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Fun Commentary: I added lots of dialogue to this bad boy. It was more or less random before, but now.. Oh, now it is Transonicle worthy. I also changed the Metrutronian language a bit. It's now just numbers, and a real pain to write.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 14MAKUTATRON RISING SECTOR SIX HEADQUARTERS, THE CANYON OF UNENDING WHISPERS, PO-METRU, METRU-NUI Just in case you thought the story was in America or something. Because it’s not.The giant figure watched the little meat bags hurry around his body. They had little ice things trying to keep his giant mass frozen. He would one day get a chance to kill the little meat bags. Oh, how he wanted to escape his icy prison. But soon, he would, he could feel it in his, well, wires.DOWN BELOW!!!!!Jaller, Hahli, Turaga Vakama, Nixie, Nuparu, Hewkii and Hafu, as well as some of Hewkii and Hafu’s squad, continued to stare at the gunmetal giant, while 12345 blabbered on about something or another.“He stays in cryogenic refrigeration, keeping him locked up-“ 12345 was saying. Turaga Vakama didn’t like that. “You mean it’s still alive?” he said, clutching his cane “It’s been here for several thousand years, and frozen, and it’s alive?” 12345 ran a hand over his smooth mask. “Don’t worry pops, this guy ain’t going nowhere. As I was saying, he’s frozen right good. A giant popsicle. Icicle. Bicycle. Whatever floats your boat. And, he probably isn’t even conscious. If he does break out, we’ll tell him we’re friendly.” He said. Turaga Vakama wasn’t buying it. “You’ve been keeping a giant alien robot in the basement of our island, and you didn’t think it prudent to tell us you had a living weapon of mass destruction in an ice cube?” The good Turaga was losing his patience. “Until now, we had no reason to mention our little friend. He’s not the sorta guy we invite people over to have photo-shoots with. Am I right? Or am I right?” 12345 said, trying to sound friendly. It wasn’t working. “And what if he woke up?” Hafu asked. “He won’t. And if he does, as I already said, we’ll tell him we’re his rescuers. Easy-peasy!” 12345 was selling, but no one was buying. “He won’t believe it.” Jaller said, still looking up at the body. “Ooohohoho, look, the prodigal son is speaking. You don’t know squat about what he’ll believe.” 12345 was totally in his element. Too bad this element was an uncomfortable cross between unbelievable and weird. “That’s Makutatron.” Jaller said, finally looking to 12345. “Euy? Look, kiddo, you get a robot as a car and make some metal wookies as friends. Does it make you an expert on giganto robots? Nope! Not one bit! We’ve been studying this guy for years, we know more about him than he even did.”“Did you know he’s the big bad leader of the Deceptikuta? The bad guys! My car? Yea, he was one of the good guys. The guys that aren’t trying to kill us! And the bad guy will find him. No questions asked.” Jaller said. Hahli nodded. Hewkii, Hafu and Turaga Vakama didn’t look very happy about the confirmation of their fears. Nuparu had found a yo-yo and was playing with that. 12345, however, laughed. “We’re inside a mountain! All the energy being given off is trapped by the natural rock. And we got concrete in front of that. And any that does get out just gets stuck in the canyon and bounces back and forth on the walls. There’s a reason it’s called the canyon of unending whispers, kid.” “I don’t think canyons would do that.” Nuparu whispered to Nixie. Nixie ignored him, however. Something that 12345 just didn’t sound right somehow. Jaller and 12345 were still going at it, however. “Makutatron came here looking for a cube or something. An AllShiny I think it was. With it he could rule the universe, instil chaos and use our machines as weapons of war. He’s the literal harbinger of death.” Jaller said. 12345 tilted his head when Jaller said that. “Well, a cube? Uh, now that’s the craziest thing I’ve heard all day.” He said. Hafu looked at Hewkii. “About as sane as I think it’s gonna get..” he said. Hewkii agreed. “I wouldn’t mind leaving now and seeing Macku.” Of course, no one paid them any attention. “Wait, how much energy can a frozen robot give off?” Nixie said, finally pin pointing what 12345 said that irked here. Something about a frozen robot giving off giant amounts of energy didn’t sound right to her.“What?” 12345 said, “Well, not very much ya see.” After he said that he realized what he had just done, but it was too late; Jaller had clued on.“Then you have something else making lots of energy..” Jaller then, as if a light bulb appeared above his head, went in for the kill “You have the AllShiny here, don’t you!” 12345 looked taken back. “Well, there’s a chance we have one. It’s very nice.” Turaga Vakama didn’t like this either. “You mean you have a power source capable of basically turning our world into Karzahni itself, and your keeping it in the same complex that you have a giant death machine in?!” MEANWHILE, IN A DIFFERENT ROOM Frendox’s head crawled to the AllShiny, which sat, magnificently, on a massive pedestal. “21-21-21-21-21-21-1-1-1-1-8-8-8-8!1-12-12-19-8-9-14-25! 1-12-12-19-8-9-14-25! 1-12-12-19-8-9-14-25!” he said, jittering as he said each word. A shot of energy from the cubeish thing returned the head to its former glory. A 3 foot high robot of twittering death. Frendox decided it was time to contact Nihiscream. “14-9-8-9-19-3-18-5-1-13!!! 14-9-8-9-19-3-18-5-1-13!!! 1-12-12-19-8-9-14-25!! 13-1-11-21-20-1-20-18-15-14!! 12-15-3-1-20-9-15-14 16-15 13-5-20-18-21 3-1-14-25-15-14 15-6 21-14-5-14-4-9-14-7 23-8-9-19-16-5-18-19!!!” Frendox, er, said or something. In actual Metrutronian. Wow.“Copy that Frendox. Your pronunciation of -18- is weird.” Nihiscream said.IN AN AIRBASEAn ordinary F-22 Raptor fighter jet lay in wait. Having just talked to his sources, Nihiscream began the call to the other Deceptikuta. The jet took off, heading towards Po-Metru.FLYING OVER ONU-METRUAn alien jet, not Nihiscream, flew over the rather empty landscape of Onu-Metru, when she received a call.“Sleedat! Head to Po-Metru and the Canyon of the Unending Whispers! Frendox has located the AllShiny. Head there and begin the attack.” “Very well Nihiscream. Has Frendox found Makutatron as well?” she asked, already heading towards the destination. “He.. might of.” Nihiscream answered. “I’m sure he’ll be happy to see you. He always was such a kind being.” Sleedat said. “I do not appreciate sarcasm, Sleedat.” Nihiscream said.IN AN ARMY BASE (in Po-Metru!)This army base contained a yard, which contained several vehicles considered either unsafe or not in top working condition. These vehicles contained Deceptikuta.“ Wreckdak, Krekkacrusher, Bradak, do you read me?“Wreckdak reporting.“ said the troop carrier.“REATREATKREKKACRUSHERRETARETARETA“ said (maybe. It was more of a growl if anything) the tan mine clearing vehicle.“Bradak rolling along“ said the tank. “Excellent. Head to the Canyon of Unending Whispers. Attack at once.”I DON’T KNOW WHERE“I’m afraid to ask this, but Enderth, where are you?“ “I’m already at the Canyon, and I’ve a tunnel right into it!” Enderth said.“How productive.” Nihiscream said.IN PO-METRU AS WELL“Barritax, Daedulus, head to the Canyon of Unending whispers. Keep an optic out for Autotoabots, and attack at once.” “Barritax en route.” Barritax, the police car from before, said. “I’ll bump ‘em stomp ‘em KILL THEM!” Daedulus, a beat up old Ford truck, said. “I highly doubt it, but ok.” Nihiscream said.AND LASTLY OVER THE PROTODERMIS SEABlacktaka, in his helicopter form, flew near the coast of Po-Metru. “Blacktaka, head to the Canyon of Unending Whispers. The AllShiny has been located.” Nihiscream. “I’m on my way. ALL HAIL MAKUTATRON!” Blacktaka said. “Of course. Why wouldn’t I?” Nihiscream said. BACK IN THE CANYON “It’s not as bad as it looks, ya see?” 12345 said, his grave dug. “Look, nothing will break that ice! I swear!” Just then a frightened Pohatubee ran into the room, followed by Sector Six soldiers spraying cold stuff at him. Pohatubee didn’t look where he was running, ran past 12345 and company, and went right into Makutatron’s leg. Pieces of ice rained down as Pohatubee realized what he just ran into. His radio screeched, then he ran for life once more and hid behind a large dumpster in the middle of the room.The Autotoabot’s radio cried out <Now get that freaka thang away from meeee!!> Hewkii’s soldiers (who still had their guns for some reason) raised their weapons. Considering their last encounter with a Metrutronian had been Spinok, it was excusable. Jaller ran in front of them as Sector Six soldiers surrounded the dumpster. “No! He’s good! He won’t bite! He doesn’t even have a mouth!” Jaller said. Nuparu looked terrified as he hid behind Nixie.<Guilty as charged> Pohatubee’s radio said as he looked over the top of the dumpster.“Thank the great beings.” Hafu whispered to himself. “Look kid, one of those things attacked us in our base in Voya-Nui and killed our dudes. I’m not taking any chances with this thing.” Hewkii crossly said. He looked serious. Jaller was frantic to keep things getting anymore wiggity-wiggity-wack. “He wouldn’t hurt a fly!” Hahli rushed to his side to help. “Doesn’t he look harmless?’’ Jaller and Hahli turned around to show them. Pohatubee had his arm cannon and shoulder guns out, a mean look on his face and his other hand clenched in a fist. When he realized that Jaller and Hahli were looking, and that he did look pretty menacing, he put his hands behind his back sheepishly.Jaller face palmed.“Pohatubee!” Jaller said, his tone shaky. Pohatubee pointed to Makutatron. “I know, but he’s frozen, he can’t do anything.” <I trust that about as far as I could throw you~~~~~ wait a minute there> Pohatubee’s radio said. Suddenly, the ceiling shook. An explosion could be heard, and an alarm went off. Jaller turned back to 12345. “You have to get us to the AllShiny.” As he said this, Pohatubee looked at him, recognizing the name of the AllShiny. “Maybe with it Pohatubee could take it to Matanui and get it out of here.”“Whoa whoa whoa! Mata-who? Look, we just can’t take this thing out! There’s papers to fill out to do and I just don’t know if I can trust your robo-buddies.” 12345 said. <Ain’t no need to fear> Pohatubee’s radio said. “Matanui Prime is the leader of the Autotoabots.” Jaller said. “The Good guys.” Hahli said. “And we can trust him. We can’t let the Deceptikuta get the AllShiny!” Jaller said. 12345 stomped his foot. “No! No! No! NO!” he said. Hewkii walked up and threw 12345 to the side of the dumpster and held his gun to his head. Sector Six soldiers raised their weapons, and Hewkii’s soldiers either knocked the guns out of their hands or held up their own, much larger and dangerous looking, ones. “Yes. Yes. Yes. We’ve fought these robots, and if some of them are good, I’d like them to be on our side. Besides,” Hewkii said, looking up at Pohatubee, “if we can’t trust them, then at least we can try.” Pohatubee nodded at him. “Look, I’m going to count to three, and your gun will be gone from my head.” 12345 said. “And I won’t count.” Hewkii said. 12345 gulped. Turaga Vakama walked up. “I’d do what they say. These guys are as tough as tough gets,” he looked up at Pohatubee, “for Matoran, at least.” 12345 gave up, as another explosions shook the complex. “Fine. You want to rest the fate of the world on the kid’s Camaro? Fine with me. Not like I live here or anything.” Hewkii let 12345 get back to his feet. Turaga Vakama looked at Hewkii. “Why don’t you and your men go find the ammo room and get loaded up. I don’t think this’ll be clean.” He said. Hewkii nodded as 12345 motioned to a Sector Six Soldier. “Go show ‘em the way. I’d hate for them to get lost.” He said. The soldier nodded and led Hewkii away.Frendox, meanwhile, had found the cooling control room for Makutatron. The Matoran in there had hardly proved a challenge. And now Frendox was pressing buttons, and the heat raised. “MakutatronMakutatronMakutatronMelting!” Frendox said.12345 led them into the room where the AllShiny was. Pohatubee looked amazed to see it. “There, our crown jewel. And you’re going to go and take it away. Oi vey.” 12345 said, sitting down.“Now, how do we get it out of here?” Jaller said, walking close to it, but getting zapped by the powerful light. The cube was at least 80 feet tall. “That’s part of the problem, but had any of you listened..” 12345 said. They ignored him. Pohatubee walked up to the cube and touched it. It shrank and shrank and shrank until Jaller could have held it. Pohatubee took out a little holder thing and put the AllShiny inside.<The Matrix of leadership!> Pohatubee’s radio boomed out, in an obvious reference to 25 years ago. “Naw man that’s the AllShiny!” Nuparu said, running up. Pohatubee looked at him, and Nuparu turned around and hid behind Nixie.As Pohatubee gave Jaller the Cube of AllShiny, an explosion rocked the building, and the power went out. “And here we go.” 12345 said.OUTSIDE THE CANYONNihiscream and Sleedat fired rockets, lasers and machine guns at power generators at the outside of the canyon. Blacktaka went around shooting stuff in his vehicle mode.“We must free lord Makutatron!“ Blacktaka yelled out.“Tunnels done!” Enderth said. “This is a great day, a great victory under MY leadership!” Nihiscream boasted. “Oh shut up you chicken legged freak.” Sleedat said, transmocing and doing a bombing run of the complex.INSIDE THE CANYONThe giant robot looked around. His icy prison was loosening. He could feel his power returning. The Matoran ran around trying to keep him cool. It was of no use. Almost. Just about…….KAKRACKMakutatron jumped out of the ice, metal beams, chains, ice and Matoran fell in his wake. He looked around, a little dizzy, but now he knew exactly what to do. After years of being called things like “frosty” and “NEMOTE 1”, the Matoran needed to know his real name.“I AMMAKUTATRON!!!!!!!” And then they knew. END OF CHAPTER

