ManiacToaLaco

Just take my money already!MTL

This is somehwere between awesome and amazing.MTL

Missed the quotuing challenge by that much! Well, since I'm sure you all love listening to me talk reading my posts, here's my favourite quote of the last chapter. Remember: the dumb one is the one to fear, along with the chosen one, the (insert member of a illegal profession here) with a heart of gold and the underdog.If I don't get a good quote from Makuta next chapter, I will be disapointed in you, iBrow.MTL

Roight, sorry about lack of quoting your chapters, t'was exam week.Anyways, methinks Oraku is not really dead! Or he is and those orbs can be used to bring him back to life. Or that was what was in his wallet.And Ghiridell Ghiradelli is going to make Tahu's life tough(er).Another swell chappy!MTL

Love. I am in it.MTL

We wants it! All of its! I hope the whole line will be this awesome. It's looking like it.I'm loving Gimli. It would be hard to mess him up, up they've went above and beyond and better than expected. That helmet of his is AMAZING!MTL

Oi!TRANSONICLECHAPTER 20CLASH OF TITANS　LEGO CITY, PO-MTERUJaller and the other Matoran sat silently until Vakama Maximus signalled to them that they could move. Hewkii and his fighters went out first, then Jaller and Hahli. Jaller looked and he saw a yellow and gray Autotoabot curled up and damaged, with Blue Flame and Kopatchet helping him up."Pohatubee!" Jaller yelled as he ran to his fallen friend.<OH! The paain! How it hurts me so!> The ‘bee’s radio sang out."What happened to him!" Jaller asked Kopatchet. Kopatchet looked down. Wipeout suddenly crawled on top of the white Autotoabot’s head. Kopatchet shook him off and looked at Jaller again."Got hit with some missiles. Legs are gone. But other than that he's fine. Hydraxhide faired a bit better than him." Kopatchet said, waving a scanner thingy ma-bobber over Pohatubee. Just then Hydraxhide went flying through a building, landed on the street and skidded into a Toa-Mart."Rassa-frassa dinosaur with its……" Hydraxhide was saying, ending with something that I certainly can’t put on BZPower.Kopatchet and Blue Flame dragged Pohatubee back into the alley they found him in, not sure why they had pulled him out."Pohatubee!" Jaller said, "Where’s the AllShiny?"Pohatubee stopped for a second, then activated his radio <By the power of the lord, I summon thy~~~~ It’s cubelar!>Jaller, Kopatchet, Wipeout and Blue Flame looked at Pohatubee with blank faces.Pohatubee sighed and took the AllShiny out.‘Yeses, my precious." Jaller said, walking away, and hitting Hewkii in the process."OOOOFF!" Jaller said as he walked into Hewkii and plopped on his bottom. Hewkii looked over Jaller. He grabbed Jaller by the shoulder and hoisted him up."Look kiddo, these things are fighting over that thing, and if the meaner ones get it, well, I don’t think we’re think going to win even if they don’t get it." Hewkii said to Jaller, not letting the little matoran go."And?" Jaller asked, trying to get away."DON’T LET THEM GET IT!" Hewkii yelled. It scared Jaller so bad he flew out of Hewkii’s grip. This was a strong grip if I might add."Ok, ok, ok! Geez, spaz." Jaller said, rubbing the dirt off of him."You're a soldier now, you got that? You're gonna fight your way out of this, just we're going to." Hewkii said. Beside him Hafu nodded."Do we have to go back and fight that tank thing?" Hafu asked Hewkii."Not until we know the air force is showing up." Hewkii said."I like that plan." Hafu replied.Jaller looked back at the cube, then looked back up. Hahli stood before him."You better not mess this up, or you're going to have ruined my day." she said, walking over to Pohatubee."Right, fun day." Jaller said.ELSEWHEREBradak looked around. He couldn’t see any Autotoabots. But he could smell their circuitry. He could also taste plastic in his mouth. With a hint of liquid nitrogen.What a peculier taste, he mused.He took a step forward, and felt a small explosion at his side. He turned and saw some Matoran with grenade launchers shooting at him. He raised his remaining arm with a gun on it and prepared to shoot, only to feel another explosion on his back. He turned and saw Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame shooting at him. When he turned the two shot at his face, knocking him back. His tank turret unfolded from his back and shot back at them. They were knocked back form the explosion, and Bradak fired somemore.DOWN THE STREETHahli stood by Pohatubee, watching the group down the street shoot at Bradak, not doing much.<They will be crushed soon, my lord.> Pohatubee’s radio startled Hahli. She jumped and looked back. Pohatubee pointed at a tow truck. Hahli smiled behind her mask."Brilliant! You can transform into it and we can drive away!" She exclaimed, not getting Pohatubee’s idea.<stooped monkey.> Pohatubee's radio said.BACK UP THE STREETBradak was having trouble shooting the Matoran. They kept ducking up and down and moving around. All he had left was rockets, and an ammoless gatling gun. Rockets were hard to kill Matoran with, that’s for sure. He prepared to launch a shell from his turret when he heard some engines or whatnot. He looked up and saw Tahkan Metra and Phoniex Prime launch several missiles at him, and then Bradak realized he wasn’t as good as dodging rockets as the Matoran.BOOMBOOM KABOOM SPALOSION KRAKKBOOM BAYSPLOSIONSBradak hobbled back and watched the Metrutronian jet and the phoenix fly away, then he aimed his shoulder rocket and was about to fire, when once more Matoran shot at him, and Blue Flame and Vakama Maximus shot at him again.BACK DOWN THE STREETHahli finally hooked Pohatubee up to the tow truck, while Kopatchet watched."That'll never work." Kopatchet said."If you had helped us set it up you might have more faith in it." Hahli said."You had Pohatubee's help." Kopatchet replied."You aren't even out there fighting, and you can't help Pohatubee here! What sort of fighter are you?" Hahli yelled at him."Darn it Matoran I'm a doctor not a soldier!" Kopatchet replied.<And not a very good one either.> Pohatubee said through his radio."Watch it no-legs!" Kopatchet said. There was an explosion above them. Nihiscream did another fly by."Look, you either help us now, or die like we all probably are going to!" Hahli pleaded.Kopatchet looked at her, sighed, and turned an arm into his machine gun. "I never was that much of a doctor anyways." he said.<Not many people realize, but that's common knowledge.> Pohatubee's radio said. Kopatchet looked at him, and Pohatubee shrugged."Whatever. Now, you ready to blow that bad boy outta here?" Hahli said as she got in the vehicle.Pohatubee unveiled so many weapons that Bradak, Hydraxhide and Blacktaka would have looked like the Naming Day fairy.<I'm here to take names and chew gum, and I've got some gum left.> Pohatubee's radio said.BACK UP THE STREETBradak noticed that all of a sudden no one was shooting at him. He took a step forward and stopped. The Autotoabot known as Pohatubee was hooked onto a tow truck, which was going backwards towards him. Kopatchet ran behind them, firing with all he was worth. Bradak prepared to fire, only to realize he was out of ammo, on all of his guns."Oh slag." he said, as the Matoran decided to fire again, just as Pohatubee and Kopatchet fired their weapons. Bradak was hit many times from all angles, as Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame started to fire again, as well as Phoniex Prime and Tahkan Metra. The concentrated fire power turned Bradak to Swiss cheese, and the armoured giant fell into the Matoran stronghold as Pohatubee’s last shot hit him.KERCRUNCH!The Matoran and the Autotoabots went over to check out the busted up Bradak.<And another bites the dust!