ManiacToaLaco

Before I comment on this, your new name is new! It's different! It's not iBrow!So, I think I understand this: it's what happened just before the season of TVT that just finished, am I right? Or is it a few seasons before that? Because I wanna see how this whole thing turned into a bloody civil war...EDIT: Nevermind, I understand now! I guess living with "Mata" at the end of your name would be a bit like a last name...MTL

I really want to know what they're going to do with it next. Maybe a prequel? That would be pretty awesome. Unless it was all in Cybertronian, in which case that would suck.ALSO!!! CHAP-A-TAH!TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 25THE BATTLE OF METRU-NUI PART 1THE TOHU MEMORIAL, TA-METRU, METRU-NUIThere are very few things that people can agree about. There are even fewer things people and giant robots can agree about.One of these things that both can agree about is how absolutely terrifying a 112 foot tall robot is when it lands in the middle of your army and starts blowing your stuff up.And when this robot is supposed to be dead, but obviously isn't, well that ladies and gentlemen is how you destroy the morale of an army.Omega Kaita also had the distinction of already being feared by the Deceptikuta. So much infact, that most of the Deceptikuta had only decided to show up because they had been told Omega had been killed by the Terragator.Obviously, he hadn't been.Sleedat, in her spot in the Tohu Memorial, began to back up. Viewdok ran for it, not even looking back, while Panrashot transmoced into his tank mode and began to fire at the giant Autotoabot. Blitztran watched, giggling a little bit."You're size is nothing compared to the glory of Makutatron! Hah!" Panrashot said."Size... that's it! Aim for the back of the knees!" Sleedat commanded her Deceptikuta as she transmoced into her Metrutronian jet mode and flew up. Blitztran transmoced into his Metrutronian jet mode and followed her, while Panrashot slowly advanced, still in his tank mode, and still firing.A few Strikers and some Deceptikuta gunships got the message and followed Sleedat and Blitztran. Omega, momentarily preoccupied with the larger ships, didn't notice Sleedat's litte squad fly past and get behind him. When they got in position, they fired right in the back of Omega's right knee. "Ugghh." Omega said as he fell on that leg. The large Deceptikuta ships took this chance to fire on Omega. Omega's shoulders opened up, revealing rockets, and he launched these at the Deceptikuta ships, aimed precisely at their guns. With a few mintues without being heavily fired on his, he got back to his feet, and looked for the Deceptikuta who had shot his knee.One less than intelligent Striker thought it would be a great idea to annoy Omega."Oi, you're not so big-AAGGGHHHH!" said the Striker as he got a good kick to the everything.Another one tried sucking up instead. "Oh mighty Omega Kaita, it's an honour to mearly bask in your presEEEEEEEENNNNNNNNNNNCCCCCCEE!!!" that Striker was back handed right into a gunship.Another Striker tried to trick Omega. "One fo your servos is loose!" he said. He was promptly turned into dust.Blitztran flew right up infront Omega's face, transmoced, and in his accent "You ovahgrown Autotoabot! I'll scramble your zircuits zo bad you'll need a GPS to find your own exhaust port!" Omega headbutted Blitztran, and away he went. "Mayday! Mayday! Let's all dance around ze maypole!" Blitztran laughed as he was sent flying out of sight.Panrashot adanced, shooting and shooting. Then he transmoced into his robot form and opened fire with all he had. "You will die!" Panrashot yelled. Omega promptly stepped on him and crushed him.A few Deceptikuta gunships fired on the visor that covered Omega' face. Omega's head turned around, revealing a cannon, and a quick shot form that obliterated them.Flufskiron watched all this from atop the Coliseum. Mouth open in shock, he watched in horror as Omega Kaita tore apart all who went up against him. "DREADINOCK!" Flufskiron yelled, mad that Dreadinock had lied to him about killing the giant."Is it just Omega Kaita here, do you think?" Swiftinock asked, watching as Omega sent one of the smaller Deceptikuta ships spiraling to the ground."Where there's one, there's more!" Flufskiron spat "Matanui Prime and the rest of them are probably here somewhere." The turret-formers on the edges of the Coliseum's top had their guns aimed at Omega, which would do absolutely nothing to him."Perhap's you've overestimated your ability to use others, Flufskiron." Norik Prime said. Flufskiron turned to him, and a look of pure hatred crossed his face."Autotoabot!" Flufskiron said, walking forward, grabbing Norik by the neck and pushing him into the control tower the Deceptikuta had built up there. "Did you give them a pillar? Who's side are you really on?" "Get your hands off of me!" Norik said, trying to push Flufskiron off. It was no use however, as Flufskiron was far stronger than Norik."Did you?" Flufskiron yelled into Norik's face."It must've been Phoenix Prime!" Norik said."Who?" Flufskiron said."He's one of the Autotoabots," Norik said, still struggling against Flufskiron "He can teleport!" "WHAT?" Flufskiron yelled, throwing Norik down "There's an Autotoabot who can teleport, and NO ONE THOUGHT THAT MIGHT BE RELEVANT INFORMATION TO TELL ME?" Soundprah responded "Our information regarding him was minimal. What we did know is that he only appeared in the first year of the Autotoabot's presence on this planet. He was not recorded on Metrutron our in any battle. He was watched on this planet using his teleportation ability several times, usually on himself or one or two other Autotoabots. The extent of how much he could teleport, along with how many others, was unknown." Soundprah said."So? The fact that an Autotoabot has the ability to do so means that atleast some of the Autotoabots survived the destruction of their ship!" Flufskiron said. Norik got to his feet, watching Flufskiron all the while.Suddenly one of the turret combiners nearby exploded, killing the three drones that made up the gun. The Deceptikuta on top of the Coliseum turned, expecting Omega Kaita.....And saw Matanui Prime, flying with some sort of jetpack and wing thing going on, shooting at them. Flufskiron and company were so shocked they didn't shoot, expect the turret-combiners opening fire reminded them who they were dealing with. Flufskiron, Soundprah and Swiftinock all fired their weaponry. Matanui Prime locked eyes with Norik Prime for a second, before doing a barrel roll and zooming off."Omega attacking us right here is probably a distraction so the other Autotoabots can attack us un-harrassed." Flufskiron said, sounding worried "Soundprah, get down there and try and locate the Autotoabots. Kill any if you get the chance." "It shall be done. Autotoabots inferior, Soundprah superior." Soundprah said as he moved off."Quite." Flufskiron said "Swiftinock, you stay here with Norik until he gets the next.. fleet in or whatever it is he's bringing in." Flufskiron poked Swiftinock in the chest here "And make sure he doesn't so anything stupid.""I'll watch him." Swiftinock said "And where are you going?" "I'm going to inform Shockvak to watch out for the Autotoabots. Get Nihiscream's Strikers to chase down Matanui!" Flufskiron said. Taking one last look at Omega Kaita, Flufskiron transmoced into his Axalara T9 alt mode, covered in weapons, and flew down to Shockvak.MEANWHILEThe rest of the Autotoabots ran down a street, the Wreckinators leading the charge and doing what they do best: wrecking Deceptikuta.Jumping over rubble, they took their enemies by surprise. One Deceptikuta turned around to get iBrow's axe to his head, while another didn't even know what happened when JackaL's cannon blew him apart. And LesoSpinn, despite missing an optic, was still more than capable of shooting the heads right off the drones.At one point they met slightly more resistence. Some Deceptikuta had seen them coming and had taken positions on a building, with turret-formers aimed down at them."Hide in this building!" Dakama Prime said as he knocked a hole into it."We can take them!" Vakama Maximus said, firing at them. A shot from a turret-combiner exploded just infront of them, and he changed his mind.Inside the building, they decided to think things through a little bit. "We need a distraction to get by them." Dakama said."Couldn't we just snipe them?" Blue Flame asked, one arm turned into his sniper rifle."I can help too." LesoSpinn said.Blue Flame looked at him all confused like. "With one optic?" Blue Flame asked him."I don't see why he would need too." Johnson said. Everyone turned and looked at the Agorian."If you ever pun like that again....." JackaL said, pointing a finger at Johnson."Alright, LesoSpinn, Blue Flame, take them out. iBrow, JackaL, Jodkra and Johnson, there's more Deceptikuta coming up the street. You distract them from here while the rest of us go around and hit them in the side. Then we regroup and continue to the Coliseum." Dakama said. iBrow, JackaL, Jodkra and Johnson were about to leave when Hafu spoke."Hey, Dakama, since between you and Omega and Matanui the Deceptikuta will be pretty distracted, so if we," Hafu said, pointing to his group, "just sneak to a place where we can shoot, we might be able to take out part of the whole teleporting thing with our bazooka." "They're space bridge pillars, not teleporting things." Kopatchet said."Whatever." Steve the police-Matoran said."No, not whatever. The difference between space bridge pillars and teleportation is actually quite large. You see-" Kopatchet started to say, but Dakama cut him off."Galcee, you go with them. Stay hidden and stay safe." Dakama said. Leaning down, he looked Hafu in the eye. "When you get chance, shoot. Do not hesitate. I don't know if you'll even be able to hit the pillar, but you can atleast try. We will try and make our way there as well.""We're hoping Omega will get a chance to wreck it first though." Hydraxhide said."Alright." Hafu said.With his axe in hand, Dakama stood up and turned to the other Autotoabots. "Get ready, we're moving out!"Nujack however went up the the Matoran. "Wait, wait, it's dangerous out there. Take these." Holding a few objects small enough for Matoran hands, he passed them down to the Matoran."Hurry up Nujack!" Tahuswipe said."This one is a boomstick. You can stick these, or launch them, onto a Deceptikuta drone and it will detonate with enough force to cripple it severly." Nujack said."Just drones?" Hewkii said as he examined one."What would it do to Makutatron or someone?" Kamen asked."A bit less than nothing..." Nujack said, then pointing to one that looked like a claw. "This is a climbing-stick. You can climb things or slow your descent down the side of a falling building with one." "That's... a bit specific." Hafu said."You never know mate." Nujack said."Nujack!" Tahuswipe said, getting impatient. iBrow, JackaL, Jodkra and Johnson were already out distracting the advancing Deceptikuta, while LesoSpinn and Blue Flame were sniping the turret-combiners."Anything for me?" Galcee asked him."Ah yes, Galcee. Take these." Nujack said, handing some objects to Galcee. "This is basically a super-powered bullet. If you can get this to connect with a Deceptikuta, it should explode with enough for to remove whatever it was connected to.""Ok.." Galcee said, not really understanding."And this a scope." Nujack said, handing her a scope for her gun."Wow, thanks." Galcee said."And here's a few mroe boomsticks for the Matoran. These are greating inventions for kicking a-" Nujack began to say."NUJACK!" Hydraxhide yelled."Ok, ok." Nujack said as he followed the Autotoabots out. Hafu, Kamen, Steve, Nuhrii, Takua, the rest of the soliders and Galcee all went out another way, in the direction of the Coliseum.PEST HANGARHewkii looked over the shoulder's of Nixie, Nuparu, Hickory and other PEST technicians as they worked furiously at computers, trying to get a spy drone or something into the city. Unbeknowst to them, Soundprah had had a jammer up, preventing signals from phones and cameras from exiting or leaving the city. The Deceptikuta fleet took care of spy drones that entered.However, with an Omega Kaita sized distaction going on in the middle of the city distracting the Deceptikuta fleets (the remaining Matoran F-22s, Phoenix Prime, Tahkan Metra and Ramembolt helped alot here), and with Flufskiron having ordered Soundprah to go do something, a window of oppurtunity had opened for the Matoran."Hickory, how we doing so far?" 12345 asked Hickory, wheeling over to him in his wheelchair."Dere appears to be zomeding distracting de Deceptikuta... ve are having an easier time now..." Hickory said, typing away furiously at a keyboard."Hey, I'm getting a signal!" Nuparu said, tapping Nixie on the arm."I hear you, I hear you." She said, looking at his screen."What do you got kid?" 12345 asked, going over to Nuparu. Turaga Nokama, the New Guy and Hewkii followed him over."I got access to the street cameras.." Nuparu said. "Can you see the kid?" 12345 asked him. On Nuparu's computer screen, several little videos flashed by. What it showed was not good: under every camera was destruction, a Matoran body or Deceptikuta standing around."Well... that's... helpful." the New Guy said. The room had gone quiet as they looked at the destruction."Poor kid. Probably didn't even last a minute.." 12345 said sorrowly."Wait, this one had been pushed up!" Nuparu said. He was right: one camera had been pushed up by accident, and was pointed to the sky. What they saw was a Deceptikuta ship get shot down. Then they saw three shapes go by. One was silver, one was bright red and gold, and another was a darker shade of red and blue, with silver wings and jets propelling it."Were those..." Turaga Nokama began to ask."Autotoabots!" Hewkii said, happily. A cheer went up through out the room."Should we go to the city now?" the New Guy asked Hewkii. The cheering died down.Hewkii turned to adresse all the Matoran in the room. "I can't promise you a ride back, but I can promise you a way there." Hewkii said."That's a little morbid." the New Guy said."Just grab a gun." Hewkii said, then ran to alert everyone.KONGU'S BUILDINGSitting at a desk and staring out the window, Kongu looked at the ruined buildings that surronded his own. His own building was more or less undamaged, only having been shot at four times. The window he was looking through had a big crack in it, which was a little distracting.And not to mention Omega Kaita standing in the middle of the Tohu Memorial breaking things. Kongu wasn't sure how he felt about that."This worked out well, huh?" Hahli said, still handcuffed to whatever it was I said she was handcuffed to. Jaller's parents were handcuffed to a couch or something nearby. "Haven't we gone over this already? I didn't know they were going to try and kill everyone!" Kongu said. He motioned to one of his guards. "Watch them and make sure they don't do anything." And then he left the room.The guard sourly looked over Hahli and Jaller's parents."I hope Jaller's alright." Jaller's mom said."You know, I've always been a bit tough on him..." Jaller's dad said "He always was like a son to me.""Do you act like that on purpose or what?" Jaller's mom asked him.Ignoring their little argument, Hahli looked out the window to the Tohu Memorial, hoping Omega would free them. It was a slim hope, but a hope none the less.Just then she heard a noise. She had come to recognize that noise from the last 24 hours: it was the sound of a Deceptikuta gunship."Well, this'll be just great." Hahli said, expecting the gunship to just shoot at them.The gunship came into view, it's guns aimed right at them. Hahli closed her eyes, expecting to killed. Oddly enough, she wasn't. She opened her eyes. Both her and Jaller's parents were staring at the gunship. Suddenly it flew forward a bit, getting very close to the window, then the cockpit opened on it opened up.The guard, who had nearly run for his life, took his gun out. To their surprise, Wipeout jumped through the window, rolling and punching out the guard."Well, that was fun." Wipeout said."Wipeout!" Hahli cried."Atleast someone can remember my name." Wipeout said. Jaller got out of the cockpit and followed into the building."Jaller!" Hahli cried. Wipeout came over and destroyed her handcuffs, then did the same to Jaller's parents."Hahli!" Jaller said, as they ran up and hugged each other. "Jaller!" Jaller's mom said, running up and joining in the group hug."Son, I'm actually quite glad you're alive and junk." Jaller's dad said.Before Jaller could say something back, Pohatubee spoke from the gunship. "We will be alot more happy on the ground!" Pohatubee said."Get into the ship!" Jaller said, moving Hahli and his parents towards it. Suddenly, more of Kongu's guards ran in."Stop them!" one called, firing his gun. The shot missed, but Jaller, Hahli and Jaller's parents stopped for a second, startled by the shot. Wipeout saw the guards preparing their guns, and as they fired, jumped infront of the shots."Wipeout!" Jaller cried as Wipeout was hit several times in the back."What?" Wipeout asked him."You're... alright?" Hahli said, surprised."They're just bullets." Wipeout said. Then he took his hands up, turned them into machine guns, turned around and...RATA-TATA-TATA-TATA!"Holy pants." Jaller's dad said as Wipeout finished shooting at the guards and turned his machine guns back into hands."Did he just... kill them?" Jaller's mom asked."Uh, I used knock-out bullets." Wipeout said. Turning to follow Jaller and company out, Wipeout suddenly fell to his knees, actual Metrutronian bullets hitting him. Lasorhawk flew towards him, spinning, shooting and hissing."Wipeout!" Lasorhawk said as went towards him.Wipeout turned as he got back up and grabbed Lasorhawk by the neck as he flew over. Bringing his other hand up, he grabbed Lasorhawk's tail. With the 'hawk in both hands, he pulled, ripping Lasorhawk in half. In disgust, he threw the two halfs of