I find that actually starting a chapter is the hardest part. Once you get going, you're good.Unless you get to the point where you don't what to do next. That's pretty tough too.Reminds me, I have two stories I have to work on...Great, now I have stuff to do... Good work iBrow!And Tahu Toa of Gold, it's about 60-70 I think for Turaga, then 100 for Toa. I don't remember exactly, it's been a few years since I myself was one. I can't imagine ibrow remembers either..MTL

I did Sheogorath's quest yesterday! It was weird thinking that my character from Oblivion (who saved everything he could, was Divine Crusader, killed Lucien Lachance when he tried to talk me, and rescued Cyrodiil and the Shivering Isles countless times) has become completely bonkers. Not to mention the whole "being inside the mind of a homicidal dead monarch" thing. Although I did enjoy the surprise of getting the Wabbajack again.I also got the house in Whiterun (which the whole city looks like Edoras from Lord of the Rings), and furnished it all. So I finished it all, couldn't find my housecarl, Lydia, so I went to my bed and slept (I prefer questing in the daylight), and when I wake up, there's Lydia standing right beside my bed. First things she says? "Pleasure to see you my Thane" or something like that. It was creepy and slightly attractive all at the same time.I've also only killed 4 dragons; 2 for the main quest, 1 because a guy in Ivarstead (the town beneath the 7000 steps) told me there was one nearby, and another when I was just roaming about. I was going to ask for tips for finding them, but then I remembered their randomly generated, so that would be rather pointless.And for the record, I'm (currently) level 16 Imperial warrior, prefering one handed weapons and unrelenting force (which has saved me from many an overpowered draugr). I like to think he's the descendent from my character in Oblivion. I joined the Empire as well, because I just couldn't do it after Martin sacrificed himself for everybody. I know it's wrong that the Empire has control fo all these other countries (most Nords the average townsperson seems more or less ok with them), and that they've banned Talos worship (they really chickened out there), but still...And I'm wondering about the expansions for Skyrim. I'm just so curious as to what they could be...MTLAlso as well,