> Pohatubee's radio said."We did it! We did it!" Hahli said, looking out the door of the tow truck. Wipeout, Hewkii and Hafu ran up."Wow, way to do that without us." Hafu said."That was fun." Kopatchet said "I much like taking things apart than putting them back together."Vakama Maximus and Blue Flame stepped over Bradak's body."And that's not what you want to hear from your doctor." Vakama Maximus said, still missing an arm.SOMEWHERE ELSE ON THE BATTLEFIELDDakama Prime grimaced as he slammed into a building, drywall and bricks falling."We are invincible!" Blacktaka yelled out, firing stuff at Dakama. Dakama Prime rolled out of the way, the missiles blowing apart most of the lower building.Dakama Prime jumped forward and transmoced, ramming Blacktaka, knocking him over. Blacktaka rolled and looked back, one arm turned into a propellar/saw thing. Dakama Prime turned and transmoced, facing Blacktaka. Dakama took out his huge axe, his favoured weapon, and looked at the titan. Then Blacktaka bent over, and a bundle of wires flew from his back."SSHHHKKKSHHKKKSHHKKK!" The little death ball of death screeched, knocking Dakama Prime over."Stupid Spinok!" Dakama yelled as he tried to peel the pincher’s of the Deceptikuta scorpion out of his armour. Spinok fired his machine guns into Dakama’s armour. Dakama took it like man, er, bot, and threw the scorpion away. Spinok jumped back landed on Blacktaka. Dakama clutched his wound, shortened the handle of his axe, and swung, Blacktaka moxing back, then stepping forward and hitting Dakama with his saw. Dakama stepped back, his chest heavily damaged from Spinok and Blacktaka.Blacktaka unfurled his chest cannon and shot Dakama, sending the huge Autotoabot into a building. Firing another weapon into the building, Blacktaka set it on fire, and part of it collapsed on Dakama."All hail lord Makutatron!" Blacktaka yelled as he turned and transmoced, flying away.As Blacktaka flew away, Dakama pulled himself form the rubble, his armour heavily damaged. He looked for Blacktaka, but the Deceptikuta helicopter was gone. Angry with himself, he collasped.END OF CHAPTER FUN COMMENTARY: This chapter originally focused mostly on Pohatubee killing Bradak, like in the movie (but with Bumblebee and Brawl) but I changed it so Kopatchet did something for once. I also changed up Dakama and Blacktaka's fight, so it stopped being quite as silly. Dakama is also using his axe now, which is his weapon prefernde. Or however it's spelt.Also, this chapter had a "Trailer" for Transonicle 2 (which will also be in this topic), so I thought it would be good to include it here."Pohatubee, I got to talk to you about the college thingy, okay?" Jaller said. <I'm so exicted! I just can't hide it!> Pohatubee's radio said, while he snapped his fingers."Your not going with me." Jaller replied.<Say wat?>FROM MANICTOA INDRUSTRIES "Can't you just smell the smartlyness?" Jaller's mom said, doing a spin."No, not really. And stop making up words, it makes us look bad." Jaller's dad said, not getting out of the car. AND PARTICIPATION FROM THE BZP COMIDIES FORUM "Hey Hahli! I got you and me an webcam so we can talk and stuff so you won't dump me or anything." Jaller said with his cell phone stuck in his ear, unable to get it out. "Sounds... interesting." Hahli said, breaking a bike with a hammer. SCENE CHANGE!Jaller put a box and a container on his table. Suddenlly, everything went slow. Jaller suddenly saw a horrible face of a massive robot, (which looked like an upside down Deceptikuta symbol, which looked like the Kanohi Krakhaan, and on this bloke looked like a pharoah's mask thing sorta) and symbols from the Metrutronian language.SCENE CHANGE!Jaller sat in class when all of a sudden he saw bunch of wierd symbols from earlier appear in his text book. He ran to the front of the room and started writing on the walls with a piece of chalk.SCENE CHANGE! "I just saw a bunch of Metrutonian symbols! In the middle of class! Then I wrote it on the wall! I think I'm going crazy like old Ithinkimbald!" Jaller yelled, terrified. SCENE CHANGE!Many, many pods entered the Matoran planet's atmosphere. "We've kept much from you Jaller." Dakama Prime said, walking towards the Ta-Matoran. "This isn't my war! It wasn't last time! And it won't be this time!" Jaller yelled at the massive Autotoabot. SCENE CHANGE!A pod hit a building, sending debri everywhere. BACK TO THE SCENE PREIVIOUS TO THE LAST ONE!"I'm afraid, it is going to be." Dakama Prime said grimly. SCENE CHANGE!Several pods landed on an aircraft carrier, sending aircraft and debri everywhere, while Nihiscream flew above. SCENE CHANGE!Hafu looked at the monstous Deceptikuta rolling down the road, breaking things. SCENE CHANGE!Pohatubee, Mataus and Onewaflap drove down a road very fast like.SCENE CHANGE!12345 picked up a bunch of papers. "What your about to see is really, really classified. Don't tell my mother." 12345 said, showing the papers to Jaller. "Any look like the symbols you've been seeing?" 12345 asked him. Jaller looked shocked and nodded."Where did you get these?" Jaller asked."They've been showing up all over the world in ancient ruins." SCENE CHANGE!Pohatubee, Mataus, Onewaflap and Gunmetal, along with several Matoran walked to a templeSCENE CHANGE!"These symbols, they mean something, like a map or something!" Jaller said. SCENE CHANGE!A few Constructikuta went to the body of the fallen Deceptikuta, at the ocean floor. "Makutatron." One whispered. BRIEF PAUSEMakutatron moved. He sped to the surface, anger in his eyes. SCENE CHANGE!Matkutatron showed up behind Hahli, growling something fierce.FROM WRITER MANIACTOALACO The Constructikuta leader Protomaster ripped apart parts of a dock while other Contructikuta followed him.SCENE CHANGE!Another massive Deceptikuta attacks the army troops. SCENE CHANGE!Jaller and Hahli ducked underneath some statues. SCENE CHANGE!Hakkannways ran through a building, transmoced and drove away. SCENE CHANGE"Makutatron wants whatever is in my mind!" Jaller yelled. SCENE CHANGE!Jaller and Hahli ran acroos the rooftops as Nihiscream fired rockets after them. SCENE CHANGE!"Im not leaving without you!" Hahli said to Jaller. AND EXCUTIVE PRODUCER, WELL, MANIACTOALACO Hahli put her hands to her face. SCENE CHANGE!Pohatubee's faceplate came down and he jumped at Ramzok. The Constructikuta punched but missed, hitting a wall. BASED ON HASBRO'S TRANSFORMERS' ACTION FIGURESThe Libary wall exploded, showering books and wood all over the crowd. BUT MOSTLY ON PARAMOUNT'S TRANSFORMERS' MOVIESJaller!" Hahli cried out from the car, dangling beneath Grindtaka. AND LEGO'S BIONICLE FIGURES Makutatron growled and stepped back as the Autotoabots shot at him. WITH SOME GUEST STARS Nihiscream kneeled down infront of Jaller and spat at him, mostly by accident.SCENE CHANGE!Matanui turned his arms into swords and jumped at Makutatron and Grindtaka, while in a forest.SCENE CHANGE!"MATANUI!" Jaller yelled as the Autotoabot leader was sent flying from a shot from Makutatron.SCENE CHANGE!Jaller only barely avoided being crushed by Matanui's falling body. SCENE CHANGE!"Fate rarely calls upon us at a moment of are choosing." Matanui said as he looked up. SCENE CHANGE!Jaller picked up the Sun Matrix. SCENE CHANGE!The F-22's flew near the pyramid with the floating rocks. The Zivonastater climbed up the side up the pyramid, ignoring the shooting from the jets. SCENE CHANGE!Gunmetal knelt down to speak with Jaller.*gasp for air* SCENE CHANGE!Jaller and Co. stared in horror as the Zivonastater ate some sand.GUESS WHAT? ANOTHER SCENE CHANGE!Matanui kicked Nihiscream, and the Deceptikuta flipped. SCENE CHANGE!Transraga crawled onto Jaller's face. SCENE CHANGE! Pohatubee shot something. SCENE CHANGE!Jaller and Hahli ran from explosions. SCENE CHANGE!Hafu yelled to Hewkii, while in a battle field. In a desert. With explosions.*sigh* SCENE CHANGE!Something exploded in a desert. SCENE CHANGE!Something else exploded in a city. SCENE CHANGE!Makutatron punched at Matanui Prime. SCENE CHANGE!Zivonastater walked forward, eating more sand.SCENE CHANGEA few flying planes transmoced and combined into the ginormous OMEGA KAITA! He landed in a quarry, and yelled "ZIVONASTATER! I HUNT YOU!"*bwaw bwaw bwaw bwaw*TRANSONICLE 2: REVENGE OF ICARAXA MANICTOA INDUSTRIES PRODUCTIONExciting, exciting indeed.MTL

