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A knocked out tooth is enough to make grown men cry! That was the hardest part of the game... They're not acting like little children, it's a serious problem. And it was all back to normal in the end.Another good chapter, and I didn't think it was all that rushed.MTL

Fun Commentary: I'm sorry about all the German accented characters..... Although Hickory's accent is based more on what actual German accents sound like (in my experience). It's important to note that there is no "th" sound in German. So instead of that, I put a "d". Also, this chapter would've been longer, but I didn't feel like writing more... :TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 16THE MAN WHO SAVED AMERICA METRU-NUITHE SET OF A TALK SHOW, METRU-NUIThe cameras were ready, the loser-ish nobodies moved out of the way of the cameras, and the host took a sip of his coffee."Ready in 3, 2, 1, and go!" The director guy said.The host looked up from his coffee and papers, and introduced himself. "Hello, I'm your host Icytoa1, and this is Metru-Nui tonight!" Icytoa1 said, folding some papers on the desk. There was a recorded applause, which accidentaly switched to a laugh track. They went back to the applause and fired the attendant."Tonight we have a very special guest star. The writer of the book I saved the world and I liked it, who apparently did save the world, 12345!" Icytoa1 said. On the screen, another viedo thing popped up, showing a smooth masked Po-Matoran sitting in a lounge chair in a mansion, surrounded by piles of books."Allo, allo, allo. It's a pleasure to be here, Icytoa1. Can I call you Icy?" 12345 said, running his hand over his smooth mask."No, but please, tell us about yourself before I begin the questions." Icytoa1 said."Very well Icy, I was born in Metru-Nui. I worked for the government for a long time, and then aliens helped me save the world from other aliens. You can read about it in my book." 12345 said."Uh-huh. So, speaking of aliens, where do you stand on the whole good robot/bad robot war?" Icytoa1 asked."I'm on Metru Nui's side, Icy. I've got our best interests at heart, as I say in my book. Which you can buy." 12345 answered."Because that's what I asked..." Icytoa1 said under his breath. Speaking up, he continued "Tell us, what exactly did you do to help save the world from the, uh, what was is? Deceptikuta. How did you help stop the Deceptiktua?"12345 smiled and shook his head. "Icy, Icy, Icy, I saved the world, is there anything to ask? If you really have questions about it, buy my book." 12345 answered."Yea I see where this is going..." Icytoa1 said under his breath again. "Tell me, 12345, you are aware, of course, of the dissent among the population of Metru-Nui about the Autotoabots using are island as a home, sayign that once they leave, the Deceptikuta wrecking the Tohu Memorial would leave as well?""I am aware, and you'd be more aware too if you bought my book." 12345 said, holding one of his books up to the camera. "I saved the world and I liked it! What I did you save you!"Icytoa11 slammed his hand on his desk. "Look! 12345! Stop trying to sell your book and answer some of these questions!" Icytoa1 snapped.12345 facepalmed. "Icy, you've been lied to by the government! We need to side with the Autotoabots officaly, blow up the Deceptikuta, and you need to buy my book!" 12345 said."Turn the camera off! This interview is done!" Icytoa1 said, waving his hand at the camera."Whoa, Icy! Stop! You need to hear what I have to say! And you all need to buy my book!" 12345 said, still waving his book around."You're a loony." Icytoa1 said as 12345's connection was switched off.At 12345's home, the camera crew that had been filming him began to pack up and leave. "Pants!" 12345 said angrily, standing up and throwing an empty water bottle at the wall. It hit the wall, burst apart, and turned out to not be empty."Clean that up! Somebody!" 12345 called out, but the camera crew had already left, taking everything they had and a few belongings of 12345's. But they didn't take any of his books. "Lousy ungrateful..." 12345 began to say, until somebody walked in there."Vhat is being de problem?" A Ko-Matoran said, walking up and holding a notebook."Ahah! Hickory! My loyal and faithful servant! Clean that mess up!" 12345 said, pointing to the puddle of water on the ground."Jawohl!" Hickory said, who then whistled at some other servants to come by and clean up the puddle.12345 continued walking with Hickory through 12345's mansion. "Hickory, these ungrateful slobes do not realize all that I've done for them." he said, flipping through his book."You've done alot for dem." Hickory said."Sales of my book have gone done dramatically. There was that boom right after Voya-Nui, and now zilcho! Nothing!" 12345 said, pointing to a row of paintings showing the pyramids, before and after the Sun Eaterer, along with plenty of himself standing over the remains of Deceptikuta."Null!" Hickory said."I don't understand why not. It's a great book!" 12345 said, motioning to a hallway with bookshelves going to the ceiling, each shelf filled to the top with his book."It is a great book." Hickory agreed."Perhaps they're not ready for me. The Autotoabots may be the heroes they need, but I'm hero they deserve." 12345 said, looking to the roof."Uh-huh. Ja, vell, dat ist very nice und all, but der ist a yellow car parked on de lawn." Hickory said, not looking up from his notebook.12345 stopped. "WHAT?" he said in surprise.Hickory looked up from the notebook. "Ja, Camaro I zink.""In my parking spot? I don't think so!" 12345 said, then rolling up imaginary sleaves, made his way to the door to meet face to face with whatever punk was in his parking spot, and teach him the meaning of pain. But somewhere in his mind, the words "yellow" and "Camaro" were meshing violently. Now what where they from...12345 walked out the door, saw the Camaro and slammed his fist on the hood. "You got one chance bud-" he began to say, but...The hood pulled apart, the car pushed itself up, parts flipped, rearranged, arms, legs and a head came out and suddenly 12345 was on the ground, a yellow robots standing above him. Hickory followed to see what the comotion was, then stopped and almost fainted.The three stood like this for an entire mintue before anything happened."So, 12345, long time, long time. I can't say I enjoyed being kidnapped by Sector Six way back when, although I couldn't really have said it at the time. But now I can." Pohatubee said.12345 came back to his senses. "Oooohhh you're the kid who keeps messing with giant robots car!" 12345 said."I usually go by Pohatubee, but I assume that would be an apt discription." Pohatubee said."You know dis vun?" Hickory said, sort of whispering it but not really to 12345."Relax Hickory, it won't hurt us, unless the kid has gotten mad at me for taking all the credit for Voya-Nui." 12345 said, standing up and brushing himself off."I'm sure Jaller feels apprehension or something about that, but no, he needs your help." Pohatubee said."What for?" 12345 asked."He didn't really say. I think he might be getting paranoid about the Deceptikuta. I don't really know why, I'm sure we could handle them." Pohatubee said."So the kid needs my help with another plot." 12345 said, thinking about it. "No! Never! Not again! Not after what I saw at Voya-Nui and Sector Six! I was there!""Dere's no vun nearby to listen. De camera crew has been long gone." Hickory said."Alright. Let's go kick some tin!" 12345 said, pulling out his trademark sunglasses and putting them on.They all stood there for a moment."Are you going to be driving us to the kid then?" 12345 asked Pohatubee."You don't have a car you could use instead?" Pohatubee said, not sounding like he wanted to drive them."Well, we do, but we'd have to get the keys out and everything.." 12345 said."Und ve don't know de vay." Hickory said."Fine. But don't touch anything!" Pohatubee said, transmocing."OOoh! I'm riding in another NEMOTE! The same one even! SO exciting! If only the boys at Sector Six could see me now!" 12345 said as he got inside of Pohatubee.END OF CHAPTERNEXT TIME: I HAVEN'T DECIDED YETMTL