Hmmm, I don't know a way around it then..TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 9INSERT WITTY TITLE HERE VOYA-NUI, NEAR THE SITE OF THE GREAT PYRAMIDS (AND THE BATTLE THAT HAPPENED THERE) On top of a hill, there was a small ball of fire and flash of light. Then, Phoenix Prime stepped out of it. The ball of teleportation disappeared behind him. Phoenix realized that he was about 6 kilometres from he was supposed to be. But he decided he could waste a few minutes looking at the site of the battle. Phoenix, Dakama and Blue Flame (along with Matanui) had missed most of battle, each for different reasons. Phoenix had saved Dakama in a small skirmish not long after Matanui died, from a shot from Makutatron and some turret drones by jumping into him and teleporting. Phoenix had neglected to actually coordinate where they were going to teleport to, and as such, had ended up on another planet, 400 feet underground in a cave 12 feet high. Just so you know, Dakama is 44 feet high, Phoenix 37. The two of them were stuck in there, on their backs, for a day or so (maybe longer, I forget) before Phoenix had the energy levels to teleport them back to the surface. You see, teleporting requires energy, and the farther the distance, the more energy spent. It would be another half hour before Phoenix would be able to teleport back to Metru-Nui right now. Anyways, when Phoenix had been able to teleport back to the Matoran Planet with Dakama, they had gone to the old PEST headquarters on a small island near the island of Mata-Nui (the island). They had found the whole place deserted and destroyed, with Kopatchet’s entire laboratory missing. Later they would find out the Deceptikuta had attacked. But they did find Blue Flame there, just swimming up onto to shore. Apparently he too had been attacked by Deceptikuta, and he had been thrown off a building into the ocean by Sleedat, and presumed dead. The Deceptikuta had then captured Jaller’s parents, who Blue Flame had been guarding. Blue Flame then swam to the PEST headquarters, arriving just as Phoenix and Dakama got there. They then checked the computers at the base, and found that the Autotoabots and PEST soldiers had gone to Voya-Nui, bringing Matanui’s body with them. Phoenix had enough energy left to teleport them to Voya-Nui, where they arrived just in time to see Omega Kaita transmoc for the first time on the Matoran planet, destroy a Deceptikuta ship and fight the Zivonastator. They then got to see Omega get completely defeated and thrown 4000 feet away. The battle then looked like it was going bad for the Autotoabots, with Icarax arriving on the Terragator. However, an airstrike from the Matoran and a brave attack from the Autotoabots kept the Deceptikuta back, long enough for Jaller to be killed by Makutatron. But he got better. He then used the Sun Matrix (given to him by the League of Primes, who were also dead. It’s complicated.) to bring Matanui Prime back to life, and then Matanui was powered up by the parts of the old Deceptikuta turncoat Gunmetal, who then died. Icarax showed up, took the Sun Matrix back, then teleported to the great pyramid. Matanui then went to the great pyramid, which turned out to be the Sun Eaterer. The Zivonastator was on it, removing its pyramid-y covering. Matanui attacked Icarax, Makutatron and Nihiscream himself, and things looked bleak for the Autotoabot leader, until Phoenix summoned up enough power to teleport himself, Dakama Prime and Blue Flame to the Sun Eaterer, help take out Makutatron and Nihiscream, and Matanui managed to kill Icarax by sending him into the mouth of the Zivonastator, which then blew up, fell on the Sun Eaterer, and they both exploded. Matanui, Phoenix, Dakama and Blue Flame all escaped, and everyone was happy. Except Mataus, because Onewaflap died, but... Phoenix surveyed the battle scene now. It was more or less the same, with sand covering most of the Deceptikuta bodies. The great pyramid/Sun Eaterer, which had been almost 500 feet high, was now barely 200, parts of it and the Zivonastator laying almost a meter high in places. Or a yard, for you imperial folks. Odd, Phoenix thought, they always said the entire pyramid blew up. What , you might ask, does Phoenix mean by that? That’s confusing! Maniac! Well, don’t worry little children, I shall explain. You see, unless you haven’t paid attention at all over, y’know, the past two stories, or, y’know, the first few chapters of this one, Phoenix is from the future, sent to the past by the AllShiny for some reason. Unfortunately for Phoenix, the AllShiny had been destroyed at the end of the battle of Lego City in the first Transonicle. Phoenix had then deduced that he had been sent back to a different timeline than his own, in a DC comics twist of fate. His theory had been cemented when Matanui was killed by Makutatron in Transonicle 2. In his own timeline, Matanui- ah, that would be telling, now wouldn’t it? Suffice to say, Matanui wasn’t killed by Makutatron. Of course, with the AllShiny gone, the means to restore it gone, and the Sun Matrix (which Matanui now held in his keeping) lacking sufficient means to teleport him through time, Phoenix was stuck, probably forever, in this universe, not knowing what would happen if he died. The thought saddened Phoenix immensely. Phoenix then had a rather terrifying thought (for a Metrutronian). The Terragator, flagship of the Deceptikuta fleet, captained by Dreadinock and Icarax’s favoured ship (but he’s dead, so) famed and feared even in his own timeline, had disappeared after the battle. Which is saying something since it’s a 300 foot long spiky ship with an entire army of killer robots inside of it. But hey. The Terragator, if used by competent Deceptikuta, could easily destroy entire cities in under an hour. And Dreadinock was right up there in the list of competent Deceptikuta. Granted, the list was only like 30 members long. Phoenix checked his power levels. They were full. Whoa, he thought, I spent a long time monologueing. I better do something or the readers will leave. Actually, I thought that. But Phoenix still realized he better do something. Transmocing into his phoenix alt mode (which long ago he realized did not blend in at all), he flew to where the disturbance was. He flew and flew and flew, his gold and red body glinting in the sun, nearly blinding anyone who stared at it for too long. Then he saw smoke. It was a little village, but it appeared that every building was on fire, collapsed, or both. There were rockets coming out of the village, just randomly, landing into the sand and exploding. Phoenix came to the village at an angle, giving himself time to try and see his enemy. Through a break in the smoke, he got a glimpse. It was a rectangular, grey tank, obviously Metrutronian, with two turrets on the top. Great, Phoenix though, all the better for shooting down aircraft. Down below, the tank took a break from its rampage as it saw the giant bird. “Was ist das?” it said. It turned its guns, and fired. Phoenix dodged the shots, spinning around them as they exploded around him awesomely. Phoenix was about to ready his weapons when the tank did something. It transmoced. But not into a robot. Into a Metrutronian jet. Oh, this just keeps getting better and better, Phoenix thought. The jet flew at him, opening fire, and of all things, making shooting noises while it shot at him. Phoenix dodged his shots, and was about to shoot back when the jet transmoced into his robot form and grabbed Phoenix, who only just managed to transmoc himself. “Hello! Mein Name ist Blitztran! Wie heissen sie?” Blitztran asked. Phoenix looked at him funny. “P8o5n9x Pr9m5?” Phoenix answered in Metrutronian. “OOOoooOOOhh! You’re a robot!” Blitztran said, laughing. Phoenix then realized Blitztran was going to collide them both into the ground. Phoenix then had an idea. He teleported 6 feet back, out of Blitztran’s grip. “Ooooohhh?” Blitztran said, crashing into the ground. Phoenix landed nearby, and aimed his gun at the crashsite. Phoenix sighed. “That was too easy. What goes wrong now?” he said. “Zis!” Blitztran said, his tank mode driving out and shooting at Phoenix. Phoenix dodged the shots, transmoced, and flew into a cloud of smoke, disappearing. Blitztran drove forward, surveying the skies. “Wo bist du?” Blitztran asked, deciding they were on friendlier terms now. He saw a glint of gold as Phoenix flew by. “Ahah, hier kommt meine Spatzi.” Blitztran said, opening fire. Phoenix dodged the shots, curving, teleporting, appearing right above Blitztran, and bringing a sword down on top of Blitztran. By sheer coincidence, Blitztran transmoced into a jet and flew forward. He was 60 feet gone when he noticed Phoenix land. Blitztran turned his jet mode and transmoced back into robot mode, towering over Phoenix. “Vell, I do know who you are. But perhaps I can get to know you better over a nice cup made out of your head! AHAHAHA!” Blitztran said, laughing like it was the funniest thing ever of all time. Phoenix, understandably, didn’t think it was too funny. “What’s with the accent?” he asked. “Aczent? Vhat aczent?” Blitztran said as he began shooting at Phoenix. All the shots went about 30 feet over his head. “Voops, I missed.” Blitztran said, giggling. He aimed right at the ground, and this time the shots went straight for Phoenix. Phoenix rolled, shooting back at Blitztran. The shots hit Blitztran in a shoulder, making him stumble back. Blitztran laughed as he stumbled. Phoenix ran at him, sword ready, and was about to stab Blitztran when Blitztran grabbed him by the arm. “Nein.” Blitztran said. Then he laughed. Then he pulled off Phoenix’s arm. Then he started swinging it at Phoenix. All the while he laughed. Phoenix, suffice to say, was not having the time of his life. It was very hard to concentrate and teleport when you’re being beaten with your own arm. “Ooooh! I know vhat to zay! Stop hitting yourself! Stop hitting yourself! Aaahhahaoohahaoooahah!” Blitztran said. “Alright.” Phoenix said, punching Blitztran in the face. Suddenly, Blitztran’s mood changed. “Vhy you oversized pigeon! I vill pluck all ov your feathers und break your puny neck!” Blitztran’s much angrier sounding voice said. “That’s hardly suitable for a comedy.” Phoenix managed to say before Blitztran had him in his hands. “I VILL BREAK YOU!” Blitztran said, bringing Phoenix’s body down on one knee. Phoenix teleported, however, and Blitztran lost balance, almost falling over. Now he reverted back to his original voice. “Ooohoh, zat made me dizzy. Not liking ze dizzy.” Blitztran said. “Then you’ll love this.” Phoenix said, tripping Blitztran. “Ach! No puns? You can’t do something like zat vith no puns!” Blitztran said, transmocing into his jet and flying around, opening fire on Phoenix. “This fight is starting to feel repetitive.” Phoenix said, once more dodging the shots. “Really? You vould zink fighting zomevun like me vould be much more interesting.” Blitztran said, stopping in mid-air to contemplate that. He didn’t expect the first thing to come to mind would be the ground. “Ow.” Blitztran said. He transmoced slowly into his robot form, where Phoenix walked up and punched right in the middle of the face. “Oooh, I’m zeeing ztars. Or Tsars. Vun ov zose..” Blitztran said as he fell over. “Well, I guess we have someone to interrogate now..” Phoenix said. He picked up his severed arm, and a Matoran villager ran up. “Oh thank you! Thank you! We shall honour you every day on this day forever more! Now go!” The Matoran said. “Okay..” Phoenix said, teleporting him and the unconscious Blitztran back to PEST headquarters. And by doing so, he unwittingly started the first step of Flufskiron’s, Shockvak’s and Dreadinock’s plan. END OF CHAPTERFUN COMMENTARY: Blitztran: 3 alt modes, and maybe 3 personalities. Maybe. And the plan, oh the plan..... I also cut out the other part, because I decided the next chapter could do with a fight scene.MTL

Actually, the font is wrong on this chapter for some reason. I have to fix it...EDIT: Should be fixed now. Now if you excuse, I must return to the Elder Scrolls 5: Skyrim. I have to chew gum and kill Dragon, and I have 5 sticks of gum left. But I should kill those dragons...Annywaayyss, there is a chance the next chapter will be this weekend. I'll give you a hint as to who Phoenix will have to fight on Voya-Nui: It's not Dreadinock, but someone who has previously appeared with him..MTL

By this you mean that the United States bought Alaska from the Russians at two cents per acre. Telly. With a 'y'.Anyway, another good chapter. A bit two much dialogue, but that's okay.Well, between fight scenes and the like, I really gotta fill it up with dialogue. If the whole story was fight scenes, you would all probably still read it, but...I'm sorry, what was the point I was trying to make there? :PI was wondering if anyone would get the whole Russia/Ko-Metru thing there.Telly? Oh, I better fix that..Anyways, next chapter will be... soon. Phoenix Prime will fight a Deceptikuta (guess who) on Voya-Nui, while Jodkra, Johnson, Tahuswipe, Blue Flame and Pohatubee end up fighting off a Deceptiktua attack. AWESOME! MTL