THIS! IS! SPARTA!So you're going to parody 300? Yes.....Ladies and Gentlemen, we have a winner.Yes, I shall parody 300, and it will probably be my last parody (about time I do original stuff by now). Not much has been outlined yet, but I can give ya'll an idea. The Skrall will be the enemy, and the Spartans will most likely be Glatorians. Not quite sure about that last part yet though. It will tamer than the movie, of course (THIS! IS! BZP! still) but it will contain the senseless violence you've come to love and cherish from me.Speaking of senselss violence, the next few chapters of Transonicle 3 will pretain to: The Deceptikuta wrecking Metru-Nui, Matoran striking back, and Jaller atempting to get into the war zone to find Hahli. So it's almost the finale, and it will be the biggest finale (in Transonicle a tleast) ever!MTL

Well, Tahu Stars is about to be all kinds of dead. Atleast a noble sacrifice!Three parter? Interesting, most interesting.MTL

XD, probably what my reaction would be. Nothin' like havin' enough skillz to pay the billz. Or save your life atleast.Another swell chapter, did feel kinda short though. But that's just me, and I honestly prefer short chapters, depending on what's in 'em.MTL

I'd hate for you to kill me killing mysel...wait what. And that's why robot restraining orders are, after all, a good idea. ...and then saw that it had created the only piece of technology known to man that hadn't already been used for the Dallas Cowboy's stadium.Good chappy, MTL. KUTGW.-MTA restraining order against robots that have a robot with the ability to teleport is a very weak show of words. I'm sure it wouldn't be hard to best the Dallas Cowboy's shows using the technology of robots.AHEM! I'm sorry this chapter took so long to get up, I've been studying for exams and Skyriming. Just so you know my Smithing is 100 and I'm in full Dragon Plate, so it wasn't a complete waste of time. Also, I'm not good at writing very.. emotional dialogue, which stumped me. I'm much better at action, which I'm sure is the reason you're all reading this anyways :PTRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 22FROM BAD TO WORSE　THE TOHU MEMORIALRecovering from the Autotoabot's brief attack, Norik Prime looked up at the Terragator, the end of it finally leaving the space bridge. Norik hadn't expected Matanui to attack him, and he hadn't known that Phoenix had the ability to teleport. These were unsettling happenings; Matanui should've realized that he was doing to ensure the survival of their race! Mataus' had been an unfortuneate casuality, but it was war after all. If Matanui found out about the fact that this had been due to Icarax's prompt several million years ago, Matanui would surley return, with much less mercy.Flufskiron meanwhile, had more productive things going. The camera alt moded Deceptikuta Viewdok, thin and rather full of himself, followed behind Flufskiron, who was heading to a satelitte thing that had been set up by Shockvak and Soundprah, with distractions from Blitztran."Is it ready? I truly can't stand to wait." Flufskiron said."It is complete. All we need is your direction." Shockvak said emotionlessly. Something about how emotionless it was unsettled Flufskiron."Excellent." Flufskiron said nonetheless "NORIK! I'm sure you're going to want to be part of this!" Flufskiron yelled to Norik. Norik turned and walked towards them, not saying anything."What is it, old 'bot? Have you lost your taste for us already after just one run in with your old friends?" Flufskiron said "Which is silly, considering how much you've done against them over all these years." Norik took his double sided sword out, and in a blink of an eye had it at Fluskiron's throat. "If I'm able to cause the deaths of Autotoabots, it wouldn't take me much to cause your death, Flufskiron." Norik said.Flufskiron smiled "And that's what I like to hear Norik Prime. Come, let's do this. MAKUTATRON! You too! You'd be good for effect!" he yelled.Makutatron, once mighty leader of the Deceptikuta and most feared being this side of any actual continuity, shambled over, his chest covered in holes, most of the top right of head still missing (with Transraga working hurriedly on it), his lower right arm a different colour than the rest of him, and generally looking like a mess. Flufskiron hadn't allowed Sleedat to use her repair nanobot things on Makutatron, which she agreed whole heartedly. She herself was no fan of Makutatron."You do not order me around, Flufskiron." Makutatron snarled."That was true on Metrutron. To bad this isn't Metrutron." Flufskiron said. Makutatron growled, but right now he was in no way to fight, something which Flufskiron knew, and laughed at.Viewdok transmoced into his camera form, and Makutatron stood before the camera, Norik, Flufskiron and Shockvak standing behind him."Live in three... two... one... Camera ready." Soundprah said in his monotone voice. This broadcast would immediatly show on every TV, computer, phone and similar device all over Metru-Nui, much like the similar broadcasts done by the Deceptikuta three years ago."Insects of the Matoran hive!" Makutatron began with a simple greeting "Three of your years ago, we broadcasted a message like this to your insect race!" Makutatron was then pushed to the side by Flufskiron."And we have very different message to give you know!" Flufskiron said.In a hospital, 12345 was in a bed watching the TV, Hickory standing beside him."LIES! Hickory, get me a wheelchair, I'm getting out of here!" 12345 said, rolling out of the bed and falling on his face."I zink ve should change zenes before dis gets offensive." Hickory said.The broadcast continued. "The image of our race may have been... tainted by the actions of others, such as Makutatron and Icarax." Flufskiron said. Makutatron looked angrily at Flufskiron, but he had been doing that the entire time. Norik however, looked up when Flufskiron mentioned Icarax, and Flufskiron smiled."But those leaders are dead and indisposed right now, and I, Flufskiron, want to explain what our purpose here is." Flufskiron said, "Our home was destroyed by war, and as such, we require the supplies to rebuild it annew. Unfortuneatly, supplies for a planet made out of metal is hard to come by." "So, all we need is enough supplies for it, and we'll be gone. But first you need to rid yourselves of the true criminals; the Autotoabots! These villians started the war, and escaped justice, hiding here, and claiming to be your allies! Expel them! EXPEL THEM!" Flufskiron ranted."Oh, and remember, that 300 foot long ship we have floating around? It's more than capable of destroying this island. Have the Autotoabots gone from this planet by tommorrow, or we will kill all of you until you are dead. Think about that." Fluskiron said. And with that, the broadcast ended.THE COLISEUMPresident Turaga Dume finished watching the broadcast, an eye twitching. "Why, why, why must this happen during the reign of moi?" he asked nobody in particular "this is a tough desicion. Let's get rid of the robots they want gone, so these other robots leave." he said."Now, it's good to see you put alot of thought into this, sir." Secretary of Defense Turaga Vakama said sarcastically."Ooooh, because we're in the position to aruge with the giant robots! Face it Vakama, you lack the style and ingeniuity of me!" Turaga Dume said.Turaga Vakama very much doubted that Turaga Dume had any style, but he let it go anyways. "If it's truly your wish to give in to their demands" Vakama said, sad that thye had given up so easily, "It's your choice. But do remember that the Autotoabots have fought for us for the past few years." "Phhhsaah, these robots said otherwise. Now, if you excuse me, I've just sent the order to save our planet." President Dume said."I'm sure." Turaga Vakama said as he turned and walked out, disapointed in his government.40 MINUTES LATERJaller and Wipeout, inside Pohatubee, (Blue Flame was driving up behind them) drove up to the field where the Autotoabots were. The iBrow was being prepared for take off, and the Wreckinators were making sure everyone knew what they shouldn't touch."Put your digits on this button and I will remove your entire arm." JackaL told Johnson."Why would you think I would? That's a stereotype to assume all Agorians enjoy breaking things. If anything you should be more worried about Nujack ripping apart the engines or a seat belt." Johnson said."Now that's just being.." JackaL was about to say when he saw Nujack looking through one of the engines. "NUJACK! YOUR ARMS ARE MINE!" JackaL yelled.Pohatubee let Jaller and Wipeout out (heh) then transmoced. "So it's actually happening.." Pohatubee said. Jaller's wrist burned, the Deceptikuta watch reminding him to speak with