When reviewing MOCs, you've got to keep in mind that only so much can be done with Bionicle pieces. "It's too smooth in parts and too jagged in others" doesn't really tell him how to change it, just that it needs to be changed.
I'm sorry if I sound really harsh or something. >< Super-negative reviews really get on my nerves because, as I said before, no matter how right they may be, they can make the artist/MOCer/writer feel horrible. Just a mere change of wording can make a world of difference and gain you more respect.
Turakii
No, you didn't come across super harsh; you're one of the nicer people on this site. I think the wording of the review is personal preference - when I have post a creation, I just want the criticism. I don't really like number ratings or extra information, I want to know what parts of the MOC are badly constructed and need to be fixed. Most people don't like such blunt reviews.
Either I'm weird, or my creations really suck.
One thing we can both agree on is that it would be nice to tell the builder what they are doing right -- that adds a positive aspect to the review, and it's useful for builders because they get an idea of what works well.
I understand what you're saying about reviews suggesting changes not in the range of possibility. MOCers have limits on time, pieces, etc. Those are problems everybody runs into. But there's no way for reviewers to know how much time you've got or which pieces you have, so they make all the suggestions they can think of. (At least, I do.) Then, you can pick and choose which ones are actually feasible and apply them.
To quote Darth Vader, "constructive criticism =/= positive feedback." I know how disappointing it is to spend hours upon arduous hours on a creation, only to post it and receive negative reviews. I spent a LONG time building this castle and was upset when some people didn't like it. But I eventually learned from my mistakes (there's waaaaaay too much going on and the MOC should be simpler) and now I'm a better builder. Not that that's saying much. Does that make sense?
Anyway, I'd like to hear what Primus has to say.
- Sidorak