Right, sorry it took so long to get this one up! I have a valid excuse though; Skyrim. Amazing game, amazing game.TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 8THE REAL AUTOTOABOTS OF METRU-NUIPEST HEADQUARTERS, METRU-NUIWipeout leaned against the railing on a walkway, the New Guy standing beside him.Wait a minute, you ask, if a giant robot leaned against a railing, wouldn’t said railing break?Why of course, I would answer, except Wipeout is not a giant robot. He is the only Matoran sized Autotoabot, and due to his lack of height, he’s often forgotten about by the other Autotoabots.But wait a minute there, you might ask again, they remember Wheeldax, don’t they?Who? I would respond.ANNNNYYYWWWAAYYSS, The New Guy, who at some point (and never received an actual name, I mean, we don’t even know what type of Matoran he is..) had developed some sort of friendship with Wipeout, pointed to Tahuswipe, who was talking to Galcee.“Is he flirting with her?” The New Guy asked. Why he was still the New Guy after several years with PEST, I do not know. What I do know is he has a bucket load of actual common sense, a rare trait among Matoran these days.“What? Flirting? You think he wants to commence a relationship with her?” Wipeout responded. Wipeout thought the New Guy’s question was ridiculously silly, but he let the Matoran go on.“Yea, I mean, I see they always got each other’s back during a fight, and he’s always talking to her, and he’s leaning against a wall with one arm like this,” The New Guy demonstrated what he meant, “which we usually take to mean he’s flirting with her.”Wipeout chuckled, which was weird for a robot to do, I know, but I think you’ll accept him for what he is. “I’ll tell you what; our race doesn’t work that way. You see, Galcee developed this technology some while back that lets her auto aim when she shoots, which personally I find disgraceful, although Hydraxhide thinks it’s neat. Tahuswipe does too, and he’s been trying to find out how to get a version of his own for at least 3 thousand years.” Wipeout explained.“You mean he’s a giant suck up?” The New Guy asked.“I’m not personally familiar with the term, but I assume you mean “he’s just being nice to her so she’ll tell him how to make his own aim-assist thing?” Yes, sort of. She is also his best friend, in your Matoran sense of the word.” Wipeout said.The New Guy, probably like you, didn’t understand that at all, but he pretended to anyway. “Uh huh,” he said, “Y’know, I thought he would be better friends with Vakama Maximus. They’re both sort of obsessed with themselves.” Wipeout laughed at that. “Vakama Maximus? Tahuswipe? Best friends? Hah! Your comparison is humorous, although I assume you don’t understand why.” Wipeout said, wiping metaphorical tears from his eyes optics.“Uh, sure, I understand, but please, enlighten me.” The New Guy said.Wipeout continued on. “Vakama Maximus is more egotistical regarding his appearance, while Tahuswipe is egotistical regarding his skills in combat. Personally, I think Vakama Maximus fights better and Tahuswipe looks better, but that’s just me. Poor, poor, ignored Wipeout..” Wipeout said.The New Guy, again, (and probably like you again) didn’t understand. “But Tahuswipe has those swords, and he’s always going in and choppin’ things up. And he’s got that crossbow thing and that shoulder gun. I saw him kill like, 20 Deceptikuta in 3 minutes like that.” The New Guy said, “I mean, I guess Vakama Maximus is alright, but all he’s got are those two pistols and some mini blades I saw him use once.” “Look, there’s a reason Hydraxhide trusts Vakama Maximus to watch his back, and not Tahuswipe. Tahuswipe is good, but the difference between him and Vakama Maximus is very obvious.” Wipeout said.“Uh, what?” The New Guy asked.“Tahuswipe is red, Vakama Maximus is blue.” Wipeout said.“Tahuswipe is silver though.” The New Guy said.“It was a joke.” Wipeout said.“It wasn’t very funny.” The New Guy responded.“Neither are you.” Wipeout said.“Hey, look here buddy-“ The New Guy started to say.“Alright, here’s how it goes if you want. Vakama Maximus used to have a red paint scheme with his old alt-mode, right?” Wipeout said.“Uh, I think I remember.” The New Guy said, not really remembering or understanding.“And now he has a blue colour scheme, and a new alt mode, right?” Wipeout said.“Yea..” The New Guy said.“And Tahuswipe has kept the same alt mode, right?” Wipeout said.“Yep.” The New Guy said, still not understanding.“So hence the joke.” Wipeout said.“Oh. Of course.” The New Guy said, not thinking it was very funny, or understanding it, at all. “I thought you were referencing something else, but ok.”“Fine. I guess I’ve been spending too much time around Crashinator. He’s not very funny..” Wipeout grumbled.At that moment, the massive Dakama Prime walked in. “Open the doors. Tahkan and Ramembolt are flying in!” he said. He didn’t sound too happy. What you probably do not know, is that Dakama Prime is Matanui’s second in command. That’s right, not Hydraxhide, Dakama. Considering that Matanui has usually been around to be in charge (except for that time he died) which might explain why you’ve never really seen Dakama be in command. All well.The doors opened, and Tahkan’s Ussanui alt mode and Ramembolt’s stealth bomber alt mode flew in, transmoced into their robot forms, and stood before Dakama. Dakama was 44 feet tall, the tallest Autotoabot, at 44 feet. (aside from Omega Kaita, of course) Tahkan was 35 feet, so he looked at up (physically, at least) to Dakama.Wait, did I say Dakama was tallest? Well, Ramembolt was 44 feet as well, able to look tall Dakamas right in the face with a single turn of the head.That was lame, wasn’t it? Very well, going on.“You know, Tahkan, both of you leaving your post is not something I appreciate. Your reason better be good.” Dakama Prime said.Tahkan looked up at him, almost scowling. You see, Tahkan Metra was a very grumpy bot. A different sort of grumpy than Hydraxhide, but still a grumpy bot. Well, more like permanently angry. Not quite anger, but an emotion somewhere between grumpy and anger-AAANNNNYYYWWWAAAYYYSSS, Tahkan decided to talk. “I wasn’t about to leave a rookie there with what I saw.” He said.Dakama wasn’t impressed. “You could have sent him and stayed there yourself.” Dakama said.It was Tahkan’s turn to not be impressed. “Not with this info.”“Can I tell him? I know who it was!” Ramembolt said, sounding almost excited. This didn’t please Tahkan. “You shouldn’t be excited about having him here.” Tahkan said.“Him who?” Dakama said, sounding uneasy. At this point, Phoenix Prime, Kopatchet, Crashinator, Nujack and Vakama Maximus walked into the room. Tahuswipe, Galcee, Wipeout, the New Guy and anyone else who had already been there were paying attention.“Him.” Tahkan said, ominously.“Who?” Dakama responded.“Really, is it that hard to guess?” Ramembolt said.“Well, in his defence, there are lots of Deceptikuta.” Nujack said.“No one asked you!” Kopatchet said to him. You see, Kopatchet had taken a disliking to Nujack, ever since Nujack had taken Kopatchet role of Medic. Fixing Pohatubee’s vocal processors had been on Kopatchet’s to-do list. He just hadn’t gotten there yet.“Makutatron.” Tahkan said. The room went quiet.“He fell down the ramp getting out of his ship! It was funny!” Ramembolt said.“I don’t find anything about him funny.” Crashinator said. You see (I use that a lot, don’t I?) Crashinator was an ex-Deceptikuta. He had been one of Soundprah’s minions, and had gotten many chances to see Makutatron “interrogate” (hint: rip apart) prisoners. He had defected to the Autotoabots in Transonicle 2 when he was captured trying to capture a fragment of the AllShiny. The fragment was captured anyways (by Ravager), then Makutatron was resurrected, then Crashinator was interrogated by the Autotoabots (in the process getting an eye optic put out (by a stick none the less) (he got a cool eyepatch-battlemask thing from it though) before escaping from the cage he had been in (it wasn’t locked) and being found by Kopatchet. Kopatchet more or less took Crashinator as a pet, and along with Wipeout, had helped re-make Omega Kaita. During the battle of Voya-Nui, Crashinator came face-to-face with Makutatron (after Crashinator had managed to kill Ravager), and was thoroughly beaten half to death.That was a very long explanation, wasn’t it? But that’s what you love about Transonicle, isn’t it?The room was silent for a minute. They had all believed Makutatron dead, killed by Matanui during the final minutes of the battle of Voya-Nui and the failure of Icarax’s revenge. “You should.. have kept watch on him..” Dakama managed to say.“I’m asking for assistance in that. I don’t truly feel safe standing there by myself with Makutatron running around again.” Tahkan said.Dakama nodded. He turned around to Kopatchet. “Contact Matanui, tell him-“ he began.“Tell him what?”They turned around to see Matanui, Hydraxhide, the Wreckinators, Jodkra and Johnson ( as well as Hewkii and some soldiers) walking into the room.“What’s wrong?” Matanui asked. Matanui and Hydraxhide had some scars on them, and one of Hydraxhide’s hands was sparking (like he punched something spiky), although the Wreckinators were their normal, fine, beat up selves. Jodkra and Johnson were fine too. Matanui carried in his hand a small, broken pieces of metal.“Who wants to tell him?” Vakama Maximus said. As it turns out, Dakama was the one up to the task.“Sir, Makutatron. He’s back. Just showed up.” Dakama said.“Well this, is just a right dandy day, isn’t it then.” iBrow said. Matanui looked particularly unpleased with this news.“You saw some rather unlikeable stuff, I presume?” Tahkan asked.“Shockvak is back. And he has a new weapon, a Drill Dragon.” iBrow said.“I punched it. Right in the face.” Hydraxhide said, showing off his sparking hand.“Oh joy.” Vakama Maximus said. Vakama Maximus had watched Hydraxhide get stabbed, then turned around and rip off Shockvak’s head during the battle of Voya-Nui. He hasn’t been expecting Shockvak to, y’know, still be alive, but hey, whatcha gonna do?