Matanui.Jaller began to walk to Matanui, Wipeout following beside him. A Matoran walked by carrying Wheeldax and Braindox in some little pet cage things."Jaller! Buddy! Ol' pal, you gotta help me! They've put me into this little prison!" Wheeldax said to Jaller, pleading for aid."I thought we was family!" Braindox said, banging his head against the bars."You'll, you'll be fine." Jaller said, looking for Matanui. His wrist was killing him. He saw Dakama Prime walk by, follow by Vakama Maximus and Hydraxhide, who had his leg rebuilt (not very well) and was using a very large gun as a crutch.Jaller ran up to them. "Dakama! Are you guys actaully leaving?" he asked.Dakama nodded. "We are. Pohatubee, Blue Flame, are you ready? We'll be leaving in a few minutes." "A few minutes?" Jaller said, shocked that they would be gone so soon."It doesn't take much time to ready a Metrutronian ship, especially the iBrow, and apprently not much to convince the Matoran to get rid of us." Hydraxhide said. He looked over to a large box on wheels. "So they've made Mataus' death in vain." Hydraxhide said, saying some words that weren't allowed on BZP.Jaller ran to Matanui, who stood solemnly before the iBrow. Omega Kaita was standing next to it, his optics fixed on the distant figure of the Terragator, just visible next to the Coliseum."Matanui!" Jaller yelled, running up to him. Matanui turned and looked down to Jaller. "You guys can't actually be leaving, can you?" Jaller asked him. Pohatubee, Wipeout and Blue Flame followed up behind Jaller. Turaga Nokama and Hewkii walked up too."It is your leader's choice. We our guests on your planet, and if your planet wants us gone, we have no choice." Matanui said. "Where is Hahli? I would have liked to have said farewell to her." Jaller looked to his feet, the Deceptikuta watch burning on his wrist. Pohatubee, Wipeout and Blue Flame looked at him, wanting to know his answer "She... she couldn't make it. Work or soemthing..." Jaller said, holding back tears, then continueing the subject "You can't just leave us! The Deceptikuta are still here!" Jaller pleaded."I had hoped that with Norik in charge that they might show mercy, but it appears Flufskiron is the one really in charge of them." Matanui said.Dakama Prime and his entourage got nearby now. "Flufskiron led the Deceptikuta in many battles against us. Mercy and concern for life are not his strong suits." Dakama said."They will probably kill you all. But other than that, you'll be fine." Vakama Maximus said. Dakama shot him a look."Where will we go? Metrutron is still under Deceptikuta control." Blue Flame asked."Wherever we can go." Matanui said, looking back to the iBrow. Tahkan Metra was walking up with Johnson and Jodkra.Matanui looked back to Jaller. "Jaller, you may lose your faith in us, but never in yourselves. From here on the fight will be your own." Matanui said, kneeling down and looking Jaller in the face, much like he did when he first met them in that alley way five years ago. "You are my friend Jaller, you have and always will be. In our travels I will remember you and your race, with the knowledge that even in the most distant of places, there is goodness in all peoples. Think what you will of us, but I will leave this planet with fond memories." Matanui said, pushing himself back to his feet.His wrist burning once more, Jaller decided to ask Matanui "What are you going to do? What's the plan?""There is no plan." Matanui said, turning away from Jaller "Goodbye Jaller." he said, walking to the iBrowJaller watched him walk away, shocked, confused, saddened, and feeling a lessening burn on his arm. He turned to Pohatubee, who had a sad look on his face. Or about as close to a sad look on his face as he could get, considering he was a giant robot and all...AANNNYYYWAAYYYSSS, Pohatubee kneeled down and put his hand on Jaller's shoulder, but ended up covering most of his back."I guess you gotta leave too, huh?" Jaller said, his voice choking up.Pohatubee nodded, "We had a good run, hey?" he said.Jaller nodded. "I'm happy you were the car we bought." Jaller said."Considering I broke all the other cars in the lot, you didn't have much choice." Pohatubee said. Jaller chuckled."Goodbye 'bee." Jaller said. Holding up his fist, they fist bumped."You stay classy now, ya hear?" Pohatubee said."I will." Jaller said."I'll see you on the flip side." Pohatubee said."Ok." Jaller said, a few tears rolling down his yellow mask."Your making this harder than it needs to be." Pohatubee said. Jaller smiled and put his hand on Pohatubee's shin""Say bye to Hahli for me, won't you? If you do manage to see her again." Pohatubee said."Come on Pohatubee. No need to draw this out." Vakama Maximus said, lifting Pohatubee up onto his feet. "So long Jaller." Vakama Maximus said, waving at Jaller. Pohatubee looked back at Jaller as Blue Flame pushed him along.Jaller looked on as they walked off, then Hydraxhide stood beside Jaller."Well kid, it was nice knowin' ya, fer a little bit atleast. I don't like that we're leaving your planet in the hands of the Deceptikuta, but we aren't in the spot to argue about it." Hydraxhide said, then poking Jaller with one of his he said "Don't get yerself killed too bad, will ya?" "I'll try not to." Jaller said."Ahah! Good answer." Hydraxhide said, limping off. Dakama Prime was next. "I wish we could stay Jaller, but Matanui says we need to listen to some Matoran who don't have any common sense." Dakama said, shaking his head and walking off."Well Jaller, I wish Hahli was in Kongu's building, but I guess she's gone off somewhere to hide when the Deceptikuta eventually decide to attack you guys. Smart girl." Blue Flame said, then walked to the iBrow."Don't forget about me. Oh wait, you probably will. Whatever, I wish I'd done a better job of helping you into Kongu's building, what Blue Flame just covered that." Wipeout said, going to ship.Tahkan Metra looked down at Jaller. "You know Jaller, I think my favourite Matoran would be Hewkii. But you'd probably be a close second. Third. Well, probably fourth. But your up there. Too bad you all have to pay for one Matoran's bad weakness." Tahkan Metra said, kind of complimenting Jaller in his own insulting way. He too went to the ship.Johnson was next "I never really got to know you Jaller, but you seemed like a swell guy." Johnson said."Well, that was about as thoughtful as what Tahkan just said." Jodkra said."It was a lot kinder than what Tahkan said! Your just a poor measure of anything regarding actual emotion!" Johnson said."No I'm not! I'm obviously better than Tahkan or Galcee!" Jodkra said."Your a robot! You don't have actual emotion!" Johnson said.Jodkra was shocked. "OOOOOOHH!! Now that's stereotyping at its finest!" he said "First of all, I'm Metrutronian, not a simple robot! Secondly, Metrutronians actually have the ability to feel emotions!" While the argued Jaller was shocked to see a Po-Matoran in a whel chair being pushed by a Ko-Matoran show up, with another Po-Matoran in a black mask following them."12345? What are doing here?" Jaller asked "Wait, Hafu!" he said, recognizing the Po-Matoran following them."How's it going Jaller? I see I'm retired for a year and they kick the Autotoabots off of the planet." Hafu said.Hewkii, who was nearby, saw his old friend. The New Guy saw him too, but Hewkii spoke first."THEY LET YOU RETIRE? I'VE BEEN WORKING NONE STOP IN THE MILITARY FOR SIX YEARS NOW!" Hewkii yelled."And how've you been Hewkii?" Hafu said, and when he saw Hewkii was lifting his feet, he lifted his own, because he thought it was a fist bump. He got punched in the shoulder."Right, the gruesome twosome are back now. Yaay! Now, more importantly me and my now useless legs." 12345 said. The New Guy was a little sad that he got forgotten about there, but he lived with it."Und me!" Hickory said."Quiet!" 12345 snapped. Jaller looked at the iBrow, which Jodkra and Johnson were walking to now."I can't believe they're actually leaving." Hafu said."They're going to be gone, and the Deceptikuta will attack us, I'm sure of it." Hewkii said."Years from now, we're gonna look back at this guy, and their gonna ask us "Where were you when they took over the world?" and we can say that we just watched our last chance leave." 