You know, I could see it working, considering the last few chapters have been considerably darker than usual. Aslong as you had a comic relief character in there so it wasn't despressing to read, I think you'd be fine.MTL

My, my, it certainly is a lot easier to read in English, now isn't it? :PGood work translating it, although it would have been more impressive without google translate! Just kidding though, good work.In the space comic, on page 3, the guy mentions there being little oxygen on Mars, while his helmet is up. Huh. And why would you take a 12 year old boy to Mars anyway?EDIT: Read the rest of the comic, the oxygen thing gets explained. But the 12 year old boy still... Those wacky Russians :PMTL

I like it. My only critique is that I think he his shoulders should be wider, and that those windows don't quite work for him. I think they make his upper torso look too small compared to his legs. Nice job none the less, I tried mocing Optimus a few times, and it wasn''t easy, especially the head, which I think you did a great job off.MTL

Oi!Fun Commentary: This was one of my favourite scenes from the movie, although I saddened by how short it was. So I made it longer.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 18SIBLING RIVALRYLEGO CITY, PO-METRU, METRU-NUIMakutatron was really happy. Not only had he killed his first Autotoabot on this planet, but he no longer had the munchies.“Deceptikuta, slaughter the Autotoabots!” Makutatron yelled out, laughing a hardy laugh. He heard the sounds of weaponry being fired and screams, oh the screams which he cherished so.He looked around happily until he stopped. A massive red semi was ploughing through an alley, until it got on to the street. When it was in the middle of the road, parts detached and moved away. Two arms formed from the cab and pushed it up as two legs formed, pushing the giant truck higher. The part with the windows moved up, connected with the legs and arms. More parts found home on it until a head popped up and the last parts stopped moving.“Makutatron.” Matanui Prime said epically, his fists raised high.Makutatron turned his hands into fists. “Matanui.” He said angrily. He jumped from his perch on top of the building, transmoced into his Metrutronian jet mode, and flew at Matanui, firing some missiles.Matanui jumped onto a nearby store, then vaulted himself off of it, dodging Makutatron's rockets then landing on Makutatron's jet mode. Makutatron spun uncontrollably, flying down the street but still Matanui held on. Makutatron went through a building, where finally Matanui lost his grip. The two leaders went out the other side, Makutatron transmocing back into his monstrous robot mode and wrestling with Matanui down the road, until Makutatron got on top. Grabbing Matanui by the face, he spoke to his brother for the first time in millenia."Matoran don't deserve to live!" he said to Matanui.Matanui pushed back at Makutatron's face. "They deserve to choose for themselves!" Matanui said in defence of the Matoran. Makutatron growled, then grabbed Matanui's shoulder's and threw him down the street. "Then you will die with them! JOIN THEM! IN EXTINCTION!" Makutatron said, turning his arms into his much feared fusion cannon.Matanui was ready, however. He got to his feet and fired at Makutatron wiht his own weapon, sending Makutatron spinning around. He fired again, sending Makutatron spinning once more. Then again."RRAGGGHHH!!" Makutatron spat as he finally fired his weapon. The shot from it sent Matanui flying down the street. "Geeeaaggh!" Matanui said as he was sent flying.INSIDE THE BUILDING“Thank you for calling SOCKS military headquarters. We value your call and will make sure you get some annoying papers that do not help you at all.” A Matoran at a desk said into his phone, drawing a funny little comic strip on a piece of paper.“No Ms, I do not want some jaAm. No, it is not important. Sign the papers you already have and we might get back to you.”“No, I already told you I don’t want some jaAm. Now-”The Matoran at the desks sentence was cut off when a giant robot slammed into the wall behind. The Matoran spun around on his chair and looked the giant robot in the face.“Uh, welcome to SOCKS military?” the matoran said to the massive robot.“UUaah.” Matanui said as he fell out of the building.“Icytoa1, do you have that paperwork finished yet?” Icytoa1’s boss yelled at him.“Sure, but aahhh..” Icytoa1 one said, still in shock at the giant robot that came within a meter of his face.“Aggh!! Such a maniac, that toa. Always goofing off. He’s probably going to tell me a giant robot crashed into the building after being shot at by another giant robot. Always with the stupid stories.” The boss said, walking away.One of the secretaries walked up to him and worriedly said to him “Uh, Mr. Laco sir, the wall..”“Is purple? Yeah, I know. We need to change it.” Mr. Laco, who was devilishly handsome if I might say, walked to his office.BACK OUTSIDEMakutatron picked up Matanui Prime and threw him across the street, landing in a Burger Turaga. Makutatron ran at Matanui, but Matanui shot him as he ran, and the Deceptikuta flipped and landed on his face.Matanui Prime ran at the Deceptikuta leader, but Makutatron, keeping him low, ran back at Matanui, grabbing him and throwing him to the ground once more. Matanui tried to get back up, but Makutatron put all his strength into a kick to Matanui's side, sending Matanui rolling.Makutatron grabbed him again, and pushed him into a wall.“Your weak Matanui! You always have been!” Makutatron said, attempting, atemptting to rip open Matanui's chest. Matanui kicked Makutatron away and the Matanui got on top of Makutatron this time.“Your overconfident Makutatron! You've always been!" Matanui said, turning an arm into a sword and going for the face.Makutatron grabbed Matanui's sword arm, and threw him off. He punched Matanui in the face, but Matanui rolled to his feet.Growling, Makutatron ran at Matanui. “You and the other Autotoabots will fall today, because you all fight for the weak. THAT-”Makutatron rammed Matanui into another building, shaking up the expensive pots and vases that lay inside.“IS WHY-”Makutatron pushed Matanui to the ground.“YOU LOSE!”The manic Deceptikuta kicked Prime onto his back, and attempted to grab the spark of the Autotoabot leader. Matanui reacted at the last second, bringing out his sword and slicing open Makutatron arm. Makutatron howled at the gash in his arm, then swung his other arm, hitting Matanui back.Matanui was dazed, but not out. He looked back up to see Makutatron's fusion cannonTM aimed at him. A split second later matanui was once more sent flying down the street, crashing into an oncoming garbage truck.Makutatron was about to make his way towards Matanui, when he sensed an energy pulse from the AllShiny. With one last look at Matanui Prime, he transmoced and flew towards the signal.Matanui watched him fly away, then fell into unconsiousness.END OF CHAPTERMTL