“And we found this.” Matanui said, holding up the object Hewkii’s team had found.“Hey, Matanui, what is that, anyways? You didn’t say on FTTT.” Hewkii asked Matanui.JackaL was the one to speak. “That there’s a piece of a Metrutronian ship. Autotoabot. By the looks of it, those Ko-Matoran had been trying to work on it, or re-engineer it.” “Like Sector Six did with Makutatron?” Galcee asked.“I presume so.” Matanui Prime, giving the piece of ship to JackaL.“Why would the Ko-Matoran be working on it?” Nujack asked. Kopatchet eyed him angrily. “I can answer that.” Hewkii said. “Up until about 80 years ago, the Ko-Matoran were a rather.. unfriendly group. They weren’t even part of Metru-Nui until we won over Ko-Metru in the most exciting game of Go-Fish ever.” Up with Wipeout and the New Guy, Wipeout noticed the New Guy trying to slip away.“Where are you going?” Wipeout asked him, not really caring.“Hewkii doesn’t know I got back early. The whole team was supposed to stop at McNocturns after we landed, and I didn’t feel like paying.” The New Guy said, opening a door.“Oh.” Wipeout said, turning back to the crowd. Kopatchet raced over to check Matanui’s wounds before Nujack got a chance to. “How would the Ko-Matoran have gotten the part anyways?” Jodkra asked.“I don’t know.” Hewkii said. His team shook their heads.“It doesn’t matter,” Matanui said, “for now, we have Makutatron to deal with.”“I’ll go check.” Dakama Prime said, “And I’ll take Vakama Maximus, Tahkan and Ramembolt with me.” “Very well. Find out what he’s up to, but do not engage.” Matanui said.“Hey, shouldn’t I go with you guys?” Phoenix said, walking up.“No, Phoenix, I want you to go to Voya-Nui. We’ve had reports that things might be going on there. You should go check it out.” Dakama told him, already making for the door.“That’s just because I can just teleport over there and you don’t feel like sending one of Omega’s FTTT’s over there, isn’t it?” Phoenix said.“Yes.” Dakama responded.“Maybe Omega would like to go see the island again?” Phoenix said.“I don’t think he would.” Dakama said.“He’s not just a 112 foot tall gun you know.” Phoenix said as he disappeared in a ball of flame, teleporting to Voya-Nui.Dakama stared at the spot where Phoenix had been, then turned to Matanui and Hydraxhide. “You two should stay for repairs.” He said.“Naw, I’m fine. I think I should go out and bust more Deceptichop. That’ll make me feel better.” Hydraxhide said.“No, Dakama’s right. Got to the medical bay, Hydraxhide.” Matanui said. He turned to Tahuswipe. “Tahuswipe, you know the way to Jaller and Hahli’s home, don’t you?” “I do.” Tahuswipe said.“Take Jodkra and Johnson with you to it. Inform Blue Flame and Pohatubee of Makutatron, and stay with them. I don’t think they’ll remain safe for long.” Matanui said.“RIghto.” Tahuswipe said. On his wheeled feet, he rolled over beside Jodkra. “C’mon, let’s see if you can keep up.” “Oh, I think I can.” Jodkra said, transmocing in his SSC Ultimate Aero alt mode, with Johnson transmocing into his rocket launcher on top of the car. He follow Tahuswipe out of the building.iBrow walked up to Dakama. “We’re fine. We’ll go with you. You can use all the extra weaponry.” He said.“Be alot easier to just send us!” JackaL joked to LesoSpinn. LesoSpinn chuckled at that.“Alright. But you follow me. We’ll keep an eye out, Matanui.” Dakama said. He turned back to his squad. “Let’s roll!” he said, transmocing into his purple version of Matanui’s truck mode. Tahkan, Ramembolt, Vakama Maximus and the Wreckinators followed.Matanui looked to Kopatchet and Nujack. “We need to study this object closely. I fear what it may imply. Also, I want you two,” Matanui started to say.“Three.” Crashinator said.“You three to work on my trailer. I had this idea for it...” Matanui said.“I don’t want to work with him.” Kopatchet said, referring to Nujack. Nujack looked hurt at that.“Why? What have I ever done to you?” Nujack asked.“Kopatchet, calm down. We must try to get along with each other. I fear Dakama has become slightly aggressive of late.” Matanui said.“I’ve noticed that too.” Kopatchet said, turning away from Nujack, “I’ve also noticed Hydraxhide has become considerably less aggressive.”“I’m less aggressive because I have nothing to shoot in here!” Hydraxhide said, spinning his remaining cannon and his hand held gun. He hadn’t been the same since he lost a cannon on Voya-Nui.Matanui, Hydraxhide, Nujack, Kopatchet and Crashinator walked into Kopatchet new lab, which contained some projects of his. Hewkii led his team to the cafeteria, while the New Guy continued to think of an excuse to explain where he was. Galcee walked off to do whatever it is she does, and the doors to the room closed, leaving Wipeout along in the room, still leaning on the balcony.“Predictable, so predictable. Not even a passing mention to me.” Wipeout said. Below him, Mataus ran into the room.“Sorry I’m late chaps! There was this lovely program on the telly and-“ The green Autotoabot noticed the room was empty.“Ah, good. I don’t have to keep this bloody accent up then.” Mataus said.Above him, Wipeout smiled. Good ol’ Mataus, he thought. He then realized that Mataus had been completely forgotten about during all that.“Heh.” Wipeout laughed.THE TOHU MEMORIALMakutatron sat in the chair that once had held a statue of Hapori Tohu. Since the chair was the perfect size for Makutatron, he had promptly ripped it out when he had first found this spot 3 years ago. Now, he had just finished carving “Makutatron’s throne” into the side of it when Sleedat walked up, followed by Panrashot, Soundprah, Daedulus, Enderth, Viewdok and Barritax, the cop-bot way back from Transonicle. “Lord Makutatron.” Sleedat said, bowing. Panrashot bowed too, and noticing Enderth and Daedulus weren’t, forced them to bow too.“Sleedat, my second most loyal servant. Soundprah told me the boy’s location has been found?” Makutatron said, Dr. Transraga busy working in Makutatron’s gaping head wound.“He has.” Sleedat said.“Good. Soundprah, come here.” Makutatron said. Soundprah walked forward. “You are now my second-in-command.” Makutatron said.“Soundprah acknowledges.” Soundprah said, who turned and stood beside Makutatron’s throne.Sleedat stiffened at this. “But lord Makutatron, I’ve held this planet in your mighty name for the past 3 years! Don’t I deserve some sort of reward?” Sleedat said.“DO not ask for rewards, Sleedat. All you will receive is pain. But do not fret, you shall have your reward. Once the traitor Nihiscream is brought to justice, you shall have his place.” Makutatron said.Sleedat smiled sarcastically. “Does that mean I get his Strikers too?” She asked.“I imagine so. Some use they’ve been.” Makutatron said.“Joy.” Sleedat said, truly disappointed with how things were going.Makutatron turned to Soundprah and Viewdok. “Open up a radio-frequency to the moon. I wish to speak with Nihiscream.” Makutatron said.“Of course mighty lord.” Viewdok said. He transmoced into his giant video camera alt mode, and Soundprah sent a wire form his hand to Viewdok. A small hologram appeared. On it was Flufskiron, who just pushed someone off screen as the frequency opened.“Flufskiron, who was that?” Makutatron asked in his usual cruel tone.“Uh, just an annoying drone, O’lord. And may I say, what a pleasure to see you again! I had feared the worst!” Flufskiron said.“Spare may your annoying prattle. Show me Nihiscream!” Makutatron said.“Of course.” Flufskiron said. He motioned to Swiftinock, whose spiky shoulders could just be seen in the corner, and Swiftinock walked forward, holding Nihiscream by the neck.“Nihiscream. I almost want to hear you beg for your miserable life.” Makutatron said, clenching a fist before him.“Ah, but lord, I was simply letting you regain your energy after our terrible defe-“ Nihiscream tried to say.“Shut up, Nihiscream. I’ll hear your whining when I kill you later. Flufskiron, bring Nihiscream to me, and you shall have his place.” Makutatron said. Nearby, Sleedat looked shocked at this.“Of course O’lord.” Flufskiron said, “Oh, and one more thing.”“What is it, Flufskiron?” Makutatron said, not pleased (not that he ever was) for more from Flufskiron.“Are you familiar with a certain.. Norik Prime?” Flufskiron asked.“I was. But he’s been long dead. Otherwise Icarax wouldn’t have been able to come back and die.” Makutatron said, spitting out Icarax’s name.“Hmm. Very well. I’ll see you soon, O’lord!” Flufskiron said as he terminated the link.“What do you think he meant by that?” Panrashot asked.“Be quiet Panrashot.” Makutatron said.“Of course glorious Makutatron!” Panrashot said.Sleedat stood before Makutatron. “You said I could have Nihiscream’s place!” She said.“Consider yourself lucky I let you keep this one. Panrashot, Enderth, Daedulus, Barritax! Regain your former glory and bring me the Matoran boy who has eluded me for so long! Kill his defenders, destroy his home, and make sure he knows just how happy I’ll be to see him. Take some drones with you as well. Now go.” Makutatron said.“Yes glorious leader!” Panrashot said, grabbing Enderth and Daedulus and pulling them along.“I will not fail you!” Barritax said, turning on his heel and following them.“Sleedat, tell me, where is Dreadinock?” Makutatron asked.“I’d assume Voya-Nui.” Sleedat said, her patience at its end.“Tell him to begin heading here. I will await his return. I can trust him to remain loyal.” Makutatron said, ignoring Sleedat’s tone.“As you wish.” Sleedat said as she turned away.END OF CHAPTERFun Commentary: Will Sleedat betray the Deceptikuta? I don't know. Why is Makutatron mad at Sleedat? He's always mad, he just likes ot have someone to yell at. Why is Dakama and Tahkan being so grouchy? I don't know. What does Galcee do in her spare time? I don't know. Isn't great I can answer all these questions!The word count for this one was 3333. Neat.MTL