Soundprah's minion to the floor.Jaller and co. stared at Wipeout. "Well... that was violent." Jaller said."How about we just go before you continue to question what just happened." Wipeout said. Jaller's dad, his mom and Hahli all got into the Gunship, then Wipeout did, and just as Jaller was about to he got jumped by Kongu."You've ruined everything!" Kongu cried, hitting Jaller as the two of them rolled around on the gunship."We gotta help him!" Hahli said."I'll give some encouragin' words" Wheeldax said "Oi, watch it, it's a long drop!" "I think he knows." Braindox said. The two were sort of squished behind the Matoran and Pohatubee."Can't you do something?" Hahli asked Pohatubee."Yes, I can." Pohatubee said "Wipeout, get out there!" "Oh-ho-ho, suddenly every has a use for old Wipeout now!" Wipeout said as he got there. Gingerly, as the gunship flew through the air, threatening to send Jaller, Kongu and Wipeout plummeting to the grou-"Wait a minute," Wipeout realized as he thought the sentence above, "Pohatubee, stop moving the ship so I don't have to worry about falling!" "Oh, that could work." Pohatubee said as he put the ship into hovering mode. They were still several hundred feet in the air, but at least they weren't moving any more.Kongu continued to beat on Jaller, who couldn't get up. They were pressed between two of the guns on the gunship, which was basically all that was saving their lives."Can you bring us down a bit, Pohatubee?" Wipeout asked the 'bee."Just get rid of Kongu!" Pohatubee said, lowering the ship slowly. On the ship's sensors, Pohatubee saw several other Deceptikuta gunships flying by, which would not be good."Don't kill him!" Jaller's mom pleaded."It's his fault the Deceptikuta are attacking Metru-Nui in the first place!" Hahli said."Oh, then go ahead and rip his head off!" Jaller's mom said."What advice." Wipeout said, carefully making his way towards Kongu and Jaller. Making it over, with one hand he picked up Kongu, and with the other picked up Jaller and placed him closer to safety. Pohatubee reached out and brought Jaller into the ship, where was greeted with hugs. Not from Pohatubee of course, because that would've squished him.Wipeout held Kongu over the edge. "Well Kongu, you do realize this is all your fault." Wipeout said."Don't... don't kill me!" Kongu said. "Sorry, didn't hear you." Wipeout said, letting go of Kongu. Kongu screamed for all of a second before he hit the ground.They were about 4 feet off the ground."Pohatubee!" Wipeout snapped."You said bring us down! I didn't you were going to try and kill a Matoran!" Pohatubee said, not sounding too happy.Kongu stood up and looked over. He saw Enderth and Daedulus standing there, staring wide-eyed."Don't stand there!" Kongu yelled at them, getting up and running for cover, "Shoot them!" Enderth looked up at Daedulus. "Eh, why not." Enderth said. Aiming their guns, they fired at the Autotoabot's gunship, hitting it in the propellars and engines."Get out of here!" Jaller yelled. The gunship rose about 17 feet before an engine exploded and two of the propellars fell apart. Wipeout fell off of the gunship when this happened, landing behind some rubble. Pohatubee, thinking quickly, threw off the canopy over the cockpit, grabbed the Matoran, and jumped out of the gunship.Wheeldax looked to Braindox. "He forgot about us!" Wheeldax said."We dead." Braindox responded. The gunship hit the ground hard, skidding a few feet before coming to rest on the remnants of a road divider.Pohatubee rolled when he hit the ground, carefully craddling Jaller, Hahli and Jaller's parents, careful to not squish them. Enderth and Daedulus shot at him the entire time, hitting him a few times, until Pohatubee got into an alley. He let the Matoran up."Everyone OK?" Pohatubee asked them."Everyone important atleast." Jaller's dad said. His wife slapped him."Where's Wipeout?" Jaller asked, for a change of pace."Wheeldax and his friend aren't here either." Hahli said. Pohatubee peared over the corner, looking for them. He saw Wipeout sneaking away from the rubble, towards them. Enderth and Daedulus walked down the street too, weapons raised and waiting for Pohatubee to show himself. Pohatubee turned one hand into his cannon, and stayed in wait."Find cover, I'll hold them off. The other Autotoabots can't be too far away." he said."You can't stay here! You'll get killed!" Jaller protested."It's just Enderth and Daedulus, I'll be fine." Pohatubee said "Go Jaller, I'll make sure Wipeout finds you." And before Jaller could protest any further, Pohatubee spun and was out of the alley.Almost immediately, Barritax jumped Pohatubee from behind. The cop-car bot had long had a grudge against the 'bee, and he very much enjoyed beating on him. Pohatubee fell to his knees as Barritax beat him down."Pohatubee!" Jaller yelled, and almost ran out there, except Wipeout got there and held him back. Enderth and Daedulus had now arrived, and were kicking at Pohatubee's downed body."You're coming with me, bug!" Barritax said, lifting up Pohatubee. Holding Pohatubee's hands behind his back, the walked Pohatubee away, their prisoner."No!" Jaller said, strugling against Wipeout, but it was no use: Wipeout was far too strong."You'll be killed if you go out there. We need to find the others." Wipeout said. Looking back, Wipeout considered going back there and helping. Using his best weaponry, he might be able to take out atleast Barritax before Enderth and Daedulus would turn around and shoot him down. Running out of the alley, he led Jaller and his family (and Hahli) away.At the gunship meanwhile, Wheeldax poked his head, seeing Barritax, Enderth and Daedulus leading Pohatubee away."Braindox, they captured Pohatubee!" Wheeldax said."Our Pohatubee?" Braindox responded.Wheeldax slapped him. "As opposed to the Deceptikuta one? What's in your head, loose bolts?" Wheeldax said."Maybe." Braindox replied, rubbing his head."The warrior goddess has disappeared along with the rest of 'em.." Wheeldax said, looking around. He ducked into the wrecked gunship when a perfectly fine one flew over head. "Well, this one major cluster-"BBBOOOOOMMM"AAHHHH WE DEAD!" Braindox yelled. Suddenly, the gunship that had been flying above fell to the ground, crashing nearby. It's pilot tried to run out, but was blasted to pieces, making a noise that was very loud, like a sonic boom."Hang on, I think these might be our guys." Wheeldax said, trying to calm down Braindox. Lo' and behold, iBrow, LesoSpinn, JackaL, Blue Flame, Johnson and Jodkra appeared, JackaL kicking a piece of the Deceptikuta pilot."Hey! That could've been Pohatubee's!" Blue Flame said."It wasn't, was it now?" JackaL said "Besides, the Deceptikuta don't need all of the bloody things anyway." "It could've been his!" Blue Flame said."Shut your yap!" JackaL said to him."Calm down JackaL, you got enough Deceptikuta to kill." iBrow said."Oi! Over here!" Wheeldax yelled, then jumped out of the gunship and went towards them. Braindox looked round nervously for a second, looking up at a Deceptikuta ship several hundred feet above, then shrugged his shoulders and followed Wheeldax."Deceptikuta?" LesoSpinn said, aiming his rifle at the two mini-bots. "It's just Wheeldax and Braindox!" Johnson said."Who?" LesoSpinn asked."Jaller's pets." Johnosn said."Oh." LesoSpinn said."Without Jaller, I notice." Jodkra said.Blue Flame kneeled down to them. "Where is Jaller? And Pohatubee for that matter?" he asked them."Well, we saved the princess from the tower, me and Braindox here did." Wheeldax said, "And Pohatubee had the gunship ready for us to escape, an' we almost did until we got attacked and now Pohatubee got captured by some Deceptikuta and Jaller and them disappeared." "Huh." Blue Flame said."I'm guessing Wipeout is with Jaller?" Jodkra asked."Oh, ol' skin an' bones. Ya, probably." Wheeldax said.LesoSpinn looked to JackaL. "What's a skin and bones?" LesoSpinn asked him."I'm assuming it's some skin.... with bones on them." JackaL answered."Which way did they take Pohatubee?" iBrow asked Wheeldax."Ehhh, that one." Wheeldax replied, pointing down the street."Alright." iBrow said, turning to run down the street."Wait, where are you going?" Jodkra asked him."To get Pohatubee and kill the Deceptikuta holding him." iBrow answered."And leave Jaller?" Johnson asked."Look, chances are we're going to lose this fight. If we get Pohatubee back, then atleast we got another gun with us to kill a few more Deceptikuta. Jaller and Wipeout... just aren't what I'd call the most important elements in this fight." iBrow said."I don't know what to say..." Jodkra said "Other than no. Wipeout may be small, but he's still an Autotoabot. Johnson and Blue Flame can come with me to get them. You three can handle yourselves." "Suit yourself. I'll respect you for doing what you believe is right." iBrow said "Goodbye, Jodkra. You would've made a good Wreckinator." "Goodbye, iBrow." Jodkra said.Turning back to JackaL and LesoSpinn, iBrow said "Alright Wreckinators, let's go!" and withthat, they transmoced into their heavily-armed alternate modes and went down the road."Let's check this way!" Jodkra said, and Blue Flame and Johnson went with him.Wheeldax and Braindox looked at each other. "What the smurf!" Wheeldax yelled.THE SKYTahkan Metra followed Matanui Prime through the sky, blasting apart Deceptikuta gunships. Matanui, with his gun, shot at one, knocking two of its propellars off and sending it spiraling out of control. Tahkan put a few shots into it, and it exploded. Matanui fired at another, damaging it, and Tahkan put the final shots into that one as well. A Striker flew at them, firing, missing, then transmocing and going for Matanui. Matanui grabbed it by the neck, then spun and threw it down. Tahkan fired at it as well, and it couldn't pull it self up, just dropping to the ground below. A gunship was about to fire on Matanui from behind, when Phoenix Prime teleported right on top of it, slashing at it with his sword, chopping the propellars and engines off. It fell to the ground.Suddenly, the gunships were gone. "Where'd they go?" Phoenix Prime asked. "They're escaping while they still have the chance." Tahkan said."I don't like this." Matanui said. Suddenly, they were under fire once more. But this time, it was from one of the huge Deceptikuta ships. The ship in question was 160 feet long at least, covered in weaponry and far too heavily-armored for the three of them to do damage to.From the outside atleast."Phoenix! Get me in the control room! Matanui, we'll meet up with you later!" Tahkan said.Matanui nodded. "It was an honour, fighting with both of you." he said."Don't get mushy, I'll see you in the AllShiny if I have to." Tahkan said. "Here we go!" Phoenix said. Both of them transmoced into their robot forms, Tahkan turned his hands into his rifle and machine gun, while Phoenix held one of his swords. Then he teleported them into the ship. Matanui would've watched this, but the shots from the ship forced him to leave first. Doing a spiral to dodge the shots, he went down to city for cover among the building.IN THE SHIPThe Deceptikuta captain watched Matanui fly away"Hah! He's flying away! Pansy!" a Deceptikuta said."What happened to the other two?" the captain asked."Burst into flame or something. I think we hit him." a Deceptikuta sitting at a computer said.Suddenly in the middle of the room there was a burst flame."A bit like that!" the same Deceptikuta said, seconds before having his head blown apart.Tahkan Metra and Phoenix Prime came out of the flame, Tahkan firing his rifle a few times before turning that hand into a missile launcher and firing rockets in the room, while with his machine gun fired at anyone who escaped his missiles. Phoenix sliced down a nearby Deceptikuta, and watched as Tahkan decimated the remaining Deceptikuta.Stopping shooting for a minute, he looked at his handy work. "Not too bad." He said."A bit.. excessive, don't you think?" Phoenix asked him. The room was covered in pieces of Deceptikuta and most of the monitors the Deceptikuta used to control the ship had been destroyed."Personally, I thought it wasn't quite enough." Tahkan said. Suddenly, a Deceptiktua who had survived the onslaught jumped out from behind a computer station, landing on Tahkan. Tahkan didn't even fall, just taking the blades on his arms and ripping apart at the Deceptikuta's chest and neck."Honestly... that's some distrubing stuff right there." Phoenix said, watching Tahkan finish off the Deceptikuta."If you don't have anything useful to say, shut up." Tahkan said. Phoenix shrugged his shoulders."Right, so what do we need to break to send this thing down? I've never been in one before." Tahkan said."Well we can't send it down right here, it would land on the city!" Phoenix said."Not like there's any damage to the city already." Tahkan responded sarcastically.Phoenix sighed, then shrugged once more. "Maybe it'll land on Norik's head if we're lucky." Phoenix said."That's the spirit." Tahkan said. They both walked around, looking for something important to break."Hey, this looks like the main controls here." Phoenix said."What makes you think that?" Tahkan asked him."It says main controls." Phoenix responded.Tahkan stared at him. Without saying a word, he lifted his arm, turned it into his rifle, and fired, blowing the controls apart."Hey! You could've hit me!" Phoenix yelled."You can teleport, you're fine." Tahkan responded. Suddenly, the ship lurched. "Speaking of which, use it to get us out of here." he said."I almsot considered leaving you." Phoenix said. The door to the room burst open and Deceptikuta drones ran in, but another random movement from the ship sent them falling on their faces. Phoenix grabbed Tahkan and teleported them out of there, just as the ship finally fell.Outside, they watched as all one-hundred-whatever-it-was feet plummeted to the ground, landing on a row of small buildings."You know.. I was hoping it was going to explode." Tahkan said."With expectations like that, you should go into directing." Phoenix said. And the collective subconcious of all the readers went bazinga!ELSEWHEREMakutatron retreated, open wounds on his body. He had accidentaly stumbled infront of a few Matoran tanks, and they hadn't wasted their time. After they had actually decimated his troops, he had had no choice but to try and find reinforcments. And he had found disparingly large amounts of dead Deceptikuta, many of which appearing to have been killed by Metrutronians weapons."So Omega isn't the only one back." he thought. Standing in an area which was a little too open for his liking, he saw a Deceptikuta ship, atleast 160 feet long, just drop out of the sky. Looking to his right, he saw a flash of blue, red and silver, and before he could react, Matanui Prime had flown into him, propelling them both through the air and through a building, similar to their confrontation five years ago in Lego City.After going through the building, Makutatron hit the ground first, rolling, while Matanui landed on his feet and skidded severla feet. Maktuatron got to his feet and aimed his gun at Matanui, but Matanui grabbed him by the wrist and pulled, taking Makutatron off balence. Makutatron punched at Matanui, hitting him in the chest, but Matanui came back with another hit, and another, then finally with a hit to the back of knee Makutatron went onto his knees, then another kick and he was on the ground, landing in a pile of garbage and rubble. Looking up, he saw Matanui's gun in his face."Do it." Makutatron said. On his face, Transraga looked down the barrel of the gun, scared out of his little mind."Nein! Don't do it! Don't do it!" he said, but noone heard him."No." Matanui said, moving his gun away."What? What time is this to show mercy, Matanui?" Makutatron asked his once-brother."Makutatron," Matanui began, "there was a time when you were the star of our race, a shinging example for the rest of us. Now look at you." Makutatron took a moment to look over his body. Once he had been gunmetal and red armoured, now he was a pale, rusted gray, covered in scars and much of his circuitry underneath showing. His right arm was a different colour from the rest of him, taken from some no-name Deceptikuta, and of course there was his heavily damaged face."All the more reason to put me out of my misery." Makutatron said, looking Matanui right in the optic."You've done terrible things in this war, to Metrutron, to our race. And yet still, when I look at you I see you as only another victim. A victim of Icarax." Matanui said.Makutatron growled. "Icarax was weak!" he said."And so are you." Matanui said. Makutatron looked at him angirily, and atempted to spit at him, but all it did was go all over his chin.Matanui looked at him for a moment longer, and Makutatron averted his own optics, looking at the ground. And with that, Matanui flew off. Pitifully, Makutatron sat against the nearest wall, and thought about how far he had fallen.END OF CHAPTERFun Commentary: WHHATTT?? Did Wipeout... KILL MATORAN? Why yes, yes he did. Maybe they were pretenders and actually Deceptikuta in disguise? Maybe. And he was going to kill Kongu... Although, they are bad guys, and Wipeout, like all the Autotoabots, is assuming Metru-Nui is doomed and that they're all going to die, so he thought to dish out some justice... Also, the bazinga: that was just a shot at Michael Bay right there and his love of explosions. Which is partly why I love Michael Bay's movies, soo.... And you see just how far Makutatron has come since he was all "ARRGHH! ALLSHINY!!!" Speaking of which, when Tahkan said "I'll see you in the AllShiny if I have to" he probably talking about that as a heaven or Valhalla type thing, seeing as they're all thinking it's the last time they're gonna see each other...AND! Just for fun, here's the Chapter titles for the last 4 chapters!The Battle of Metru-Nui Part 2Last Stand of the AutotoabotsDark of the MoonMore than Meets the EyePretty snazy, eh? Also, Hubert, PM me about the 300 spoof, I need to find out which character you're being.MTL