12345 said.There was a silence."That was very depressing." The New Guy said."It's a depressing atmosphere, OK?" 12345 said.The Autotoabots, meanwhile, were just about ready to leave. Matanui looked back at this planet that they had called home for the past few years, and he felt sad. He knew the other Autotoabots weren't pleased with this descision, which he was secretly happy they wanted to stay here, but they had to go. There was no need to make enemies of the Matoran."I should up here wiht two cannons and both legs, now I'm leaving with one of both." Hydraxhide said."We're also leaving with less Autotoabots than what we should up with." Dakama Prime said, looking at the box that contained Mataus' body."Hey, atleast we got Omega Kaita back." Vakama Maximus said, trying to look on the bright side."Does Omega understand what we're doing?" Dakama said."Koptachet and his dog are talking to him." Vakama Maximus said.Kopatchet (and Crashinator) were trying to explain the situation to Omega Kaita."Which is why we must leave." Kopatchet said, saving you the time of hearing what you already knew."So we are taking orders from beings who do not understand their current dilemna?" Omega asked Kopatchet."We're hoping that the Deceptikuta are actually serious about rebuilding Metrutron. We doubt it, but we can hope. Besides, having Metrutron back would be nice." Kopatchet said."I do not have your attachment to Metrutron. Metrutron was totalled by the war, and this planet lacks the resources to properally repair it. It would be better to start annew." Omega said."Yea well you never saw it before the war. You only knew it as the destroyed part of Karzahni that it is now." Kopatchet said."That is irrelevent." Omega Kaita said.Matanui meanwhile, looked to his Autotoabots; Dakama Prime, Phoenix Prime, Kopatchet, Hydraxhide, Vakama Maximus, Blue Flame, Pohatubee, Wipeout, Galcee, Tahuswipe, Crashinator, Wipeout, Jodkra, Johnson, Nujack, Wipeout, Ramenbolt, LesoSpinn, JackaL, iBrow and of course Wipeout.There, that should make up for all those times I've forgotten him, both Matanui and the writer thought."Autotoabots, today the Deceptikuta have won a great victory over us. We will avenge ourselves." Matanui said. The Autotoabots nodded."Ahright, when we're on the ship, don't touch anything, or you'll be walking home." iBrow said as he led the Autotoabots aboard, Kopatchet taking the trailer he had been working on with him and Dakama taking the box that contained Mataus' body.Turaga Nokama walked up to Jaller. "You were right about Norik, or whatever it was that you came to tell us about, and now we're paying for it." she said.Jaller only nodded. A siren was sounded, time to move back. When the Matoran were out of range of the all the smoke and fire that would come from the ship taking off, they looked back at the ship. The iBrow's cloak was disabled, as proof that they were leaving. A few Matoran camera crews showed up to film it. Omega Kaita walked back as well, standing near the edge of a small cliff."Why's Omega standing there?" Hewkii asked."No idea." The New Guy answered."Lift off in 5....4.....3...2... Oh pants, split my coffee... hang on...." a Matoran in a control tower said. The iBrow took off anyways, much to the annoyance of the Matoran working the tower.The Matoran watched the iBrow ascend into the sky, and Jaller walked to the side, and took the phone Kongu had given him out.Dialling the only number on it, he called Kongu. Taking a deep breath, he spoke "They have no plan. They're just leaving." Jaller said."Really? Even better then." Kongu answered. On the other end of the line, Kongu told this to Laserhawk, who told it to Sounprah, who told it to....Dreadinock.Jaller was confused by Kongu's answer, when he heard another alarm sound. "Unauthorized aircraft entering air space..." a Matoran said on a computer."What? I thought this was closed off!" Nokama said."GOTT IM HIMMEL!" Hickory yelled. The Matoran looked up.Two F-22's flew across the sky, then transmoced. Skystrike and Thunderstrike, carrying some space bridge pillars, activated them in a circle."Oh, this will be good." Skystrike said, smiling deviously. Thunderstrike just looked on. The pillars, activated by another set at the Tohu Memorial, created a blue portal like thing, and the Terragator came out of it.On board the iBrow the Wreckinators tried furiously to turn the ship, shoot or something, but the Terragator was on them too soon."FIRE EVERYTHING!" Dreadinock yelled to his crew, who promptly did. As mentioned several chapters ago, the Terragator has enough fire power to destroy entire cities.The iBrow didn't.iBrow's beloved ship was torn apart instantly, huge pieces flying apart, covered in fire. The ground crew knew instantly that the Autotoabots had been killed, also instantly.And so did Omega Kaita.With a yell of anger that would undoubtely go in your top tne lists of yells of anger, he prepared his massive arm cannon and fired at the Terragator, then activating the huge jets in his feet, launched his entire, 112 foot tall body at the ship.The shot knocked otu some of the weapons systems on the Terragator, but it's remaining weaponry fired back, slowing down Omega's advance until they sent him back down, where he lost control and landed in the ocean with a splash that would also go in your top ten list of really big splashes.Jaller stared wide-eyed, a silent tear running down his yellow mask. The Deceptikuta watch on his wrist transmoced and ran for it, and Jaller stomped on it in a fit of anger, although ti still escaped.Hewkii, Hafu and the New Guy looked at each other, shocked. 12345 shook his head, and Hickory stared at the flaming pieces of the iBrow. A few pieces of Omega's grey armour floated to surface of the water.Dreadinock surveyed the damage on a computer. Half the weapons had overheated themselves in the effort to stop Omega, and most that weren't overheated had been destroyed by his shot. But it was OK, they would probably see no more true combat on this planet, atleast in time to repair them."Flectadok, was there any other damage?" Dreadinock asked a nearby Deceptikuta."Wasn't my fault!" Flectadok answered."That's not what I asked you tinhead!" Dreadinock snapped.Skytrike and Thunderstrike landed on the small landing strip on the front of the Terragator, and went to see Dreadinock. They carried the space bridge pillars with them."Will you have us set the pillars back up, O esteemed Dreadinock?" Skytrike said."No. The Terragator can go there properally, as long as the damage is only to part if the weapon systems." Dreadinock said "And what's with you Strikers and being such suck ups?" he said."I'm not a suck up!" Thunderstrike said."No, you're just stupid." Dreadinock replied, turning to Nihiscream, who was chained or something to a wall. "There now Nihiscream, you've seen our victory. I believe I'll kill you now." Dreadinock said.Nihiscream looked a teeny bit afraid.THE TOP OF THE COLISEUMWatching the destruction of the iBrow and, by the looks of it, destruction of Omega Kaita, Flufskiron smiled. The fact that the Matoran had filmed the whole thing live made it even better."Well Shockvak, don't you just love when a plan comes together?" Flufskiron said to the one-eyed Deceptikuta beside him."It is a pleasing notion." Shockvak said."Well, do want the honours, or not?" Flufskiron asked him."You may say it." Shockvak answered."Joy!" Flufskiron said. Turning to Soundprah, who hooked a wire into Flufskiron's arm, Flufskiron sent a message to his leutenant Swiftinock on the moon. "Swiftinock, ready the pillars and the fleet, AND BEGIN THE SLAUGHTER!" Flufskiron said happily."Activate your pillars, we're already ready." Swiftinock replied."Very good." Flufskiron said, then made a motion to Norik Prime, who once more took the Sun Matrix out.Norik took one last glance in the direction that the iBrow had been; the shape of the Terragator could be seen making its way towards them."For Metrutron!" Norik said, activating a pillar, and attaching it to one of the spikes on top of the Coliseum. He did the same three more times with another three pillars and the remaining three spikes, then placed the last control pillars into a structure the Deceptikuta had made there. Activating all five pillars, they sent a blue light into the sky, where it opened a portal on the moon. There the Deceptikuta fleet entered, and appeared above Metru-Nui."And it will be... glorious." Flufskiron said, looking to the doom of Metru-Nui.The Ultimate Doom, you could even say.END OF CHAPTER.FUN COMMENTARY: Ohs Noes! The Autotoabots! Omega! Things look bleak for our heroes, as long as you haven't seen Dark of the Moon yet. And for the first rela time you saw how strong the Terragator was, being able to, in seconds, destroy the iBrow and knock down Omega Kaita.Also, to take your mind off of the violent murder of all your favourite characters (hehe), here's a sneak peak of what I'm going to do after Transonicle 3. Here's the hints, and if your the first one who can guess what the parody is about, you get a free MAIN CHARACTER guest star in it! (it'll have to fit with the theme of course)THE HINTS!Zack Snyder, Frank Millar, Thermoplaye, Gerad Butler, Shield wall, LOTS! OF! EMPHASIS!Good day!MTL