Sums up what I was gonna say. Did not see that part coming.MTL

It's the Transonicle boxing week blowout! Another chapter!Fun Commentary: Flufskiron's plan is explained a bit, and in the fight he goes easy on Makutatron. He doesn't want Makutatron dead just yet...TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOM CHAPTER 15 MEANWHILE, THE DECEPTIKUTA TOHU MEMORIAL, TA-METRU, METRU-NUI Makutatron sat calmly on the throne in the Tohu Memorial, the staute of Hapori Tohu that had once been in it ripped out by Makutatron himself several years ago when Icarax's revenge had failed. Of course, when I say Makutatron sat calmly, I mean he's not killing anything or considering it. He watched Flufskiron's shuttle land slowly in the park, where most of the grass had been trod into oblivion or just ripped up by an angry Decepitkuta. On that ship was supposedly Nihiscream, all bundled up and ready to be eviscerated. Makutatron enojed the thought of killing Nihiscream. He had contemplated doing it several times before, but Nihiscream either found a good excuse for it to not happen, or he just wasn't nearby, and there was always those annoying occasions when Makutatron was about to end him and then Autotoabots showed up. Makutatron, was quite wary of this time, however. As the ship finally landed and excess steam for some reason went steaming off, he thought of Flufskiron. Makutatron did not trust Flufskiron. He knew that the red and bulky Deceptikuta was far smarter than the average Deceptikuta, as well as being much stronger. Makutatron knew that he would be able to kill Flufskiron if they got in a fight, but he kenw that Flufskiron always had help with him. And when Soundprah had told Makutatron that Flufskiron had left his minion Swiftinock on the moon, Makutatron knew something was wrong. Makutatron rose to his feet and walked forward, Panrashot following him. Panrashot was fanatically loyal to Makutatron, at the expense of not being the brightest star in the sky. In front of Flufskiron's shuttle, Sleedat, Enderth, Daedulus and Viewdok were already there, waiting, along with the few hundred nameless drones in the Deceptikuta base. The ramp to the ship lowered, and forth walked Flufskiron, a sinister smile on his face. Behind him, some drons led out Nihiscream and his foremost strikers, Ramstrike, Thunderstrike and Skystrike. "Lord Makutatron, I bring you the traiter Nihiscream, as well as his co-comspirators!" Flufskiron said, motioning to said Deceptikuta. "I can see that. Give Nihiscream here, I want him dead right now." Makutatron said, making his way forward. On his head, or rather in it, Dr.Transraga worked steadily. Makutatron thought he was useless, but let him work anyways. Nihiscream twitched a little bit as Makutatron walked forward. "I assure you Lord Makutatron, I can be of some use ye-" he began to say, but Makutatron grabbed him by the neck. "Quiet you gaseous tinhead. I'm not in the mood for your excuses." Makutatron said, who then ripped Nihiscream from the arms of the drones. "or your existence." Nihiscream grabbed at Makutatron's arms, atemptting to force the Deceptiktua leader to let go. Makutatron also noticed that he kept looking over to Flufskiron."Now, now, Makutatron, is there really a need for" Makutatron heard Flufskiron's voice, then the sound of Flufskiron's gun being readied at the side of his had "that?" Makutatron turned to look down the barrels of Flufskiron's weapon. "So, you're in league with Nihiscream?" Makutatron asked, squeezing Nihiscream's neck in his fury. Nihiscream was making some pitiful noises as he kicked and clawed and Makutatron. The Deceptikuta all watched with interest or indifference. "Not in league in the true sense, but similar." Flufskiron said, his weapon unwavering. "THEN YOU WILL DIE WITH HIM!" Makutatron said, swinging Nihiscream at Flufskiron, knocking Flufskiron to the ground. The drones that had came with Flufskiron let go of the Strikers and charged, while Ramstrike, Thunderstrike and Skystrike all stood there, unsure of what to do.One drone got onto Makutatrons back while another atemptted to shoot him. Makutatron took the drone off of his back and threw him at the drone, then kicked at Flufskiron, who had made his way out of range. Flufskiron turned his fist into a multitude of spikes and ran at Makutatron, stabbing. Makutatron got hit once, growled, then grabbed for Flufskiron's face. Two shoulder mounted Cordak launchers came out of Flufskiron, well, what do you think? His shoulders and fired at Makutatron. Nihiscream, fed up with millenia of abuse, fired missiles at Makutatron. Flufskiron, Nihiscream and Flufskiron's drones all opened fire on Makutatron, who was forced back. Suddenly, a drone exploded. Panrashot fired his arm's turret weapon, blowing apart drones. Makutatron then charged at Flufskiron and Nihiscream, throwing them both to the ground. Makutatron ripped off a piece of Flufskiron's chest armor, and Flufskiron kicked at him. Makutatron grabbed Flufskiron's foot, and spun, sending Flufskiron flying. Makutatron then took his own foot, which had treads on it, and put it into Nihiscream's face, then started spinning the treads. Nihiscream screamed (heh), which made Makutatron smile a little bit. He then reached down, picked up Nihiscream, and threw him to the ground once more as Ramstrike tackled Makutatron. Nihiscream rolled, turn his hands into a blade and a buzzsaw, and stabbed and sliced Makutatron while he dealt with Ramstrike on his back. Ramstrike grabbed at Makutatron's head, then Makutatron grabbed onto Ramstrike's wrists and pulled off both of Ramstrike's arms. In surprise Ramstrike fell to the ground, while Makutatron beat on Nihiscream with Ramstrike's arms. Meanwhile, Flufskiron had Panrashot on him, ripping and clawing at anything he could find. Flufskiron hit Panrashot in the face, which gave him enough time to then grab Panrashot's face. He threw Panrashot to the ground, then got up and ran over him, heading back to Makutatron. Nihiscream, Flufskiron and the remaining drones all continued to fight