm sure the first minifigs used had stickies for torsos. u could try buying some off Ebay and taking off the stickers. But hair... I dunno.
  4. It has to be charged?! Why didn't it say in booklet?!?!EDIT: FACEPLAM. PS: Your pic is awesome!
  5. For some reason my MF Mummie doesn't GITD. I have no idea why. The skeli-horse/reindeer/thing glows though. How come? I am just a bit unlucky? Please tell me!Also does your one glow?
  6. Is it me or is the HF half organic? I dont have much explaintion but in Savage plant its says 'Rocka was born with the upgrade!' So do you think the heros are half organic?
  7. I heard the 2013 heros look like they have slugs on the head! Not that I am into slugs. I hate slugs.
  8. 1. A: The first part of the sentence should be as follows: Gali was practicing her axe-throwing in the Keongtu jungle. A period is needed here; otherwise, the clause would be considered a run-on sentence.B: The second part of the sentence should be: She calculated the angle required to hit her target and threw the axe. There is no need to say "She had just" in this sentence. There seems to be a bit of a verb case issue because of this. Also, "Throwed" is technically not a word, and even if it were, the correct form to use in past tense would be "Threw". I also added "required to hit her target" because "the angle she needed" sounds a bit vague, in my opinion.C: The third part should be: But suddenly a Shadow Toa jumped up, attempted to attack her, but failed when Gali's axe hit her arm. This sentence also suffers from some verb tense issues. "Jumped up to attack her" and "the axes hit her arm" are inconsistent with each other. The first clause is in the past tense, and the latter in present tense. I easily fixed the tenses though so you could see the difference. I also cancelled out the second use of "Suddenly" because it's very repetitive to use the same word twice in a sentence, or even a paragraph. Checking for synonyms of specific words in a thesaurus can sometimes be helpful. This also makes a sentence more interesting.2. This should be: "Eeoww! What-da heck was that for?" the Shadow Toa screamed in slang. First off, when writing direct quotations, you have to use Quotation marks (") rather than Single Quotation marks ('), also known as apostrophes. Secondly, the slang that the Shadow Toa used made little sense and was in horrible grammar. I edited that to something more plausible. Lastly, there is no need to have to separate sentences saying "she screamed" and "she said this in slang". It's much easier, and more efficient, to just join the two clauses together like I wrote it.3. I'm not quite sure what you meant by this, but I'm pretty sure this is what you intended to write: Gali ran up to her even though she was a Shadow Toa.4. To be honest, this sentence isn't really necessary. I would just leave it out. It really doesn't add that much detail to the paragraph.5. This should be: "Tell me your name, Shadow Toa," Gali commanded. "Not unless you free me!" replied the Shadow Toa. Again, incorrect usage of single quotation marks. I would say "Gali commanded" rather than "Gali asked" as she is not really asking the Shadow Toa her name, but, instead, commanding her to. I would also say "Not unless you free me!" rather than "No, free me and I shall tell you." Overall, it just works better and it sounds pretty good. I also added in "replied the Shadow Toa" after the quotation so that the reader acknowledges that the Shadow Toa is speaking.I don't really understand the plot or what you're going to be doing in this epic, for that matter. But all in all, you did a pretty good job for your, I'm assuming, first epic chapter. You have a lot of potential, and also a lot a work to do. But with help, I can see you getting pretty good. Good job and keep up the good work! -Rez Hey, still better than my hero factory mocing skills!
  9. Ye tilyt says ye all! The only one i noctied was that in the Mzeka review, the moderator forgot to put the final inka pad on for the seat! *Giggle*
  10. the one in MNOG with the birds getting ready to fight the nui-rama!
  11. The 1.0 pictures line up looks better then the real one!
  12. Good point. But would love a teal kaukau! that would be preety.
  13. My theory about the OP's are that they are actually MISPRINTS! I edit this post when im home from skool. (###### school....)
  14. This is Lego, any of their movies are bound to be less-than-decent.OI! THE FIRST 3 BIONICLE MOVIES WERE AWSOME! GGR!! Soorry.
  15. I think they broke into one of the factories and stole em!Unlikely. I think the people at Billund are pretty good at security, and if there was a Lego mold heist, we would probably hear about it, and we haven't. Good point.
  16. Hindu.I think its becuz there prohpet os Nana Guru. Or something like that. No offence.
  17. I think they broke into one of the factories and stole em!
  18. How do you make signatures? It needs to be super clear. K?
  19. Thnx. Heres chapter 1. : Chapter one: Identity the Toa.'I'll only free you if you agree one thing. You let me scream as loud as I can so you can be cured both ways. Cured of Shadow and have your arms healed. Deal?' Gali said. 'FINE. Go ahead.'
  20. That pool of EP would curse anyone who touched it to sing Gangham style!
  21. Israphel approves this topic. I asked him. Not really. :PNow if you excuse me, I gonna watch SoI and go on Yourepeat and put on take a chance.
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