Gimli should be simple (Dwarf bodies and all being already done) but magistic and awesome. This poster just looks... awesome. I think the hair piece is just short enough for the arrows to fit, and it may very well be a new quiver mould.Awesome.And his new sword? Lovin' it.I want to see the rest of the line already!!!!MTL

Ex-cell-ent.These sets will be... precious...MTL

Well, haven't updated this guy in a while, so I thought I'd do so.Fun Commentary: This is a brand new chapter! In the original topic, Turaga Vakama, 12345, Nixie and Nuparu (and Hewkii and Hafu, really) don't really do anything after the first chapter of Lego City. And since this scene was missing, too, I thought I'd throw it in. And I also needed to reintroduce Transraga, who didn't really have a true introduction in the original either. Also, I never mention Enderth and Transraga escaping the Sector Six headquarters,except in the final chapter, so I thought that would work well as well. I also finally explain how the air force shows up too. This chapter's reintroduction of Turaga Vakama is because he's in the next chapter of Transonicle 3, and I needed him back.TRANSONICLECHAPTER 19LEADERSHIP SKILLS AND SUCHLEGO CITY, PO-METRUHewkii and Hafu fired what they could at Bradak (who they just called "that tank thing"), and weren't doing much. Bradak wasn't moving fast, and as such, was getting hit with alot. Bradak was missing one arm, one of his shoulder mounted missile launchers, and severla pieces of armour, yet he still kept going. Firing missiles at the Hewkii and his soldiers, Bradak was hit with a few shots from Blue Flame, how ahd to dodge some rockets from Blacktaka flying above."It would be nice if we could do more than TICKLE THEM!" Hafu yelled, firing all he could. Bradak concentrated back on them, firing a tank shell at them."If we could tell someone to send the air force...." Hewkii said, ducking under some rubble. Suddenly, he remembered soemthing. "Hafu! Where did that radio we bought go to?" Hewkii asked him.Hafu thought for a moment, then looked down the road. It was lying, unscathed, nearly 10 feet from Bradak."If you want to run for it..." Hafu said."Where's an Autotoabot..." Hewkii asked nobody, looking around."'Sup." Wipeout said, standing behind them. Hewkii and Hafu nearly jumped out of their masks."Right, uh..." Hewkii was about to say, but then realized he didn't know Wipeout's name."It's Wipeout, don't forget it. Although you probably will." Wipeout said, firing at Bradak, which was a little useless."Look, you see that radio right there?" Hewkii said, pointing to it.Wipeout looked at it. "I do." he said."We need it!" Hewkii said."Why on earth would you want that artifact?" Wipeout asked."To contact back up." Hewkii said.Before Wipeout could say something, one of Bradak's missiles landed nearby and sent some Matoran flying."Perhaps we do need it." Wipeout said, running over the rubble they were hiding behind, doing a flip, transmocing into his little hover-bike-thing mode, and sped to the radio, dodging some shots from Bradak. When he got to it, he transmoced, fired what he could at Bradak, grabbed the radio/walkie talkie thing and went back to Hewkii and Hafu, who provided what cover they could.Somehow, somehow, Wipeout made it back unhurt, handing the radio to Hewkii."Well, that was a bit too close for my liking." Wipeout said.Hafu and Hewkii fumbled with the radio thing, trying to figure out how to contact Sector Six."How do we work this thing?" Hafu said, basically paraphrasing what I just wrote."Turn it on!" Hewkii said."Oh, that might work." Hafu said. Flipping a switch, the radio started to make a buzzing sound. "Right, now to call Sector Six." Hafu said."Why not the military?" Hewkii asked."You got stuck with some guy trying to sell you Geico. I don't think we're gonna make it through this time." Hafu said. Hewkii shrugged. There was an explosion right behind them, sending debris raining down."Hurry up!" Wipeout said, firing a mini-missile at Bradak. The missile spun and struck Bradak in the knee and did... nothing."I'm gettin' through!" Hafu said.THE CANYON OF UNENDING WHISPERS12345, Secretary of Defense Turaga Vakama, Nixie and Nuparu ran into a small, fikou-web covered room, filled with computers and such."Why are we in here? Don't you have stuff that was made in the last 30 years?" Nixie said, looking at the old computers."Can't use 'em, can't use 'em.." 12345 said, looking through old junk. Turaga Vakama held his cane, eyeing the room."Didn't that motorcycle thing drop off some little robot back there?" Turaga Vakama said, refering to Enderth a few chapters back."Doesn't matter, won't follow us.." 12345 said, reaching into an old trashcan. "Ahhah!" he said, lifting out a device that looked older than Christopher Lee. "A morse code thing-a-magig?" Nuparu said."Exactly! The Deceptikuta can presumably monitor our other lines, but I bet you my mother that they can't do didily-squat to one of these!" 12345 said."Awesome!" Nuparu said, fist-pumping the air."Great! So do you know morse code?" Nixie asked. 12345's smile faded."Well this is just great." Turaga Vakama said. Suddenly, there was a crash from out in the hallway."Is that the pizza guy?" Nuparu asked hopefully. A shurikan went flying though the ajar door, hit a post behind Nuparu and exploded."It's the pizza guy from Karzahni!" 12345 said, tossing the morse code thing to Nixie. "You kids contact the military! There's a morse code dictionary behind the desk, use it!" 12345 said as he reached into a fish tank and pulled out... a fake castle."Thought there was a gun in there.." 12345 said, sad."I got all the gun we need." Turaga Vakama said, pointing his cane up, revealing it to be a cane/shotgun. Awe-some."COME GET SOME YOU ROBOTIC DEVILS!" Turaga Vakama said, firing it once. "YEA!" 12345 said, pushing a desk infront of the door in an effort to barricade it.Outside the door, Frendox and Transraga, who had been dropped off by Enderth a few chapters back, dodged the shots from the shotgun."These vermin have teeth!" Transraga said."Theydietheydietheydietheydie!" Frendox said, launching shurkians at the door. They made dents in it, but didn't break it.Turaga Vakame fired through the small hole in the door. "METRU-NUI!" he cried. 