Makutatron, all staying out of range of Makutatron's limbs, which everyone agreed were very dangerous. Makutatron the charged again, taking heavy damage from shots, but this time he was slowed down from a volley of missiles from Nihiscrem. Turning his fist into spikes, Flufskiron went for Makutatron, punching once, then punching twice, then punching a third time, each time just missing Makutatron's face, either hitting his shoulders or his chest. He was just about ready to get Makutatron's face when Panrashot shot (heh) Flufskiron in the back, which Makutatron used to pick up Flufskiron and throw him at Nihiscream. Nihiscream dodged the throw by rolling, but upon exciting his roll, Makutatron was there, and Makutatron kicked him in the face. Flufskiron and Nihiscream were both at Makutatron's feet, looking up at the badly damaged Deceptikuta leader."Flufskiron and Nihiscream, you are both traitors to the Deceptikuta." Makutatron said, staring down at themn with unblinking eyes optices. "The punishment for traitors is death." and with that Makutatron reached for them. Sleedat watched, having known this would happen. It wasn't the first time someone had tried to kill Makutatron, but it was the first time they'd almost succeded.Maktuatron picked up Flufskiron first, who seemed distracted. Makutatron didn't care. All he had to do was rip out his spark... Suddenly, the ground nearby was torn apart, and a giant metal snake thing came forth. Deceptikuta scattered before it, while Makutatron watched it make its way towards him. Suddenly, it stopped. It was covered in saws and spikes and other mean looking things. Then a being stepped out of it. "Makutatron, put him down. Now is hardly the time." Shockvak said, walking past the head of the Drill Dragon. Makutatron growled, but threw down Flufskiron anyways. Flufskiron snickered a bit, and stood to his feet. "Oh mighty Shockvak! It is always a pleasure to see you! When that Autotoabot ripped off your head on Voya-Nui, I was so sadden-" Nihiscream began to say, but was stopped because he got Makutatron's foot in his face. "What are you doing here, Shockvak? I thought you were busy running errands for Dreadinock?" Makutatron said to one-eyed Shockvak. "I preformed no errands for Dreadinock, I assure you. I am here because I have important information to share with you." Shockvak said. "And what would said information be?" Flufskiron asked, smiling wickedly. Makutatron shot him an angry look. Behind them, Nihiscream got to feet. "As you know, Blitztran has been captured by the Autotoabots." Shockvak started. "I did not know this!" Makutatron said angrily. "I did." Flufskiron said, still smiling. "Carry on, Shockvak." "Blitztran's mission was to allow himself to be captured, and feed information to the Autotoabots." Shockvak said."What does Blitztran know? He can't even walk in a straight direction!" Panrashot said. "Actually, Blitztran is far smarter than he lets on. Otherwise Dreadinock wouldn't have gone to the trouble to get Blitztran to help with my body." Shockvak said. "So Dreadinock is a traitor too!" Makutatron said."Shut up Makutatron!" Flufskiron said. The look Makutatron gave him that time was enough to kill a dolphin. "Blitztran told the Autotoabots of Norik's ship on the moon." Shockvak said, still standing perfectly straigh infront of the Drill Dragon, which occasionly looked at the Deceptiktua drones, which would then run for their lives. "Norik Prime! What else have you hidden from me?" Makutatron said, really getting mad now. Flufskiron only smiled at him. "Blitztran also told them about Norik's space bridge pillars, which hurried them along even faster." Shockvak said. "So those were real?" Sleedat said, walking forward. Her expert opinion could only help. "They were. And he made a lot of them." Fluskiron answered, not really caring if Sleedat was there. "Naturally, Matanui Prime went off as soon as he could, although we're not sure as to how they got there. We assume the Wreckinator's have their ship on the planet, and they took it." Shockvak said. And now Makutatron was mad. "How do you know all of this? I am the leader of the Deceptikuta! All information should reach me FIRST!" Makutatron spat."That woould very inconveinent and inefficent to do. The Autotoabots went to the moon, where our scouts were told to let them pass. They entered Norik's ship and exited with Norik and his pillars, with no loss of life to the Deceptikuta forces. Swiftinock succeded in doing his part there." Shockvak said."And what was his part?" Makutatro asked, he would've been red with anger if Metrutronians worked that way. "He had the Dread Avengers assemble and sneak abroad the Autotoabot ship. They'll have knowledge now and a current location that'll be very useful for us." Fluskiron said. Everyone looked at him funny. "The who?" Sleedat asked him. "No, the Dread Avengers. It's what Swiftinock told me they wanted to be called." Fluskiron explained. "No! Who are they you tinhead!" Sleedat said. Flufskiron shook his head and muttered something about incompetence, but answered anyways. "They're a group of highly trained Deceptikuta who excel in assassination and distraction missions. Think of them as our version of the Wreckinators." Flufskiron said. "Weren't they called the Dreadinators before?" Panrashot asked. "The leader got his information on the Matoran from the internet, and the first thing he found on there was something called movietrailers.com. I believe it influenced him to change his group's name." Flufskiron said. There was silence. "That is highly illogical and a useless choice." Shockvak said. "That's a stupid name. If they succeed in whatever Swiftinock told them they're supposed to do, perhaps I'll let them keep it." Makutatron said."Oh, we'll see about that, Lord Makutatron. We'll see about that." Flufskiron said to Makutatron. There was silence again. "What?" Nihiscream said. Flufskiron looked around. "Right, it appears I mistimed that." he said. He had thought that was the end of the chapt- END OF CHAPTERNEXT TIME: THAT THING WITH JALLER!MTL