Did Torch kill Ehlek, Vultraz and Lewa Mata? If so, I am sad. And good to see Tahu Mata is thinking things over. It's good to do that once and a while.Interesting start, especailly knowing that the Throwbots have powers form ALMIGHTY that they can use to kill sets and such.MTL

Well, I just stumbled on perhaps one of the most well written and awesome Spoofs I've ever read (and I've read alot of spoofs). As soon as I read -resident gun-toting butt kicker- I knew I had found a genius comedy. That one sentence was enough to make me fall in love with it, in fact. The rest only secured the fact. Add to that my love of Noodle incidents, which you have aplenty, you have yourself a reader good sir.If you make Mata Nui ride a dinosaur around and shoot things, I will give you my first born child undying loyalty in everything you do. Perhaps one of the greatest things I've ever read right there. T'was funny.MTL

Now!TRANSONICLE 2: REVENGE OF ICARAXCHAPTER 1RUNNING START<Our race is one of considerable age. Eons apon eons our histroy goes back, full of countless sturggles, battles and periods of peace. And for the last few thousand years, our race has been at constant war: a war which has seen the near destruction of our home planet, Metrutron. Our war has since come to the planet of the Matoran, small creatures of surprising courage and passion. However, this is not the first time our races have collided.>VOYA-NUI170,000 years before the AllShiny and Makutatron came to the Matoran’s planet.The group of Matoran hunters walked over the jagged landscape. They were hunting a Muaka, a massive tiger thing. In their hands were sharpened sticks and stones, more than capable of breaking bones.Walk. Stop. Drop. Roll. Repeat.This was the hunter's hunting routine. Somehow, somehow, it worked. Don’t ask me, I'm not writing thi-Oh.They were so close to the creature that they could whisper in its ear, but something stopped them from finishing their hunt. There was a buzzing in the air for a few seconds, then, the sound of hundreds of pieces of metal against stone, and some odd form of language that sounded like, well, nothing the hunters could realistically compare it to.The hunters and the Muaka walked to the edge of a nearby cliff, and saw hundreds of massive beings working hard or hardly working on a masive machine, which looked like a giant, jagged, black metal pyramid.One of the beings, taller than the rest, black with red highlights and wielding a long staff, turned in the direction the cliff, and suddenly disappeared in a mighty flash of light. The Matoran and Muaka, all with short attention spans, turned and decided to call it a day. Just as soon as they went to walk away, the massive figure appeared in front of them. All the little creatures hit the ground, and the massive figure kicked ‘em a little. He picked one up and held it in front of his face.Making a sound that was probably a sign of disgust in its own language, it crushed the Matoran. NEW DIVIDE STREET, KO-METRU, PRESENT DAY<In the two years since we defeated the Deceptikuta at the battle of Lego City and saw the destruction of Makutatron and the AllShiny, we have stayed on this planet, working with its government to fight the Deceptikuta when they returned. With PEST, a highly trained team of special ops Matoran, we have fought back wherever they've showed themselves. Working together, we have proved ourselves a capable force for good.>A PEST helicopter holding, well, PEST soliders, sped over Ko-Metru in what was very likely the middle of the night. (it was snowy and all so it was hard to tell) Their destination was an old steel mill, (or something) where a Deceptikuta (or several, hard to tell) had landed, and proceded to break a few objects (like some Matoran).I love parenthesises."Alright men, let’s make this quick. I got told I finally get a vacation after this, and I can FINALLY get to see my daughter and wife again." Hewkii said to the troops. You see, in some cruel twist of fate, the Metru-Nui military thought that since he and Hafu were such great soliders at fighting dem robots, that keeping them on to train troops and fight more robots in PEST was a good idea. As such, neither had gone home for over two years now."So, ah, what’s the cover story this time?" The New Guy asked. The New Guy was a Po-Matoran, like Hewkii and Hafu, who had been working with PEST for over a year now. He had been the first recruit, and noone had gotten over calling him "the New Guy", so it stuck.Hafu pulled out his phone and looked at what the orders said."chemical spill. u @ 4 people stuck inside. U r rescue group. no matoran actualy in. deceptikuta actualy tho." Hafu read out the message exactly.The group stared at Hafu."What?" Hafu asked."Uh, you, um." The New Guy stuttered."Oh, The General likes to take shortcuts when he texts." Hafu said as he put his phone away."No, not that," The New Guy said, "How come you spoke it exactly like he wrote it?"LESS THAN A MINUTE LATERThe Helicopter let the troops out as a Black GMC Top kick and a blue Lamborghini Gallardo LP560-4, as well as some Humvees, pulled up. Troops got out of all of them. Hewkii walked up to the Top Kick and patted its hood."Good Job Hydraxhide. But who’s the other guy?" Hewkii said and asked at the same time. Whoop-de-do, he’s a multi-tasker."That is Vakama Maximus’ new alternate mode." Hydraxhide answered as both of them transmoced into their robot forms."You like? They're discontinuing my old form, so I decided to get a new one, to stay up date and incognito." Vakama Maximus said as he flexed his arms. His new form had the front of his vehicle mode on his chest, his front tires on his elbows and his pistols transmoced into his wrists, ready to be thrown into his hands at a moments notice.Hydraxhide slapped Vakama Maximus upside the head. "Mine is getting discontinued too, tin head." Hydraxhide said, his movement making some soliders move back a bit."Hey, my processor’s only 78.67 percent tin." Vakama Maximus snapped, rubbing his processor."What's with you guys and chossing expensive cars, anyways? It's not exactly sneaky." Hewkii said."Whatever." Hydraxhide said, then he sniffed the air. Or something. "He's here. I smell him.""What?" Vakama Maximus asked.Meanwhile, Hafu and The New Guy walked along a wall, Hafu holding a radiation scanner to watch for their evil Deceptikuta target."Do we know anything about the Deceptikuta were dealing with here?" the New Guy asked Hafu."The report says either a few big guys or a lot of small guys. Either way, nothing that'll be too hard for Hydraxhide and Vakama Maximus." Hafu said. "We do have atleast 10 deaths caused by whoever is here though."The two turned a corner and looked forward to a huge crater in the ground. Behind the crater was a large excavator-type-machine.Several soldiers now surrounded the crater. Hafu turned back to The New Kid. "It’s show time." Hafu said as he raised the radiation detector just to check. Looking over the crater, he saw that something had been in it, then raising it to the excavator..."Mother of..." Hafu began to say. Interupting his sentence was "bwa-bwa-bwa."The scoop on the excavator split, the huge main portion of it opened up and the treads began giant tires. Slamming its huge, 50 foot arms against the ground, it raised itself up.One solider fired a shot, before the Deceptiktua made a sound that was probably laughter. Swinging its arms, it knocked pieces of equipment (like a crane) pieces of building (like most of a building) over, then it wheeled forward, towering over everything. Hafu and the New Guy ran for cover as Helicopters came in.FROM THE DECEPTIKUTA'S POINT OF VIEWSubterranisher, one of the bigger Deceptikuta, enjoyed nothing more than compelte carnage. It was all he was really good at, you see. Being 80 feet tall means he would not be a very good door-man. The Matoran shot at him all they wanted, their little weapons doing minimal damage to his mighty body. Wheeling forward and picking up speed, he made his way towards the centre of the city, more than eager to begin the slaughter.Several Matoran helicopters shot at him, and a quick swing of his arm brought two of them down in a hail of fire.MEANWHILE, THE MATORANHewkii watched as Subterranisher made his escape. Bringing a radio up, he called for help "This is Hewkii. We got a big Echo Romeo making its way to downtown Ko-Metru and we're gonna need some help. Send in Big Mac!" Hewkii radioed. Hafu and the New Guy looked around for Hydraxhide and Vakama Maximus.ABOVE KO-METRUA big ol' plane followed Subterranisher as the massive robot went through a bridge."Dropping the Big Mac. Do you want Fires with that?" The pilot radioed to Hewkii."Fires?" Hewkii asked."I meant Fries. I read my script wrong." The pilot said."No thanks. We got Fries, however, some ketchup would be nice." Hewkii said to the pilot."Were sorry, we don’t have any weaponry on this puppy." The Pilot said."Okay. Send me my Big Mac now!" Hewkii said.The pilot hit a few buttons, and the back of the plane opened.. Out dropped a red and blue truck with flames on it. As it fell, its parts began to separate. Grill and underside went down. Hood opened and separated. The rest found its place on the falling body of Matanui Prime. With some parachutes opening to slow his fall, he cut them when he was 20 feet from the ground.Landing like a boss, Matanui stood up. "Hydraxhide, Vakama Maximus, report!" he said ont he Autotoabot communication channel."This is Hydraxhide. Subterranisher has almost left the construction distruct or wherever we are. I'm taking the first shot at him!" Hydraxhide responded."We must stop him! I’m in pursuit!" Matanui said as he did a roll and transmoced. Matanui had downloaded maps of Ko-Metru, so he knew his way. Taking shortcuts, he made his way to stop Subterranisher's rampage.Subterranisher sped down a bridge, his sights aimed on another bridge ahead, which he looked forward to destroying. Behind him, driving over the trail of destruction he left behind, was Hydraxhide, Vakama Maximus and the PEST humvees."The tire! Break it!" Hydraxhide told them, then sped up, transmoced and grab onto what held the tire to Subterranisher's body. Holding on with one hand, Hydraxhide punched and shot at it with other, sending bits and pieces of it off. Vakama Maximus followed in vehicle mode, two guns coming of the top of his roof and firing at the tire. The humvees, which had little guns on them manned by Matoran, fired as well.Subteranisher let out a grunt and tried swinging at them, knocking several cars ahead of him with the other. Some of the cars landed on the bridge Subterranisher was going for, which narrowly missed a red and blue semi driving across it. Matanui Prime transmoced and jumped onto Subterranisher's arm just as it hit the bridge, breaking through it even as Matanui climbed up it.Subterranisher raised his arm and looked at it, just as Matanui reached his shoulder, jumped off of it and landed on Subterranisher's face."Get off Autotoabot fool!" Subterranisher yelled at Matanui. Matanui swung and stabbed with his swords. Suddenly, all of PEST's, Vakama Maximus' and Hydraxhide's shooting paid off: part of the thing holding the tire snapped and Subterranisher lost control. Falling, he went off the road and into a construction sight, as Hydraxhide jumped off and slide to safety while Matanui rolled off when he had a chance.　Subterranisher slid across the sight, parts of him breaking off as he tried to slow himself, until he crashed into an unfinished building.Matanui Prime, Vakama Maximus and Hydraxhide got down there to inspect their foe."Deceptikuta punk." Hydraxhide said, his cannons raised."Easy Hydraxhide. He won't do anything to harm us." Matanui said."I never trust a Deceptikuta to not do anything. Especially if he's bigger than me." Hydraxhide said."What are you doing here, Subterranisher?" Matanui Prime asked the giant Deceptikuta."This is not your planet to rule! The Deceptiktua shall have it! Icarax shall rise again! I mean, show mercy!" Subterranisher said, him and his big mouth."Not today he won't." Vakama Maximus said, shooting the injured Subterranisher in the face, at point blank."VAKAMA MAXIMUS!" Matanui yelled "He couldn't have hurt us!""What could we have done with him? He was 80 feet of destruction that we couldn't of exactly put in a jail cell." Vakama Maximus said. Hydraxhide gave a grunt of approval."We couldn't have anything with. He probably killed a bunch of Matoran today anyways." Hydraxhide said.Matanui ignored Hydraxhide's comment and looked at what was left of Subterranisher. "What did he mean when he said Icarax shall rise again?""Do you think he meant the Icarax who betrayed the first Primes way back when?" Hydraxhide asked."I hope not." Matanui said, and before he could say anything more he got a message from Galcee."Prime! We found another Deceptikuta! It appears to be Hakanways. We're in pursuit!" Galcee said."Copy that Galcee." Matanui said to Galcee. Then he turned to Hydraxhide and Vakama Maximus. "We wait here until PEST can dispose of Subterranisher’s body." he said to them.SOMEWHERE ELSE IN KO-METRUGalcee chased after Hakanways, in vehicle mode of course. Her motorcycle mode was just fast enough to follow behind him, but all the weaponry she had available in that mode wasn't doing much to him."I need someone to slow down Hakanways! Who's nearby?" Galcee said on the Autotoabot only radio channel."We are!" Mataus radioed to Galcee."Not the twins!" Galcee complained."I'm on my way too." Tahuswipe said.In front of Galcee and Hakanways, an ice cream truck pulled up, blocking the path of Hakanways. Hakanways simply transmoced and used his momentum to jump over the ice cream truck and transmoc again. Tahuswipe, in his silver awesome corvette alt mode that was also awesome, Tahuswipe copied what Hakanways just did, but awesomer. Awesome. Galcee hit the breaks and stopped before she hit the ice cream truck, which had transmoced in Onewaflap and Mataus, two short and fat looking twins."What's wrong with you two?" She said as she transmoced into her robot form,which was the exact same as it had been in the first Transonicle. Two legs and all."Well, we tried!" Onewaflap said. Galcee simply transmoced and followed Hakanways and Tahuswipe."Yo man, I think she likes me." Onewaflap said. Mataus simply face palmed and copied Galcee. Which didn't work at all since he only made up half of his and Onewaflap's alt mode."Hah! You stupid!" Onewaflap said."I didn't think it was that funny." Mataus said.Meanwhile, the far more interesting Hakanways and Tahuswipe drove down the alley."This is a long alley way." Tahuswipe thought to himself. Thee two kept driving along, when they noticed that the alley was about to come to an abrupt stop. Hakanways transmoced, ran through the building, and transmoced again. Tahuswipe did this as well, but awesomer. With his wheels for feet, which were awesome.Inside the building, a Turaga turned to see the two robots go through his living room. He looked and saw his book case, full of expensive dishes, was destroyed."NNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOO!" He yelled out, crying.Hakanways and Tahuswipe continued through another alley."I’m getting tired of this." Tahuswipe said. He sped up as fast as he could, then fired some guns that appeared on the roof of his vehicle mode. Shooting at Hakanways' back tires and slowing him down, Tahuswipe then transmoced, jumping over Hakanways and launching one of his swords into Hakanways' hood. This slowed Hakanways even more, just in time for Tahuswipe to land infront of him, reattach the sword to its place just above his wrist, and cut Hakanways right in half down the middle. "I'm just too good at this." Tahuswipe said, then radioed his victory to the others. "Hakanways is down and out."END OF CHAPTERFun Commentary: Ahaha! The return! In case you didn't know, the fellow doing the introductory speeches (in the < >) was Matanui Prime, so imagine that in Peter Cullen's voice. Also, that mysterious red and black being? Icarax that was. He also appears in that one chapter of Transonicle 3, in the flash back. Those hunters he killed were unknown about by the other Metrutronians, so they probably wondered what he was teleportin' off to. This chapter also saw the introduction of Tahuswipe (Sideswipe), Mataus (Skids) Onewaflap, (Mudflap) Icarax (the Fallen) and the New Guy, who is just a solider. Vakama Maximus also gets a new mode here. He's blue now! And Hakanways and Subterranisher basically said nothing and did not much other than break things. Huh.MTL

Congratulations on getting what I beleive to be the greatest game ever. Prepare as your free-time melts before your eyes.Summer you say? That's sorta close. Although it won't stop snowing up near my house, and I'm in one of the warmer parts of Canada... And congrats on five years of TBTTRAH!MTL

They confirmed it? I'm assuming Michael Bay isn't returning for it...Darn, I'll have to watch who I kill off :PAnd you love teeth. You always have.MTLMichael Bay is directing it and most of the human cast so far apparently isn't returning.So feel free to kill off all of the human/Matoran characters. -ibrowIs he now? I actually really want to see this now and where he takes the series. A good way to flesh out some of the characters..Also, that Matoran death statement is actually very relevent to the part of the next chapter I just wrote. But sshhh, I can't spoil all of it, other than that Wipeout has something to do with it.... However, the next Transonicle related piece of material I'm putting up is the first chapter of Transonicle 2, which will go up in Transonicle Re-Mastered. That chapter will be sometime today, then the Transonicle 3 chapter I should get close to finishing by tommorrow.MTL

They confirmed it? I'm assuming Michael Bay isn't returning for it...Darn, I'll have to watch who I kill off :PAnd you love teeth. You always have.MTL

"The Touch"... maybe.... I still think I like Steve Jablonsky's score works better for most of it.. but the more I think of "The Touch" the more I like... however, since you're the one reading it, it's sort of up to you to imagine the music to go with it. Of course, using that logic you could also imagine "Friday" playing to all the scenes, and in that case you should stop reading immediatly.And an update on the next chapter: It's almost half way done.... I've just been working on it little bits due to how busy I've actually been lately (also Skyrim). Tommorrow (or next weekend) should have the next chapter up.MTL

Well, the very first few lines got a hardy chuckle out of me, which is a good sign. So the Nxt Toa have been sent to Artifical-Nui to construct buildings there, but will be harrassed by Makuta Brenderax? I like it. A good, clean, simple idea which should be easy to make yourself a comedy with. I'll be watching this topic.MTL

When preforming criminal actitivities, it's important to remember to stay within the law. Lambda Turtle is just being a poor sport here. This is actually a very important skill to have in life... ...Becuase it let's you say things like this and be totally serious about it. I'm putting my money on Ghirardelli in this fight.MTL

Well, it appears that I've come back to a rather morbid scenario. The last season? Everybody (or most of them atleast) going to die?Well, I can understand that, (expect the whole dream thing... kinda) however, what I do want to know is what ALMIGHTY is all up too and such, especially if he's not going to appear. However, just having him disappear could also work better, making him a mystery man that we have to think of our own explanations for. Or something.MTL

