ManiacToaLaco

I do not think I've ever seen a better TransforMOC. Great job! I really like the face, I find that doing a good face is really hard to do... MTL

Malevolence, you've just made Up a far more terrifying movie for me.. MTL

Dinobots would be awesome. I really don't want Megatron resurrected though. He had already been brought back once, and this time I think Optimus would make sure the Body is gone. And Megatron appeared for literally less than 6 minutes in the movie. I was so disapointed. And I didn't understand, he said that he and Sentinal were to meet up on the planet at some point. But I though Megatron went there because he was chasing the AllSpark? For the Fallen? They don't even mention the Fallen in the movie! And what are the chances that Sentinel would've ended up on THAT moon of all moons? (well, if the ship had already been on it's way there, pretty good I guess..) Also, in the beginning Optimus said Sentinal got shot down at the end of the war. But then we see him flying into the moon, his ship still on fire, presumably thousands of years later? I know the answer Michael Bay Of course, it could still be the writers fault, but somebody had to notice these at somepoint.. MTL

He shot down Batman's plane with a pistol. That's either extremely awesome or extremely lazy writing. I personally think Dark Knight Joker was better, but I do think the '89 Batman Joker felt a bit more like the Joker.. Fixed It was Untergang, not Undergang, all though I understand why it would be easy to make that mistake. I myself make it sometimes. In that movie... Bruno (I don't remember if his name has an umlaut or not) Ganz did such an amzing job of that role... it was terrifying, to say the least. My person top villian would have to be the Ring from Lord of the Rings. I knwo Sauron was the big bad, but he just a flaming eye ball the whole time. The ring itself really did the most evil. Darth Vader, of course, is a close second. I don't like the prequel movies, but Darth Vader reminds why I loved Star Wars when I was little. Megatron from Transformers would be my third. Too hard to explain why... But Megatron. Say it! It just sounds mean.. And Makuta of course! MTL

Fun Commemtary: Ah, the introduction of Autotoabots, one of the msot important chapters in the first Transonicle. Aside from all the others. This cotained old information, as well as technically started the "forget Wipeout gag" since I forgot what his alt mode was, then forgot to give him any lines. Actually, what does Wipeout transmoc into? Some sort of small Metrutronion scout vehicle. I have been planning on having Jaller escape a few times on Wipeout, but have never gotten around to it. Just so you know, the Autotoabot cast for Transonicle 1 was: Matanui Prime = Optimus PrimeLezz = JazzHydraxhide = IronhideKopatchet = RatchetPohatubee = BumblebeeGalcee = ArceeDakama Prime = Guest star (KohlidudeandDakama)Phoenix Prime = Guest star (Toa Phoenix)Wipeout = Guest star (Boxorak the azure noob)Tahkan Metra = Guest star (Xykena)Blue Flame = Guest star (Master of Madness)Vakama Maximus = Guest star (Vakama Montana) TRANSONICLECHAPTER 10THE ARRIVALJaller, Hahli and the Camaro starred into the sky. A fiery rock was breaking up in the sky, splitting into 11 large smaller meteors. The passed overhead, continuing into the night sky. <Follow me, kiddies!> the Camaro’s radio said as its doors opened."I have a bad feeling about this." said Jaller in an obvious Star Wars parody, evening mimicking Han Solo's voice.ON A FARM SOMEWHERE The first flaming rock landed in the field. As it turns out, it wasn’t a rock, but a small, metallic pod, big enough to hold a Matoran. The pod transformed into a small, Matoran height-robot. It looked around, saw nothing, then transformed into a small speeder thing and zoomed off.AT THE TOHU MEMORIAL The next pod landed near the statue of Tohu sitting in his chair. By near, I mean in a near-by pond. Annoyed, it crawled out. This robot was larger than the first, about 23 feet. It looked around, saw a blue sports car parked nearby, scanned, then transformed into a direct copy of it. To the dismay of the Matoran and Turaga in the park, it drove across the grass, mercilessly destroying it. It got onto the street and headed for the destination.MIDDLE OF TA-METRUThe next pod fell in front of a police station. This was an odd police station, with only G8 GT Sedan’s for police cruisers. This robot was 25 feet tall, and cared very much about his appearance. Scanning one of these sleek vehicles, it too headed for the destination, sirens blazing, ignoring the accidental fire it had set on the police station.THE SIDE OF A HIGH-WAY IN GA-METRU This time, two pods fell, just 100 feet beside a highway. One pod was not a pod in fact, just a simple protective shell around a certain Phoenix robot. This fellow, who had just come from the future, was not aware that Phoenix’s were not present here. This 30 foot tall red and gold robot with wings on his shoulders helped up the being beside him, who was 35 feet of silver, spikes and weaponry. “You know where we’re supposed to meet up?” the red-gold bot asked. “No idea Phoenix.. Prime? Is it? Phoenix Prime. Sounds weird I think.” The silver one said. “Well, where I come from, it’s perfectly normal.” Phoenix Prime said. “And you come from the future, sent by the AllShiny? I really don’t believe it.” The silver one said. “All true however.” Phoenix Prime said. “Still sounds weird. Well, now we need alt modes I guess. Matanui said so.” The silver one said. “I’m keeping my phoenix mode. I just like it.” Phoenix Prime said. “Gee, Phoenix Prime. I wonder why.” The silver one said. “Alright, Tahkan Metra. You haven’t taken one yet.” Phoenix said. “I don’t see any I like. So I’m keeping my original mode.” Tahkan said. Phoenix looked puzzled. “The pod?” he asked. Tahkan shot him an angry look. “No, my Ussanui! Let’s just go to Matanui..” and they transmoced into their alt modes, a phoenix and a large, weapon covered Ussanui. The two flew towards the destination, Matoran in cars below screaming as they passed. TA-METRU AGAIN One pod landed in a car dealership, one much nice than Bobby Ahkmou’s finest trash. He looked around, and saw a nice silver Pontiac Solstice. “Kickin’.” The 18 foot shiny silver robot said, transforming into it and driving to the destination.ALSO IN TA-METRU Another pod landed by a motorcycle store. This robot was barely 11 feet tall, and raised a weapon as it looked around. Seeing no enemies, it picked a blue Motorcycle, scanned it, and drove off. Although, it did not have a driver, which seemed perfectly normal to her.A TRUCK YARD, SURPRISINGLY, IN TA-METRU The two largest pods landed in a truck yard. One robot was 39 feet, the other 44. They looked, saw no enemies, and were pleased. “Seems like a peaceful planet.” The taller one said. “So far.” The shorter one said “I sent the others a rendezvous point about 8 kilometres away. We must hurry.” “Hmm. Most of these are not large enough for us to compact into... ahah, what about these two?” The taller one said. Before them was a Purple Peterbilt 739, and a red and blue version of the same truck with flame deco on it. “What’s with the fire decorations?” the taller one asked. “I do not know Dakama, but I feel like it should be mine.” The shorter one said as he scanned it. “Alright sir.” Dakama said, transmocing into the purple version. The two new trucks drove off to the destination.NUHRII’S HOUSE, TA-METRU One pod landed at Nuhrii’s family’s home, right in their pool. At the sound, Nuhrii and his little sister ran out of the house to look at the disturbance. Suddenly, a large robot, 33 feet tall with cannons on his arms, rose out of the water. Nuhrii screamed “Don’t hurt me or my truck! Here, take my little sister! Just leave me and my poor truck alone!” The robot eyed Nuhrii with disgust, and seriously considered exterminating it. Nuhrii’s little sister ran up to the robot and asked it “Excuse me, are you the Naming Day fairy?” The robot looked at Nuhrii, who was crying in fear, and back at the little Matoran. “Yes, but don’t tell anyone, or I’ll turn your brother to dust.” It said. The little Matoran ran off giggling, while Nuhrii cried. The robot walked off, leaving huge foot prints behind it. It stepped into the front yard as Nuhrii’s parents ran out of the house. “My poor babies! Are you okay?” Nuhrii’s Mom asked. “We’re okay,” said Nuhrii’s sister, “but Nuhrii ask the Naming Day fairy to kill me instead of his truck.” Then the little Matoran giggled, “Whoopsies, now it’ll have to turn Nuhrii to dust!” Nuhrii’s parents looked angrily at Nuhrii, but then Nuhrii’s dad looked at the wrecked yard and pool. “My pool! My yard!” he cried, dropping to his knees. Suddenly, they heard a large crash. They ran to the front where they saw that Nuhrii’s GMC Topkick and been violently destroyed, while an identical copy of it drove off in the distance.GUESS WHERE? TA-METRUThe last pod landed in the middle of a street. Having violently miscalculated his landing, the explosions and fires that followed it, and the otherwise embarrassment, he quickly tried to find an alt mode. Luckily, he had landed in front of a hospital, and quickly scanning an ambulance, transformed and drove away.A TOTALLY DIFFERENT YET NEARBY PART OF TA-METRUThe Camaro with Jaller and Hahli went into an alley, which was pretty wide by alley standards. Jaller and Hahli got out of it as the Camaro transformed into a robot again. They looked around and waited, wondering why they were here, and how would they explain to their parents why they were out so late. Then they heard the horn. It was booming, and a cat’s Rahi equivalent hissing somewhere in the distance could be heard. Two long-nosed Peterbilt trucks came down the alley and stopped in front of them. They heard more engines roaring, a sound that sounded like a hawk screech, some brakes activating, then a loud noise that was too indescribable for a lazy author to describe. They looked around them. They were surrounded by cars that had all begun to transform. This included a hawk thing and two vehicles that were out of that world. They watched the red and blue Peterbilt transform, rising higher and higher until legs could be seen on it, then arms, then a large, window chested body, and finally the head, which looked like a grey Kanohi Hau. They looked at the other vehicles and bird. They had all become massive robots, the smallest being one of the unknown vehicles, who's robot form was the same size as Jaller and Hahli, to the largest being the massive purple Peterbilt that stood behind the red and blue one. Then the red and blue robot bent down on one knee and looked at them and started to speak, "I am Matanui Prime, leader of the Autotoabots, from the planet Metrutron. Are you Jaller-" CRASH "Hydraxhide! What did you break?"Nothing, just a little Matoran person in this building." “Hydraxhide! I look away for a second and already you contaminate our presence of this planet with senseless violence!” “It was an accident. I’m sure it was going to expire soon anyways.” Hydraxhide said, who was 33 feet tall, black, transformed into the GMC Topkick and had cannons on his arms. He was a tiny bit violent."Err, anyways, are you keeper of the bBay auction number 9897604?""Um, the glasses?" Jaller said to the robot known as Matanui Prime. “Yes, the glasses. Do have them safe?” “I do, but another robot sort of wanted them..” “We know. That was a bad robot. We’re the good guys.” The small, silver Pontiac Solstice robot said. “Uh-huh.” Hahli said."Great, Now I can introduce everyone. First, my first lieutenant, Lezz." Matanui Prime said, pointing to the silver Pontiac robot."This is a kickin' pad we have here." said Lezz, as he tried to jump on the car behind him, but missed, and landed in a pile of garbage."This is my violent and rather uncharismatic weapon specialist, Hydraxhide." Matanui Prime pointed to Hydraxhide."You feelin' lucky runner?" said Hydraxhide as he pointed one of the massive guns on his arm at Jaller and Hahli."HYDRAXHIDE!!!" yelled Matanui Prime.“I just was going to show him my guns! Is there anything wrong with that?""I know about your lose trigger finger." Matanui Prime scolded."I told you last time was an accident?""Apparently, destroying a planet is an "accident".""It was gonna' blow up anyway." Hydraxhide protested."I’m sure it was. Anyway, this is our medical officer, Kopatchet.""The boy's feeling levels for the girl suggest he wants to make out with her. Other way, not so much." Kopatchet said. He was large, 30 feet at least, white and had a telescope thing in place of his right eye. He transformed into the ambulance. Jaller and Hahli scratched their heads at his statement. This really wasn't something they needed to know."Easy there Kopatchet. This is our special operations commander, Galcee." Said Matanui Prime. “You don’t happen to know where the Deceptikuta that attacked you went, do you? I could shoot his head off if you like.” Galcee said in a feminine voice. Galcee was tiny, 11 feet tall and turned into a motorcycle. She was also blue."Why is she a girl? You’re robots aren’t you, meaning you don't genders?" Jaller asked.“You are over thinking things. This is Tahkan Metra, our main air cover.” Matanui said, pointing to the large, spiky, 35 foot tall silver Autotoabot that transmoced into an Ussanui. Tahkan growled at Jaller. “What’s his problem?” Jaller asked. “Doesn’t think we should be here.” Said the shorter blue robot beside Tahkan. “This is Blue Flame. He is our sniper. Although we never have him snipe anything really.” Matanui said. “I’ll watch your back in a fight.” Blue Flame said. He was 23 feet tall, blue, transformed into a sports car, and had one arm transformed into a large sniper rifle. He turned it back into a hand. “And this is Vakama Maximus.” Matanui said, pointing to the red Autotoabot beside Blue Flame. “Like my armour? I do, nice shiny red.” Vakama Maximus said. He was 25 feet tall, red, turned into the G8 GT that accidentally destroyed a police station. He was a bit self-absorbed, but one of the Autotoabot’s best fighters. "Odd names in my opinion." said Jaller."Well no one cares about your opinion." said Tahkan Metra. Matanui shook his head at him. “This is my second in command, Dakama Prime.” Matanui said, pointing to the large purple Autotoabot behind him. “Pleasure to protect your planet.” Dakama said. He was 44 feet tall, a bit thinner that Matanui, and had a very large axe on his back. He also transformed into a Peterbilt truck. “But I thought Lezz was your second command.” Jaller said. Lezz laughed at this. “I wish as much!” he laughed. “Second in Command is higher rank that First lieutenant in the Autotoabot military.” Dakama explained."That’s Phoenix Prime, who is our newest member. He is from the future apparently.” Matanui said, pointing to the large red and gold Autotoabot with wings on his back and his Phoenix alt mode’s head on his chest. “I am. The AllShiny sent me back in time to help in your fight against the Deceptikuta and protect this planet.” Phoenix Prime said. “Uh huh.” Jaller said, “Wait, Decepti-what? Allspark?” “No, AllShiny.” Kopatchet said. “The Deceptikuta are our enemies, the traitors of our people, who tried to take the AllShiny for their own purposes.” Matanui said. “Oh. Of course.” Jaller said, very confused. “And you already know your guardian, Pohatubee.” Matanui said, pointing to the Camaro robot. Pohatubee's radio sang out <Float like a butterfly, sting like a bee~~~ it’s a bumblebee!> Then Pohatubee's arm turned into a gun and shot a building. Once more Matanui shook his head. Hydraxhide laughed."And I do believe that’s everyone!!" said Matanui Prime. “AHEM!” a voice said. Everyone turned to look at the source, which was the Matoran-height Autotoabot. “Oh, Wipeout, how could I forget!” Matanui said. “Yes, how could you. I do hope you don’t proceed to make a running gag of this, sir.” Wipeout said. “I wouldn’t dream of it. Never again. I’m sorry, my friend.” Matanui apologized. Wipeout nodded his head. “Well, now I guess you want to get those glasses.” Jaller said. Matanui was about to respond when Hahli spoke up."What, who are you again?" said Hahli, who wasn't paying attention the whole time because I didn't really have her in this part."Fine, I'll say it again."He ended up saying it about three times again, actually.END OF CHAPTER MTL