First of all: Seasons greetings and such! I got a laptop that has a different program than Microsoft word, so I tried it out.... with the next chapter of Transonicle 3!Fun Commentary: This chapter is not very funny, but the next chapters will go get back to Jaller and the Deceptikuta, which I find are usually much easier to put humour into.TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOM CHAPTER 14 BEHOLD NORIK PRIME! PEST HEADQUARTERS, TA-METRU, METRU-NUI Matanui Prime, Kopatchet and the Wreckinators (iBrow, JackaL and LesoSpinn) drove towards PEST headquarters, while Tahkan Metra flew above. Matanui had his trailer with him, and inside the trailer was Norik Prime and his five control pillars. A special escort of PEST, Matoran military and a few police vehicles flanked them, while Ramenbolt, in his invisibility-ness, flew above, keeping in contact. They reached PEST headquarters, where Dakama Prime, Hydraxhide, Vakama Maximus, Nujack, Crashinator, Jodkra, Johnson, Mataus, Tahuswipe, Galcee and Phoenix Prime awaited them. Standing nearby was Hewkii, the New Guy and Turaga Nokama. Wipeout had gone to meet up with Blue Flame and Pohatubee at Kongu's workplace, where Jaller and co. were currently living, along with Wheeldax and Braindox. Omega Kaita still guarded the Wreckiantor's ship. (the iBrow)And that, my friends, is the where-abouts of all the Autotoabots. Incase you were wondering. As Matanui made it into the parking lot, he transmoced into his impressive robot mode. "So you got him?" Hydraxhide asked. "He's in here." Matanui said, motioning to his trailers. The Wreckinators and Kopatchet drove up and transmoced. "Did you get these pillars as well?" Turaga Nokama asked. "We've got everything alright." iBrow said, patting the trailer. "Although I would've liked to shoot a Deceptikuta or eight." JackaL said. LesoSpinn nodded enthusiastically. "Bring him out then. Let's see if he's still tickin'." Hydraxhide said, and the Wreckinators began opening the trailer. Dakama Prime walked up to Matanui. "Here's the Sun matrix. Kept nice and safe." he said. "Thank you, Dakama." Matanui said, taking the Sun Matrix and hiding it away in his chest. They turned back to the trailer, where the Wreckinators had Norik out already. Kopatchet kept scanning him. "That's odd. My scanners say he's perfectly alright, if a little weak, yet he still appears comatose." Kopatchet said. Nujack walked up and waved his own scanners over him. "My say the exact same thing!" Nujack said, rubibng his chin. "I didn't need you to tell me what I just said!" Kopatchet snapped at Nujack. Nujack looked a bit taken back. The Wreckinators thought this was funny, but they atleast tried not to laugh. Tahkan carried the control pillars out, which Turaga Nokama eyed curiously. Inside PEST headquarters, the Autotoabots set Norik's body up in a large, recliner-like object. Tahkan put the control pillars in a locked, secure room, and Blitztran, from his own locked, secure room, could be heard laughing maniacly. "And what will you do with him, once he wakes up, if I may ask?" Turaga Nokama asked Matanui. Matanui walked to one side of the room, and turned to face her. "We will welcome him. He was a much respected member of our race, and it will be a honour to serve beside him once more." Matanui said. Nokama scowled a little, but only Hewkii noticed. The Autotoabots lined the room, all eyes upon Matanui and Norik's body. Matanui took the Sun matrix out, and it sort of floated in his hands. "Please let this work." he said, and he sent the Sun Matrix to Norik's body. There was a small flash of light, but nothing else, as Norik's chest plates moved themselves to let the Sun Matrix enter. Suddenly, there was movement. Norik's hands twitched, then he moved his legs off of the recliner and stood up. He surveyed the room. "What planet am I on?" he asked. "Norik, welcome to the planet of the Matoran. They are our allies, and let us live here among them." Matanui said, stepping forward. Norik spun to face him, seemingly ready to pull out his double sided sword, but then noticed who it was. "Matanui? Is that you?" he asked, a little bewildered sounding. "It is I, Matanui Prime. Welcome to our new home, old friend." Matanui said. "So, Metrutron was lost?" Norik said, a little despondently. "It was. Your ship was shot down at the final battle, and I was forced to launch the AllShiny into space. That was several millenia ago." Matanui explained. "I see." said Norik, looking to the floor, then looking back up, "The pillars! What about the pillars?" "You've rescued the control ones. We have them stored on the premises." Norik nodded, then looked at the other Metrutronians. "I recognize Hydraxhide.." he said. Hydraxhide nodded. "And noone else. Wait, Dakama Prime? Oh, Tahkan Metra. The Wreckinators! Where's the others..." he said, recognizinga few of the assembled Autotoabots. "They will all be introduced in due time, my friend." Matanui said, placing his hand on Norik's shoulder, and at the same time getting you off the hook of having to read an entire chapter of introductions again. Now, this entire conversation was happening in Metrutronian, so all the Matoran present were very confused, and Nokama was angered. The nerve of them! Speaking in a foreign language, on Metru-Nui? Preposterous! "Hey! Norik Prime!" Nokama yelled. Norik turned to her. "What did it say?" Norik asked Matanui. "Kopatchet, help him with the Matoran language." Matanui asked the white Autotoabot. Kopatchet was still confused slightly as he put a wire into Norik's arm and uploaded the Matoran language onto him. He had monitored Norik's vitals during the whole Sun Matrix thing, and noticed that Norik's vitals had not changed at all. He'd tell Matanui about that later. "There, you're good." Kopatchet said, stepping back. Norik thanked him and turned back to Nokama. "I am Norik Prime, and I-" he began to say, but was interrupted by Matanui. "Norik, we've already told them about you. No need to introduce yourself." he said. Wow, Matanui is really looking out for you guys. Normally we'd have only been halfway through the first set of intros by now. "Oh." Norik said. "I'm Turaga Nokama, a representative from the Matoran government, and I'll have you know that we're not exactly to pleased to have so many machines of war on our planet." Nokama said, being perhaps far too rude to giat robot that could've turned her into a blue stain on the floor with little less than a second thought. "You mean the Deceptikuta?" Norik asked her, indifferent. Phoenix Prime noticed that at no point had they told Norik about the Deceptikuta. He assumed that Kopatchet must've uploaded the info. "That, and your pillars. These teleporting things-" she began to say. "They are space bridge pillars, which is not teleportation! It is an opening in which an object can travel huge distances, as long as there are enough pillars on either end of the space bridge, and have sufficent power!" Norik said. Phoenix thought this was interesting, due to his own powers of teleportation. His teleportation powers required energy as well, demanding on how far he traveled. He had also learned that, with enough power, he could teleport across time, although that had only happened once, when the AllShiny had done it for him. The New Guy turned to Hewkii. "This guy sounds like a cross between Leonard Nimoy and Liam Neeson!" he said excitedly. "No he doesn- well, a bit actually." Hewkii responded. He wondered what Hafu would've thought of Norik Prime. Or what Macku would've. He hadn't seen Macku in such as long time. The military hadn't let him leave, due to his expertise fighting Deceptikuta. Nokama continued on. "Ok, so it's not a teleporter. But you could in theory transport weapons and armies with it, couldn't you?" she said. "You could if you decided to use it as such. But it was designed with AllShiny in mind. The AllShiny would've kept it powered, so we could've kept it moving." Norik said.Phoenix wondered if the Sun Matrix could be used to power it, but he kept that thought himself. "So it is a weapon!" Nokama said. Now Norik was growing annoyed. "Only if it's used as one! And I am the only one who knows how to use it, so watch yourself Matoran. I am far above your level and comprehension." he said. The beings in the room noted how slightly.... well, not exactly kind that sounded. "You should be kinder to the Matoran, your all using this place as a refug-" she began to say. "I am a Metrutronian and a Prime! I am of the highest orders! I was Protectinator of Metrutron! I shall how I want to whom I want! And we only use this place as a refuge until we can activate the Space Bridge pillars and restore Metrutron!" Norik snapped. The others were shocked to hear this. "How could we use them to restore Metrutron?" Matanui asked him. "I will tell you, Matanui, and you alone, for now. But first, introduce me to this planet. Here, you are the teacher and I the pupil. Let us go." Norik said, sounding far kinder (and a bit more senile) now. Norik began walking out of the room, and with a look back and a silent apology Matanui followed. The room was silent, except for the sound of Blitztran's laughter, slightly muffled from the walls. END OF CHAPTERNEXT TIME: JALLER ONCE AGAIN MEETS THE ELUSIVE 12345! OR MAYBE FLUFSKIRON AND NIHISCREAM WILL FIGHT MAKUTATRON! EITHER WAY, SOMETHING'S GONNA HAPPEN!MTL