Ah, the final chapter of the original Transonicle!FUN COMMENTARY: I almost completely re-wrote this chapter to resemble the movie more. originally, it was very cheesy, so I made it better. And you may ask "wow, there sure is a lot of Deceptikuta left" well, they all return for Transonicle 2, which will also be posted in this topic.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 22FINALE PART 2LEGO CITY, PO-METRU, METRU-NUIHydraxhide and Kopatchet ran down a street towards the rendevouz, Jaller running between them. Both Hydraxhide and Kopatchet had their weapons out and ready, eyes on the sky and expecting Deceptikuta at any moment. Blacktaka attacked first, flying in and strafing them in his helicopter mode. Hydraxhide took a shot that would've hit Jaller, while Kopatchet fired at Blacktaka. Blacktaka transmoced and spinning his rotor blade weapon, swung at the Autotoabots, sending half a taxi flying."Move Jaller!" Kopatchet yelled, shouldering the taxi as it came by. Hydraxhide rolled along side Jaller, providing cover from the shrapnel being sent by Blacktaka's rotor weapon. The shots from Kopatchet and Hydraxhide were enough that Blacktaka transmoced and took off, just as Sleedat flew by and shot at them. Hydraxhide once more rolled in front of the shots, desperate to keep Jaller safe. Jaller held the container containing the AllShiny close to him as he was almost struck by a stray shot from Sleedat.Sleedat turned back to shoot at them again, but a phoenix jumped on her Metrutronian jet-mode. Phoenix Prime, using his bird mode feet, brought her to the ground, and teleported away."We're gonna make it! We're gonna make it!" Jaller cried, as once more he, Kopatchet and Hydraxhide ran for the building."Keep going!" Kopatchet said. Suddenly another jet was heard. Nihiscream flew at them, shooting some missiles. Hydraxhide rolled and dodged while Kopatchet side stepped, and the missiles blew up behind them. Nihiscream transmoced and skidded along the road, sending cars flying at them. Hydraxhide jumped over Jaller, shielding him from flying automobiles, while Kopatchet began to shoot at Nihiscream.Jaller heard the three Metrutronians yelling at each other in their language, an mess of nonsense to him. Hydraxhide fired his two cannons and Kopatchet fired his machine gun, sending Nihiscream back a little bit, but he struck back with his own machine guns and rocket launchers, his deadly array of weaponry basically all he had going for him. Hydraxhide once more took a shot that would've killed Jaller, but it was enough to send him rolling back with pieces of his armour falling off. He got back to his feet and fired some more and Kopatchet was hit as well, then Hydraxhide took another shot to the chest. Nihiscream continued to fire all he had."Run Jaller!" Hydraxhide said as fluid leaked from his chest wound. Jaller nodded as he ran into an alley.Tahkan Metra swooped in just as Jaller began to run. Nihiscream was making a move for Jaller, saying something about insects, as Tahkan's weaponry hit Nihiscream, sending the chicken-legged Deceptikuta back. Tahkan transmoced and tackled Nihiscream, and the two rolled down the street. Nihiscream crawled away a little bit and tried to get to his feet, but Tahkan punched him back and hit him a few times with the blades on his arms. Nihiscream swung wildly with his saw, and the arrival of Blacktaka forced Tahkan off of Nihiscream. Nihiscream transmoced and flew for it, as Hydraxhide and Kopatchet got back to the feet, and the three Autotoabots retreated, not knowing where Jaller was.IN THE ALLEYJaller ran down the alley and leaned against a dumpster, huffing and puffing. He heard the sounds of battle around him. He looked into the dumpster, ready to throw up. Before he could empty his stomach, he saw half of the body of Lezz laying in it, torn and ruined. Swallowing what would've been messy and un-needed to the plot, he shook his head, saw the rendevouz building where he would be able to escape, and ran for it. H readied the flare that would alert an army helicopter or something to his presence. As he ran, he thought about how flimsy this plan really was.IN THE BUILDINGJaller was running in the lobby of the building and just reaching the stairs when suddenly the wall burst down behind him. Turning, he saw Makutatron roaring after him, the Deceptikuta leader's clawed hands breaking down whatever he felt like."I smell your fear, bbboooooooyyyy!!!" He roared. Jaller screamed and ran up the stairs. Flight apon flight of stairs he ran, still hearing the voice of the Deceptikuta leader."Come out boy! We all have to die sometime!" Makutatron said. Jaller heard him destroy something. Closing his eyes and breathing heavily, he grimaced and went for it.Jaller ran faster, almost tripping twice. He was almost at the top when Makutatron’s head broke through the stairs, sending debris everywhere."Neagh!" Jaller yelled as he almost fell down the stairs."THE ALLSHINY! GIVE IT TO ME!" Makutatron yelled, his hand breaking through the floor behind Jaller, reaching for him. Jaller ran forward, going over Makutatron’s head and running through a door."OOF!" Jaller yelled as he fell to the ground, little bits of door lying beneath him. He got up, and suddenly realized the flare had set itself off when he fell."Oh boy." Jaller said as he ran to the edge of the building. He heard the propellers of a helicopter below."Right here!" Jaller yelled. He looked over the edge and saw the helicopter coming up. He didn’t know what kind it was, but it was really big and it had the numbers and letters BL13KT1K1 on its side."Finally! I’m saved!" Jaller said as it appeared in front of him. He was about to step forward when it transmoced into a massive robot, about 55 feet tall, and pulled itself onto the building."Oh snap! I shouldn’t have gotten in the car!" Jaller said as he quickly turned around, only to see Makutatron push himself through the building's roof."My AllShiny, give it to me!" Makutatron said, walking towards Jaller. He heard a sound and looked to see Nihiscream fly by and transmoc, landing on a building beside them. Jaller was surrounded by three giant Deceptikuta, and he had no escape. He ran back to the edge of the building and prepared to jump, when he saw that the drop was about a hundred feet too many. He leaned against one of the statues the surrounded the building's edge."I won't give it to you! Never!" Jaller yelled, dropping the flare, and clutching a statue and the AllShiny's container.Makutatron made a sound that might've have been laughter. "Is it courage or fear that compells you?" Makutatron said, kneeling down and knocking a statue off the rooftop. He put his head close to Jaller, showing off his startling array of teeth."Give the AllShiny now, and you may live to be my pet. And I shall name you Flufskiron." Makutatron said, laughing at that last bit and walking towards Jaller. Blacktaka stood nearby, watching Jaller carefully."No... no!! Never!" Jaller said defiantly."Oh," Makutatron said, turning a hand into a mace, "So unwise." And with that, he swung, destroying the corner of the building that Jaller had been hanging onto. Jaller, the statue, the AllShiny, it all fell, with Jaller just managing to keep the AllShiny in his hands. He screamed, pieces of rubble hitting him as he fell. He saw the ground, and closed his eyes."I've got you Jaller!" a voice yelled. Jaller opened his eyes just in time to see Matanui Prime running off of a lower building, jump, and grab him, then grab onto the building opposite of them."Hold on Jaller!" Matanui said to him. Jaller clutched the AllShiny's container to himself, looking at Matanui. Matanui's faceplate went across his face just as they heard Makutatron's voice."MATANUI!" Makutatron yelled, jumping down after them. Matanui grunted once and let go, and Jaller screamed. Matanui jumped between the two buildings as they fell, trying to control their disent, but Makutatron dropped right for them. The Deceptikuta tackled them in mid-air, and the they rolled through the air, but Matanui escaped his grip and landed a bit away from Makutatron when they finally hit the ground.Makutatron pushed himself up onto his knees, saw a Kakama-wearing being looking at him, said "Disgusting!", and flicked him away.Matanui let Jaller out of his hand and retracted his faceplate. "Jaller, you would sacrifice yourself for the AllShiny?" Matanui asked him.Jaller looked up at Matanui. "Nothing lost, nothing gained." Jaller said."I do not understand that." Matanui said, turning onto his side. "Jaller, if I cannot defeat Makutatron, you must push the cube into my chest. I will sacrifice myself to save your world." Matanui said."Matanui!" Makutatron said, finally getting to his feet."Run Jaller!" Matanui told Jaller, getting to his feet. As Jaller ran, he looked back for a moment; Matanui stood before Makutatron, his fists raised."At the end of this day Makutatron, one shall stand, one shall fall." Matanui said. Makutatron didn't even respond, instead just attacking Matanui. Jaller steeled himself and continued to try and run as Makutatron threw Matanui down the street. Makutatron ran at Matanui, and Matanui got to his feet and punched Makutatron in the face. Makutatron retaliated, throwing Matanui into a building, pulling him out and throwing him to the ground, where he kicked the Autotoabot leader in the face. Matanui rolled down the street, and once more got to his feet, and blocked a hit from Makutatron. He even managed to get a few good hits in.Jaller kept running, but a helicopter showed up in front of him and transmoced, and Blacktaka stood before him, reaching for the AllShiny. Jaller ran past him.DOWN THE STREETHafu poked Hewkii. "Look, its that thing that attacked the base!" Hafu told him.Hewkii looked at Blacktaka, who was chasing Jaller. "Let’s finish it." Hewkii said, taking Hafu's grenade launcher thing. Hewkii looked around and saw Galcee, helping the damaged and one armed Vakama Maximus nearby. Looking up he saw F-22s flying in."Hey, you! Girl robot! I need your help!" Hewkii yelled as he ran towards her."My name's Galcee." Galcee said."Ok, Galcee," Hewkii corrected himself "You see the helicopter guy over there?" Hewkii asked her. Galcee looked at Blacktaka, then looked back to Vakama Maximus and said something in Metrutronian."Got it!" Vakama Maximus said, taking his pistol out. Behind them Blue Flame ran up, and Galcee repeated the Metrutronian to him."Sounds good!" Blue Flame said, kneeling down, turning one arm into his sniper rifle and taking aim. Galcee grabbed Hewkii and transmoced into her motorcycle mode."Get ready to shoot!" she told him "His armour's weak underneath!" she told him. Vakama Maximus told Hafu and the other soldiers the same thing."Bring the rain!" Hewkii said to Hafu as Galcee drove off.Hafu nodded and took his radio-thing out. "Yo, F-22s, this is our guys on the ground here talking. We got a big nasty who's marked and ready for you to wreck." Hafu told them."Copy that. Is it the helicopter guy I see there?" the pilot said."You got it." Hafu responded."We're golden then." the pilot said. By now Galcee and Hewkii were almost at Blacktaka."No-one shoot until my signal!" Vakama Maximus said, aiming his pistol.BACK WITH JALLER AND BLACKTAKAJaller kept running, Blacktaka running up behind him, in his awkward way of running."LOOK OUT KID!" Hewkii yelled. Jaller saw Hewkii and Galcee, then jumped out of the way. Blacktaka looked and saw Galcee and Hewkii driving to him, then saw all the Matoran, and then saw Blue Flame and Vakama Maximus aimed at him too. Unveiling his chest cannon he fired at the Matoran soliders.Galcee transmoced just as she got under Blacktaka, and both she and Hewkii fired."Now!" Vakama Maximus yelled, and he, Blue Flame and the Matoran soliders fired."Lock and load!" Tanma, the F-22 pilot, said, and the F-22s fired.Blacktaka was struck by all the shots, missiles and such. Pieces of his armour flew off and he finally died. His huge body collapsed in a mangled heap on the ground."YEAH! We did it!" Hewkii yelled, as he did a happy jig. Jaller wiped his brow, and Galcee cheered. Hafu fist bumped the Matoran next to him. Blue Flame and Vakama Maximus smiled and hollared at their combined kill.Just then Wipeout ran up. "Did I miss it? Actually?" he said, looking at Blacktaka's body."We're not done yet." Vakama Maximus said, pointing his pistol to Matanui and Makutatron fighting down the street."Let's go then! Fire at will!" Blue Flame yelled, aiming his sniper rifle and taking a shot at Makutatron. The shot hit Makutatron in the shoulder, pausing him long enough for Matanui to get a few good hits in on him. None below however, noticed an extra F-22 joining the group above.UP WITH THE F-22S Tanma the F-22 pilot was quite pleased that they had succeded in killing a robot right there."Alright Matoran, let's double around and hit what's left!" he said. As he began to turn his jet, he took a moment to have a look at his squadron. Suddenly he noticed a new F-22 get into their formation."What in the world?" Tanma said just as the F-22 fired, hitting one and sending it down. The F-22 traitor then transmoced into Nihiscream, who struck out at another, just missing it, then fired at it, sending it down."Kill it! Kill it!" a pilot yelled. Some of the F-22s pulled back and fired on Nihiscream, hitting him a few times. He fired at them, then transmoced and sped ahead into the city.The other F-22s followed, firing when they could and dodging around a large building. Nihiscream transmoced again, which slowed him down just enough that he ended up right in the centre of the group. He fired at one F-22, severly damaging it, and struck another one, sending it careening down into a building. He was hit several times more, mostly by Tanma himself, until he transmoced again and sped off, too fast to be caught.BACK BELOWJaller watched as Makutatron continued to beat on Matanui. The Matoran soliders had come up and were firing what they could at Makutatron, who shrugged the shots off. Galcee and Wipeout got close and fired, which Makutatron responded by swinging at them with his mace. Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame continued firing, with their shots doing something. Not much, but something."Move! Move!" Hewkii said as Makutatron got too close. They retreated."MY! ALLSHINY!" Makutatron said, throwing Matanui back down when he saw Jaller. He made his way towards the Matoran. Suddenly, Hydraxhide and Kopatchet returned, firing their weaponry, with Hydraxhide getting in front of Makutatron, taking his cannons, and at point blank sticking them into Makutatron's chest and firing. Makutatron fell, but got back up and back handed Hydraxhide. Kopatchet turned his one hand into a saw and swung at Makutatron, which was doing stuff until the saw broke."Oh." Kopatchet said, and then Makutatron spun and punched Kopatchet in the head, sending the medic back. Wipeout and Galcee tried to get the Matoran away, and Makutatron went for them again, but shots from Hydraxhide, Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame slowed him down. Falling, he got back to his feet and ran after the Matoran.Suddenly, a purple semi-truck drove down the street, transmoced into Dakama Prime, and taking his axe swung at Makutatron. The axe lodged itself into Makutatron's shoulder. Makutatron growled and removed it, hit Dakama with it and threw the axe away. Dakama got back to his feet and tackled Makutatron, the two rolling. The Matoran only just got into an alley, avoiding being crushed by the two. Makutatron threw Dakama off of him.Phoenix and Tahkan Metra flew by, shooting at Makutatron. Makutatron fell to his knees, turned, and transmocing his arms into his fusion cannon, shot down Tahkan Metra. Tahkan fell, transmoced and rolled, and Phoenix swooped down to hit Makutatron with his sword. Makutatron grabbed him and tore his phoenix-wing off, then hit Dakama Prime with the wing when the Autotoabot tried to get back to his feet.Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame fired for all they were worth, and now Makutatron was actually showing signs of damage. But he would not -he could not- stop now, so close to his prize."Run!" Galcee yelled, as she, Wipeout, Hewkii, Hafu, Jaller and the other Matoran soliders tried to run. Galcee and Wipeout fired at Makutatron, and the F-22s returned and fired their missiles at him. Makutatron was sent to the ground, but still he crawled after them."GIVE IT TO ME!" Makutatron roared, crawling after them. Wipeout shot Makutatron in the mouth, to no avail. I mean, some of Makutatron's teeth did fall out, but he didn't seem to care. World domination and all."I WILL KILL YOU ALL!" Makutatron roared again, almost reaching them. Blue Flame and Vakama Maximus still fired at him, but Makutatron ignored them. Victory, he thought, was at hand."NNOO!!"Suddenly Matanui Prime was there, picking up Makutatron in a bear hug. Makutatron roared, and in seconds he had removed himself from the hug and had thrown Matanui to the ground, just as the F-22s made another pass, firing at Makutatron, all the while most of the Autotoabots doing the same. Makutatron struggled against their shots, looking like he was about to die. But out of the smoke and fire he went forth, Matanui getting knocked down before him. Makutatron slammed his fist infront of Jaller, and Jaller was once more face-to-face with Makutatron."Jaller! Put it into my chest!" Matanui yelled, Makutatron's hand pushing Matanui's head into the ground."MIINEEE!" Makutatron roared "ALLSHINNYY!"Jaller didn't want to push the cube into Matanui's chest and kill him, but he didn't want Makutatron to get it either. Everyone was still shooting, yet still Makutatron persisted."Run boy!" Dakama Prime yelled to Jaller, pulling on Makutatron's shoulders, but Makutatron back handed him without even looking. Dakama stumbled back. "Get out of there!" a female voice yelled.Jaller looked and saw Hahli standing down the road, and beside her was Pohatubee, hooked into the back of a pickup. Pohatubee was desperately firing at Makutatron. Hewkii, Hafu and the other soliders had made a line in front of them, shooting at Makutatron's head. Wipeout and Galcee looked like they were going to run to Jaller."GO JALLER! GET OUT OF THERE!" Hahli screamed again.Jaller looked back at Makutatron's awful mouth, which was less than ten feet from him. He raised a hand above his terrifying head, clenched into a fist and was ready to crush Jaller."GIVE! IT! TO! MEE!" Makutatron said, about to bring his hand down on top of the Matoran. Jaller looked down momentarily and saw how torn apart Makutatron's chest was."You want it, you can have it!" Jaller yelled, his best possible one-liner for the moment, as he opened the AllShiny container, took the AllShiny in his hands and aimed it Makutatron's chest."Jaller, nnooo!" Matanui yelled, even as the AllShiny glowed red, then seperated and shot itself into Makutatron's chest, right into his spark."RREEAAAGGHHHH!!!!" Makutatron screamed, tearing at his chest as the AllShiny burned away in his spark.<You got the touch! You got the power!> Pohatubee’s radio sang out as Makutatron compulsed, and his body began to turn a bad shade of grey. All the red that had been on him, like his face for instance, turned grey, the parts of his armour that had been gray turned black, and looked all brittle and such. Makutatron made one gurgling noise, shivered, then his spark exploded, sending a pulse wave through the city. He fell on his back, right beside Jaller.And finally, Makutatron was dead.Matanui Prime, Dakama Prime, Vakama Maximus, Kopatchet, Blue Flame, Wipeout, Tahkan Metra, Phoniex Prime, Galcee, Hewkii, Hafu and the rest of the Matoran soliders all stood around Jaller and the body of Makutatron. Hydraxhide walked up, the halfs of Lezz's body in each hand."Matanui, we couldn't.." Hydraxhide said "We couldn't save him." Then he handed Lezz's remains to Matanui."Ah, Lezz. Your music was annoying, yet you will be missed just the same." Matanui said with a heavy heart. "There never was a more faithful first leutenant."Matanui handed Lezz's body to Dakama Prime, who took it solemnly. Matanui kneeled down and looked into the remnants of Makutatron's chest, where it still burned a dull colour."You left me no choice." Matanui said, reminescing of old times "brother." Reaching into Makutatron's ruined chest he pulled out a sliver of the AllShiny.Then Matanui Prime turned to Jaller. "Jaller, your bravery has ended Makutatron's tyranny.We are forever in your debt." Matanui said, "All of you, thank you." he said, looking at Hewkii and his soliders, then to his own Autotoabots."What about Metrutron? We can’t save our planet now that the AllShiny is gone." Dakama asked Matanui.Matanui thought for moment, then finally said "Metrutron isn’t our home now." "So we're living here now, huh?" Tahkan Metra said, not sounding too pleased.Jaller walked up and sat beside Pohatubee, staying away from Makutatron’s body. "So, you guys are staying here now? That's great!""Permission to respond, sir?" Pohatubee asked Matanui. Pohatubee speaking shocked Jaller so bad he fell off of the towtruck, and startled the Autotoabots."Permission granted, old friend." Matanui responded, so happy it took his mind off of Lezz."I wish to stay with Jally." Pohatubee said."It's Jaller." Jaller said."Got you!" Pohatubee said, lightly hitting him in the shoulder."Wait, so why can you talk now?" Jaller asked him. Hahli walked up and held Jaller's hand, and they waited for Pohatubee's answer."Yeah, my laser did wonders for him." Kopatchet said, poking at the stump where Vakama Maximus' right arm used to be."You never even looked at his vocal processor you lier! Now it's going to be Hdyraxhide or someone who has to fix Pohatubee's legs!" Vakama Maximus said."Shhh." Kopatchet said, "accidentaly" pulling something loose in the stub of Vakama Maximus' shoulder. Vakama Maximus watched as bolts and gears slid out of where his arm had been."Whoopsies." Kopatchet said."Anyways, I think the AllShiny may have fixed my vocal processors." Pohatubee said."Oh... Ok." Jaller said, not really liking that explanation.SOMEWHERE ELSEBarritax. Transraga. Sleedat. Daedulus. Enderth. Nihiscream. These were the only living Deceptikuta, out of the 15 that had come to get the AllShiny and rescue Makutatron, only 6 survived the final battle. Adding to that, most were badly damaged."Well, since mighty lord Makutatron is gone, I guess that makes me official leader of the Deceptikuta." Nihiscream said. Lord Nihiscream had a nice ring to it, he thought. Emperor Nihiscream sounded even better."Why can't I be leader? Can I be second in command?" Daedulus asked, walking up to Nihiscream. Nihiscream turned a hand into rockets and aimed it at Daedulus' face. Daedulus backed off."Honestly Nihiscream, you're not fit to lead a parade." Sleedat said."And you're not you're fit to insult me like that. So don't." Nihiscream said. "Besides, Makutatron would've wanted me to lead the Deceptikuta."No he wouldn't." Sleedat said."QUIET!" Nihiscream spat. Calming down a bit, he added "I'm going to find the Deceptikuta fleets, come back, and kill these Matoran. Until I return, you all must stay here and continue our conquest." And just like that, Nihiscream transmoced and flew away. "What a cool dude." Enderth said."Vhy am I talking like zis?" the head of Transraga said. Everyone ignored him.THE COLISEUMTuraga Vakama began his little announcment to the most important members of Metru-Nuian government."Gentlemen," he began, even though the proper term would be "gentle-toran", but anyways "the events that transpired this last week have opened our eyes. Now we know for sure that we are not alone in this universe. Steps are now being taken to prepare ourselves incase of more such events. First of all, Sector Six's information is to revealed to us, and to the Autotoabots. By the end of this month, Sector Six and all its divisions are to be dis-banded. The military, air force and navies are to be equiped with weaponry capable of harming Deceptikuta. The bodies of the Deceptikuta will be disposed of in the deepest place on our planet; the Pit, where hopefully the mutagen and pressure will destroy them, leaving no trace."One of the Matoran in the room nodded. "I like it. I like it." he said.AT A HILLSIDEThe Autotoabots, Dakama Prime, Phoenix Prime, Hydraxhide, Kopatchet, Tahkan Metra, Vakama Maximus (with a new arm!), Blue Flame, Galcee and Wipeout all stood at the edge of the hill, looking down on Metru-Nui, the Coliseum standing tall in the distance. Nearby Pohatubee was in vehicle mode, with Jaller and Hahli sitting and holding hands on his hood.Matanui stood a bit back, watching, then looked up to the sky."With the AllShiny lost, we cannot restore our home. Yet fate has yielded us a new reward. A place to call home. We may have defeated the Deceptikuta once already, but they will return. And we will fight them. We will protect this planet's people, the Matoran, who like us, have more to them than meets the eye. I am Matanui Prime, and I send this message to all surviving Autotoabots taking refuge among the stars. We are here, we are waiting."End transmission.ENDMTL