It's entirly possible... I'm glad you liked it. I actually haven't thought of what would happend when Johnson would meet Jaller and co. I may have to take that idea of yours... I probably haven't thought of it since Johnson really has to stay with Jodkra, what with being Jodkra's main weapon and all. Ofcourse, I imagine it wouldn't end well if a Deceptikuta decided to pick Johnson up while in rocket mode. Wouldn't end well for the Deceptikuta, that is.. MTL

I spelled it wrong? Arrgghh, Word corrected without me noticing.. Oh, I assure you, Shockvak will be much more a fight than he was in Transonicle 2, and in the movie. And with the Drill Dragon, things will not be easy for Matanui, the Wreckinators, Jodkra and Hydraxhide. Although, the Wreckinators will prove to be a bitmore than Shockvak bargained for aswell... Next chapter will probably be sometime on the weekend.. MTL

I agree. It was agood movie, but I'm just not sure about something. To me, it didn't have a "Transformers" feel to it. It just seemed like a classic alien invasion movie with robots that happened to turn into vehicles. Plus, Megatron went out without a fight. Speaking of which, Optimus had too much "Kill them all" and not enough "Noble". The first movie, he didn't want to kill Megs. Now he's just "tear their faces off". I know this isn't G1 Prime, but still.Laserbeak was cool, though. EDIT: While I still have it on my mind, does anyone know what the song is when Sam is going to his job interviews? I'd put in the movie and look in the credits, but i'm too lazy at the moment. Kalhiki I think he had to kill them all, considering the Decepticons weren't the sort of bots to "listen to a talking to", but I agree about the not enough noble/to much kill. I'm not 100% sure how you get a medium of those two traits, but I'm sure it can't be that hard. Optimus: Freedom is the right of all sentient beings!*shoots Decepticon in the face*Optimus: Except for Decepticons. MTL