12345 pulled a pistol out from his belt.Nixie and Nuparu worked with the morse-coder, the dictionary open in front of them."Right, two beepities for this.... another for that.." Nuparu said, tapping at it furiously. Nixie hooked it up to the computer, which turned on faintly. "I think.. We're doing it! We're through and receiving!" she yelled to Turaga Vakama."Excellent!" Turaga Vakama said, stepping back and firing a few more times. "They're scurrying off!" 12345 said. Turaga Vakama went over to Nuparu and Nixie. "Send everything I say!" Turaga Vakama said, opening his mouth to speak. Suddenly there was a banging in the air ducts above."I didn't even know there were any of those in here.." 12345 said."Let 'em have it!" Turaga Vakama said, firing at the duct. A few holes appeared in it, then Frendox fell through, landing in a fish tank. Transraga went through the unguarded door, firing his meager assortment of weaponry.Turaga Vakama stood unfazed as a shurikan passed by him, nearly taking off Nuparu's head. He fired at the Deceptikuta, letting them have it."Killthemkillthemkillthemkillthem!" Frendox said, taking cover behind a pillar."Holy pants Frendox, I'm a doctor not a soldier!" Transraga said, shooting the best he could. A shot from 12345's pistol hit Transraga in the neck. "Ach! Ach! Myn, mein vocal processors, zey are damaged!" Transraga said.Frendox launched another two shurikans, one of which was shot right out of the air by Turaga Vakama, making it explode and blocking Frendox's view. The other went around the room, spinning, spinning, spinng, until it came back..And hit Frendox in the head. Frendox was surprised in that one second before the shurikan exploded, destroying the Deceptikuta scout. Transraga was too close to the explosion, and it sent off one of his arms. Clutching the wound, he began to retreat. Turaga Vakama continued shooting, the shots weakening Transraga's neck joints until his head gave way, and it rolled off."Ow." Transraga said, still alive. Small drones can handle such losses. He crawled on as the Matoran celebrated their victory."We sure showed those suckers, huh?" 12345 said, fist bumping Turaga Vakama."Most fun I've had in a long time." Turaga Vakama said."Right, what do I need to send?" Nuparu asked Turaga Vakama.Suddenly the phone rang."Yellow." 12345 said, picking it up."Is this that Sector Six guy with the sunglasses?" Hafu said."I am." 12345 said."Well, we got friendlies mixed with bad guys over here, and we're being owneded." Hafu said."Consider it fixed." 12345 said, relaying the words to Turaga Vakama.PO-METRU AIR FORCE BASEA Matoran general was playing solitaire on his computer when another Matoran brust into the room. "Sir, we got a message. Lego-City's under attack from giant robots, and they can't fight back!" the Matoran said."I always knew this day would come." The Matoran general said, looking at a painting of a window. "Assemble the Avengers!" the General said."Uh, sir?" the Matoran asked, confused."Get the jets ready!" the General said."Oh." the Matoran said, walking out."Oh, and officer." the General said.The Matoran turned to the General. "Sir?" he asked."BRING THE RAIN!" the General shouted."Uh, ok." the Matoran said, walking out and not looking back.THE CANYON OF UNENDING WHISPERSTransraga's head crawled along to the main room where he had entered with Enderth, whose body was lying ahead-Heheheheh- of him now, surronded by Sector Six agents. Enderth's head moved a bit, saw Tranraga, then the larger Deceptikuta jumped to his feet, his hands turned into saws, and got rid of the Matoran surrounding him. He picked up Tranraga's head, transmoced into his motorcycle form, and escaped the complex.END OF CHAPTERMTL

Slizers? Now, those are some bad fellows. Considering they just pounded the beMata-Nui out of Maxilos, I'd say Strakk, Malum, Tarix and Lewa Mata are very screwed indeed.Of course, the newer sets could just use their advanceded articulation!*ba-dum tssissh*Really lame joke on my part there.. just move along....MTL

Too good to be true. What did I tell you? Logic. 'Tis a harsh mistress. Giant armies. 'Tis a really harsh mistress. And that, Xplode, is why it's important to communicate all important information before you have a frozen bowl of Toa on you. Which is why you FALCAWWNN KICK!!!Another swell chapter, although I'd like to see Omega Turtle's excuse to "Why'd you remove him from your stomach and freeze him?"MTL

Better than I can express in words. Having tried painting Bionicle figures a few times myself, and having them look like garbage, I can truly appreciate how good this looks. Of all the details, the wear is one of my favourites, since you took the time to make it realistic, which not every custom I'v seen has done (like my few...)I was going to say the base needs either more colour or a different one (or more details), but then I thought "Hey, it's about the statue, not the base." So in that way, the base works even better because it brings out the blues, oranges and silvers or the Bordakh even more. Not to mention the Morzubakh just adds that extra finesse to top it all off.And hearing all the work that went into all of it, you got my respect!MTL

And that is how you stop the villian: get rid of them BEFORE they do something bad!And how could you not be absolutely afraid of someone named Omega Turtle? (it does kinda sound like a really bad B-movie)I want to see iBrow and Kipik's raid...MTL

That must've taken some guts, not to mention enough skill to make the stop motion in the first place! Congrats to him, the best I could probably do would be writing "WILL YOU MARRY ME?" on her wall in with my own blood. Or ketchup.Hope thier happy together!MTL

I'm contemplating actually doing it too... T'was a bit more heavy with the drama, wasn't it. Of course, Jodkra and Johnson knew Mataus for probably less than a week, not to mention their race has been at war for the past million years or so, so they probably don't grow too attached to the new guy they just met. Unless it's the New Guy, everyone loves him and the fact noone knows what his name is :PThe next chapter: Deceptikuta have words with the Matoran, specifically President Turaga Dume, and then things go from bad to worse for the Autotoabots. I might also work on Transonicle Re-Mastered for a little bit after that, just because I haven't updated it in a while..And I just noticed I forgot about Blitztran in the last chapter! That's what I get for having too many characters....MTL

Evil Tahu is awesome. While the Mesoquack was good as usual, Evil Tahu stole the show for me. MOAR EVIL TAHU!!Another good chappyMTL