I'm very glad you liked iBrow's line. It was the first one I came up with for the character once iBrow (the BZP-user) sent me the guest request. Says alot about the character, doesn't it? It's somewhere between awesome and epic and a little morbid!If all things go to plan, it would probably be more 5 chapters. ALL the Autotoabots are going to get some good screen time, and some are also going to die.There's lots of lines I loved from the films. Lots that I hated too. Admiral Tanma! NOOO!!Anyway, for some reason the last part of the chapter, which is after Omega's awesome shout of Deceptikuta, is in a smaller font than the rest. Other than that, I am pleased by this chapter, despite the fact that Jodkra has barely any screentime.Proceed.Tanma's line came to me just as I reintroduced him (he appears in the first Transonicle for the final chapter and has no lines), and I had to have it. Not to mention it makes the Deceptikuta seem competent (Flufskiron atleast) compared to the film where I probably could have killed a bunch with a stick and a bucket. I'm not sure if I wrote Tanma getting shot down, but I may have heavily implied it.The font thing was weird, but I've fixed it now. Using different sizes screws things up for some reason.I didn't really want to give lines to all the Autotoabots here, simply because having them all in a scene talking is none too exciting. But don't worry, Jodkra and Johnson will have more than their share of screen time, and may have a crucial role in the battle.... He's actually a collector for a certain dentist... She'd actually freeze up and have to be rebooted if you was REALLY worried. I was kinda hoping for something sentimental, but "rraaahhhh" works too. :PGood chappy, MTL. KUTGW.-MT1) I like to imagine iBrow had a collection of Deceptikuta teeth onboard the iBrow before it got shot down.2) If there's a time to freeze up and reboot, it's not when a hundred-and-twelve foot tall killing machine lands in your base and starts killing you're army.3) I wanted something sentimental, but I couldn't think of anything, so I though having him yell (with Peter Cullen's voice in mind) worked good enough.The next chapter, if not this weekend, will be sometime after it A few important plot points and loose ends to tie up!MTL

This whole conversation was genius. So brave, yet he knows how to pick up a chick (to bad it invovles almost killing yourself) A bit much to put him in a wig salon, isn't it? He hates wigs!Good chapter iBrow, and I shall keep and eye out for How to Be a Villian. But you can keep your small text, though.MTL

Somewhere between instense bravery and instense stupidity here. EpicGood chapter, and I of course knew Levacius was the main character! Always! :PMTL