Fun Commenttary: 70 words short of 3000. Listen to my own advise? Naaawww. Also, I decided to call it the Drill Dragon. Why? I like alliterative names for monsters. TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 3IT’S WHAT I LIKE TO CALL “A PLOT” METRU-NUI, NEAR THE COLISEUM Jaller sped through traffic as fast as his car could travel, which was not very much. And due to the lack of, uh, competence, that Matoran suffer from, traffic was bad. Jaller made half a kilometre in 10 minutes. Knowing that Hahli had been right about him being late, he realized he needed a new approach. Using skill reminiscent of drowning cow, he turned his car onto the sidewalk, where there was no one. For some reason, no one in Metru-Nui used the sidewalks except for driving on. Jaller made better time using the sidewalk and made it to the building his job interview would take place at, only 1 and a half hour late. Parking violently in the parking lot, he ran out to the entrance, where a large Onu-Matoran stood. “Let me through, I have an interview to get to!” Jaller said, packing some papers back into a brief case he had brought for no discernible reason. The Onu-Matoran did not answer. “Come on!” Jaller pleaded. Still, the Onu-Matoran was silent. “Fine.” Jaller finally said, attempting to walk around the Onu-Matoran. “None shall pass.” The Onu-Matoran said. “Oh NOT THIS!” Jaller screamed, “Be serious, just let me go to the interview.” “None shall pass.” The Onu-Matoran responded. “I’m really not in the mood for this! Just move over a bit..” Jaller said. The Onu-Matoran turned his head slightly and looked Jaller in the eye. “I move for no man.” “But I’m a Matoran!” Jaller exclaimed. “Then you shall die.” The Onu-Matoran said. He then took the briefcase from Jaller’s hands and swung at Jaller with it. Jaller, knowing what I was doing, quickly karate-chopped the Onu-Matoran’s shoulders and knees. The limbs promptly fell off and the Onu-Matoran dropped. “Ah right, we’ll call it a draw then.” The Onu-Matoran said sheepishly. “Just look on the bright side of life.” Jaller said, not believing he actually just had to do that. He continued into the building as the Onu-Matoran threw taunts at him. Jaller walked to the Matoran at reception. “Uh, yea hi I’m here for the job interview?” Jaller said. “Are you Mr. Ithinkimbald?” the Matoran asked, not looking up from the computer screen. Jaller looked around embarrassed. “I prefer Jaller..” he said. “Sir, this is a professional environment and we work on a last name basis.” The Matoran responded. “How can I sound professional when I’m being called Ithinkimbald? Huh?” Jaller asked. “While your point is valid-“ “Look, just tell me where to go for the interview!” Jaller said, starting to get angry. “You do realize you’re almost a hundred minutes late?” the Matoran said. “If your door man hadn’t gone all Holy Grail on me I would’ve gotten here sooner.” Jaller said. “I’m sorry, he usually does Blackadder.” The Matoran said, “Well, it looks like you’re on the fourth floor. Go to Mr. Awesome’s office.” “Mr... Awesome?” Jaller said. “Mr. Awesome’s. He prefers the plural, Mr. Ithinkimbald. Good luck.” “Ok then....” Jaller said, going to the elevator. He walked into the elevator, where a short Ko-Matoran stood watching him. “Oh hi icytoa1.” Jaller said. “Who?” the Matoran said. Jaller took a closer look at the Matoran. “Oh sorry, confused you with another Ko-Matoran.” He then turned around and pressed the “4” button on the flour selector thing. There was an awkward silence for a few seconds. “That’s racist.” The Ko-Matoran said. “The 4?” Jaller asked, surprised. “Confusing me with another Ko-Matoran. That’s like me confusing you with a Le-Matoran.” The Ko-Matoran said. “Considering I’m a Ta-Matoran, I don’t see how.” Jaller said, quickly getting tired of this conversation. “I do.” Said the Ko-Matoran, who got really close to Jaller as he said it. Jaller leaned back away from the Ko-Matoran. “It’s my stop.. I gotta get off here.” He said. “I’ll be watching you, punk.” The Ko-Matoran said, watching Jaller as he walked out. Jaller turned back, and the Ko-Matoran continued to stare at him as the doors closed. Worried about this job already, Jaller walked on. He paused near a desk with a Po-Matoran. “Excuse me,” he began “Can you point out where Mr. Awesome..’s office is?” he ended Po-Matoran, without saying a word, pointed down to the end of the hall, where a door, painted light blue and red, stood. “Uh, thanks.” Jaller said. He walked down the hall, and got strange looks from equally strange Matoran. He reached the door and opened it. “Oh no.” Jaller said. “Oh yes. Welcome Mr.. Ithinkimbald, is it? I’m Mr.Awesome’s.” Said Takua. “I really wish you would stop appearing in this train wreck.” Jaller said. KO-METRU You know last chapter how I said there was abandoned villages in the Metrus? Well, there’s some in Ko-Metru too. And one of those was Shockvak’s destination. After leaving the Terragator, talking to Nihiscream for a little bit about Norik Prime, and then getting onto a small ship and flying to Metru-Nui, Shockvak looked down through winds full of snow. “We cannot get much closer! Our advanced technology can only do so much!” the pilot said. “Is that so.” Shockvak responded “Very well. Return to the Terragator with news of my success.” “But you haven’t gotten the drill-bot yet!” the pilot asked. “Do not fret. Chances of success for this is 98.9%. I will not fail.” Shockvak said, who then jumped out of the ship. The pilot shrugged and headed back to the Terragator. Shockvak fell, snow blowing wildly around him. Suddenly, he hit the ground. Standing up, he looked around. Snow, snow and more snow. However, his advanced eye looking things were advanced enough to allow him to find his way. It wasn’t hard, seeing as there was a sign saying “Abandoned village: stay away” pointing to the village. Shockvak walked forward, then decided speed would help here. He transmoced into his spiky purple tank alternate form, and drove on. After a few minutes of winding roads and snow, he came across a police vehicle stuck on the side of the road. How odd, Shockvak thought. The Matoran driver was waving frantically in the air for help, not aware of what he was waving at. Shockvak continued forward for a bit, and then the Matoran noticed that it wasn’t an SUV he was waving at. Shockvak fired his turret, and the car exploded. The Matoran ran for cover. Shockvak transmoced and stood over the Matoran. “Stop, stop!” The Matoran cried. Shockvak eyed him curiously. He then raised his cannon at the Matoran and fired. Shockvak continued on to the village, which was now in view. He transmoced once more and looked at the village. Somewhere below to earth nearby, was the Drill-Dragon. THE MOON Nihiscream walked annoyed-ly around the room. “That was so USELESS!” he cried. “Nihiscream, shut up.” Flufskiron said. “Why? All Shockvak did was tell us we need the Sun Matrix to revive Norik, and it was destroyed in the Sun-Eaterer by Matanui!” Nihiscream shouted. “So? Why do we even need Norik? He’s dead or deactivated, big deal.” Skystrike said. Nihiscream looked as him angrily, and was about to say something nasty, but Flufskiron was the one who spoke. “Because he’s the only one who knows how to use the pillars to control the space bridge.” “But why do we need a space bridge in the first place?” Skystrike said. “Imagine all the warriors we could bring in if we could! The forces we still have on Metrutron could be transported to the Matoran planet, and we could use that as our new home. There is nothing left on Metrutron for us.” Flufskiron said. “We have enough troops now! The planet could be ours! We have ships! We have drones! Bring the rain! The fiery rain of the DECEPTIKUTA!” Nihiscream ranted. “What about the Autotoabots and several million Matoran?” Skystrike asked. “Our we sure it’s even that many Matoran? It has to be a thousand at the most..” Thunderstrike said. “I don’t see how either poses a problem to us. Like Nihiscream said, we have to numbers.” Skystrike said once more. “Because, as Nihiscream knows, they work together in a way that destroys us. They support each other. The Autotoabots do the main hits while the Matoran attack from behind.” Flufskiron said. This guy knows his stuff. “As much as I hate to admit it, Flufskiron is.. right. Most of us don’t know how to deal with Autotoabots, let alone Matoran and our ex-brothers. But.. if the Autotoabots were to be removed, I will say the Matoran would fall much for easily.” Nihiscream said, pondering the basis of a new idea. “But how? Somehow they keep beating us in open combat. Our advantage is our ships, and they have Omega Kaita!” Skystrike said. “Ships, that’s it! The true weakness of the Autotoabots is their lack of ships, and the ones they do have are not made for ship to ship combat.” Flufskiron said, his own plan in the foundations of planning-ness. “So we get them into a ship, and destroy it while they’re all in it!” Nihiscream said. “How will we get them into a ship? They don’t even have one!” Skystrike said. “I think they fixed it themselves. It appears while Soundprah was off duty in here with us, a cloaked Autotoabot ship sneaked past us.” Nihiscream said. Quiet. “Soundprah?” Nihiscream asked again. It appears, at some point, the Deceptikuta had vanished. ON THE DINOBOT Soundprah walked silently. No one knew he was here, and he was fine with that. It would be better if no one did. There were enemies on the moon here, and Soundprah knew everyone of them. His target was far too precious and disliked to let it be seen by the average Deceptikuta. Turning corners, he found his location. His informant had not been wrong. Activating the pass code, the door opened. Soundprah walked in. “Soo, at least some of my warriors stay loyal..” Makutatron said. PEST HEADQUARTERS Matanui surveyed Ramembolt’s, Nujack’s, LesoSpinn’s, JackaL’s, iBrow’s and Jodkra’s new alt modes. Ramembolt had chosen a stealth bomber, Nujack chose a Mercedes Benz (fancy) LesoSpinn and JackaL took sports cars covered in weaponry, while iBrow took a Bugatti Veyron, also with weaponry (albeit more... streamlined weaponry). Jodkra took an SSC ultimate Aero, and Johnson remained Jodkra’s missile launcher. “Geez Matanui, why are doing such long explanations and such?” Hydraxhide asked, as his and his team had returned from Po-Metru. “Shh. Autotoabots, I’m glad you’ve chosen forms. These will help you blend in..” Matanui said, noticing the Wreckinators prominent weaponry “A bit, at least.” “These’ll help us blend Deceptikuta, all right.” iBrow said. “Blend ‘em into bits!” JackaL also said. “I like these guys.” Hydraxhide said. Matanui looked at the recruits. “It’s time we saw if they can fight as well as they say. Hydraxhide, and Vakama Maximus, supervise their skills against the practice targets. Kopatchet, you well then check to see if their systems are 100%.” Matanui said. “Alright, you lot follow me to my favourite room.” Hydraxhide, motioning for them to follow. Hydraxhide and Vakama Maximus led the recruits into the training room, which contained cardboard cut outs of Deceptikuta. “Hydraxhide, why’re they this flimsy material?” Nujack asked. “The Matoran couldn’t afford us to keep using more lifelike dummies. Lazy I think.” Hydraxhide responded. “You only did blow all of them up and half the room.” Vakama Maximus said. “Nothing that couldn’t be fixed with a little grease.” Hydraxhide said. He then turned around and looked at the new Autotoabots. “Alright, what you do if so us how well and fast you can wreck the dummy. Ramembolt, you first.” Ramembolt looked at the dummy at the other end of the room. Suddenly, he turned invisible, and instead of using his amazing robot weapons, he ran up behind it and pushed it over. “Did it!” he yelled. Hydraxhide and Vakama Maximus looked unimpressed. “Uh huh.” Hydraxhide said “You can go on recon with Tahkan Metra. Nujack, you’re up.” Nujack walked into position as the target was set back onto its feet by Vakama Maximus. When Vakama Maximus was back to a safe spot, he motioned for Nujack to begin. Nujack took out a grenade he made, and threw it. Nothing happened. “Y’know, it’s always my grenades that do not explode. Funny.” Nujack said. “I really don’t think so.” Hydraxhide said. Nujack took out a pistol and shot at the cut out. Every shot missed. “I’ve been out of practice for a while..” Nujack said. Hydraxhide looked bored. Nujack then took out a Frisbee and threw it. The Frisbee bounced harmlessly off the cut out, and rolled half-way down the room. It then exploded. “We’ve.. seen enough.” Vakama Maximus said. Nujack walked back. “Jodkra, you’re next.” Hydraxhide told Jodkra. “With or without Johnson?” Jodkra asked. Hydraxhide shrugged. “Whatever floats yer boat.” Jodkra motioned to Johnson, who jumped, transmoced, and was caught by Jodkra. Jodkra then transmoced and drove towards the target. Spinning, he transmoced again, and in mid-air, fired his rocket launcher (which was Johnson) at the target. The target promptly exploded. Jodkra posed. “Now THAT’S what we’re looking for!” Hydraxhide said. Jodkra walked back, to much applause. “Alright, Wreckinators,” Vakama Maximus said, “While I’m sure you’re all perfectly fit to blow open this wall, I still need to see you actually destroy the target.” “At the same time?” LesoSpinn asked. “Preferably one at a time.” Vakama Maximus said. “Aright, I’ll go first.” iBrow said. He turned to the new cut out. Running at it, he took out his shotgun, and fired. The shot knocked one of the cut out’s arms off. When he got right up to it, he took out his daggers and cut its knees out. While it was on the ground, he took out his hammer, and smashed its cardboard head in. “You just got wrecked.” iBrow said, the cut out bursting into flames. Vakama Maximus clapped. “Amazing, very great work, although points deducted for the pun.” Hydraxhide said. Vakama Maximus looked at Hydraxhide. “Actually, I think puns help with the effect.” He said. “Actually, I don’t.” Hydraxhide responded. “Next one up, LesoSpinn!” LesoSpinn fist bumped iBrow as they walked by each other. LesoSpinn then locked eye with the target. “Say, LesoSpinn,” Ramembolt asked “How did you lose that eye?” “That’s irrelevant.” LesoSpinn said, who then rushed at the target. He shot a smokescreen at it, and the target disappeared. He then took out his grenades, attached 3 to its back, and walked back, ignoring the massive explosion. Pohatubee, who had been watching, started playing “Cool Guys don’t look at explosions”. Nujack however, noticed this. “Hey, Pohatubee, why do you talk through that radio?” he asked. Before Pohatubee could say something on his radio, Vakama answered for him. “He got his talking bits ripped out by Makutatron, I remember, I was there. Kopatchet tried to fix it, but it didn’t work out to well.” Kopatchet, who had just finished his checkups on all the new Autotoabots, looked up at this. “Hey, I did a great job of fixing it. It just didn’t stay fixed. Several times.” Nujack walked over to Pohatubee and examined his neck. “Hmm, if I do this and that and more technobabble...” he said. Suddenly, a jolt went through Pohatubee. “I, I, I can talk! What’s more, I can sing without using that radio! Nujack! You’re amazing!” Pohatubee said excitedly. “Why, it’s nothing, it wasn’t very hard to fix, really.” Nujack said. “You are a miracle worker!” Pohatubee said. “I wouldn’t say that..” Nujack responded. “I would!” Pohatubee said. “Your right, I am!” Nujack said. The others looked on in disbelief. “I don’t believe it! And here I thought Kopatchet couldn’t fix it ‘cuz it was too broke.” Hydraxhide said. Kopatchet walked up to Pohatubee and Nujack. “It’ll probably burst into flame or something and Pohatubee will die!” he said. Nothing happened. “It’ll happen!” Kopatchet cried. “Wait, wait, wait! So, Kopatchet supposed to be the doctor, but he can’t fix anything worth scrap, but he can make things, while Nujack, who is supposed to be an inventor, can’t invent anything that works, but he can fix bots’ better than Kopatchet?” Jodkra said. “I guess so.” JackaL responded. “Wow. Didn’t see that coming.” Vakama Maximus said. Kopatchet, meanwhile, was fuming with rage. “JackaL,” he said “I believe it’s time you show them how well you can blow up the cut out.” “Uh, ok.” JackaL said. He turned around, took out his cannon and fired at the cut out, blowing it to pieces. “Done.” He said. “Well, that..” Vakama Maximus started to say. “Quick? It’s a cannon that uses super-magnetic coils to fire high-velocity, high density projectiles that hit so hard each shot creates a sonic boom that’ll turn most Deceptikuta into dust.” JackaL said as he put the cannon away. “Oh. Of course.” Vakama Maximus said. Suddenly, an alarm went off. Hewkii’s voice was heard on the loudspeaker. “Autotoabots, emergency call in Ko-Metru, Deceptikuta spotted, one Matoran fatality so far.” The Autotoabots readied themselves, and Matanui appeared in the door way. “Wreckinators, Jodkra, you’re with me. It’s time to see how good you do in the field. Pohatubee, Blue Flame, you head to Jaller. I feel it’s about time he’ll be in danger soon.” Matanui said. “Alright sir!” iBrow said. “Any news as to what it is?” Jodkra asked. Matanui shook his head. “No, but that’s a good point. Hydraxhide, come along, we might need the back up. Autotoabots, TRANSMOC AND ROLL OUT!” END OF CHAPTER NEXT CHAPTER: PREPARE FOR THE RETURN OF THE ACTION YOU'VE COME TO EXPECT FROM TRANSONICLE! MTL