They're elves.And elves aren't superior to humans.I would know. I went into a fort of about 30 of them, all wearing glass armor, and butchered every last one of them.As I've said, my ideal play would be to reunite Skyrim under the empire. However, those blasted Medes are weak rulers, not fitting for the throne of the great Tiber Septim. Thus, they are not deserving of the empire. I would have them gutted while a true Dragonborn - me - was placed on the throne. From there I would take a flight of Dragon mounted honor guard led by myself, equipped with the daedric equipment I forged, and daedric armor made for the dragons. And we would kill every last elf.All of them.I do not like Altmer. The only thing more satisfying then gutting Thalmor people is gutting two Thalmor people.In other news - I finished writing my CoT RPG based in the Elder Scrolls universe. The bad news is that it's 38 pages in MW. To put that into perspective, it took 2 posts on BZP to put up a 17 page RPG. It has 20,000 words and a bunch of pictures. More appropriately, the RPG I put into the RPG forum contest is 154 KB. This one is 3,379 KB.So.... probably not going to get entered on here, sadly. :-Toa Levacius Zehvors Good sir, eveyrthing you wrote there was true and amazing. I salute you.I've sided with Imperials and finished their quest line, and I take time out of my busy shecdule to kill every Thalmer I stumble across.MTL

Oi vey, that would suck.That's why, as soon as i hear the roar of the dragon (or see it, or the music starts playing) I drop everything and save. So know matter how the battle goes, I'll abel to retry it if all my back up (which I don't usually have) gets killed or something.That's also why I prefer sword and shield to dual wielding. With a shield you can shield bash to make whatever your fighting stop whatever its doing. For instance, if a dragon starts using its frost or fire breath on you, a shield bash will make it stop. It helps alot too if your shield is enchanted against elemental stuff, like mine is (30% fire resistence!)Of course, with dual Daedric swords, I can't imagine much is living long enough against you to make you need to block!Also, has anyone else noticed how weak Town guards are? I killed all the guards in Winterhold and Whiterun for the fun of it, and I didn't even lose half health. Either that or I'm too strong...MTL

I'd put my money on the guy with thumbs, so Voldermort. I know Kirby could eat him,but Voldermort could use his death spell thing. Or just kick him.MTL

But, but, but, but I want to! :PI just love finishing moves. It always feels good to chop someone's head off, expesicaly if they've been really annoying (like a Necromancer staying 50 feet away shooting ice spikes at you...)MTL

Not only is Ironhide a pretty old guy and may not move as quickly as he used to (he never was dynamic in any of the films), but there was maybe 2 seconds between Sentinel's "WITH MEGATRON" and him blowing his chest out. It's like saying a person could have dodged a bullet after he heard the click of the gun.I'm loving the Combaticons in FOC. As for my hopes, I'm hoping for Triple-Changers. Springer and Blitzwing, please.Yes Ironhide was! In the first movie, in epic-slow motion, he transforms and dodges Brawl's rockets, double helixes over a screaming woman and dose more stuff.And I'm prettysure the words "alliance with Megatron" would sort've instantly trigger a "Say what?" in your head, and atleast look at him. Although I will admit it was a pretty quick piece of time between "With Megatron" and Ironhide getting his chest shot out, I still expected more him.If Blitzwing dose end up in FOC, do you think he'll be like TFA Blitzwing (ze itzy bitzy spider) or G1 Blitzwing? I'm hoping for TFA, although I really can't see how that would fit in with FOC...MTL