I surprise you both with a chapter only a week later! Obviously Flufskiron has lost his influence here. Yeah. Cause Transformers/Transonicles have never caused traffic jams before. <_<Good chappy, MTL.-MTTraffic jams are not nearly as common as the senseless destruction. Cars flipping and all...TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 24THE MATORAN STRIKE BACKOne thing Jaller and Hafu had not counted was that every street light had, for some reason, been switched to red. One thing Jaller had not counted on was Hafu stopping at every singal one."Why do you keep stopping at them?" Jaller asked him."Just habit I guess." Hafu answered."Well stop it! There's no police or Vahki to pull you over for running them now!" Jaller said."Fine, fine." Hafu replied. Speeding forward, a police car pulled out infront of them."OH COME ON!" Jaller yelled. The police vehicle stopped, and a Ko-Matoran stepped out."'Kay, just act cool, and let me do the talking." Hafu said."Just don't say anything stupid!" Jaller said.Hafu ran a hand over his mask and rolled down the window."Is there a problem, officer?" Hafu asked the Ko-Matoran."And just where do you think you're going? Don't you the city is under attack?" the Ko-Matoran police officer said. Jaller recognized the Ko-Matoran from somewhere, but couldn't place it.."Well, I know, but we ran out of milk and I assumed prices might down with everyone being dead and such." Hafu said."Sir, I'm going to have to ask you step out of the vehicle." the Ko-Matoran said, looking in the window. Then he saw Jaller. "You!" he said."Me?" Jaller said, confused."You! That Ta-Matoran! Don't you recognize me? I saw you like a week ago, you were all sad or something and walking. I interrogated you five years ago too!" the Ko-Matoran said. Jaller now noticed the Matoran was wearing a Kaukau, the most feminine of all Matoran masks."Uh, sure." Jaller said, not really recalling him."Where you cats goin', anyways? I don't quite believe the milk story." the Ko-Matoran said."Well, if you really want to know.." Hafu started to say."We're going into the city to try and rescue my family. Or at least die trying." Jaller said.The Ko-Matoran nodded. "That's beautiful. I'll gone you guys! I know my way around central Metru-Nui like the back of my mask!" the Ko-Matoran said."Oh swell, but you don't have to..." Jaller began to say."Hey! The more the merrier! Follow behind us!" Hafu said."Awesome! By the way, my name is Steve!" the Ko-Matoran.... Steve... said."Oh, uh, that's a very Ko-Matoran name." Jaller said."You guys lead!" Steve said, running to his car."You're letting him come with us?" Jaller said to Hewkii when Steve was out of earshot."You can't just tell the guy to bug off when the whole world is sorta burning and stuff, now can ya?" Hafu said."Fine. But Steve? His name is really Steve?" Jaller asked."I don't know! I've never tried to ask a cop if he even had actual I.D, or even a name before!" Hafu said, starting the engine as Steve got out of the way "Besides, he's Ko-Matoran. They're weird." he said."Usually." Jaller agreed.THE COLISEUMSleedat, Shockvak and Nihiscream had all gone to their command station, each watching over a quarter of the area around the Coliseum. Dreadinock's fleet was in the skies, with Nihiscream's Strikers mostly orientated in Nihiscream's quarter, which would one of the two most likely places to be attacked. The other place was Makutatron's quarter, although Makutatron needed to have a talk with Flufskiron first.Flufskiron would command the whole operation, from his post on top of the Coliseum. With Swiftinock and Norik up there with him, he was fine, but with Soundprah as well, he was golden. Not only did he have control of all communications on the island with Soundprah, but being stationed on the highest point on Metru-Nui gave him a perfect view of the city. With six turret-combiners up there as well, and most of the Deceptikuta fleet surrounding it, he felt safer than a blind Matoran in a room covered in pillows.Flufskiron didn't understand the analogy, but he assumed it was good.It was early morning now; the Deceptikuta had spent the last 10 or so hours destroying Metru-Nui, now there was barely a building that wasn't burning, partially destoryed or completely totalled.Flufskiron thought about the set up they would have. On the top right quadrant from Flufskiron's perch on top of the Coliseum would be Nihiscream's quadrant. There would mostly be Nihiscream's Strikers and most of the weaker drones there. On the bottom right would be Makutatron's quadrant, which would include the Matoran Kongu's building. Makutatron would have the remnants of the Constructikuta and the rest of the weaker drones, as is only fair. Sleedat's quadrant, on the top left, included the Tohu Memorial and more named and generic Deceptikuta. Her quadrant also got most of the turret-combiners. Shockvak's quarters, the bottom left, had a whole bunch of bridges in it, and for a force had Fenrakk Walkers, Shockvak's Drill Dragon, the strongest drones, and had one long street which Shockvak had fortified."Flufskiron, he's here!" Swiftinock said.Flufskiron saw Makutatron show up in a Deceptikuta transport ship. "Instigator, what do you want?" Makutatron said to Fluskiron."Instigator? That's a clever name, Makutatron. I like to think of myself more as... saviour of the Deceptikuta name." Flufskiron said."Call it what you want, you stole my command." Makutatron said."Command? What command? You spent the last few thousand years frozen in the custody of Matoran, then came back for an hour to die again, then came back only to have your face handed to you twice by Matanui Prime and watch Icarax die! You spent the last three years locked in the bottom of Nihiscream's ship! You didn't even have true command on Metrutron! I led most of the battles! All you did was start the war!" Flufskiron said. Makutatron growled and began to walk forward, but Swiftinock held his weapon at Makutatron's head."Take a step back, Makutatron." Swiftinock said. He could see Transraga, still working furiosuly on Makutatron's head, staring down the barrell of his gun."Surprisingly, we don't have you here to ridicule you. We've actually given you a command." Flufskiron said.Makutatron tilted his head. "What are you playing at, Flufskiron?" he said."I've seen you fight, Makutatron, and... you're good. Good enough to stand out there and kill anything if it shows up." Flufskiron said."I won't accept your charity cretin!" Makutatron said, stepping forward. Flufskiron backhanded Makutatron, and considering how bulky his fists are, Makutatron basically got a car sized fist to the face."I am not giving this to you!" Flufskiron said "I am ordering you! Now take it before I throw you down there!"Makutatron tried to get to his feet, but Swiftinock kicked him. Flufskiron looked to the ship that had brought Makutatron up."Take him to his post! Right now he's wasting my time!" Flufskiron yelled, enjoying the whole thing very much. Walking over, he put his foot on Makutatron, putting his full weight on Makutatron's body."So weak." Flufskiron said, giving him a good kick before walking off.ELSEWHEREHafu and Jaller pulled up to a gas station, with Steve following in his police car."I still can't believe his name is Steve." Jaller said.The gas station was not damaged, with only a burnt out car down the road to remind them of the invasion. Well, the smoking ruins of the city was in view, but if you could only see about a kilometre total, the only evidence would be the car.AANNNYYYWWAAYYYSS, Hafu stopped the car, and he and Jaller got out. Standing in front of the gas station were 7 Matoran."Well, these are the guys who answered the call." Hafu said. Jaller looked at them. A few he recognized as ex-PEST soliders; one was a Po-Matoran with a rocket launcher, a Le-Matoran with some rifles strapped to his back, and a Onu and Ko Matoran wearing body armour and weapons. The other three was a Ta-matoran, one with body armour and weapons, and the other two..Well, one Jaller recognized as Nuhrii, who had been Hahli's old boy friend way back when."Hey Jaller! I heard you're going to rescue your family! I respect, so I've come to help!" Nuhrii said"Ok..." Jaller said. And the last Ta-Matoran was..."Jaller!" Takua yelled."By the great beings, how'd you survive? You should'- I mean could've been stepped on or shot!" Jaller said, shocked and slightly disapointed that Takua was actually one of the Matoran to escape."Could've been, but I'm not." Takua said."Huh. So this is our team to rescue Hahli and my parents." Jaller said."And save Metru-Nui!" Takua said."Well, the other five are ex-PEST soliders, so we should be fine." Hafu said."I'm Kamen!" The Po-Matoran with the rocket launcher said."And I'm-" the Onu-Matoran started to say."Yeaaa we don't have time for introductions right now. We have to go rescue people and stuff." Jaller said."Oh." the Onu-Matoran said, sad."Alright, that's what we're supposed to do. Alright every one, lets do this!" Hafu said, getting into his car.PEST HANGARHewkii and the New Guy stood infront of a computer. At that time, it was not working."What's wrong with it?" Hewkii asked."I'm guessing all the blowing stuff the Deceptikuta have done has probably wrecked a generator or something. Or maybe part of the iBrow hit something important." the New Guy said."Really? That's the best you could come up with?" Hewkii asked."Perhaps I can help." a voice said. Spinning around, Hewkii and the New Guy saw Hickory standing there, with 12345 in a wheel chair."You guys didn't go with Jaller?" the New Guy asked."Why would they go? He's in a wheel chair and he's..." Hewkii said, pointing at Hickory."Vhat? Vhat am I?" Hickory asked. Hewkii made a mumbling noise, but it didn't matter since 12345 was getting things rolling."I see your computer is down." 12345 said."Kaputt." Hickory concurred."And I'm guessing you want some eyes in the sky for Jaller." 12345 said."I would've gone with him... I should've gone with them." Hewkii said, thinking of his friend Hafu, and how he'd gone to help Jaller rescue Hahli and his family. Then that reminded him fo his own wife Macku, who he hadn't seen in five years because of this whole Metrutronian war."And perhaps you can yet." Turaga Nokama said, walking up. "The military hasn't been shut down yet. Perhaps we can atleast bite back before they kill us all.""And we will, do not you worry my old consort." 12345 said to Nokama, who didn't look happy to hear that. "But first we need to get some cameras online so we can look at 'em and find where to hit them the hardest. Maybe even cut the proverbial head off the snake." 12345 said."You mean kill that Drill Dragon thing or whatever it's called." the New Guy said."Sure, that could work, but I was thinking of killing the leaders. But whatever, we can't do anything until we get those computers back up." 12345 said."Which we can't do right now." Turaga Nokama said."None of us here are any good with computers." Hewkii said."Ahem. Perhaps it is mein time to zhine." Hickory said."Ahaha, Hickory here used to be the best computer hacker this side of Metrutron, until I made him be my butler." 12345 said."I don't like to brag-" Hickory began to say, but was interupted by 12345."But just as the cherry on top, I've got some more great hackers too." 12345, turning to the door. In the doorway was a Ga and Onu-Matoran."Meet Nixie and her friend Nuparu." 12345 said."Well, hi." Nixie said."Look at all of this! This is the most state of the art-" Nuparu began to say excitedly, but 12345 kept talking."These two help out Sector Six a little bit when these Deceptikuta first showed up, and they could prove useful." 12345 said."What are they even doing here?" Turaga Nokama asked."I had called them up to say goodbye to the Autotoabots, but they missed 'em." 12345 said."Right, enough talking, we need to get these computers online if we're going to at least avenge the Autotoabots." Hewkii said. The New Guy nodded his agreement."Right!" Nixie said as she, Nuparu and Hickory ran to the computers.NIHISCREAM'S QUADRANTNihiscream stood on top of a building, admiring the handiwork (aka destruction) the Deceptikuta had done."Skystrike, Thunderstrike, any updates?" Nihiscream asked his leutenants."None at all." Skystrike said."Very good! Means nothing has gone wrong yet!" Nihiscream said.Suddenly Ramstrike showed up."Nihiscream! Glad to see you're alive!" Ramstrike said, transmocing and landing nearby."Oh look, something has gone wrong." Skystrike said."Ramstrike, don't you have.... why don't you go check on the borders, huh? Make sure we're not under attack or anything." Nihiscream said. Looking up to make sure, Nihiscream saw some F-22s flying towards them. Since the Strikers all mostly transmoced into F-22s, he let it slide."I'm pretty sure we're not under attack." Ramstrike said."No, what I mean is go away." Nihiscream said."Oh. Ok." Ramstrike said, sad. Turning to walk away, he stopped because the Striker nearby by BLEW UP! KABBOOOOOMM!!Ahem.This shocked the surrounding Deceptikuta so much another one was killed by missiles. Then they the F-22s flying over, and then they realized that those weren't Strikers."We're under attack!" Nihiscream yelled, as another F-22 fired at them. This time its missiles hit the building they were standing on, blowing it apart as it crumbled beneath them. Transmocing, the living Strikers (that phrase techincally includes Nihiscream; they all share his body type, y'know, the triangular chicken leg thing) flew at the F-22s.The F-22s, which had been upgraded to detect Deceptikuta and such, were not part of PEST or such. They fired all they had, hitting the Deceptikuta in their weakest forms; the alt mode. However, when the Strikers got close enough, that's when things went south. Transmocing, they shot, grabbed and smashed away at the Matoran jets, Deceptikuta bodies and Matoran jets falling to the ground below.One pilot, Tanma, who had himself flown F-22s at the battle of Lego-City, Voya-Nui, and a few smaller engagements, braced himself for the aerial melee. One of his wingmen was hit by three missiles, disintegrating his aircraft. His other wingman was jumped on by a Striker, tearing through him. A jet behind Tanma fired at that Strikers, who flew, transmoced and followed after them. Bullets and rockets went past, while Tanma fired what he could, hitting a Striker in the head just as it transmoced, sending it flailing through the air. He dodged a rocket, dipped under a transmocing Striker, then came back up and shot at another just as it was transmocing into a jet.One of the wings on Tanma's jet suddenly had some bullet holes in it. Looking over, Tanma saw that he was being tailed by a Deceptikuta. Spinning, evading and doing all that jazz, Tanma tried to shake him, but it was no use; the Striker had him in his sights, and wasn't giving up.Taking a grenade out of his pocket, Tanma opened up a little window on the side of the cockpit. Pulling the pin, he threw the grenade out, sending it flying back. The Striker didn't even see it as it exploded right on its nose, sending him spiraling down to the street before."YEEEHAAWW!" Tanma yelled, closing the little window and taking a sip from his coffee.THE COLISEUMFlufskiron and Swiftinock watched this intently."It's hard to tell the difference between from here." Flufskiron said."Chances are we're the losing ones. Relying on Nihiscream and all that." Swiftinock replied."Come now, he's not that bad. It's just the rest that can't fight." Flufskiron said."Well, on a side note, I guessing Dume didn't do what he was ordered to." Swiftinock said "Should we send someone to go kill him?" he asked."No need, he will die, as they all must. I'm assuming the gunships are ready if the Matoran get by Nihiscream?" Flufskiron said.Soundprah, who was nearby, answered. "That has been taken care of already." he said."Very good, very good." Flufskiron said. He wondered if Makutatron was watching this aswell.MATKUTATRON'S QUARDRANTMakutatron watched as the remnants of the Constructikuta attempted to fight back some Matoran tanks. The tanks at the end of the street fired down at a Constructikuta who thought it would be smart to run straight at them. It wasn't. The Constructikuta's body blew apart into hilarious bits as was struck by three tank shells at once, while the tank's smaller guns fired all they had.Considering that the Constructikuta had mostly melee weapons, it was kind of understandable that they were being butchered. The tanks had taken the time to get a good position, while the Constructikuta had taken the time to make a few jokes about how bad the Matoran would die. The irony was astounding.A few drones tried for cover, hiding behind corners of buildings and firing down. At one such building, three drones were hiding. The building in question had been heavily damaged earlier by the Deceptikuta, and one enterprising tank fired at a weak point, bringing a whole section of building down on the drones, which looked up in time to be crushed.Makutatron growled and smartly pushed a weakened drone out of his way. Leveling his gun, he fired, hitting a tank and making it asplode. Another tank fired, and hit Makutatron, making him drop his gun and clutch his chest where he got shot. Picking up his gun, he walked to the side, pondering how he had fallen so low to be injured by such insects. A Matoran jet came by and blew apart a few drones, but was being followed by some Strikers and was shot down.THE SKYSomehow, the Strikers retreated from the Matoran onslaught, and Tanma knew what they had to do. Texting, of all things, the message "hed 2 coliseum and shoot", he led the charge, ready to fire.Flufskiron watched. "NOW!" he said. Soundprah sent the signal, and from their landed positions on the streets around the Coliseum, the Deceptikuta fleet rose.The gunships got up first, firing with precise aim at the F-22s. The Matoran sent a few shots, sending down atleast nine gunships, but then the Deceptikuta motherships were up. From out of nowhere the Strikers returned, their disappearence having been a ruse."It's a trap!" Tanma managed to yell, to no descernible effect. The Deceptikuta fired their vast collections of weaponry, and most of the jets were shot down, while the rest dispersed. One that got too close to the Coliseum somehow was shot down by a turret-combiner.Flufskiron watched the massacre, smiling to himself.MEANWHILEIn Hafu's car, Jaller looked at the destruction as they closed in on the city centre. Destroyed vehicles, burning structures and Matoran bodies were everywhere, and they only grew more prominent the farther they got in to the war zone. Music played, making the whole thing especially dramatic.Just a city boyLivin' in South DetroitTook the midnight train goin' annnnyyywhheree"Hafu, do you really need to play that song right now?" Jaller asked him."What? I love this song!" Hafu said."It's not really approiate for the whole invasion massacre thing going on right now." Jaller said."Fine, I guess." Hafu said, turning the radio off. Truth be told, the radio reminded Jaller of Pohatubee, and that made him sad.They drove until the road ended. The road ended because most of a building had collapsed on it, and the road disappeared under it."Well, guess this is it." Hafu said, stopping the car and getting out. The others followed suit. Looking around, they began to lose heart. Aside from the bodies of Matoran, living Matoran stood watching them, faces empty of emotion other than fear. The morning skyline was filled with smoke, and in the distance they could see some kind of battle going on in the air near the Coliseum. Deceptikuta ships, thick in combat with Matoran jets, could be seen winning.Jaller looked back. Hafu, Steve the police Matoran, Kamen the rocket launcher Matoran, Nuhrii, Takua and the others that had come with them all looked around at the site."So, we're gonna go now I guess?" Jaller asked Hafu. Hafu's mouth was open, processing the whole destruction thing.Suddenly, a screech was heard. Looking up, they saw two Matoran jets fly over. Two Deceptikuta gunships came up from the rubble and ambushed them, shooting them down before they could even fire any missiles. The jets spiraled to the ground below.The sight shocked Jaller, and looking back, he saw it basically routed the Matoran with him. One of the PEST soliders sat down and promptly threw up, while rest looked pale."We're going.. right?" Jaller asked, knowing what their response would be. Hafu walked over to him and put a hand on his shoulder."I'm sorry kid.. but it's over. It's over." Hafu said, shaking his head. "We can't do anything to.... that." Hafu pointed at the battle in the sky."So that's it, huh? We're just giving up? The Autotoabots fought for us, they died for us! They didn't have to, and they did, just because it was what they believed, and THIS is how we repay their memory!" Jaller yelled "I'll go by myself then!""Kid, wait!" Hafu said. But before he could do anything, their ears were assaulted by the sound of engines. A Deceptikuta gunship appeared above them, it's propellars and engines pushing them down. It fired its guns, killing a group of Matoran watching. Jaller and Hafu, in the order of dodging, ended up right beside each, underneath it. The gunship continued firing, looking for Matoran as they ran, while Hafu and Jaller realized that it was the end.Suddenly, smoke filled the air. The gunship's pilot, unable to see, landed it, and got out."I don't know what you insects are up to, but I'm going to rip our arms off!" the Deceptikuta pilot said, showing his weapon around.Suddenly again, while the smoke began to disperse, a knife, a Metrutronian sized one, came out of the smoke, and hit the Deceptikuta right in the eye."ARRRGGHH!" the Deceptikuta yelled as he dropped his gun and reached for his face. Then a voice was heared."Wreckinators." iBrow said as he walked into view, holding his other knife. "I want his teeth."The look on the Deceptikuta's face would've been hilarious if he didn't have a knife sticking otu of his optic. LesoSpinn and JackaL ran forward, LesoSpinn taking his own glowing blue knife, sticking it into the Deceptikuta. The Deceptikuta roared in pain as JackaL took his fist and reached into the Deceptikuta's mouth, and pulled out some objects that looked alot like teeth."Here ya go." JackaL said, tossing them to iBrow."Good." iBrow said, examening them "Now kill 'im.""This is gonna hurt... alot!" LesoSpinn said, digging the knives deeper into the Deceptikuta's head. The Deceptikuta struggled out of LesoSpinn's hands, but was grabbed by JackaL who, pressing his foot against him and grabbing his arm, pulled of the Deceptikuta's arm, then spun and hit him with it. LesoSpinn reached into the Deceptikuta's head and pulled the knives out, tossing iBrow's back to him, who caught it and took his own axe to the Deceptikuta's back. The Deceptikuta tried to push itself back up, kicking out at JackaL, who grabbed his foot and held while iBrow took his axe and cut the leg off. The Deceptikuta crawled away for a little bit, only to be stepped on by another Autotoabot."On no ya don't." Hydraxhide said, his new leg on the Deceptikuta. The Deceptikuta only had time to look up before Hydraxhide activated the gun he had in the leg, blowing the Deceptikuta apart. "Deceptikuta punk." Hydraxhide said, kicking the head away.Takua watched this vioence in horror, looking at Hydraxhide. "It's alright, he was a robot." Hydraxhide said, smiling.Jaller and Hafu looked up, astonished, as the Autotoabots walked up before them."You're, you're alive!" Jaller said, beyond happy."We are Jaller, we are." Dakama Prime said, his axe in hand."But... your ship exploded!" Hafu said."Those tinheads did blow up my ship, but they forgot about our MacGuffin." iBrow said, making a necklace out of the teeth."Macwhat?" Jaller asked."Phoenix Prime's teleportation ability." Kopatchet said, his arm turned into his machine gun. Beside him sat Crashinator, little guns on his wolf-shoulders."'Cept bird brain didn't get us out of the ship." Hydraxhide said."He put us in the bloody booster rockets!" JackaL said."Luckily, I was able to activate them and they fell off before they could be destroyed by Dreadinock and his overgrown soup can." iBrow said."Gonna take more than that to kill us!" Wheeldax said, transmocing out of RC truck mode, with Braindox running behind. Wipeout stood beside them.Then a camaro was seen. It drove up, transmoced and stood before Jaller."Pohatubee!" Jaller said, happy."Jaller!" Pohatubee said. Running up to his friend, Jaller hugged Pohatubee's leg. Pohatubee patted his back.From down the street Nujack, Tahuswipe, Vakama Maximus, Blue Flame, Galcee and Jodkra (with Johnson of course) drove up and transmoced.Jaller looked around, noticing Matanui wasn't there. "Where's Matanui?" Jaller asked."You don't ask about Tahkan, Phoenix, Ramenbolt or Omega Kaita even?" Kopatchet asked him.Jodkra answered Jaller. "He's taken a bit more of a... dramatic entrance."Before Jaller could say anything, Dakama decided it was a swell time for a speech. "Jaller, your planet's leaders now see that the Deceptikuta will not leave your planet alone. The time for talk is over. The time for action... is now." Dakama said. All the Autotoabots looked at Dakama."That was a really bad speech." Tahuswipe said."What? No, it wasn't!" Dakama said."That was terrible." Hydraxhide said."Worst speech I've ever heard." iBrow said. LesoSpinn and JackaL nodded in agreement."Bet you couldn't do better!" Dakama said to the leader of the Wreckinators."Bet he could!" LesoSpinn said."Ahright." iBrow said, readying his shotgun, "We will kill them all." he said."I like it. Short, simple and easy to remember." JackaL said. LesoSpinn nodded his agreeance."That plan seems satisfactory." Kopatchet said.Dakama wasn't pleased with it, but he let it slide. "The Deceptikuta have turned the city in a fortress. Our only chance will be the element of surprise while they're distracted." Dakama said."Distracted by what?" Jaller asked."It wouldn't be a surprise if we told you, now would it?" Pohatubee told Jaller.Wipeout walked up to Jaller, followed by Wheeldax and Braindox. "Jaller, I'm guessing you know that Hali was actually captured by Kongu." Wipeout said to him."I do." Jaller replied."Well then, I won't leave till I help you get her back. I didn't help much the first time, but this time.." Wipeout said, turning one arm into a machine gun. A tiny machine gun, but a machine gun none-the-less."Yea, us too. We're gonna help you finish this war." Wheeldax said. Braindox nodded."If I can get into the building, I'll help." Pohatubee said.Jaller stood open mouthed, looking at the Autotoabots. They were back now, but he didn't know how thye could get to Hahli without being killed. Looking around, he locked eyes on the gunship the Deceptikuta pilot had used before he had gotten wrecked by the Wreckinators.Pohatubee and Wipeout followed his gaze. "Oh boy." Wipeout said."Do think you could fly that thing?" Jaller asked Pohatubee."Ehhh." Pohatubee said, tilting his head."What? What kind of answer is that?" Jaller asked him."It's kind of a maybe. I mean I probably could do it, but y'know.." Pohatubee said."Y'know what? Can you do it or not?" Jaller asked him, starting to get annoyed."I guess we could give it a shot. What could possibly go wrong?" Pohatubee said."Well, now that you've said that, lots of things." Wipeout said."FIne then. We're doing it." Pohatubee said. Moments later, Jaller, Pohatubee, Wipeout, Wheeldax and Braindox had stuffed themselves into the Deceptikuta gunship. It was a rather comfortable fit.Dakama looked at the gunship, then looked back to the Coliseum. "Autotoabots, there is our target." Dakama said, pointing to it. "Now, ROLL OUT!" he yelled, running down the street, with Hydraxhide, Kopatchet, Crashinator, iBrow, JackaL, LesoSpinn, Jodkra, Johnson, Vakama Maximus, Blue Flame, Tahuswipe, Nujack and Galcee. With them ran Hafu, Steve, Kamen, Takua, Nuhrii and the other ex-NEST soliders. Above them flew the gunship containing Jaller and co., heading to the most exicting thing you've ever read (in this topic at least)THE SKYWhile the other Autotoabots ran into the battle, and the Matoran F-22s were trying to escape it, 7 objects flew through the sky. 7 FTTTs to be exact. All firing, they aimed on whatever Deceptikuta ships got in range.And incase you did not remember, the 7 FTTTs were the alt modes of Omega Kaita.Inside one FTTT (which stands for "Flying Troop Transport Thing"), Matanui Prime, in alt mode, was parked beside his trailer."Are you ready, Omega?" Matanui asked him."I am. I shall land in the Memorial and distract what Deceptikuta ships I can while you try for the Space Bridge Pillars." Omega Kaita responded, nearly emotionless."You will my friend." Matanui said, a bit at lost for words for what to say to him. "Do not endanger yourself too recklessly." Matanui tried to comfort him."It is my programming to protect, and destroy if need." Omega said.Matanui didn't know how to respond to that. "Very well. Open the hatch!" he said.As the door at the back of the FTTT opened, and Matanui began to slide out with his trailer, Omega said one last thing to him."Goodbye, Matanui Prime." he said. By that time Matanui was out, and he began to transmoc into his robot form, while his trailer began to transmoc around him. It formed engines and wings around him, giving him the always awesome power of flight.Doing a spin, he met up with Phoenix Prime, Tahkan Metra and Ramenbolt, all of whom were in their alt modes."So we're actually doing this? We're going to go in and die for the Matoran?" Tahkan Metra asked Matanui, flying along side him."We will." Matanui said. "For freedom is the right of all sentient beings." He said, then spinning once more, he readied his weapons."AUTOTOABOTS!" He said to on a radio channel all the Autotoabots could hear "Today, in the name of freedom, we take the fight to them!" Matanui said.Suddenly, wires began to connect the FTTTs, and their individual pieces began to split apart, rearrange and connect with each other. Out of the mass of metal and wires Omega Kaita's hundred-and-twelve foot tall body formed, his right arm a massive cannon, and his other arm a huge three fingered fist.Clenching said fist, he punched the Deceptikuta ship closest to him, obliterating it, and he continued, landing in the Tohu Memorial, crushing parts of the Deceptikuta's makeshift wall, as well as several Deceptikuta. Firing his massive cannon, he brought down another Deceptikuta ship. Little guns appeared on his body, firing at the gunships and Deceptikuta as they were caught off guard."DECEPTIKUTA!" he roared, and that was all. The amount of carnage Omega preformed after that was enough to get the message across. Sleedat, from her base in the Tohu Memorial, felt a little worried. And by that, I mean scared out of her advanced robot mind.Matanui watched this, and spoke to Phoenix, Tahkan and Ramenbolt. "Phoenix, Tahkan, stay on me when we attack the gunships, then seperate and pick them off. Ramenbolt, bomb whatever looks important!" Matanui told them."Got it." Tahkan said, his Ussanui like alt mode, brimming with weaponry, sped up."Will do." Phoenix said, his phoenix alt mode, less weapon covered than Tahkan's alt mode, could still do a number on any Deceptikuta he came across."Consider it done!" Ramenbolt said, turning invisible and heading off.Matanui looked ahead. Deceptikuta gunships were already heading to him, readied for combat. Matanui readied himself.If Matanui had been able to, he would've cried. Cried for Metrutron, cried for Metrutronian friends long dead, cried for the Autotoabots who would probably die in this battle, cry for the Matoran murdered by the Deceptikuta, cried for the Matoran about to be murdered by the Deceptikuta. And he would've cried for the faces he was about to take."RRAAAHHHH!!!!!" Matanui yelled as he began to fire his weapons at the enemy, for their final battle.END OF CHAPTERFUN COMMENTARY: OOoooooh, things are happening now! The next few chapters will finally include the long awaited senseless violence you've all been waiting for!!MTL