Fun Commentary: This chapter has Pohatubee has a main character, all though he's not named. Frendox and Barritax are there aswell. I combined this chapter and the next one, since they were both rather short and were about the same thing really. TRANSONICLECHAPTER 9PLOT TAKES A STEP FORWARDJaller screamed like a little five year Ga-Matoran. This day just got worse and worse. As the little Matoran screamed, he looked up at the thing that picked him up. It was big, metallic, frightening monster robot thing that a few seconds ago had been a police car."I ask you again meatbag, are you Hotstud232? Where is the online auction number 9897604?? Tell me the answer!" it said, it’s frightening features scaring the Karzahni out of him.With the robot's rambling on about telling him the answer, Jaller got a good look at the face of it. The face was flat and had two spikes going down the middle. It also had bright red eyes and large mandible claw things, with many little teeth in between. He then looked at the body. The hood was now it’s chest, and it looked like the trunk had turned into legs, the doors and back tires had become big long arms that ended with massive claws, four on each hand. As Jaller inspected it, the robot got cranky. It smashed Jaller into the hood of a minivan, and held him down, bringing its massive face right up to Jaller and saying "Answer me!!! Are you Hotstud232??""My, my, my bBay account?! How do you know about it?" Jaller said back, hoping it wouldn't kill him."Yes your bBay account fool!! Tell me where it is!" it yelled, nearly crushing Jaller with its mouth."Where what is?" Jaller asked."The artifacts!!" It snapped."Um, I sold it!!" Jaller lied.“Your page indicates you had 0 bids and no views. You did not sell it!” it yelled. “I have it! I have it! I’ll give it to you! Just don’t kill me!” Jaller cried."No," it said, "I’m still going to kill you." With that it raised its claw into the air, hoping to smash Jaller. Jaller noticed that the robot had let go of him. He slid off of the car and under the robot. The robot's claw hit the minivan, but like a see-saw (Or tetor-toter, whatever you call it), the back of the minivan went up into the air and hit the robot in the head. The robot slipped backwards and hit his head into a pole, making him stumble and fall back onto the car, the car’s horn blazing in the robots ears.In Barritax's eyes...Barritax managed to get up, but with considerable pain. He saw Hotstud232 running off. Barritax got up and ran after him, slipping and sliding as he ran. He heard a crunch under one of his footsteps, realizing he had crushed the fleshie's two-wheeled motion vehicle. Barritax continued running, almost catching up to the meatbag. But a car that was in front of him was too big and Barritax tripped over it, landing on his face. Again.Back to the meatbag, I mean Jaller.....Jaller had heard the robot crush his dad's bike. He kept running, just escaping its claw. He ran around an SUV and ran on, the robot tripping over the SUV and crushing it as well. He ran out into broad daylight, straight into Hahli, knocking her off her moped."Jaller?! What are you doing?" She asked, getting up and hearing crashing sounds from the garage."We gotta run!! That thing is-" Jaller tried to explain, but was too late. The big robot had gotten up and ran outside, Hahli screaming as it ran at them, crushing her moped with one foot. As it was about to kill them, Jaller heard an engine roaring and a split second later, his Camaro had knocked the monster robot down. One of the Camaro's doors opened, as if it was a signal to get in or something."Get in!" He yelled."Don't have to tell me twice!!" she said back to him. As they drove off in the Camaro, Jaller looked back at the robot and saw that it had transformed again and was driving after them. Jaller looked back forward only to be thrown around on his seat as something bumped their little yellow saviour. Jaller looked and saw that the robot/police car had caught up to them and was bumping them with its front. Jaller took control of the wheel for a second and drove them onto another road. The sudden twist had the robot car drive off, hitting some garbage cans on the way. Jaller looked back to see if it was following them, but noticed it was already night, and the police car was gone."Great, I’m going to miss supper." he said.'How is this possible? I just had lunch 15 minutes ago!" Hahli asked."I don't know! We were just attacked by a giant robot car thing! I don't think I know anything anymore." Jaller responded, though it wasn't all that helpful. The Camaro turned a corner and turned its lights off, making the car totally silent. After a minute or so, the police car passed them. As it was passing though, the Camaro suddenly came to life and drove into the police car, sending the Camaro and police car off the road and into a small construction site, Matoran and all. The police car transformed before it hit the ground, giving it a softer landing, but not by much. The Camaro launched Jaller and Hahli out of their seats before it hit the ground, giving them a very painful landing. The Camaro landed perfectly on the ground, but that wasn't all. The Camaro started to transform like it did that one night, and like how the police car had done. Jaller watched as the top of the Camaro turned into arms that touched the ground and pushed the changing car higher. The front started to disfigure, and something resembling a head came up. The doors went up into the air, the back started to form legs, and the rest flipped, switched, rearranged, and disappeared. Soon, another robot had appeared, yellower than the police car one, and much friendlier looking. Meanwhile, the police car had gotten to his feet, and stared the Camaro-bot in the eye. The Camaro-bot jumped at the police car robot and the two collided, flipping and punching. The police car robot pushed the Camaro robot to the ground and turned around, launching something at Hahli and Jaller. It was a smaller robot that was shorter than the Matoran, but almost scarier than the two big robots. Jaller, for some strange reason, felt he needed to save Hahli. He jumped on the little robot, trying to fight it. But then a Ko-Matoran by the name of iceyto1 came out of a small building nearby and said, "Yeah, run TOWARDS the crazy robot. Well just twiddle our thumbs as it rips out your spleen."Hahli looked angrily at the Ko-Matoran, just as Jaller came running back screaming like a little girl, the mini robot on his head. Then the police car robot threw the Camaro robot at the shed icytoa1 came out of, crushing the shed, and potentially the Matoran. Pow!! Whack, flip, CRUNCH!! The Camaro-bot kicked the cop-bot back as it ran at him, then stood up and posed in an epic battle stance. The Cop-bot got back up, dodged a punch from the Camaro-bot, and punched him in the face. The Camaro-bot fell to the ground. He rolled back up, sent an uppercut at the cop-bot, and prepared to hit again when the cop-bot body slammed him. The Camaro-bot stumbled back a bit, and the cop-bot hit him a few more times. Suddenly, the Camaro-bot brought his fists down on the cop-bot’s head, and then kicked him in the face. Grabbing hold of the cop-bot’s shoulders, he flipped the enemy robot onto his back. He transformed one hand into a cannon and fired a few shots onto the cop-bot. He then jumped down to beat the cop-bot with his own fists, then the Camaro-bot’s fists.Jaller managed to throw the little robot to the ground, and took a second to look what had happened to his Camaro robot. He just managed to see his Camaro jump onto the robocop when he heard Hahli scream, "Jaller!!" Jaller looked back to see the little robot jump onto his face, it’s frightening little head hitting Jaller's forehead and then crawling onto the top of Jaller's head. When it finally got up there, it started to beat Jaller with its four fists."OWOWOWOWOW!!" he screamed as it hit him, hearing a crack in his mask start to form. Then he heard Hahli's footsteps going off into the distance...Hahli ran to the remnants of the shed. She looked at the pile of wood for a second and saw what she needed. She grabbed a power saw out off the rubble, but it broke in her hands."Stupid flimsy Megablocks power saw." She said. Then she saw something, not as good, about a smidge worse, but not too bad. She grabbed it and ran back, almost screaming as she was nearly hit by a stray missile from one of the two fighting robots.Jaller tried to hit the robot, but one or two of its little arms would hit his hand back while the other hands continued to beat Jaller's head. The whole time the little robot made high-pitched schrieking sounds. Jaller managed to see Hahli coming towards him with a....... butter knife. A dull, broken butter knife. With something green on it. The little robot made a sound that vaguely resembled laughter. Then Hahli hit it in the neck. The head fell to the ground, sparks coming out of the spot where it was hit. It struggled on the ground, barely able to move. Then Hahli took her purse and started to hit the robot with it until its struggles stopped. Then Jaller came over and kicked its head, the head landing in the pit where the bigger robots had been fighting. That was when the two Matoran noticed that the big robots were gone. Hahli turned around and screamed. The two robots had gotten' out of the pit and had ended up right behind the Matoran. Jaller and Hahli ran in two directions, Hahli dropping her purse, which had her cell phone in it.The two robots tussled and rolled and such, punching a kicking, until the yellow one rolled off. The cop-bot got to its feet and punched at the other. Dodging the punches and running back, it got away from the cop-bot. The Cop-Bot dropped everything and ran at the Camaro-bot. Prepared for this, the Camaro-bot stepped aside and tripped the Cop-bot. The Cop-bot fell head over heels into a deep pit, and disappeared.Jaller and Hahli ran over to the edge of the pit. The Cop-bot could be seen at the bottom lying there, motionless. The Camaro robot came up and looked down to the two little Matoran. Then they heard the sound of radio being switched to different stations.<HA, HA! YOU BIG WINNER!!" ~~~~"YOU HAVE WON A FREE" ~~~~~"Guardian for the battles to come, for I fear that" ~~~~"AHH! THE ALIENS THEY ARE-">"Um, okay. Who are you? Where are you from? Why are you talking though a radio? Can you talk?" Jaller asked, being a little annoying.<HO, HO, HO!! You ask a lot of questions little boy." *~~~~ "And the great beings came from the heavens," ~~~~ "He can't talk-"> This time there was no radio station being switched, but a disgruntled, ugly sounding, frightening, yet somewhat friendly and warm sounding voice that ended up sounding really, really odd, "mI N1m3 1s P0hat0b._^_".Jaller and Hahli couldn’t understand anything that the robot said. After a good minute or so, the robot turned back into the ugly, yellow Camaro. One door opened, as if a signal to get in."I’m not getting into that thing," Hahli said, "Especially since I know it’s a giant robot."Then the cars robot's radio activated again. <You must follow my lead, my young padawan.>"Hahli, you have to, if you want to do something exciting in your life, something different, some-""Jaller, no speeches please. I will only get in if you don't have any more of those speeches, okay?""But it was gonna be a good speec- fine. Let’s just get in the car.”As they were about to get in, Hahli remembered something. "My cell phone! I gotta go back for it!" she yelled. As Hahli ran to where she had dropped her purse, Jaller shrugged at the Camaro.Frendox climbed out of the hole. He had heard the Matoran female scream about her listening device. He crawled over to where her bag had fallen. Seeing it, he transscand it, and turned into an exact copy, just as the Matoran feel got there and picked up her purse, throwing the fake phone inside of it. “Kay, we can go now.” Hahli said, turning back to the car and Jaller.ON A HIGHWAYAs they drove somewhere, Hahli thought of something."Say, um, Mr.Car? If you can change your shape, why did you choose such Karzahni-mobile?''Then the car stopped and launched Jaller and Hahli out on the side walk. "Oh great! The second time I lose my car THIS week! I hope your happy Hahli." Jaller snapped at Hahli."Well sorry Mr-" Hahli started to say, but stopped. That’s when they saw a brand new, 2009 concept Camaro drive back to them. It stopped in front of Jaller and Hahli and opened its door. <Need a ride?> the cars radio sang out."Oh, I take it back, this is awesomeness!" Hahli exclaimed. Jaller and Hahli got in, and the car continued driving. Soon, they were in a park. The car stopped, got Jaller and Hahli out and Transformed back into a robot. It pointed into the sky, where a large, fiery thing was splitting up in the night sky. <We got friends here now, boys> the radio said. The Autotoabots were coming to town, and they were ready for Deceptikuta and junk. END OF CHAPTER MTL