Wut.Well, Matanui said the pillars have the potential to teleport a planet, and at the end of the movie......Hence, hehehhehehe.Fun Commentary: Not the best chapter ever, but finishing this chapter means that stuff will actually get to happen in the next few chapters.TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 13TO BOLDY GO WHERE OTHERS HAVE GONE BEFORESPACE, THE FINAL FRONTIERWell, not for Metrutronians. You see, they’ve had space travel longer than Matoran have existed, so...SPACE, THE FRONTIERThe Wreckinators ship zoomed smoothly thro-“Hang on there!” iBrow said.What?“I said hang on there you purple-gutted ten fingered maniac!” iBrow said again.You can’t talk with me, I’m the writer!“You got something wrong! You didn’t say the name of my ship!” said iBrow.I’M THE WRITER. IT DOESN’T HAVE A NAME, SO I DIDN’T WRITE ONE!“Yes it does. It’s called the iBrow. Get it right, or don’t do it at all.” iBrow said......Fine, well, the iBrow-“The iBrow!! In italics!” iBrow said, rather rudely.The iBrow zoomed through the atmosphere of the Matoran planet, heading for the moon. At the controls was the Wreckinators, their leader, iBrow, silently smirking to himself, as if he had won some great intellectual battle. Behind them stood Matanui Prime, Kopatchet and Tahkan Metra. They had contemplated taking more with them, but they did have to leave some on the planet below.“If anyone says “are we there yet?” I will personally throw them off the ship.” Tahkan Metra had said when they had gotten onto the ship. Considering they had taken some of the more serious Autotoabots, this probably wouldn’t have happened anyway, but a little extra assurance didn’t hurt.“iBrow, activate the cloaking device.” Matanui said.“It’s already on.” iBrow answered.“Is it? Wow.” Kopatchet said.“Aha, yes it’s quite useful for us that it only works on the outside of the ship. It would be bloody difficult to do anything with invisible controls.” JackaL said. LesoSpinn chuckled at that.“Very well.” Matanui said.And then there was an awkward silence.“Soo.... are we there yet?” Kopatchet asked. Tahkan shot him a very unkind look. “Just asking.” Kopatchet replied.The ship, invisibly, landed on the moon, and in the distance the Autotoabots could see the Deceptikuta armada, although one ship differed from the rest. It was also stuck in the ground at an odd angle, which certainly helped.“That must be where the Exploratory crashed.” Matanui said, referring to the name of the ship.“What’s the plan?” Tahkan said, readying his rifle.“We could just go in and blow everything up.” LesoSpinn said.“That’s only been the plan once.” iBrow said to Lesospinn.“I know. It was my favourite.” LesoSpinn said.“Kopatchet, you remember when you took Omega Kaita out of that Deceptikuta base?” Matanui asked Kopatchet.“That was different. We had the largest table cloth ever made, as well as someone who could pretend to pull his thumb off. Here we just have some trigger happy guns and the entire Deceptikuta army.” Kopatchet said.“We’re not that trigger happy!” JackaL said.“Well, sometimes you are, JackaL.” iBrow said. JackaL shrugged.“Perhaps if we remain stealthy and just find a hole in the side of the ship, we can sneak in and get Norik out?” Tahkan asked.“I fear we don’t have much choice.” Matanui said, opening the hatch to go outside. “Autotoabots, ROLL OUT!”The Autotoabots followed Matanui Prime, leaving the iBrow cloaked behind them. The encountered no scouts, which was not surprising. I mean c’mon, if your hiding on the moon, are you really expecting anyone to just waltz on over and stumble across your army?Crossing the moon’s surface, they family came right up to the side of the Exploratory.“Can’t find a place to get in.” iBrow said.“I’m assuming we’re not allowed to make a hole?” LesoSpinn asked.“We’d only serve to alert the Deceptikuta.” Matanui said, examining the smooth metal. “There must be a way in! There has to be!”“Wait, look up there! I see the marks of an explosion! Perhaps if we climb up we’ll be able to go through the hole.” Kopatchet said, pointing to the wound on the ship.“It’s worth a try. Tahkan, head up and see if Kopatchet is right.” Matanui ordered Tahkan.“Will do.” Tahkan replied as he transmoced and flew up, staying close to the ship so he wouldn’t get noticed.He transmoced again when he was near it. Peering down into the hole, he called out “If you can climb, you’ll be fine!”So they began to climb up the side of the ship, the Wreckinators leading, followed by Matanui with Kopatchet in last. When they got to the top, Matanui had help Kopatchet up the last few feet.“There’s no gravity here! Couldn’t we have just floated up?” Kopatchet said.“Well now you mention it.” iBrow said in a rather sarcastic tone.The Autotoabots looked down into the hole, turning on whatever lights they had.“I see lots of.. broken things.” JackaL said.“Somewhere in there lies Norik and the pillars. I hope the Deceptikuta haven’t already found them.” Matanui said, and then jumping into the hole.Inside the ship, Matanui looked around again. He had landed in the remnants of a hallway, wires hanging from the ceiling and cracks in the walls and floor. Everything was a dull gray colour.Walking onward, with the others following him, Matanui found the first body. Lying face down, with its lower body covered in rubble, the nameless Autotoabot looked almost peaceful.Except for the fact the top half of its head was gone, sliced right off.“That wasn’t rubble that killed him.” Kopatchet said.“We don’t need to be medical officers to know that!” Tahkan said. Kopatchet ignored him.“I wasn’t aware that the Deceptikuta had gotten onto the ship. I had only seen it shot by the Terragator.” Matanui said, reminiscing....FLASHBACK!On Metrutron, during the final battle, Matanui cut his way through a Deceptikuta drone. The sky was filled with rockets and explosions, Autotoabot ships trying desperately, but failing, to hold off the relentless Deceptikuta onslaught. The building behind the Autotoabot line contained the AllShiny, and they had to hold off the Deceptikuta long enough for Norik Prime to come by and set up the Space Bridge pillars.Matanui kept an optic on the sky, waiting for Norik ship to come by. He doubted that Norik would be able to slip by the enemy fleet. Looking back to the field, he saw that the farthest part of the Autotoabot line was failing, and Deceptikuta were pouring through, onto the building, and putting a hole in it. One tell-tale figure led them.“Makutatron.” Matanui said in Metrutronian. Slicing down another Deceptikuta, he made his way to nearest Autotoabot communications place. He informed them to be making sure the Autotoabots inside the building were ready for the AllShiny’s launch at any time. Turning back to battle field, he saw an Autotoabot ship fly past, firing at Deceptikuta ships and dropping some bombs on the Deceptikuta ground forces. A cheer went up from the Autotoabot forces, and briefly they pushed back.But then the Fenrakk Walkers showed up.60 feet high, four-legged machines with guns for heads and huge weapon-proof shields on their legs, they marched across the battle field, invulnerable to anything shot at them from the front, and ploughing their way through the Autotoabots. Matanui ran under one, and using his swords, cut up the knees of it. It buckled and fell, and the Matanui found a joint and sliced it’s terrible head right off.Glimpsing back up, he saw that Norik’s ship was almost in position, so close, when-BBBBOOOOMMM!The Terragator, most frightening and feared ship of the Deceptikuta, fired in vicious arsenal of weaponry at Norik’s ship, ripping open it’s back and engines. Suddenly, there was a flash, and it was gone, all that was left were a few pieces of flaming rubble. The Autotoabots went into despair, and Matanui decided he had no choice. Seeing in the distance Omega Kaita falling to the Zivonastator, he ran back to the communications station, which now had a few bodies in it. He ordered the AllShiny launched, and it was. With a great blue light, it sped forth from the roof of the building, into the sky, and into space. Behind it followed one small figure; Makutatron.BACK TO THE FUTURE PRESENTThey continued past the body, and they turned corners, walked up stairs, walked down stairs, turned more corners and finally walked into the control room. The control room was littered with Autotoabot bodies, and one Deceptikuta one.And in a corner sat Norik Prime, unmoving, unresponsive.“Kopatchet,” Matanui said, not taking his eyes off of his friend, “check his life signals.”Kopatchet walked up to Norik’s body, and waved a thinga-majig around in front of him. “Well, his vital signs say that he’s perfectly fine. But obviously he’s not; otherwise he’d be talking to us or something. Trust me, science never lies.” Kopatchet said.“And where are the pillars?” Tahkan asked, looking around the room.“I think these are them.” iBrow said, pointing to box at Norik’s feet. Matanui walked up and opened it. There would’ve been a gasp around the room if any of the persons in there had been able to breathe.In the box were five pillars, all smooth, except for the middle parts of them, which contained small openings.“Norik’s five control pillars. I wonder what has happened to rest.... it doesn’t matter, they won’t work without these five.” Matanui said, standing up. “Kopatchet, take the box with the pillars.”Kopatchet walked over and picked up the box.“I’ll carry Norik. Wreckinators, lead us back out. Tahkan, you take the rear.” Matanui said, picking up Norik. Tahkan picked up Norik’s shield and double sided sword, and followed Matanui and the others out.From a dark corner in the room, Swiftinock watched, and then sent a message to Flufskiron. “They’ve taken the bait, and they return to the Matoran planet now. Swiftinock, out.”END OF CHAPTERNEXT TIME: I HAVEN'T DECIDED YET, BUT THERE'LL BE STUFFMTL