I think the names got changed when America revoulted against England in the Revoultionary war, and they changed the names to differentiate themselves, sorta like how they use Imperial measurement and noone else does. Not sure, just a guess. Of course, here in Canada we call it the same things, but that's probably because of American influence, as we use metric, but we always tell our heights in Imperial (for instance, I'm 6 feet tall, which in metric would be around 182 centimetres, but we don't really say that.)In Quebec (one of Canada's provinces) which is mostly French speaking, I think it's kept the European way; European soccer is au jour du foot I believe, which would literally mean "game of the foot" (not sure, my German and English is better than my French) while football is something else. I'm probably not the person to ask, I only heard that in French class, which I'm not even taking any longer.Also, the Superbowl teams are the New England Patriots and the New York Giants. Most people I know are hoping for the Patriots to win. Here in Canada we have the Grey Cup, which is not nearly as big as the Superbowl. The last Grey Cup game disappointed me, as I was hoping for the Bombers to win (I'm from Manitoba after all) and they didn't. Infact, they lost to the province I'm living in currently (B.C Lions).Doesn't matter thought, we're mostly known for Hockey anyways (and most people I know don't even like our province's hockey team; Saying Luongo is a good goalie will get you kicked out of the room )Well, this is getting a bit off-topic now...MTL

Fun Commentary: Awww, this chapter has Jaller and Hahli kiss! So cute! And about as affectionate as I ever get with them. I much more enjoy fight scenes. Also, I revamped Dreaddude's death, so now it's much less corny.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 21FINALE PART 1　LEGO CITY, PO-METRUHydraxhide slid into an alley, making a whole bunch of sparks which looked pretty cool. He groaned, turned, and saw a Matoran staring at him, wide eyed."Shhh." Hydraxhide said to the Matoran quietly, "I’m hunting Spinosaurs."Just then the massive head of Dreaddude came out of nowhere and grabbed one of Hydraxhide's legs in his mouth. Hydraxhide grunted as he was lifted into the air, and was beaten violently as Dreaddude shook his head from side to side, smashing the Autotoabot weapon specialist into the surrounding buildings. The Matoran who had been staring ran for his life.Dreaddude pulled Hydraxhide onto the street, and threw him to the ground, then stood on him with one dino-foot. "Defenceless!" Dreaddude said, going to bite at Hydraxhide's head.Hydraxhide scowled angirily and raised his cannons. "Who YOU callin’ DEFENCLESS?" he said, then fired at Dreaddude, tearing away some fake dino-skin."ROAR!" Dreaddude, well, this one was pretty self explanatory. Dreaddude stepped back, eyeing Hydraxhide.Hydraxhide got up and finally got a decent look at the Deceptikuta. Dreaddude, in Spinosaur mode, was taller than Hydraxhide by a good 10 feet at least. Dreaddude's fake dino-skin was mostly torn away, revealing the Metrutronian parts underneath.Dreaddude charged at Hydraxhide, firing from his mouth. Hydraxhide took the shots, firing his own and hiting Dreaddude's side. Dreaddude took the shots aswell, and grabbed Hydraxhide in his mouth, throwing the weapon specialist back once more. Hdyraxhide rolled, and before he hit the ground he managed to fire once at Dreaddude, who did not enjoy the shot. Not at all.Hydraxhide rolled to a stop, then spoke "I have had enough of this." Hydraxhide said as he slowly got up, a few joints making sparks."I can end it then Autotoabot!" Dreaddude said as he charged once more. This time, Hydraxhide ducked just as Dreaddude tried to chomp at him. He missed, and went just above Hydraxhide. Hydraxhide held the Deceptikuta’s head in place for a split second and fired. Dreaddude fell to the ground, smoke coming from his spino-head." 'Bout time." Hydraxhide said, looking at his handy work.However, instead of a dead dino like Hydraxhide had hoped for, Dreaddude transmoced and towered over Hydraxhide, his gun raised at the Autotoabot’s head."No mercy." Dreaddude said. Hydraxhide acted, knocking Dreaddude's arm out of the way, firing once, disorientating the Deceptikuta, then grabbed his head, stuck a cannon to it, andBOOOMMM!!Dreaddude's body fell to the ground, smoke coming from where his head used to be. Hydraxhide stepped over his remains."No mercy at all." he said.ELSEWHEREKopatchet grabbed Blue Flame and Wipeout as Nihiscream’s rockets exploded nearby."You two must be trying to get yourselves killed! And you know I can't very well fix an injury like that!" Kopatchet scolded, waving a finger at the two."Last I checked, death is usually a permanent malady." Blue Flame said."Say, where's Pohatubee?" Wipeout asked."Hahli drove him somewhere away from the Deceptiktua." Kopatchet answered, not sounding like he really cared. Which is not what you want a doctor to soundl like.There was another explosion. The three of them turned and saw Nihiscream fly down and transmoc. Nihiscream looked around a few times, searching for them."Wow, he doesn’t look happy." Wipeout said as he looked through the burnt-out wreck of a building. It's easy to do that when you're Matoran sized.Nihiscream, was in fact, not happy at all. He wanted the AllShiny for himself, but he had no idea where to look for the Matoran running around with it. Not only that, he needed the AllShiny to kill Makutatron, and he didn’t know where the Deceptikuta leader was either. And now these Autotoabots were trying to stop the Deceptikuta's noble cause, and were actually succeeding, with Bradak, Wreckdak, Frendox and Krekkacrusher all being killed already and Dreaddude seemingly gone missing as well. He had no idea what had happened to Daedulus, Transraga, Enderth, Barritax or Spinok. Considering Blacktaka was the only one who ever talked to Spinok, that last one wasn't much of a concern.Suddenly Nihiscream was staggered, with Kopatchet, Blue Flame and Wipeout all shooting at him, and some Matoran presumabely doing so aswell.Firing back at them, he transmoced for cover, and flew for it. Annoyed witht he desparity of the Deceptikuta's situation, he saw something that only made things worse; Matoran fighter jets.Ducking behind some buildings, he decided it could be a useful tactic to hide among those jets...BACK BELOWKopatchet, Blue Flame and Wipeout watched Nihiscream run for it, which would've been funny if he probbaly wasn't going to go and kill someone."What's his problem?" Wipeout asked as Nihiscream disappeared."Probably too scared for his own good." Blue Flame said."That's silly now. He could've easily killed us right there if he felt like it." Wipeout said."Or he's actually scared. I jsut got a message from Hydraxhide; Dreaddude's dead." Kopatchet said."So that means..." Wipeout began to say."Were winning! Wow!" Blue Flame said."Well, that’s a change." Kopatchet said as he got out of their hiding spot.SOMEWHERE ELSE IN THE CITYVakama Maximus got slammed into the ground. His futile attempt to slow down Makutatron hadn't exactly gone well, especially considering he only had one arm currently.Makutatron grabbed him, his long fingers nearly wrapping all the wya around Vakama Maximus' torso."You will tell me where the AllShiny is, and your death will be quick." Makutatron said, growling right in Vakama Maximus' face "If not..." Makutatron said, taking a finger and putting it into Vakama Maximus' eye, making Vakama Maximus scream.Suddenly, a small explosion happened right on Makutatron's shoulder. He turned and saw Galcee firing at him."Let him go Deceptikuta." Galcee said, firing some more. The shoots all hit Makutatron, moving him slightly, but doing nothing to him really."Fine," Makutatron said, facing the female Autotoabot, "You can have him." And with that he threw Vakama Maximus at Galcee. Galcee ducked and Vakama Maximus crashed into a building."Thanks, I think." Vakama Maximus said as he went all rag-doll like.Galcee ignored him and watched as Makutatron looked at the air."The AllShiny, it calls to me. I MUST HAVE IT!" Makutatron said as he transmoced into whatever he transmocs into, and flew away. Galcee looked back and checked on Vakama Maximus, while giving a heads up to the other Autotoabots.IN THE DIRECTION MAKUTATRON WAS HEADINGJaller nodded as Hewkii gave him the last of his directions."Okay, so you got it kid, light the flare when you get to the top of the building, and the copter will pick you up." Hewkii said as he gave Jaller the flare."Sure, kinda, not really, no." Jaller said, looking confused."Good enough for me. Hydraxhide?" Hewkii said, looking up at the Autotoabot."You don't need to worry about me." Hydraxhide said, loading his guns. Kopatchet, Blue Flame and Wipeout drove up, Kopatchet transmocing first."Did you get Galcee's message? Makutatron is on his way!' Kopatchet said.Suddenly, a massive screech was heard, causing the Matoran to cover their ears."AHH! What is that?" Jaller said, holding the AllShiny and flare up to his face."Makutatron! We’ve got to move!" Hydraxhide said, starting to move towards the building. Kopatchet followed, while Blue Flame and Wipeout stood with Hewkii, Hafu, and the remainder of the Sector Six and actual Matoran military soliders."WAIT!"The group turned to see Hahli running up towards Jaller."Jaller, I just want you to know, getting into the car was the best thing to ever happen to me." Hahli said, holding Jaller’s hand."Really?" Jaller asked."No." Hahli responded, "But I actually do hope nothing bad happens to you." Then she kissed Jaller."Hiaayhhickhick." Jaller said, his teeth spreading apart in a stupid grin."Awwwww." Hafu said, watching."C'mon Jaller! We will protect you!" Hydraxhide said, picking up Jaller and running towards the last steps of the battle.END OF CHAPTERMTL

No rush I say, but what I mean is "hurry!!!" :PMTL

Shockvak, mabey not, something bigger, yes. Also, about 100 Deceptikuta apiece for the three of them. And hopelessness is what you aim for with invasions. You hit the nail on the head with Jodkra and Johnson. And Turaga Vakama will get Dume out of the Coliseum, since otherwise......The next chapter will be in the near future. This month atleast.MTL

I do, in the British of Columbia. Used to live in Manitoba actually, and spent lots of time in Alberta. The differences in weather, hills and mosquitoes is astounding.And what could posssibly be annoying to type like thissss all the time? Microsoft Word is very often not very globally considerate. Of course, now that I don't have it anymore, I miss it so.MTL

I want a chance to be able to say this in real life now.And things don't look to good for Assassin. As in the dead sort of not good. Although a good band aid could fix it... no, probably not.And I too am rooting for the Pats. As long as the Giants don't all tackle Tom Brady at once three minutes in and break his arms,they should do well.MTL

It wasssss very funny. I live in Canada too, and that's how I've always seen it spelt. Of course, normally we just call it the BBQ, so...MTL

