ToaDraconixMahvi

Just for the record, I want to make a character for this. Mind if i post a profile here so i don't forget? I always remember where my profiles are, and what they are FOR. I'll edit when i get an answer. EDIT: Also, this is the weapon I would have for my character: http://aqwwiki.wikidot.com/crimson-zardis-key and this is my character basic image: http://oversoulgame.wikidot.com/max-storm just imagine a goku dude like him holding the sword i previously copy/pasted a link to, when clicked on, and you basicly get my character. Oh, and imagine him with steel gauntlets, with a red scouter on, and able to use a Ki blast known as...THE DEMON RAY(Trademark. Also, did you now I'm autistic?) Yeah, thats about it.

You like MoC's huh? Imagine a toa...With a Tahu Mata Pakari...with a Midak Skyblaster that flips from back onto the shoulder...with Karda-kuta, or, Karda Nui Makuta, torso, with a star wars fighter pods thing in the chest that has a green...Material, shall we say, inside of the fighter pod, with those knee pads that have the spikes that are silver that are from Bionicle, and two Matau Hordika legs, with two orange Metru/Mangai eye...things on them, with two toa of Ice feet(Since I didn't want to take apart any other MoC's feet) and wielding a sword that has a laser barrel tuning fork design on the inside of it. Hows that for a MoC? Oh, and did I mention? My self-MoC has TWO elements, Fire and Sonics. I have very sensitive hearing, and i have a quick, short, temper like Tahu's. So, a combo elemental fits me perfectly.

OK, who died?

...*tears falling from eyes, in a crying that has not occurred in this weathered warrior for many years, for 9 years in fact, tears falling like raindrops in a heavy storm*This...this is a masterpiece. You have made a work of art from mere words...We who read this...We are not worthy of such beauty.

Slow motion super-speed for the win! GO KAPURA GO! Note: I am a SERIOUS fan of kapura He is my favorite char!

This is one of the best stories I ever read. And I read a LOT of books. Sorry if my post is a bit short. I feel like summarizing how i feel these days.

You. You have brought to light a theory of how the Vahki were made, how their inventor, Nuparu, felt while making them, even adding a new power core twist to it. I am impressed. You, good sir or madam, are a DAM good writer!

Not bad, my friend. I just got back from a sabatical away from technology, and this is the first visit back to the bzpower epics i have made. I read the story so far, and i like it. I like the whole "one who takes" deal, i like that a lot. It seems to fit the perfect re-imagining that i have merely thought about, in the deepest corners of my mind. You are a good writer, my friend. A very good writer. Please, make more of this. You are among the most interesting writers i have ever read the first chapter of the book of, and i for one willingly admit to being impressed. Btw, what gave you the idea for this "one who takes" scarring thing? I really want to know!

attention everyone that probably said arcee isn't in foc. YOUR WRONG! She is a poster in the ruins mission with cliffjumper. You have to get noticed by the decepticons first chance, turn left, and head straight through the door that was sealed. Arcee is there, as a poster. Yw for the information, I accept my cash in advance, oh wait, i don't get paid...nvm!

no, its not that bad. Just different. Keep writing it, ok? you may be a newcomer to writing books, but hey, so am i. That doesnt mean you give up. just keep going at it, till its long dead, i say! Good read btw.

i like your books so far. you seem to be a great author, I like re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-re-reading your books. I like how you made your own legendary mask, and the addition of a makuta? Genious. I for one expect much from you, from one writer to another. Good writings, and great ideas, let them follow you forever-more!

well. im impressed. this is a good blend of comics and books, perfectly fused together. needless to say, this is probably the most 'epic' thing i ever read. Im guessing, this is gonna end really well,with probably a couple plot twists or more, one of which, I guess, is that there is a makuta? yeah, thats what i gathered from the secret voice that talks to that turaga. am i right, or wrong, or you cant tell?

telluris targets mata nui, and von nebula targets onua!

telluris and von nebula target tahu for a combined, spiraling, drilling blast that (maybe) will drill right through tahu, and shoot right into whomever is behind tahu? whatdya say, noise, is that ok?

telluris attacks...tahu.

ok who is left? i wanna fight in the warzone, and i don't know my targets remaining count.

hold up, im in the warzone?

yep.

i would like to buy Rhotuka Launcher and a dark field spinner, x2.

i raise nebula's toughness by 5 points, while 3 go to mind...and raise telluris' mind and strengh by 3 points each and raise toughness by 2 points, and...i buy 1 aegis program for von nebula, and add to the toughness stat by training 1 time for nebula.

oh...my bad :/ so a switch-axe, which is from youtube, which switches from a shield to an axe to a sword! and i could only think of four points to up for each.

well, telluris...i pick a Hagah spear, lava. i raise nebula's toughness by 4 points...and raise telluris' mind and strengh by 2 points each, and...i buy 1 aegis program for von nebula, and add to the toughness stat by training 1 time for nebula.

hey, can i join this game? Telluris and von nebula, if you dont mind.

i like. i really do. Edit: Please try to leave more constructive feedback next time! -Wind-

Name: Draconyx Species and Gender: Male Ta-Skakdi Appearance: A basic fire skakdi, albeit one that looks like a red Avak. Is seen most often wearing white furs, often with a random sword from collection of four elementally colored blades at hand. Weapons: Gear: A bow and a quiver of arrows at hip, collapsible bow no less, bag of widgets at hips other side, a web from the visorak that dried up around four rocks at four corners of the web for trapping, a flint and steel, and about 30 arrops tipped with a barbed head for maximum damage. Abilities, Powers, and Skills: Abilities involve agility befitting a ranged melee master, powers include ability to generate a heat field for short periods of time, skills involve the range of traps from bear traps, to pitfalls. Personality: vague, uncaring, indifferent, but has heart enough to survive the frozen wasteland that he found himself in. He finds he has some skill with being a people person. Finds that he can start bar fights he does not join in willingly. Weaknesses: REALLY has cold problems, but works best in the cold because of one advantage: Mentality boost. Is weak to icy conditions, cannot see in the dark. Biography: A hunter, with weakness to cold, has tendancy to hunt big rahi.