Two words. Awe-Some. You are a genius, Seriously, how do you come up with all this? My favourite part. Genius, pore and simple genius. Matau was awesomely hilarious, as well as TREN KROM Awesome! MTL

Fun Commentary: This was always one of my favourite chapters. The interrogation scene always just tickled my funny bone. TRANSONICLECHAPTER 8JALLER’S WORST DAY YET SO FAR "Alright kid, where’s the sugar?" the Ko-Matoran asked. "Sugar!? You think I ate a bunch of sugar?" Jaller yelled at the Ko-Matoran. "Yeah, we know you Ta-Matoran have sugar obsessions. So hand it over, we don't want M&Ms on the floor." "You must be talking about sugar crazed Bohrok, not sugar crazed Ta-Matoran." Jaller protested. "Ok, search his pockets." Two Onu-Matoran wearing fancy sunglasses came and prepared to search his pockets, but Jaller didn’t have any. Confused, one put his hand behind Jaller’s ear and pulled out his cell phone. He took it and searched through Jaller's recent calls. He found one and showed it to the Ko-Matoran. "Ah," the Ko-Matoran said, "Your mommy's cell number. Very nice, a big teenage Ta-Matoran who phones his mommy." "Hey, that’s, um, my girlfriends number!!" Jaller stammered. "Your girlfriends number is 899-I-Love-My-Mommy-232?" “It can’t be! That wouldn’t even call properly!” Jaller said. “Good man, I believe it would, in this little world of nonsense.” The Ko-Matoran responded. " " Jaller emoticoned, ignoring the fact that it was impossible on a mask and that it was a joke used oh so many times in a lot of other comedies. "Oh, joke stealing now, Mr. Moma's Boy? Well it time to get what you deserved." The Ko-Matoran said as he took out a glove and pulled it over his right hand, snapping it on his wrist, a scream of pain coming from the inside of his Kaukau. "No don't kill me! Wait, you’re wearing a Kaukau, as in a mask usually put on hot Ga-Matoran?" Jaller said. "Well, um, I can explain, you see I-" He quickly took his mask off and took one of the Onu-Matoran’s masks off and stuck the white Kaukau on the Onu-Matoran, taking the Onu-Matoran’s Kakama onto his own face. "There, who’s the one wearing the girly mask now?" Before Jaller could answer, he took the gloved hand in his other hand and stuck it in Jaller's mouth. He took out one of Jaller's teeth, waved it in front of Jaller’s face, then motioned to the Onu-Matoran. The Onu-Matoran picked Jaller up and threw him outside. Jaller crawled away, feeling hurt, embarrassed, sad, lonely, and hurt. Mostly hurt. Jaller didn’t like pain. He looked up and saw his mom’s car parked in front of the police station. "Jaller! You are in so much trouble young man!!!" his mom said. JALLER’S HOUSE (his parent’s really if you want to be picky), 11 A.M, DRINKING FROM A CARTON OF APPLE JUICE Jaller had drank about half of said apple juice when Pewku started, um, I don't really know what sound Ussals make, so now they yipp. "Yappity yapp yapp!" Pewku yapped, which I assure you it sounds as weird as I wrote it. Jaller, who didn't like it when Pewku yapped, threw the apple juice carton at the yapping Ussal. As Pewku scuttled away and Jaller grabbed a napkin, he saw just what the crazy crab had yapped at. A yellow car of doom had just parked itself in the driveway, and was just sitting, err, parked there, as if it was watching him. He walked slowly away to the back door, opened the door, grabbed a bike, and peddled out the garage as fast as a Matoran on a bike could possibly go. Unfortunately, he grabbed his dad’s pink bike with its little bows and flowers in the front basket and generally whatever else five year olds put on their bikes. He peddled down the street, his evil Camaro of doom following, ready to run him down. He peddled though the town on his escape vehicle, passing Matoran from school on the way. As he passed McNocturns, he hit a speed bump and landed on his face, pretty flowers flying everywhere. He got up and was about to get away when he heard a voice. "Jaller?" Hahli said. "Um, I can, oh I can't explain. My Camaro is just trying to kill me, the usual. Bye!" Jaller responded, peddling away. "Jaller, wait I- Your car's trying to kill you?" she said, surprised at this. Cars do not usually partake in acts of murder. She turned around to her friends, but saw Nuhrii walking towards her. Hahli jumped on her moped and was about to follow Jaller when the Camaro Jaller had driven her in the other day went passed her. When she was about to follow it, a police car went passed her. It was heading in the same direction as the Jaller and the Camaro. Hahli finally got onto the road to follow the three, starting the engines on the little bike and followed. A CONSTRUCTION SITE PARKING LOT Jaller went between two cars, nearly squashing himself in the process. He stayed silent for a few minutes and waited for the car from Karzahni to pass. It finally did, but very slowly. When he couldn't hear the engine or see it, he peddled out, but a Saleen mustang police car, a very family looking one, was in front of him and Jaller peddled into it, and was sent flying across the hood of car. He landed on the thud from earlier. The thud ran off with a limp that was really starting to bother it. Jaller got up and went to the mustang. "You gotta help me my car is trying to ki-“ he started saying when the mustang drove forward and almost hit him, sending him running across the parking lot, just missing the thud as it ran away. The police car started to drive over to him, and stopped, just inches from his face. “STOP! STOP!” Jaller screamed. This day was really going south. Then something frightening happened. The lights on the police car changed, going from light into claw things/camera lookalikes.They inspected him for a few seconds, but then went back in. Then the car stayed still for a second. Jaller got up to run off when the hood of the car started to separate, the splitting off at the sides, the windows raising into the air, claws coming from the back tires. In just a few seconds, the car transformed into a giant robot, towering way above him. It lowered and grabbed Jaller. "Are you Hotstud232?" It asked. Jaller screamed. This day was really bad. END OF CHAPTER MTL