Good enough for me! I hope they'll be a big ol' battle between huge amounts of Autobots and Decepticons (I was very close to writing Autotoabots and Deceptiktua there) at some point. I know it would probably be lag-tastic, but it would still be fun.Also, in Dark of the Moon, when Sentinel betrays the Autobots, and says "he had to make an alliance with Megatron", how come Ironhide couldn't bother to turn around? Or notice that Sentinel just said he's betrayed them? I'm pretty sure everybody though Ironhide was awesome and didn't get nearly enough screen time, and I myself am no different there. I wish he had gone out better :(I also noticed that when Optimus goes to Chernobyl, Ratchet is seen following him, but doesn't appear after that. I enjoyed Dark of the Moon, but little things like that ruin it just a little bit for me.MTL

Well, that has certainly made things alot more interestin-YOUR THE ONE WHO DOESN'T LIKE MATAMUFFINS!You good sir, have yourself a reader.MTL

I think if I had the moon transform, I could basicaly just write "And then all the good guys got killed by billion foot tall robot".However, I'm lazy enough to do that, so don't tempt me . The next chapter WILL be tommorrow, so y'all don't need to worry now, y'hear? I also watched DOTM again last night, so I'm prepared. It will be more similar to DOTM's plot once they get Norik back to the Matoran planet, although I've changed things up somewhat.MTL

What I've always wanted to know, is if with the Nuva symbols in the hands of Matoran, supposedly making them the strongest Toa, why did they still get owned by the Piraka? I mean Jaller and Co. basically did it without their powers... Forgive if I got that wrong, it has been a while since I read the books.MTL

That's so true, isn't it? You always get to the point that you can effectively take on everybody in the game at once, and as long as you have a healing potion or two, kill them all.Except in Skyrim they surprise by making an elder Dragon show up and remind you just how weak you truly are.Although, by myself, (just for the fun of it) I killed everybody in Windhelm, then Whiterun, and with just a little help from Odahviing and Lydia, killed them all.Ofcourse I saved before that and reloaded, but hey..Speaking of Windhelm, they still haven't picked up Ulfric and Galmor's bodies. Now that's a bit cruel. (Ofcourse I was annoyed Ulfric couldn't even bother to get out of his pajamas in that fight). I've found a re-animate corpse spell, so I might "clean up" their bodies....And Braveheart was on the other night. I'm making a William Wallace character now. With war paint and two handed swords and nord FFFFFFFRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!MTL

A new story you say? Hmm, very intelligently written so far, although not much has happened (considering it's the first two chapters, that's OK) and the prologue seemed a bit irrelevent (it's a prologue, so I can hardly blame you with that)I was also not aware that you ended kingdoms all by yourself. That's a skill I can hardly do up with. The best I can do is make toast.And MataMuffins must be pretty good, and I would dearly love to read that story you said existed. I want those feelings! They should've known better than to have to those words together... HeheheheheheLet's see where this bad boy goes, shall we?MTL

So that's what his hand signals were! Very clever iBrony, very clever.MTL

I accidentaly mis-read Vertak as Vultrax each time, and I got so confused. I really liked that, for some reason. Just sort of... felt like it should be that way. Or something. Nothin' wrong with that! Tahu Mistika should realize you never waste time talking during an execution.. ...Nevermind....Well, good chapter, a bit morbid, but a good one none the less. Good to see the plot sorta fixed, although I don't think the Toa Nuva will be characters for long...MTL

We are the Champions is my favourite song of their's, although We Will Rock You is always appreciated.I feel proud of myself that I can sing about 6 lines of the Bohemian Rhpsody :PMTL