Eh? has Tahu Mata traveled dimensions? Universes? Time? It sounds interesting..I like Deconstruc- Sorry, Deconstruction the best. Just sounds.. better somehow.MTL

Hmm, sounds good. I don't think you'll really have to worry about here on BZP; we have a really chill communtiy here compared to other forums. As long as the story isn't about Skids and Mudflap, you should be fine :PFun Commentary: This chapter was orignally 812 words. It's now 1818. I consider that an improvment.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 13LOST AND FOUND Nixie and Nuparu sat in the helicopter staring at the other two Matoran sitting across from them. They had all been taken captive by Sector Six agents, for unknown reasons. "So, what you in for?" said the Matoran with the yellow mask. “No idea.” Nixie said, which was the truth."Stole some top secret government files, bet ja can't beat that." Nuparu proudly said. That was not true, but they had deciphered the code that had been used to hack the Metru-Nui mainframe network thing."Got a car, turned out to be a giant alien robot. Then found another bunch giant robots who are fighting a bunch of other giant robots in a several thousand year old war. And they’re looking for a giant shiny cube." the yellow masked Matoran stated, crossing his arms. The Ga-Matoran beside him shook her head.Nuparu, with uneasiness in his voice, responded “Yeah, well, I had donuts for breakfast!" "You did! I mean, uh, interesting." the yellow masked Matoran said, somehow more impressed with Nuparu’s boast than his own. The Ga-Matoran beside him shook her head again and face palmed. “Jaller,” she said, “Why do you sometimes act like the most competent Matoran, then the next moment you’re acting.. well, like that?” “Hahli, Hahli, Hahli, Hahli, I’m a complicated man.” Jaller said. Hahli slapped him."MMhmm." Nuparu said with pride. Then Nuparu looked at Nixie with a smile so stupid looking she slapped his masked right off."ENOUGH!!" Hahli shouted, "I’m Hahli. This is Jaller." “I figured.” Nixie said, “I’m Nixie.”"And I'm Nuparu. I’m beautiful. And so are you." Nuparu said to Hahli. "HHIISSS!" Jaller hissed. Nuparu backed off. "Entering Po-Metru in, er, 2 minutes or something. Just thought you might like to know. I hope you guys have a great day. That’s important. I wish I was in your conversation." The pilot said. MEANWHILEWipeout stood on Matanui’s shoulder, showing him the glasses."The AllShiny is 4.6 kilometres North-East of us." Wipeout said “Wait, wasn’t it south of us last chapter?” Vakama Maximus asked. “Uh, yep.” Wipeout said. Matanui nodded. “So we passed it.” Vakama Maximus said again. “It appears so.” Matanui said. “How did we do that!” Lezz said, annoyed, “This Po-Metru we’re in is basically all straight roads, and we just went and passed it completely!” “I know where it is, you guys just won’t listen!” Phoenix Prime said. “We didn’t ask you where you have been Phoenix. You didn’t bother to remember what the place even looked like, so you’re useless.” Tahkan Metra said. “I could guess the vicinity..” Phoenix protested. “Stop arguing, we must focus.” Matanui said. Dakama Prime walked up beside Matanui. “Matanui’s right, priorities, Autotoabots, we must focus.” Dakama said. "Alright, is that where they’re taking Jaller, Hahli and Pohatubee?" Blue Flame asked.“We assume so.” Galcee said. Tahkan stepped forward. “Why do we need to rescue the Matoran? They’re stupid, violent, angry little beasts, who just went and captured Pohatubee for no reason other than because they could. If the AllShiny is there, they’re probably using its power for microwaves or weaponry.” Matanui looked a bit taken back by what Tahkan said. “Tahkan,” he began, “The Matoran are a young race. They’ve yet to suffer like we did. We should do our best to prevent them from having to. We are an unknown race to them, a species of giants, of war machines, to them. We must show them that we’re not. We must protect them from the Deceptikuta, and the power of the AllShiny.” Tahkan was unimpressed with that. “If Blacktaka was the one who introduced Metrutronians to them, then I doubt they’re going to be asking for our help. And they’re power obsessed; the AllShiny will drive them mad.” “The AllShiny’s power is beyond measure. It will corrupt them. And were we so different? I always thought it was the AllShiny that drove Makutatron to start this war; I know that it could have the same effect here. Our races are one and the same in this, that both of our people could become victims of one being trying to raise himself to his own self-absorbed ideals.” Matanui said.Kopatchet spoke up now, “We must go to this canyon for the AllShiny, and hopefully we will find Pohatubee, as well as Jaller and Hahli, there. We must rescue them.” Hydraxhide surprised everyone and agreed to this. “I agree with Kopatchet and Matanui. We get the AllShiny, Pohatubee and our Matoran out of there, then we...” Hydraxhide started to say, but broke off. Blue Flame finished for him. “Then what do we do, Matanui? What can we do once we actually get the AllShiny? We know its power signal will attract Deceptikuta as well, so we’ll have a fight on our hands.” Vakama Maximus talked next, “We can’t get back to Metrutron either. We detonated our only ship, and I doubt the Matoran have anything we could to get back there.” “Matoran will die in this, no matter what. We’re only breakin’ things by bein’ here. But it’ll be worse if we let the Deceptikuta get their claws on it.” Lezz said. Matanui let Wipeout onto the ground, and then looked solemnly at his friends. “Autotoabots,” he said, “If it comes down to it, I will unite the AllShiny with my spark and sacrifice myself to destroy it. I will not let its power fall to the Deceptikuta. I will protect this planet, no matter the cost.” There was much uproar with that. “No Matanui, that’s suicide! We can find another way!” Kopatchet said. “And how? Launch it into space? That would only continue our war even longer. I fear we may have no choice.” Matanui said. “We could put it into my chest! I’ll do it! We can’t go on without you, Matanui, but we can always lose one nameless Autotoabot.” Blue Flame said. Matanui looked at Blue Flame. “There are no nameless Autotoabots. Every loss I hold dear to me, and I will not stand for it. Our war must end, and too many have died for me.” Matanui said. “No,” Dakama said, “Too many have died because of Makutatron. We will find a way. We must.” “Aye, and I’ll blow a hole through the head of any Deceptikuta who says otherwise.” Hydraxhide raised a cannon as he said this. “I may not care for the Matoran, but I won’t let the Deceptikuta have what they want of this planet, or the AllShiny.” Tahkan said. “I know there is another way.” Phoenix said. Once more everyone more or less ignored his comment. Matanui once more looked to the Autotoabots. “You inspire me with your bravery. All of you. It is an honour to have led such Autotoabots.” Matanui said. “It was an honour to have you for a leader, sir.” Galcee said. “So, we gonna go get us that AllShiny or what?” Lezz asked. “And Pohatubee.” Kopatchet said. “And the Matoran.” Blue Flame said. Matanui nodded again. “Autotoabots,” Matanui said, “transmoc, and ROLL OUT!”MEANWHILE12345 stood in front of Jaller, Hahli, Nuparu and Nixie. "Well, I have to say I'm surprised you all came. I thought you wouldn't show." The smoothly smooth agent said. Jaller looked mad. "You kidnapped us! Of course we would show up!" 12345 smiled "A simple misunderstanding. You only came in contact with giant robots, that’s all." Hahli growled."Hmm,"12345 said, "Well, I think we got up on the wrong foot. How 'bout a smoothie? A coke? An Iced coffee? A Latte? Some tea? Some normal coffee? There’s an awesome milkshake caramel thing with sprinkles on it the coffee shop nearby sells. It has this whip cream on it that has real milk in it.. Anyone?" The captured Matoran stared at 12345."Oh!! Can I has donuts?" Nuparu called out. Nixie sighed. “Son, you can have whatever sick grease-with-sprinkles on it you want. However, I suddenly remembered why I invited all of you. We have this thing we want you to have a peek at...”LATERThe Matoran, led by 12345 walked inside the Sector Six complex. They walked until they came upon the Secretary of Defence Turaga Vakama, and a group of army Matoran including Hewkii and Hafu, who looked less than thrilled to be there. “Why are we here?” Hewkii said. “They said there was a pool..” Hafu said, sad. 12345 walked to the center of the crowd."Secretary of Defence, army guys and Matoran, follow me." 12345 said. The group followed down a long hallway for a few minutes until they came across a giant room. Inside was a giant, 45 foot tall crimson and gunmetal gray giant robot, which looked like it had never smiled. He was frozen, with Matoran holding freezing things trying to keep it cool. They had chains on him too, but those looked like they were mostly for show."Gentlemen, ladies, meet NEMOTE 1, the iceman." "I bet that’s Makutatron." Jaller whispered to Hahli. “Who?” Hahli asked back, looking up in awe at the monster. “The really bad robot.” Jaller said. “Oh right.” Hahli nodded. “He was found just over 200 years ago by none other than Captain Ithinkimbald of the MNS Find Me, who was the great, great, great, great grandfather of Jaller here! He was moved here so we could keep him nice and cold, and away from anything, or anyone, who might want him. And we have found one who might, a nice Camaro belonging to none other than Jaller, again! Our agents have spent decades studying him, and reverse engineering life as we know it from him. Without this bad boy, we would not have such wonders as the TV, the Car, the Microwave and whet stones.” 12345 said. Hewkii looked confused at that last part. “Whet stones? As in the ones for sharpening knives and stuff? I thought those were made long before you found him?” Hafu nodded. Turaga Vakama nodded as well. “That sounds right to me.” Nuparu nodded enthusiastically as well. “Yea, I know, I know! They’re from like, 700 hundred years ago or something!” Nixie looked at him annoyedly. “It was a joke, geez. Have a sense of humour why don’t ya.” 12345 said. No one thought it was that funny, including you. Then Frendox slipped out of Hahli's purse, unnoticed. He crawled away until he was out of sight of the Matoran and Turaga. On a Deceptikuta radio channel, he called to the others. "Deceptikuta, I've found Makutatron! Repeat, the cats out of the bag!” “That’s not the code, Frendox.” Nihiscream radioed back to him, sounding not very pleased at all. “Whatever! Makutatron is here! Our glorious leader! Here! I detect more! AllShiny! AllShiny! AllShiny!” Frendox said excitedly. “Why must they all be cross wired in the head... I’ll alert the others. Continue your reconnaissance. Nihiscream out.” Nihiscream said. END OF CHAPTERMTL

I CANNOT, WILL NOT, keep doing this, it will get old real quickly. IT IS OVER- FINISHED! We should stop, or the pizza I had today will be THE WORST CASE OF INDIGESTION I'VE EVER HAD.:PAnyways, has anyone seen the new TF Prime voyager Optimus Prime? It WELL AND TRULY may be the greatest Voyager Prime ever; Almost no kibble, completly show accurate, has his blaster and sword, is taller than the deluxe and has the msot epic herioc pose ever. I mean, the deluxe one was SURPLUS TO REQUIREMENTS, but the voyager one is completely and utterly amazing.I'd post a link, but the site as forums, so if I linked to it I may WELL AND TRULY DIE SCREAMING. (that was a double one there). But still, it's amazing looking. Awesome even. I don't even know how I can explain... describing such awesome would be more trouble than ALL THE DIRTY JOBS.That's gonna get old real fast...MTL

If Starscream comes back, THEN WHAT CHANCE DO WE HAVE?I enjoy Prime's look, it's just the perfect combination you can get of move/animated/G1. Although, Starscream and Soundwave are a bit too spindly for my tastes. I enjoy the characters themselves, but the looks... And Cliffjumper, well, HE NEVER DID WANT TO LIVE FOREVER.MTL

So I was just missing the point entirely... huh.Tahu Mata and Tahu Stars cooperating? Naaaww :PMTL