For the love of me, I could not come up with a name for it. I was think about something to do with the Kanoho Dragon or- WAIT! What was the name of the giant green thing that attacked Metru-Nui in the legends books? It was a contest winner's creation.. It should have a name... maybe.. This next chapter will go back to Jaller, then Nihiscream, then we'll see the Autotoabots back at base where the Wreckinators will show off and Nujack will do some technical stuff as well, in a way Kopatchet will be annoyed by. Then it'll be Shockvak going to the village for the Drill-bot thing, and then the chapter after the next one will be Matanui Prime and the new recruits checking at a distrubance that may or may not be a 1000 foot long drilling machine.That chapter will also let us see just what Sleedat has planned, and Soundprah will have done things of his own... I feel like I could've done more with Hydraxhide's group, that part was written last and it was late. Although, I did enjoy bringing Bobby Ahkmou back after a few years. The Wipeout gag is almost getting old. Almost, I still have a few things for it... In all due respect, a 5 foot tall robot is easy to miss when it's surrounded by 20+ foot tall robots.. Mataus had kept his accent, all though I did not really show it. I imagine he's gotten a bit serious or something since Onewaflap died. That'll do things like that to you. I'll start the next chapter tommorrow, don't know if I'll get it posted though. These last two were 3000 words a piece, I should really shorten them.. MTL