I am, but this is not the place to discuss it! The walls, they have ears.. I'm pretty sure the pilot going down with the ship pretty much nulls any chance you had of getting your insurance claim on it..Chances are Omega isn't very lively any more... The Deceptikuta version was a lot stronger than the one in the movie. And so Jimmy Buffet and Norik assembled the largest boat to boat party in history...Good chappy, TML. KUTGW.-MTThe biggest boat party in histroy would proceed the biggest illegal dumping of garbage above a city in history (probably the only one to occur above 1000 feet as well)Well, sorry I've been so slow, but you know the drill; Skyrim, lazyness. 'tis a hard life.Anyways, this will be the last chapter that features mostly talking. That's right, it's all action from here on in. My reward for you if you read the rest of this jumble!TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 23EXCEPTIONAL PLANNING SKILLSA STREET NEAR THE COLISEUM, METRU-NUI"Hello, I'm Icytoa1, live on the streets of Metru-Nui, where just minutes ago the ship containing the Autotoabots blown out of the sky. Now the Deceptikuta have offically invaded our planet, and it appears President Dume is yet to make a statement about it yet. Let us see what the average Matoran has to say." Icytoa1 said to the camera. He and the camera-Matoran walked over to a Matoran sitting on a bench and reading a newspaper."Sir, what is your opinion on the invasion and destruction of the Autotoabots?" Icytoa1 asked the Matoran."It's just some teenagers playing a prank! The problem is the educational system!" the Matoran said."And the blue tower of light coming from the top of the Coliseum?" Icytoa1 asked him. The tower of light was beginning to flicker, but Deceptikuta ships still came out of it."It's just a light show, just you wait. Dume will be telling us about some new iPhone or something." the Matoran said."Ok," Icytoa1 said, moving to a new Matoran "And you sir, what do you think about the imminent destruction of our race?" Icytoa1 asked him."Well, I was having a delicious toast'n'Ussal dinner, when I noticed the fridge door had been left open, so I got up and closed it." the Matoran said. Icytoa1 turned around and left him. Seeing a new Matoran, Icytoa1 went over to him."What do you think is going to happen to the economy after all workers and manufactuers are destroyed be the Deceptikuta?" Icytoa1 asked him."Frankly, I can't even decide what to wear to my own funeral." the Matoran said.Icytoa1 turned back to the camera. "And there you have it, indifference at its best. I for one welcome our new robot-overlords. Back to you Orkahm." Icytoa1 said. Suddenly there was an explosion behind him. Some Deceptikuta drones turned the corner onto the street Icytoa1 and the other Matoran were standing on. Firing their weapons, the blew up a car, a bench, a street light, part of the street and the Matoran who thought the robot invasion was a hoax. The others ran for their lives, the Deceptikuta firing on them, blowing apart shops and setting buildings on fire.The camera switiched back to the studio, where Orkahm ran a hand over his head. "Oh, and of all the luck, Icytoa's signal has been lost. Well, that's all for tonight folks," Orkahm was saying, when suddenly he was jumped by a small Deceptikuta."NAHAHAHAHHA DEAAATTTHHHHHHUUUHH!!!" the little Deceptikuta yelled as it ripped apart Orkahm's desk."Stay-aagghhh- classy Metru-Nu-EEEHHHHHHHH!!" Orkahm managed to say between screams as the camera crew dropped everything and ran.What a trooper.The Deceptikuta continued on their rampage, doing what they did best, destroying things and surprisingly not dieing for once. The largest Deceptikuta ships let loose their smaller gunships, and together they blew things apart for the fun of it. Individual Deceptikuta ran down streets, actually killing Matoran and breaking stuff. The Deceptikuta at the Tohu Memorial, finally allowed to wreck havoc, promptly annihilated the Vahki and police that had surrounded the Memorial for the past three years.President Turaga Dume watched all of this from a window in the Coliseum as the sky went dark."Oooh, what have you done Vakama!" Dume said to Turaga Vakama."ME? DUME! YOU allowed the Autotoabots to leave! YOU did not allow an attack on the Tohu Memorial! YOU shouldn't have even BEEN president this long!" Turaga Vakama yelled "And now we're all going to DIE!"Dume shook his head. "And what would you have done, Vakama?" Dume said. Before Vakama could answer, Blitztran burst through the wall, and taking one finger, pushed both Turaga to the floor."Ahehehehhe, ve have somevun's Opas!" he said. Both Turaga struggled, but could not move. Sleedat then entered the room, and looked down at the two Turaga."I honestly do not know how these could lead all of them. Look at them! They couldn't pick themselves off the ground if they fell!" she said."Zey can't pick zemzelves up vhen zhey have a Deceptikuta on zem either! AHAHAHAH!" Blitztran said."Why do you laugh at everything?" Sleedat asked him."Because everything iz funny." Blitztran said, smiling."Ok." Sleedat said, very confused about him. "Well, little Turaga, we need you to order all military forces on Metru-Nui, including PEST, to give up their arms. The less you fight, the less that will die. Of us anyways." Sleedat said.Dume whimpered. "Yes! Fine! Just let me live!" Dume said.Turaga Vakame looked at him angirily. "We won't give in to you villians!" he said."You won't atleast. But we don't care about you. Blitztran, do what you want with him." Sleedat said, and with that she went out of the hole they had made in the Coliseum, transmoced, and flew to the top of it.Blitztran let Dume go, and looked at Turaga Vakama, giggling.KONGU'S BUILDINGKongu stared out the window as Metru-Nui burned, the Deceptikuta destroying the city."Well, this worked out nicely, didn't it?" Hahli said, handcuffed to a table."I didn't know they would do... do this!" Kongu said. A rocket hit a building beside Kongu's, and Kongu watched the explosion."Because selling us out to them would only have good consequences." Hahli said.A sound that might have been laughter or a seal being beaten to death with a coffee maker was heard. "She has gotten you there, Kongu." Lasorhawk said, his jaws clacking.Kongu turned to Lasorhawk. He really didn't like the Deceptikuta bird. "Why are they doing this? What's the point of killing us all?" Kongu asked Lasorhawk.Lasorhawk smiled, or as close as he could do. "Why not? What are you going to do about, Kongu?" he asked.Kongu stared at Lasorhawk for a minute, then Lasorhawk laughed again and flew off into another room. Kongu looked back out the window, where Metru-Nui was busing being destroyed.THE TOP OF THE COLISEUMFlufskiron, Soundprah, Shockvak, Sleedat and Norik Prime all stood on top of the Coliseum. Surrounding the edge of the huge building were several turret-combiners, posing as anti-aircraft guns incase some Matoran tried to attack. Norik was busy putting coordinates into the computer that had been set up there, and when asked about he claimed he was getting ready for the next fleet. Flufskiron didn't think there were any Deceptikuta fleets of any size remaining aside from theirs, but he didn't care. Every ship that showed up was even better for them, and they were invincible now.Well, less than invincible, Flufskiron admitted to himself. The compound that originally contained Omega Kaita was supposed to be inpenetrable, yet the massive creation of the Deceptikuta had still been stolen, with a giant table cloth none-the-less."Swiftinock, are you on this planet yet?" Flufskiron radioed to his leutenant."Behind you!" Swiftinock replied. Flufskiron turned, and saw a Metrutronian jet flying to him. It transmoced into the spiky Swiftinock, just a bit shorter than Flufskiron and a lot leaner. Not saying Flufskiron is fat or anything."You're finally here! Well my old friend, we've taken this planet in less than a week, killed Matanui Prime and his Autotoabots and I've taken control of the Deceptikuta!" Flufskiron said."To think Makutatron was killed by one of those insects here!" Swiftinock said. The two laughed heartily at their little joke."Anyways Swiftinock, I need you to get Nihiscream back from Dreadinock." Flufskiron said."What? Let Dreadinock kill him. We have far more useful Deceptikuta with us here." Swiftinock said."Except," Flufskiron said, putting his hand on Swiftinock's shoulder "If we let Dreadinock get away with little things like this, he'll soon realize he could get away with more. And when he also sits in the most dangerous vehicle on this planet, and more or less controls the entire Deceptikuta fleet, he'll realize he's invincible." Flufskiron said."So taking away Nihiscream will calm him down so much." Swiftinock replied, unimpressed."Swiftinock, Swiftinock, Swiftinock," Flufskiron said, Swiftinock's name being really hard to type repeadetly, "It's a message. I'm incharge now, and they need to recognize it." "Oh. Perfect sense. Except for the fact that that could only work better if when doing it we called him fat and stupid. I doubt Dreadinock will think you're number one after this." Swiftinock said."You forget something. The Terragator, the only true reason we're having this discussion, was highly damaged by Omega Kaita's last shot, as Thunderstrike and Skystrike reported. Meanwhile, SHOCKVAK!" Flufskiron said. Shockvak turned and walked over."What is it you require?" Shockvak asked."The Drill Dragon. Let it go for a spin." Flufskiron said."As you wish." Shockvak said, loading a blinking red object into his cannon arm and fired it into a short building down below. The street nearby burst apart and the Drill Dragon came forth, destroying the building, along with just about everything nearby."What a show." Flufskiron said."Yes, except a giant spinning snake on the ground will do very little to the giant shooting ship in the air. Flying." Swiftinock said."Shockvak, would you care to explain it?" Flufskiron asked Shockvak."If you wish." Shockvak said "Skystrike and Thunderstrike, Nihiscream's two most loyal Strikers, were the ones who took the space bridge pillars over to the Autotoabot launch site. They have since landed inside the Terragator, the pillars still primed. Using some of the many pillars we have here, I could send the Drill Dragon into the Terragator, killing Dreadinock and destroying his ship. As such, he has no choice but to bow to us." "Which works well," Swiftinock said, doing some poetry thingy there, "Until we remove the pillars from the Terragator.""He'll remember it as a warning. I know Dreadinock, he may complain about it, but chances are he won't do anything about it. Now go, take Sleedat with you. Return with Nihiscream and his Strikers, and keep Dreadinock inline." Flufskiron said."As you command." Swiftinock said, walking over to Sleedat."And why do you require Nihiscream still? His use at best is minimal." Shockvak asked."Cannon fodder. In order to defend this point, the most important point on the island, the defense must set up properly. I've set things up so we have four quadrants around the Coliseum. Makutatron and Nihiscream will have the side which will most likely come under attack, and as such we'll have ample time to prepar the rest of the forces, governed by you and Sleedat." Flufskiron said."Makutatron? Do you believe that giving him an an army will be wise?" Shockvak asked."Relax, he's getting the remnants of the Constructikuta." Flufskiron said. Incase you didn't know (which you should!) the Constructikuta used to be the main attack force of the Deceptikuta, comprising mostly melee orientated fighters, usually quite large. Most were decimated, along with their main weapon, the Zivonastator, on Voya-Nui. Hydraxhide himself personally killed 161 of them, along with tearing off Shockvak's head (he got better)."Very well. I shall head to my post now." Shockvak said, walking off. Flufskiron turned to Norik Prime, who was still standing at the controls of the space bridge pillars. They had shut down now, their energy spent."Norik! How is the next fleet coming along?" Flufskiron asked him."It will take several hours for the pillars to recharge with the Sun Matrix for them to have the power for the next bridge. Until then, leave me!" Norik Prime said. Flufskiron smiled and stood near the edge beside a turret-combiner. Things were looking good for the Deceptikuta, as they destroyed Metru-Nui beneath him.INSIDE THE COLISEUMBlitztran finally left the Coliseum, bored of whatever it was he was doing. Transmocing into a Metrutronian jet, he left through the gaping hole in the side of the huge tower.President Dume watched him leave, then nervously reached for the phone, about to follow his orders to call off Metru-Nui's military. He didn't want to, but he enjoyed life. It was so... full of life.Finally picking up the phone, he thought for the number he should call. The thought never came. Turaga Vakama, somehow still alive, got to his feet and struck President Dume in the back of the head with his cane. Dume fell to the floor, unconsious."I'm sorry, but we're not going down without a fight." Turaga Vakama said, picking Dume up across his shoulders and making his way to the exit.THE STREET BELOWDaedulus and Enderth walked down the street, following Panrashot. They were heading back to the Tohu Memorial, althought they were making sure to break anything they could on the way there.It was night now, and fires illuminated the sky, although Metrutronians could just as easily see in the dark as in the day. Cars lay flipped and burning in the street, a few thrown into buildings and a couple more piled into a pile, apparently supposed to look like Makutatron, but no-one could really see the resemblance. Panrashot thought that was an insult unlike anyother."They dare mock Makutatron! They wouldn't if he was here right now! It was him who brought this to US!" Panrashot yelled. Enderth and Daedulus thought that was silly. Neither were too fond of Makutatron or Panrashot, but they kept their mouths shut. No need being killed for disliking a sociopath.Unusual for a comedy, there were plently of Matoran bodies on the ground. The Deceptikuta had spared no expense in eradicating the Matoran, which I'm sure you'd like to hear about, but you won't.At a red light of all things, they stopped and let several Fenrakk Walkers go by. Fenrakk Walkers were large, four legged robots with guns for heads and large shields on their legs. They blew things up real good."You know, I've always wondered why we have so much stuff created purposely to eradicate all life possible, yet it still took us several thousand years to finally kill the last of the Autotoabots." Enderth said."The problem is weaklings like you two! Now be quiet!" Panrashot yelled at them "There is a set of bridges covering come canals that you two should stay at. It's west of here." Panrashot said."Why?" Daedulus asked."So you're out of my way!" Panrashot said, walking off."Good reason I guess." Daedulus said. Enderth nodded.THE TERRAGATORSwiftinock and Sleedat flew as fast as they could, landing on the small landing strip of the Terragator as it made it's way over Metru-Nui. The from there was beautiful as Deceptikuta ships fired on the city."Alright Sleedat, let me do the talking. Chances are Dreadinock won't be pleased with what we have to tell him." Swiftinock said to her."I'd be worried if he wasn't mad." Sleedat said. Dreadinock wasn't as well known for his anger as some Deceptikuta (like Makutatron) but his hatred of mutinies and the like led to the Terragator having some very alive, loyal crew and some very dead, mutionous crew. And incase you didn't understand that, it means mutiny was rewarded with death.Walking into the ship, they passed some anti-aircraft guns, most of which drooped pathetically, Omega's destruction of the weapon system resulting in a loss of power to the majority of the guns.Entering the actual control zone, they passed a few computers, each with a Deceptikuta working at them. At the end of the little hall was Dreadinock himself, standing near his little contorl station, chair and with Nihiscream held to the wall, Dreadinock's sword poised at Nihiscream's throat. Skystrike and Thunderstrike, the pillars on their backs, were trying to convince Dreadinock not to kill him, and looked very happy when Sleedat and Swiftinock arrived."Dreadinock! I have words from Flufskiron!" Swiftinock said, then adding "Leader of the Deceptikuta!" Dreadinock turned and looked at him angirily. "Swiftinock, Flufskiron's pet. Have the Deceptikuta finally capulated to him, or was Norik just too much for them to handle?" Dreadinock said."You were thinking this was a democrocy?" Swiftinock said "Flufskiron wants Nihiscream alive, and out of here, and needs the fleet to get into position to protect the Coliseum." Swiftinock said."Ordering the Terragator? The Terragator does as its captain commands!" Dreadinock yelled."And the captain does as he's commanded." Swiftinock said "Please remain civil, Dreadinock, we're not in the mood to fight. With each other atleast.""You can tell Flufskiron-" before Dreadinock could finish, he turned around. Skytrike and Thunderstrike had freed Nihiscream, who was aiming his rockets at Dreadinock."I'm afraid Dreadinock, that I'm leaving you know." Nihiscream said.Silent, Dreadinock rasied one arm. Out of places on the walls, Deceptikuta stepped forward, weapons pointed at Swiftinock, Sleedat, Skystrike, Thunderstrike and Nihiscream."I'm sure Flufskiron will understand if I kill you all. Or he might not. Either way." Dreadinock said."Wait a minute there, Dreadinock!" Swiftinock yelled, still calm. "You are aware of the space bridge pillars on Skystrike and Thundstrike, currently?" For emphasis, Skystrike and Thunderstrike took the pillas out and showed them to everybody."And?" Dreadinock said."You are also familiar with Shockvak's Drill Dragon, aren't you?" Swiftinock said."You'd bring that thing in here? You kill yourselves!" Dreadinock said."And you." Swiftinock smiled.Dreadinock looked to Swiftinock, then Nihiscream, then Skystrike and Thunderstrike."He's not bluffing." Skystrike said, holding his pillar forward."Fine! Take Nihiscream! But do not rely upon the Terragator in your next battle!" Dreadinock said."We'll see." Swiftinock said. Nihiscream pranced past Dreadinock, enjoying his freedom and alive-ness. Dreadinock scowled as they walked off."I found your accomodations to be lacking." Nihiscream said to Dreadinock before he transmoced and left.Watching them fly off, Dreadinock looked back to the systems. Unfortunately, the forward guns were not ready to fire.Swearing violently in Metrutronian, he left to his quarters.THE PEST HANGARThe PEST soliders sat quietly in the hangar, looking out the windows and the door at the remains of the iBrow, most of which fell into the sea.Jaller was by his ownsome, looking at the Coliseum, which was surrounded by smoke and fire. Somewhere in that exploding mass of Karzahni was Hahli and his family, still held captive by Kongu. The thought angered him.Standing up, he ran down the steps of the thing he stood on, and ran into Hafu. Hafu, being much more physically fit and such, was barely effected while Jaller fell on his postirier. Hafu helped him up."Thanks." Jaller said."No problem." Hafu said. They both looked back in the direction of the Coliseum. "Hard to believe they're gone, huh?" Hafu said."And my family is in there now. Without anyone to help them." Jaller said, thinking of the Autotoabots. And his family, but I think you got that part.Hafu looked on at the city, then spoke "I suppose we could try and get 'em out." he said.Jaller was all kinds of surprised. "What? How? The city is crawling with Deceptikuta!" he said, "They will probably be expecting some kind of airstrike or something!" he said."But would they expect a few Matoran with Deceptikuta tearing weapons?" Hafu said."You would go into there.. where you'd probably die for certain.. just to help me?" Jaller asked him, bewildered or something.Hafu shrugged. "There probably going to kill us all anyways. Better go down fighting than hiding in a hole in the ground." he said."Should we take some PEST soliders with us?" Jaller asked."I already talked with them. Nokama won't let any leave. Which is dumb, considering all actual society will collapse in the week it will take for the Deceptikuta to kill all of us." Hafu said."Oh." Jaller said "So the two of us are going into the city by ourselves?" "I've got some friends we'll meet up with on the way.." Hafu said "This way to my car. I suppose we won't have to worry about traffic heading to the Coliseum." END OF CHAPTER Fun Commentary: Interesting, for all of Flufskiron's supposed skill in tactical planning, he's not to good on making friends. Will his insult to Dreadinock's command affect him later? It's entirely possible. Also, Turaga Vakama has enough acting abilities to pysche out Blitztran. Next time! The military strike back! Jaller, Hafu and others enter whats left of central Metru-Nui! Flufskiron gives Makutatron an incredibley weak force! All this and a little more in the next exciting chapter of TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOM! MTL