Amazing, simply amazing. The 3D effects along make this awesome, and well, it's awesome.MTL

Tahu Nuva seems pretty sad about this.. and I have a feeling it leeds to Tahu Mistika...Or I'm clearly missing the point and it's someone else entirely :PMTL

I'm perfectly fine with no replies with this; I got them already when I originally wrote it. I'm writing this so that you can all read what I wrote, considering it seems like I wrote some of the parts with my ear...There are a lot of Autotoabots; I'm tryiing to give more parts to each of them as I re-write this. For instance, Dakama Prime was always intended as the second-in-command (I decided most of these things after the introduction chapter of the Autotoabots) of the Autotoabots, I just never did a good job of it. It was implied that he was... And Phoenix is from the future. No one really seems to notice, really... And a re-writing like Bionicle spoof rewrite, or an actual novel rewrite sort of thing? (like an epic?) If so, then I may very well read it...MTL

Did you read Transonicle 2? If you did, it might make a little more sense. Although, now that I've reread the chapter a few times now, I've realized I wasn't very clear with it all.Ahwell, the next chapter goes back to the Autotoabots, where Tahkan and Ramembolt report back to Dakama Prime about what they saw at the Tohu Memorial, then Matanui, Jodkra, Hydraxhide and the Wreckinators come back, and Wipeout tries to explain what's going on to a Matoran from the goverment. Then Makutatron decides to send a message to the moon, demanding Nihiscream, dead or alive. Preferably dead in many small pieces. Or alive in many small pieces. Makutatron dosen't care which personally.MTL

Toa of Nerds, are you aware that you are amazing?Of course, adding 57 chapters to an epic in 12 hours would be a blatant bending of the rules. But when you've paid and bought it from an informercial! They've never ocne tricked me!Anyways, this is an amazing comedy. My favourite though, was the first chapter with Fax-O-Power. I just loved the image in my head of faxing topics from a fast-food joint..MTL

Now that is a pretty banner.I have a hunch as to why they're in it......MTL

Then what I had was completly wrong. Well, I had the fourths idea right... ish.The whole Sentinel plot in the movie confused me to the point of no return. Megatron followed the AllSpark for the Fallen and just happend to land on the same planet that's moon Sentinel fell on? Coincidence or some very cheap writing... It was who was in the box that did it. Icarax (The Fallen) convinced Norik over a period of forty years or so to do his bidding. I know that I made the whole scene look a little cheap, but I had to give some (slightly) plausible excuse to it. Norik didn't believe at first (he was going to try and stab the box), apparently Norik was either very weak minded or Icarax has a better voice than Morgan Freeman.So to re-word you, Norik betrayed the Autotoabots because a box told him to.You were pretty close though...I must apologize though, this chapter was not very funny. This is also why I haven't written more Metrutron chapters. I've tried before, but they just never end up being funny at all.The next chapter will be either Wednesday-Thursday, or Saturday-Sunday. I'm pretty busy over the next fews days, so...MTL