Yep, Jodkra is here! Most of the spelling and grammar problems will probably be from Word autocorrecting itself without me noticing. My spelling and such as improved since the first Transonicle. Blitztran is Blitzwing and Mutran, but mostly Blitzwing, with Mutran's appearence. WIth treads and wings and rockets. Fun Commentary: THis one is rather boring, I know. Introductions mostly. Next one will be more fun, I swear. TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 2MEANWHILE, WITH THE AUTOTOABOTS <In the years since the battle of Voya-Nui, the Deceptikuta have remained hidden, except for Sleedat’s forces at the Tohu Memorial near the Coliseum, and have created a fortress around it. While Tahkan Metra and the Matoran keep watch on the Tohu Memorial, the other Autotoabots have begun to deal with the Matoran’s problems, stopping them from erupting into their own civil war.> EASTERN PO-METRU In all the Metru, there are large cities. However, aside from these cities, there is not much else. In Po-Metru though, there are some towns long abandoned when the carving business went bad. These abandoned villages are favourites for evil Matoran wishing to sit there and plot mischief. In one small village, for instance, sat Bobby Ahkmou. Since his car dealership had gone bad (due to not in fact, being able to sell any cars) he had taken to illegal means to pay the bills. Which he stopped doing too. What had he decided to do instead? He had joined an illegal Kanoka disk selling group. These groups would create disks from “masks of death” or “masks of bacon’neggers”, and sell them to mask-makers and Kanoka-disk-sport-player-peoples. Of course, these masks did not exist. Not all Matoran are as smart as you and I, however. These disks would be sold for outrageous amounts of widgets, and would be non-returnable. I bet you see where this is going, so I’ll cut to the chase. These were profitable, nigh-untraceable, illegal operations, which the Metru-Nui police and Vahki squads (which were never very capable) were hopeless to stop. So naturally, it was the Autotoabots who had to stop it. And the one they were going for today just happened to have Bobby Ahkmou in it. “What one we doing today boss?” Bobby asked his superior. Evil-Boss Matoran looked at Bobby with pity in his eyes. “Same thing we always do, Bobby. We make fake Kanoka. Why would you even ask that? You’ve been here for 2 months already! You should know!” “It’s the stereotypical intro to say for this sort of things, I had no choice.” Bobby responded. “Oh. Well, we have a client coming by, and he says he has a really odd-assortment of vehicles with him, but we should not be suspicious. And if we see a giant bird flying around, that’s normal. He said he had a pet that escaped but follows him around now.” Evil-Boss Matoran said, “I’ve warned the guards, so they shouldn’t shoot anyone if they drive up- wait a minute, why am I telling you this? You may have risen up in the ranks here, but you still shouldn’t be knowing our plans!” It was true. Bobby Ahkmou’s natural talent with haggling and the like had allowed him to gain promotion after promotion. “Sorry boss. Say, can I have another promotion?” Bobby asked. “Hmm, your way with words makes it hard for me to say no. But no.” The Evil-Boss Matoran responded. “Ok.” Bobby said, knowing that the next promotion would soon be in his hands. Suddenly, a speaker went off. “Attention! Clients incoming! Rendezvous at the gates and prepare the Kanoka!” The speaker said. “You heard, get ready! Oooh, I wonder how many we can sell!” The Evil-Boss Matoran said. Bobby followed his boss out into the yard, where some gunmen were already in position. The gates were closed, but Bobby could see the client’s vehicles coming up. “I see a big black truck, a blue Lamborghini thing, a silver Corvette Stingray, a green Chevy Beat and a bird in the distance! Yep, it’s our guy! Classy convoy, if I do say so myself.” A Matoran gunman said. The Evil-Boss Matoran walked to the gate, while Bobby Ahkmou stood back and watched. “Welcome to our humble abode!” The Evil-Boss Matoran said. ‘Neat place.” The Lamborghini’s driver said.. at least the Boss Matoran thought he said. The windows were so heavily tinted he couldn’t see inside at all. “Thank you, thank you! Well, if you just step out here, you can receive the shipment.” The Boss Matoran said. “If you open the gates, we’ll drive on in” The Lamborghini’s driver said. “Well... wait, how can I hear you so clearly when your inside the vehicle?” The Boss-Matoran said, beginning to become worried. “Uh, the windows open a bit. Yea, that’s it!” The Lamborghini’s driver said. “Yep! We all got drivers!” the Chevy Beat said. And that’s when the awkward silence happened. The Evil-Boss Matoran, shaking, motioned for the gunmen to raise their weapons. “Well lads, looks like our covers blown. Autotoabots, TRANSMOC!” The black truck said. And so it was. The truck drove forward, mowing down the gate, then it split apart, forming and reforming into a giant walking robot with a cannon on one arm and a gun in the other’s hand. Yes, poor Hydraxhide lost a cannon. It was during the Battle of Voya-Nui. Some drones fault I suppose, he did fight a lot of them. The Corvette drove forward then, towards the other end of the small village. It transmoced into the speedy Tahuswipe, who spread his arms as he rolled along, and sliced the ends off the gunmen’s guns. The Lamborghini and Chevy beat drove between Hydraxhide and Tahuswipe. The two transmoced into Vakama Maximus and Mataus, respectively, who aimed their weapons at the Matoran. The Evil-Boss Matoran ran into his vehicle, and began to drive away, when the bird came down and landed on the back end of it. It transmoced into Phoenix Prime, and picked the Evil-Boss Matoran out of the wreckage. The Evil-Boss Matoran began to cry as he was carried back to the others, who had surrendered. Bobby Ahkmou stared in horror as he and his cohorts were rounded up. He remembered how the Ta-Matoran who he had sold a car too had been on the news 2 years late, having apparently helped save the world. He could’ve sold that car for so much more and not be in this situation. Hydraxhide found the Kanoka Disk stockpile, and without so much as a second thought, destroyed it. “Well, that’s done.” Hydraxhide said. Tahuswipe rolled back down towards the other Autotoabots, carrying two Matoran in his arms. They looked absolutely terrified. “Found this two running away. I suppose we’ll want them too.” Tahuswipe said as he put the Matoran down. “You got it.” Hydraxhide responded, surveying their handy work. “That was pretty easy, if I do say so myself.” Vakama Maximus gloated, “Got that done faster than even I thought we would.” “Not like you did anything.” Phoenix said. “Stop arguing good chaps.” Mataus said. He then looked down to a Matoran “Anything else here we need to deal with?” “Uh, uh, uh, uh, no-PLEASE DON’T KILL ME IT WAS HIS FAULT!” the Matoran cried, pointing to the Evil-Boss Matoran, who didn’t look so evil now. “What.. what are you going to do to me?” he said through sobs. Hydraxhide aimed a cannon at the Matoran. “Arrest you.” he said. The Matoran fainted. PEST HEADQUARTERS At some point after the battle of Voya-Nui, PEST headquarters got moved to the Metru-Nui mainland. In fact, it was rather close to Sleedat’s encampment, in order to respond quicker in case she did anything. However, the next segment does not take place there. IN A FIELD, SOMEWHERE IN METRU-NUI Pest soldiers were lined up in neat, orderly rows. They would all die like that if it was Deceptikuta they had to deal with next. Hewkii shook his head. Taking a megaphone from the Matoran beside him, he shouted into it “GET OUT OF THOSE ROWS AND INTO POSITIONS!” The Matoran did as told. Hewkii handed the megaphone back to the Matoran beside. He looked behind him. The Autotoabots were right on schedule. He looked back. Landed in front of them, was a ship. He presumed it was an Autotoabot ship, since it wasn’t covered in spikes like the ones at Voya-Nui had been. Those ones had also been much larger.He stepped out of the vehicle as a large red and blue semi with flame deco drove up beside. Slowly, it transmoced in Matanui Prime, leader of the Autotoabots. “That’s it?” Hewkii asked. Matanui looked down at him, confused. ‘What do you mean?” he asked. “Well, usually you make some huge entrance with massive amounts of description then do a pose and say something awesome. Or something.” Hewkii answered. “I highly doubt it was necessary here.” Matanui responded. “No, no, it only was your first appearance in this one..” Hewkii said to himself. In the distance, there was a little bit of lightning. Beside Matanui, driving up and transmocing, was Dakama Prime, Blue Flame, Pohatubee, Galcee, Kopatchet and Crashinator. Am I forgetting someone? Tahkan is watching Sleedat, Wheeldax is with Jaller, Hydraxhide and the others are doing that other thing in Po-Metru... Oh right! The 112 foot tall Omega Kaita was standing there too. That guy always just slips past me. Arggh, who else? Uh, uh, uh, WIPEOUT! Yes, Wipeout was there to, standing beside Blue Flame, looking awfully annoyed at being forgotten about. Again. “There is a point when you cross the line, you’re at the point where you crossed the line and kicked sand in the other guy’s face.” Wipeout said. Wipeout was the only human sized Autotoabot, and was often forgotten about. I really do not know why. Yea well, he’s short. AAAANNNNNYYYWWWAAYYYYSSSS, Matanui walked to the ship, the other Autotoabots in tow. “Matanui, you sure this is safe? How do we know these are Autotoabots?” Dakama said, the tallest Autotoabot (aside from Omega of course) his giant axe at the ready. “I feel I know just who’s in it.” Matanui said. He stopped 40 feet in front of the ship, and raised his arms. “Autotoabots, welcome home.” He said. Then a ramp opened in the front, and out walked six Autotoabots, one of which had a short creature on his shoulder. “Matanui, long time no see sir!” the one in front said. He was 23 feet tall, very cut up with a plethora of weapons on him and his utility belt, which included three knives. “iBrow, it’s a joy to see you and your team again. I had thought you were dead.” Matanui said. “It’ll take more than Makutatron and his goons to stop us!” the Autotoabot beside him said. This one was slightly less beat up, about the same height as iBrow, and carried a large cannon in his arms and also had a knife, although this one was blue. “Matanui, you remember the Wreckinators?” iBrow said, pointing to the two scared Autotoabots beside him. “Of course. I see LesoSpinn and JackaL.”Matanui said. “G’day Sir!” LesoSpinn said, saluting. He was taller than the other two, with claws sticking out above one hand and a rifle in the other. He was also missing an eye. “At your service!” JackaL said, who was the Autotoabot I mentioned above. “Do you all have weird capitalization your names?” Crashinator, the small ex-Deceptikuta who transmoced into a wolf, asked. “Quiet!” Kopatchet the white and red Autotoabot medic (although not very good at it)said, elbowing Crashinator. He meant to hit him in the side, but due to the height difference he hit Crashinator in the face. “Well, little one, that’s our motif.” JackaL said. LesoSpinn nodded. “They don’t look like much..” Galcee said, one of the smaller Autotoabots, who transmoced into a motorcycle, said. “Why would you even say that? They’re covered in weapons and scars and have Scottish accents! We should be getting them on our good sides instead of making meaningless commentaries!” Blue Flame, who was blue, ranted. He turned into a blue sports car. Thought you might like to know. “We brought a few others along as well.” iBrow said, ignoring the other discussion. Matanui looked up to see a large black Autotoabot and a shorter (about the same height as the Wreckinators) white-ish one standing beside him. The other Autotoabot was gray and black, with a gray Agorian standing beside him. “Jodkra! I thought you were dead as well! Who do you have with you?” Matanui asked. “I can’t believe more of us aren’t dead. This is my targetmaster, Johnson. He transmocs in my rocket launcher.” Jodkra said. In the background, Pohatubee radio made a choking sound. He did not quite understand what Jodkra just said, but he knew Jodkra to be a good fighter and (usually) made good choices, so he let it go. “You are a magnificent Metrutronian from what I’ve heard, Matanui Prime sir.” Johnson said respectfully. Matanui Prime thanked him, and Wipeout couldn’t believe even this Agorian was taller than him. Johnson was 11 feet tall, 6 feet taller than Wipeout. “Matanui Prime sir! Honour to meet you! I’m Ramembolt! I can turn invisible, want to see?” the taller Autotoabot said. And with that he turned invisible. Then he reappeared. “OOOOHHH! It’s Omega Kaita! He’s huge!” Omega Kaita silently waved. Considering his voice is loud enough to pretty much make you go deaf, that was probably a kindness. “Welcome to the home of the Matoran.” Matanui said. He looked to the other Autotoabot. “Nujack.” “Matanui! I made a-“ Nujack began. “I’m sorry, but I do not to see it. The last time I saw one of your experiments, I nearly lost my memory.” Matanui said. “Ya, one of his experiments on the ship nearly blew me head off!” LesoSpinn said. “I liked the one that washed the floor until it broke and burst into flame.” Ramembolt said. “He tried to make a copy of Johnson that turned into that washer thing! It screamed as it burned!” Jodkra said, “I’ve killed Deceptikuta who weren’t as freaky as that thing!” Johnson said. “It was tough telling him to just stop making them. He just...” JackaL began. “He didn’t stop making them with parts from the ship!” iBrow said. “It is my ship, and I don’t like it being torn apart from the inside out.” “Fair enough.” Nujack said. “My work has always been better. See Omega right there? I fixed him up.” Kopatchet said. “Oh! I got a story about Nujack too! Onc-“ Wipeout started to say. “Not now Wipeout, we have introductions to do.” Blue Flame told Wipeout. Wipeout was annoyed. Pohatubee, meanwhile, was not really needed here, and wasn’t quite sure why it had been important for him to show up. “Autotoabots, I am pleased with your appearance. More Autotoabots are always welcome. Tell me, how goes things on Metrutron?” Dakama said. “We haven’t been there in millennia. War ruined it, but I’m sure you know.” iBrow said. Matanui looked sad. “Very well. I would’ve liked news all the same.” He straightened his back, “iBrow, LesoSpinn, JackaL, Jodkra, Johnson, Ramembolt and Nujack, I would like to introduce you Dakama Prime, Pohatubee, Galcee, Kopatchet, Blue Flame, Wipeout, Crashinator and Omega Kaita. We have others, but they’re out on missions right now. I would also like to introduce you to PEST commander Hewkii. We’ve allied with the Matoran to help stop the Deceptikuta.” “We saw a lot of Deceptikuta have stationed themselves on the moon.” iBrow said. “We know.” Dakama said. “Any idea what they’re doing?” Matanui asked. “Not a clue.” JackaL answered. “Hmm. Well, Dakama, Galcee, you and some of Hewkii’s force will find a place for iBrow’s ship-“ Matanui started to say, “No need.” iBrow said. “It turns invisible.” And with a press off a button on his arm, the ship behind them turned invisible. <Neat> Pohatubee’s radio said. “Excellent. Come, let us return to base. Autotoabots, transmoc, and roll out!” Matanui said. And they did so. THE TERRAGATOR. The Terragator was 300 feet of black, spiky metal covered in guns and hangers for the Deceptikuta’s smaller ships. Dreadinock was immensely proud of it. Except right now he was annoyed. Before Shockvak would agree to take the leadership, he wanted something. “You know how there are abandoned villages on Metru-Nui?” Shockvak asked inquired. “No.” Dreadinock responded. Nearby, Blitztran sat in a chair, spinning around in it. It’s a rather dangerous habit for a 40 foot tall robot to do. “Well, there is,” Shockvak said, “And inside one is an old laboratory of mine.” “What? Why is it so many of our species stuff is on THIS planet?” Dreadinock said angrily. “It’s only been there for 50 years. Well, this laboratory is underneath a Matoran village, and I believe it was abandoned because of me, or rather, an experiment of mine.” Shockvak replied emotionlessly. “Oh, was ist es? Did you make an oven zat shot fire at ze locals und poisoned zere vells? Zat vould be hilarious! AHAHAHAH!” Blitztran laughed wildly to himself. Shockvak and Dreadinock ignored him. “What did you make, Shockvak?” Dreadinock asked, almost worried to hear. Almost. “A drill-bot.” Shockvak said simply. “A vhat?” Blitztran said. Dreadinock wasn’t sure what he said either. “It is basically a large snake that is made out of saws that drills through things.” Shockvak explained. “Oh, of course.” Dreadinock said. “Oh, oh, let’s call it Daffodil! Zuch a pretty name for zuch a pretty monster!” Blitztran said. “Dreadinock, I required us to take a ship there and you can drop me off. I only need myself to get it.” Shockvak said. “Good, because I don’t want a giant snake drill-thing aboard the Terragator.” Dreadinock said, relieved. “It would fit.” Shockvak said. “Of course it would! The Terragator is the largest ship in the Deceptikuta fleet!” Dreadinock said. “My drill-bot is 1000 feet long.” Shockvak said. Even Blitztran did not laugh at that. END OF CHAPTER NEXT TIME: LET'S SEE SOME DRILLLLLBBBBOOOOTTTTT MTL

All I had time for tonight... Fun Commentary: Short chapter, that's all TRANSONICLECHAPTER 7FRIGHT NIGHTDRIVING BACK FROM THE LAKE, SOMEWHERE IN TA-METRUAs Jaller drove around a corner, he heard a small whistle noise. He hoped it wasn't his car breaking down, as he was driving Hahli home. If it did break down, it would be truly embarrassing. Trying to turn to the side of the road a bit more, his car suddenly took control of itself. It drove off of the road and headed for a little cliff overlooking Ta-Metru. It stopped right before it went off the ledge, and backed up, actually making it a would be romantic spot, if it wasn’t for the fact the car had just drove itself there."Um, I can explain this.... maybe." Jaller said, hoping it was a valid excuse."This is an odd car. Let me get out and look." Hahli replied. “Look at the cliff?” Jaller asked, worriedly. If Hahli was going to throw herself off of it, he wanted to know it wasn’t his fault at least. “No, the engine!” Hahli said as she started to open the door.Hahli tried to open the door, but the little, yellow, car of death had locked the doors, trapping the two Matoran inside. She kicked the door, but then the side airbag activated, and launched her at Jaller, and his seatbelt went down and locked the two up.“Well, uh, this is not fault.” Jaller managed to say."Look, um, I don’t even know your name here..." She asked him."Oh, sorry, my name is Jaller-""HHHHOOONNKK!!!" The cars horn honked.Jaller kicked the car, hating it so much. It was rude to interrupt someone when they were trying to say their last name. So very rude indeed."I hate this car." Jaller said. Then the door they were next to opened and the two Matoran fell out, masks and all. Jaller got up and helped Hahli onto her feet."Um, thanks." She said, dusting the dust off. She walked up and tried to open the car’s hood, but it was stuck. "Unlock the hood for me Jaller." She said to him."You said my name- Right away sir, er, ma’am!”"Just open it." Hahli said with a little bit of annoyance and a lot of attitude... or something like that. Jaller went and unlocked the hood. The hood popped open, and hit Hahli in the mask. She fell backwards, a scream escaping her lips and going though her mask. Jaller raced over and grabbed her before she fell off the cliff. When she was back on her feet, she said to Jaller "Thanks, I owe you. But I can repay it by fixing your car.""Y-yo-you can fix cars?" Jaller asked, or stammered."Oh, yeah, my old man was the greasyiest grease brakas for kio around." she gloated.Jaller emoticoned."Um Jaller, your making a puddle on the ground.""Oh, sorry." Hahli looked at the engine. “Amazing,” she said, “This is like, a super amazing race car engine. And it’s perfectly clean, like the car doesn’t use it or something.” “Weird. Can you fix it?” Jaller asked. “I don’t think it’s broken. Look, thanks for the ride and all, but I think I’ll walk the rest of the way to my house. Bye.” Hahli said, walking away. “Uh, bye.” Jaller said, disappointed he had failed her. He slammed the hood and was about to open the door when the radio came on. <BABY COME BACK!> That one line was all that played, but it was enough. Jaller got in the car, turned around, and drove up beside Hahli. “Need a ride?” Jaller asked. Hahli raised an eyebrow, then got in. “I love this car.” Jaller whispered to himself.JALLER’S HOUSE (his parent’s really if you want to be picky) TA-METRUJaller was dreaming that he weighed 600 pounds and Hahli was carrying up a hill, when he heard a roar of an engine, a click of lights being turned on and the screech of tires. He got up and looked out the window. He saw his car driving out of his yard."My car!" Jaller screamed, "Get back hereeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Jaller screamed as he stuck his head out too far and fell out the window. What a clutz he is, don't ya think? He landed perfectly on his Bicycle and started to roll down the driveway, following his escaping car of death. He realized what was happening, and started to peddle after the automobile, barely conscious of what was going on. The car made a sharp turn to the left, and Jaller just barely made it, nearly getting smushed into a pancake by a police car making a turn though the inter section. Jaller knew a little bit about the local police, and somewhere in his subconscious he realized that the local police did not use Saleen Mustangs. Ignoring this, he followed his Camaro. As his car went into a power plant, Jaller’s bike hit a rock and he went flying through the fence, hit the ground, rolled and landed on his stomach. He got up and limped after his car, watching as it disappeared around a corner. He tried to follow, but was startled when the guard Ussals woke up and barked at Jaller. Well, more like hissed, but you get the point. He backed off and went around the corner, trying to see his car. When he finally saw it, he saw the shock of his life. It was less than a kilometre away, but Jaller saw clearly through the night. He watched where his car once was, a big robot appeared. His car had, of all things, TRANSFORMED!!! AMAZING!The robot car thing sent a big signal thing into air. It was in the shape of a Kanohi Hau, which in pure coincidence was the same mask he wore. Neat, huh? Jaller watched as it rose into the air, disappearing into the night sky. Then he heard a bark/hiss thing. He turned around and saw the Ussals had broken free of their chains and had escaped, running at him. He took out his cell phone and dialled 119, the police Matorans number. He held the phone to his ear, running away from the Ussals, hoping they would answer. The Police, not the Ussals. Although, I’m pretty sure you figured that out. Then finally, he heard the voice on the other end of the line."Hello, who is this?" the voice said."You gotta help me!! Someone stole my car, and it transformed!!! Now I am being chased by evil Ussals of doom!!" Jaller cried into the phone."Sir, can you tell us your location please?" the voice said."Oh, um I’m at the power plant." Jaller answered, running out of breath."Good, we have someone on patrol right near there."Then a police car drove out right in front of Jaller and knocked across the hood. Somewhere in his subconscious he noted how it was not a Saleen Mustang. He looked and saw that the police Matoran had gotten out and pulled out guns, and they said "Sir, put your hands behind your head and lay on the hood.""But?""No ifs ands or buts."" What if-""Sir, you have the right to remain silent." They took Jaller and stuffed him in the back seat. From the window next to him he looked around saw the Ussals scuttling away, but the demon car was nowhere to be seen.SOMEWHERE ELSEFrom inside Barritax's police car mode, Frendox watched as the police put the Matoran in the car. They had watched the entire event.TRANSLATED FROM METRUTRONIAN"Those law enforcers have taken the Matoran away. Do we still continue with the plan?" asked Barritax."Barritax you weak minded fool, of course we do. The enforcement fleshie will let him go. And once Pohatubee isn't watching, we strike!" Replied Frendox."How do know its Pohatubee?" asked Barritax..... again."Because he transmoced right there you piece of-"Barritax transmoced and picked up the little Deceptikuta. “It could’ve been another Autotoabot.” Barritax said emotionlessly."I mean, we attack when the Matoran is alone!" stammered the frightened little robot."Good plan, I don't crush you now.''With that, Barritax transmoced and drove off, Frendox in the trunk. Barritax made sure to use the bumpiest road.END OF CHAPTER MTL

Englisch und ein bisschen Deutsch. Nur ein bisschen! Ich bin nicht sehr gut. Schwere sprachen ze lernen, abar besser als franzoesisch ich denke. German is fun to yell in however, and I enjoy learning it and actually talking to some one in it once and a while. I know a little French, not very much, and I'm not very good at it. A few words of Russian (banya, beregis, vodka, strana ) and a few Spanish ones (muerta) and I used to know some Punjabi, but I forgot it. MTL

I liked kicker a lot he wasn't afraid to face most robotic adversaries going as far as threatening alpha q and bashing him with a sword at point blank range.And i liked his angry temper instead of joking a lot or running off scared from of the big bots. And he was the polite one....but Sari Sumdac was the worse one and had bad habits. She's a protoform whos been raised on earth for like 12 years and she knows enough to explain to Prime how human reproduce.... which should be way incomprehensible for even a cybertronian to understand or learn. It was in the Transformers Animated episode Transform and Roll Out To be perfectly honest, that's my favourite Transformers scene of all time. And Kicker was... well, one of the reasons I can't stand Energon. They never did anything! All they did was recap and groan and complain! Anyways, I hope when playing as Grimlock in Fall of Cybertron, that you can use fire breath, and burn your way through every person you ever fight. That would make my day. Was anyone else just a little disapointed with Dark of the Moon? I mean, I enjoyed the film, I've watched it twice, but something about just doesn't feel right. I don't know, it's like the first hour is "the wacky hijinks of Sam Witwicky" and for the second hour Michael Bay went "Oh right, robots" and stuck several thousand in. It was several thousand awesome robots and awesome fighting, but still... Ratchet had like 4 lines, and Sideswipe didn't do much, and Ironhide... MTL

Tropey? As in TvTropes? Wunderbar indeed.. MTL

Du hast- Rammstein MTL

Those are good... I may in fact use them...however, lets try to keep the Transonicle 3 stuff in that thread. This is thread is for the other 2 stories. Chapter 7 will probably be down later today, and the next chapter of Transonicle 3 will probably be tommorrow.. MTL

Well, since my version of Skids is Mataus, and he survived Transonicle 2, I'm pretty sure I'll include. I got stuff planned for him... Mudflap (Onewaflap) was killed by Nihiscream, and as such will probably not return. There is a Guest being Silverbolt, called Ramembolt. He will appear in the next chapter with the new characters. I actually bought the Movie and have seen it twice already, so I think I'm good. I'll follow the basic plot, with improvements. Considering I'm not having to pay anyone money for every scene, I can do a bit more than Michael Bay can ! Blitztran was fun to do. I loved Blitzwing in animated, and all though this guy doesn't have 3 faces (a bummer, but writing that might've been difficult), he's equally crazy. There are some looose ends that still need to be tied up, but most of the major ones are good. I've only watch a few episode of Transformers Prime, but luckily, I saw the one where he beat Arachnid (or whoever that was) around. I don't quite like how he looks, but his charecter itself is... fascinating. Makybe Soundprah will act like him...... I was sort of going for a G1-ish version, but the TF Prime's silent Soundwave is pretty neat... Next chapter tommorrow probably, as today I am a bit busy.. Name:Height:Gender(rather silly for giant robots I know, but anyways):Alt mode (non-earth modes or earth modes)Weapons:Appearence:Personality:Anything else:Autotoabot or Deceptikuta:Do you want him to die or not: MTL

Oooh, Maxilos' last stand there was pretty epic, if I do say so myself.I myself don't see Tahu Mata winning this war either... MTL