If I get a name, I already know how to work him in.Fun Commentary: This chapter is not particualrly funny, but it explains ALOT of the plotTRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 7FLASHBACKS ARE NOT CHEAP WAYS TO MAKE BACKSTORYA long time ago in a Galaxy not too far away.....*Note that all dialogue is translated from Metrutronian intoEnglish Matoran because the author thought it would look bad to do the entire chapter in letters and numbersTHE MATORAN PLANETMILLIONS OF YEARS AGOIcarax holding his staff in hand, stood over the battered body of Metrutron Prime.“Now, my misguided brother, you finally see just how pathetic you really are.” Icarax said, raising his staff, “All your talk of protecting this miserable planet and the disgusting creatures that live on it, all your fighting, has proved for naught. You are weak. You are nothing.”“Wait, Icarax, our ideals! We were to be the light of the universe! Our race-“ Metrutron Prime started to say.“My race is all there should be! My Deceptikuta! My Metrutronians! My race,” Icarax said, bringing his staff through Metrutron’s body, “is all there will be.”Metrutron Prime cried in agony as his life began to fade away, his energies leaving him, going through Icarax’s staff, and into Icarax. Icarax stood straight, propped against the smoke filled sky, the mighty Sun Eaterer standing menacingly behind him.“You shall be remembered as the first of us, the name sake of our planet. And that will be all.” Icarax said.“And you will be less.” Metrutron Prime said, summoning the last of his powers, and blasting Icarax back. Icarax, who hadn’t expected this, was taken off guard and bounced down the hill. Metrutron Prime took Icarax’s staff out of himself. Beside him, landing and transmocing, was another Metrutronian.“When I’m done with him, take him to Metrutron and bury him away. None shall know of him and our war. Let us hope this is the last time our race must deface this beautiful planet.” Metrutron Prime said. He walked forward to Icarax, took his staff, and stuck it through Icarax as Icarax had just done to him. Icarax howled in pain.“I must end your evil, Icarax, but death is too good for you. Enjoy untold years to contemplate what you have done here.” Metrutron Prime said. And, using all the stolen energy that was in the staff from Icarax’s previous victims, he forcibly transmoced Icarax into a square shaped sarcophagus, with an engraved carving of Icarax’s face on it.“As long as a Prime still lives, you shall be locked in this prison. Goodbye, my brother.” Metrutron Prime said. He turned back to the being beside him. “Gunmetal, you know what to do.”“Aye sir, I suppose this’ll be the last time I see you.” Gunmetal said as he grabbed Icarax’s sarcophagus. Icarax screamed with rage from within it. “Oh shut up!” Gunmetal said, giving it a good kick.“Goodbye, Gunmetal.” Metrutron Prime said. Gunmetal waved silently, and activating his teleportation thing, took him and Icarax to their home, Metrutron. The planet’s namesake watched them disappear, and then called forth his surviving brothers.“Come, let us hide this where Icarax himself can never get it.” Metrutron Prime said. Then, taking it out of a compartment in his armour, he held the Sun Matrix. “The AllShiny may lose its power because of what we have done today, but better that than it be used for evil.”“Forsooth.” A nearby Metrutronian said.Together, they used their power to make a tomb around the Sun Matrix, and build a temple around their bodies, hiding the precious item from Icarax until he took his revenge.On Metrutron, Gunmetal found a single pit near a small hill. With as much power as he could muster, he tossed Icarax’s sarcophagus into the pit, then with used what little power Metrutron had given him to move the dirt of the hill into the pit.“There, that should hold him for a good long bit. I reckon I should not have to see him in my life time at least.” Gunmetal said, walking away from the site.If only he did.METRUTRON3 THOUSAND YEARS BEFORE THE MAKUTATRON’S WARDreaddude removed some dirt from the hole he just made in the ground. At the bottom of it, he could just see the corner of whatever it was he was digging up.“Overseer Blue Flame, come look at this.” He said to his overseer. Blue Flame, who was much shorter than Dreaddude, walked over.“What is it?” Blue Flame asked.“I do not know, but it looks old.” Dreaddude said, scooping more dirt out of the hole.“How can you tell it is old, when you can only see a corner of it?” Blue Flame asked.“I just can. I have a knack for these things.” Dreaddude said.“You have a fascination with it you mean. I have not met another being with such an inane love of history as you.” Blue Flame told him.“You like it!” Dreaddude said.“I like facts. I like truth, I like helpful information. I like relevant information. I cannot do anything with a corner of.. a thing.” Blue Flame said.Dreaddude rolled his eyes. “Which is why you were put in charge of excavation duties in this quadrant.” Dreaddude said.“This is a sector, not a quadrant.” Blue Flame said.“Sorry. I always get the two confused. I do not personally know the difference.” Dreaddude said.“The difference,” a voice said, “is that a sector is what we get when we divide a quadrant by 4.”*Please note I’m only saying that because it sounds smart. If I got that wrong, feel free to correct me. Or not. I’m fine with how it is, really.“Norik Prime! An honour!” Blue Flame said, bowing, then standing up straight again. Dreaddude bowed, and still towered over Blue Flame.“At ease. I am curious as to what it is you have discovered. History as always fascinated me.” Norik Prime said, stepping into the excavation site.“If you will sir,” Dreaddude said, “I have not yet removed it from the ground, but if you give me an hour, I shall have it ready for you and brought to your quadrant. I mean quarters.”*Again, please note I don’t know what the equivalent of hour would be for them. Different planet and all. I also doubt you would be able to confuse quadrant/quarters in an alien language.“Very well. Let me have a look at it here first.” Norik said. He stepped past Dreaddude and Blue Flame and peered into the hole. He saw the corner Dreaddude had mentioned earlier. “Fascinating.” He said. He turned to Dreaddude. “Tell me, what is your name?”Dreaddude straightened and saluted. “Dreaddude, sir!”Norik nodded. “You look strong, Dreaddude. Why are you in excavation duties when you could be a very able soldier? From what I can tell, I do not doubt your combat prowess already.”Dreaddude looked a little embarrassed. “I much prefer learning about different species and their histories than exterminating them.”Norik laughed. “Very well, a much nobler pursuit, although I resume you take the time to learn about ourselves first?” Norik said.Dreaddude nodded. “I have. That is why I chose to remain here on Metrutron and discover our own history before going on other-world courses.”Norik smiled. “Very well indeed,” he turned to Blue Flame, “Blue Flame, is it not? One of Matanui’s I presume?”Blue Flame nodded. “Yes, he is a friend of mine.”“I see. Well, I best be off, work to be done!” Norik Prime said. Norik was then off, and the next person he met was Matanui Prime himself.“Matanui! How has the day been for you so far?” Norik asked Matanui.“Norik! I have been very well. Makutatron has been angry again, but he always is. He said the AllShiny could be the target of an attack by some unknown race.” Matanui Prime said.“That is just Makutatron being himself. As High Lord Protectinator of Metrutron, the AllShiny is of course top priority. I think he just wants an excuse to attack something.” Norik said.“He is a soldier, not a politician. He would much prefer actually fighting enemies instead of fighting economies.” Matanui Prime said. They both chuckled at that.“That really was not all that funny.” Norik said.“I know, I do not know why we laughed.” Matanui responded.“Well, do not worry about Makutatron. He should not worry with things that probably will not happen.” Norik said.“I fear sometimes that Makutatron does not care for other species.” Matanui said.“No! That is preposterous! Why would you think that! He simply cares too much for our race, that is all! Remember my motto; freedom is the right of all sentient beings! Nothing could harm us!“I hope you are right. I will see you later.” Matanui, transmocing into his vehicle form and driving off.“Goodbye!” Norik said, continuing on with his day.LATER THAT DAYNorik Prime returned to his quarters, rather exhausted. After a day of meetings, planning and other wise boring but practical things that needed to be done, he just needed a rest. So when he found a giant square shaped statue thing in the middle of his home, he was rather confused, until he remembered.“Oh right, that Dread fellow.” Norik said to himself. He walked past the statue, deciding to check it out later, when he heard a voice.“Turn... around.”Norik was confused. Should he do it? Why not. He spun around, double headed sword at the ready, and saw no one there.“Show yourself! I am a high ranking official! I am not afraid to kill! You would best explain yourself!” Norik said.“I am showing myself.”Still Norik saw nobody.“Right here.”Norik looked from side to side, behind the statue and still saw nothing.“This is not funny.” Norik said.“This is not either.” The voice said, and suddenly Norik’s head felt like it was going to explode. He dropped to knees, dropping his sword and shield, and held his head.“Stop! Stop!” Norik cried.“I can be benevolent, but I can much easier be cruel.” The voice said. Norik looked up, fumbling for his sword.“The.. statue?” Norik meekly asked.“Not a statue. Coffin. Sarcophagus. Tomb. I am trapped inside this, and I need your help.” The voice said.“If this is a joke from that Dreaddude, he will have another coming..” Norik said, head swimming.“This is no joke. I do not joke. If Dreaddude was the one who brought me out of the ground, then I am thankful for his assistance, but he knows not who I am. Tell me, who are you?” the sarcophagus said.“Tell me who you are first? Then I will think to answer.” Norik responded. Not in the mood for this, the sarcophagus sent forth another burst of pain into Norik’s head. Norik fell again. Finally, he worked up the energy to speak. “I am Norik Prime, Protectinator of Metrutron.”“A.. Prime?” the sarcophagus said.“Yes.” Norik said, feeling woozy.“Tell me.. are there.. more, of you? More Primes? Are you the leader, of our planet now?” the sarcophagus asked.Norik tried hard to answer clearly. “Yes, Matanui Prime, I think he has someone he is training to be a Prime, ugh, there was a Manic Prime I think... No, not many. Right, Manic Prime is story character. Just me and Matanui Prime. And the one he is training.”“Interesting... very interesting.. do you lead this planet I asked. You have not answered.”Suddenly the pain stopped. “No, I do not. High Lord Protectinator Makutatron does. Then there is Lord Protectinator Matanui Prime, and then I, Protectinator Norik Prime.” Norik said.“Ah, I see. Well, I suppose you will want my name.” The voice said.“I would like to know it, yes.” Norik responded.“I, am Icarax the betray...ed.” Icarax said. Norik gasped and fell back down.“You mean Icarax the betrayer! Murderer of Metrutron!” Norik yelled, grabbing his sword.“Do not be hasty.” Icarax said. Once more pain racked Norik’s head, and he fell. “I was the betrayed. All I wanted was the best for Metrutron, to continue to empower the AllShiny. Metrutron prevented me from doing this, at some feeble excuse of a lesser species living on the planet which orbited a star we were going to use. He stopped me from serving my own planet! All I wanted was Metrutron safe for all eternity..” Icarax said, “and I have a feeling you want that too...”“Yes, I care for Metrutron, more than anything. It is my home,” Norik said, “But I do not think I can trust you at all.”“Why? Because Metrutron lied to all of you? He told you I betrayed him? He betrayed me! He betrayed us!” Icarax said.“I do not think I can believe you..” Norik said.“Whose word will you take? That of a long dead traitor to our noble home..” and here Icarax took a dramatic pause, “or the word of one of his victims?”Norik stopped, and looked over the sarcophagus. “So he trapped you in that for defending our home?” he asked.And then Icarax knew he had him.Over the following 40 years (not very long to Metrutronians) Icarax filled Norik’s head with lies, until Norik idolized Icarax. Icarax told him of the supposed superiority of their own race, of himself, and their planet. Personally, the last thing Icarax wanted was Norik Prime alive, but he needed his pawn. Eventually, Icarax made his move. He wanted Norik to bring his sarcophagus to Makutatron, where he would “convince”Makutatron to work on the continued survival of their planet, and they eventual release of Icarax from his prison.And to say the least, we know what became of that.Icarax turned the already anger prone Makutatron into a raging sociopath, who ordered a meeting of all Metrutron’s highest officials. He said that he needed the AllShiny’s power to help their race survive, and that if he couldn’t use it, then Metrutron would fall into ruin without his leadership.Naturally, everyone was divided in this. Lots of the more weak-minded fell for it, singing in the streets for “absolute power to Makutatron” and such. The smarter (and less back-stabby) saw the flaw in Makutatron’s logic, and said no.So in a rather bad show of leadership, Makutatron took one of the beings who defied him, and killed him before the planet.I think you can figure out how well that went.In the years before that Makutatron had begun building drones for “construction”, which was odd considering that what the Constructikuta were for. What I’m sure you’ve figured out was that these were for war. And he had just sort of released that info the hour before he killed that unfortunate detractor.Matanui Prime himself was the angriest, telling Makutatron there would be civil war if he kept this up. Makutatron then went onto the airways and told the whole planet that Matanui Prime and his “Autotoabots” had just declared war on him. Calling themselves “Deceptikuta”, after Icarax’s “betrayed freedom fighters” of old, (Hint: They weren’t really fighting for freedom) they fought.They fought for years and years and years and years, destroying Metrutron’s once beautiful cities, the Autotoabots moving the AllShiny away from the Deceptikuta as often as they could. Norik Prime secretly gave the locations of the AllShiny to the Deceptikuta every time it was moved, and the war kept going, for years and years and years and years. Norik pretended to fight for the Autotoabots, killing his own share of Deceptikuta, all the while selling the Autotoabots out to his master, Icarax.Icarax, meanwhile, was explaining to Norik how to make space bridges, so Icarax could bring his armies around the universe once he was freed. Of course, he needed Matanui Prime dead and the AllShiny in the Deceptikuta’s hands.And so, Norik built the space bridge pillars, Matanui kept the AllShiny moving, and Makutatron kept attacking. Norik ended up telling Matanui about the space bridge pillars, telling him “They can win us the war”,not telling him who had told him how to make them. Matanui believed him, as Norik had been Matanui’s mentor and oldest friend.The day came that Matanui told Norik that they were going to launch the AllShiny into space, and then using Norik’s space bridge pillars, transport it around the universe, keeping it away from Makutatron and his armies for good. Norik told this to Icarax who told this to Makutatron who told this to Flufskiron, who promptly (which Makutatron agreed with) decided to attack. And so the final battle on Metrutron began, which Flufskiron leading an attack on the place where the Autotoabots kept the AllShiny. The Autotoabots put up staunch resistance, however, and Flufskiron’s forces only advanced slowly. Makutatron grew bored of this and attacked by himself, going after the AllShiny building. Inside was Pohatubee and Wreckinators, where Makutatron destroyed Pohatubee’s vocal processor and killed two Wreckinators, and badly scarred the remaining three, tearing out LesoSpinn’s eyes, ripping JackaL’s arm off and nearly pulling iBrow’s spark thing out.Norik Prime, meanwhile, was going to activate his space bridge pillars and teleport the AllShiny into Deceptikuta hands, never got a chance. At some point, Deceptikuta ships had found out about, and the Terragator itself (captained by Dreadinock) shot Norik Prime’s ship out of the sky, and the space bridge pillars activated, and his burning ship teleported all the way to the moon above the Matoran planet.Matanui, having lost contact with Norik, feared the worst and launched the AllShiny anyways, much to the surprise of everybody. Makutatron saw it launch right before him and followed it immediately, which saved Pohatubee and the Wreckinators from being killed. The Wreckinators got Pohatubee off, and held back advancing Deceptikuta forces as Matanui Prime and the remainder of his forces boarded ships and moved out of there.The Autotoabot ships separated, hoping to find the AllShiny. They lost contact with each other, losing scouts on worlds and running into Deceptikuta. One of the last few ships was Matanui’s own, and he launched Pohatubee onto an unknown world in the solar system they were currently exploring.On that planet, Pohatubee found a clue; Project Frosty and Captain Ithinkimbald.What happened next you’ve already read.END OF CHAPTERMTL

Great chapter! I don't think Hafu will enjoy his life. He might enjoy all of Zuckerburg's money....Everytime I see the word Zuckerburg, I think Zoidberg.WOOP WOOP WOOP WOOP WOOPWOOP MTL

In the past Roa hasn't had the most shaping on her MOCs, yes. However, I was extremely impressed with her recent Komodo MOC, as it has great shaping in addition to size. I'd actually mention that one here, along with the aforesaid The Rack.~B~I was going to name one, but Komodo just got my vote.MTL

Happy birthday! Alles gut zum Geburtstag! Whatever the French equivalent is which I have forgotten!MTL

Like most of the crowd here (and anyone who bought all the original Toa) I like the orignal masks the best. But the Pakiri, Hau and Kakama were always my favourite. The only real interesting masks I got was from one mask pack I bought once (the only one I bought) and it had: gold(ish) Pakiri, purple Pakiri (like Nuparu's) and blue Kakama. I have no idea what ever happened to the Kakama, because I remember having right up until 2004, then I think I probably traded if for a Bohrak or something....MTL

Vamprah. The year he was released. He was the only set I got that year, and my last one as well. I stopped collecting after that, and recently gave all my old sets and parts away to a local charity. I really didn't need them anymore. And considering that most of the final sets were Av-Toran builds, I think I saved a lot of money... :PMTL