Well, sorry the chapter was so late, but I got exams in a week and I studying.... so...TRANSONICLE 3: THE ULTIMATE DOOMCHAPTER 21FROM ALRIGHT TO BADTA-METRU, METEU-NUIIt didn't take much before Matanui realized the Deceptikuta were up to something. They kept following Makutatron and the Deceptikuta with him, who kept moving, seemingly drawing the Autotoabots further and further away from something. Then they just gave up and ran off, and Matanui realized that they had been played.And when Vakama Maximus had sent a message saying something about Norik betraying, Deceptikuta attacking and Mataus being killed, Matanui went back to PEST headquarters as fast as possible.When he, Phoenix Prime, Dakama Prime, Kopatchet, Ramenbolt, Tahkan Metra, Nujack and the Wreckinators returned, they found PEST headquarters in ruins. Fire crews had showed up to help, but the building was nearly destroyed. There were several large holes in it, smoke coming from each of them, and there was a line of Matoran bodies with sheets over them.Matanui arrived first, transmocing and looking at the rubble. Vakama Maximus was first to come up to him."It's worse than it looks," Vakama Maximus said, "and the pillars are gone. Norik took them, as well as Blitztran."Matanui stared solemnly into the fires. "And Mataus?" he asked.Vakama Maximus shook his head and led Matanui to him. Tahuswipe and Galcee had taken Mataus' body out of the building he had been launched into, revealing that his chest (and due to his small size, most of his torso) had been ripped right through by Shockvak's shot, putting a hole right through him.Matanui sank to one knee and looked at the fallen Autotoabot. "Mataus." was all Matanui could say."He's with Onewaflap now." Vakama Maximus said. Matanui nodded and stood, still looking at Matau's body."Hydraxhide is over here. He's fine, and I'll bet he's had worse, but he's right mad." Vakama Maximus said."Lead then." Matanui said. The two walked to Hydraxhide, who had Nujack and Koptachet attempting to work on his lost leg, with Crashinator nearby."The old one is not too bad." Crashinator said, looking at the pile of rust."It's a pile of rust! It's only use now is graffiti and poisoning small animals!" Kopatchet said, looking to Crashinator, who was in his wolf form."Would you like a cannon as a leg? You could shoot it." Nujack said."I don't want another cannon! I had two, and I'm not replacing it! You try that nonsense again and I'll show you what I did to Crankdok!" Hydraxhide threatened. Nujack leaned back a bit."We just need to properly make a new leg, that's all, not too hard." Kopatchet said."You couldn't fix a gun if I told you how to! I don't want you messin' around with my leg!" Hydraxhide said. Looking around, he finally saw Matanui and Vakama Maximus watching."Good to see your mind is alright." Vakama Maximus said.Hydraxhide ignored him. "They couldn't save Mataus, could they?" he asked Matanui."No, he was lost the second he was shot. I'm sorry." Matanui said.Hydraxhide looked away. "It's Norik's fault. He betrayed us, and let Shockvak, that no good one-eyed tinhead attack us with that giant metal worm, then take the pillars and Blitztran. And he shot my leg! I'm gonna riop out his spark an' show it to him!" Hydraxhide said angerily."Easy now, old friend. Let Kopatchet and Nujack fix your leg first." Matanui said."Fine. But I call dibs on killin' Shockvak. Then Norik. Then Makutatron. Then maybe Nihiscream if the chicken legged coward is nearby." Hydraxhide said."See? He's fine." Vakama Maximus said."Stay here with him, Vakama Maximus. I'm going to go find Dakama." Matanui said, turning and walking off.Dakama Prime was supervising the removal of items from Kopatchet's lab, which had somehow not been totalled yet."Well, this is a fine mess we have here." Dakama said, carrying out a pile of items that were either weapons or giant toasters. It wasn't exactly clear."I don't know why Norik would do this. How could he betray us like this?" Matanui said.Tahuswipe, who was nearby, answered. "He said something about saving Metrutron, and that this planet must pay to save it." Dakam realized something. "Matanui, do you still have the Sun Matrix?" he asked."No, I-" suddenly Matanui saw the implications "No, Norik has it." "And the pillars!" Dakama said.Matanui looked to the sky, which was darkening with the onset of night. "Then I've doomed this planet." Matanui said, slamming a fist against a wall. Suddenly a voice was heard, yelling at Matanui. "Matanui Prime! THIS IS YOUR FAULT!" yelled Nokama, followed by what remained of her guard."Hey! How was he supposed to know this would happen!" Dakama snapped, dropping the toaster weapons of doom and taking out his huge axe, which was big enough for Nokama and her guard, along with their entire families, to dine on comfortabely, with a nice Kane-Ra or Muaka dinner."Calm down, Dakama. She is justified. Without my help, Norik would not have come here." Matanui said. Dakama looked at him all surprised like."It's not your fault Matanui!" Dakama said."Even so, I will fix it. Where's Phoenix?" Matanui asked.Pohatubee, Jodkra and Johnson arrived, surprised by all the smoke. They drove past the wrecked bodies of Crankdok and Crowdax, which the Wreckiantors had taken the time to laugh at."Well, this doesn't look too good." Jodkra said, transmocing. Johnson transmoced as well and looked around. "Now, what did we miss?" Johnson asked.Ramenbolt, a tall, black and bulky Autotoabot who hasn't done much in this story, answered Johnson "Norik has betrayed us, taken the space bridge pillars, released Blitztran, killed alot of Matoran and Mataus, and shot off Hydraxhide's leg." Ramenbolt answered."Is Hydraxhide alright?" Johnson asked."No more than usual." Ramenbolt said.Jaller helped Hickory carry 12345 out of Pohatubee, who finally transmoced."What's wrong with him?" Ramenbolt asked."Broke his back." Jodkra answered."That sucks." Ramenbolt said. Jaller however, had heard all of this. Almost dropping 12345 as he and Hickory were setting the Sector Six agent down, he remembered what they had deduced a chapter or so ago."Mataus is dead?" Jaller asked, completely ignoring what I just wrote above. Jaller remembered during the whole "Revenge of Icarax" nonsense how Mataus and Onewaflap had stayed with Jaller, Hahli, Takua, Pohatubee and Gunmetal (Wheeldax was there too, but..) through all of that, with Onewaflap sacrificing himself to allow them to escape from Nihiscream."He was killed by Shockvak. Nothing he could have done." Ramenbolt said somberly. Jaller looked down sadly at 12345, who was asleep or something right now. "Pohatubee, we have to go see Hahli." Jaller said."Blue Flame and Wipeout are with her, she'll be fine-oh wait, Kongu, yea, we should go." Pohatubee said, transmocing. Jaller turned to Johnson."Make sure 12345 gets some treatment, or atleast a band-aid." Jaller said, getting into Pohatubee. As Pohatubee drove off, Johnson looked at 12345."What the pants am I supposed to do?" he said, looking to Jodkra. His targetmaster partner just shrugged.THE TOHU MEMORIALFlufskiron sat in the throne that Makutatron had been using, eyeing the Coliseum. Shockvak would be returning with Norik Prime soon, and he needed to be ready.He summoned Sleedat. "Sleedat! Get me Nihiscream!" he yelled."Whatever you say." Sleedat said dryly. Flufskiron didn't care much for Sleedat, or many Deceptikuta for that matter. However, considering how much smarter she was than the average Deceptikuta, he had to keep some smarter ones around.Sleedat showed back up with Nihiscream. "What is your whim, O mighty Flufskiron?" Nihiscream said, bowing."Why would you even say that? It's like you want me to hit you or something." Fluskiron said."Oh, we wouldn't want that now." Nihiscream said."I am honestly surprised Makutatron didn't just kill you. He's killed things that have just looked at him funny, but you being creepy like that only got a beating?" Flufskiron said."Look, what is it you want?" Nihiscream said."Well, Shockvak will be returning with Norik soon, and I need you to bring some pillars to Dreadinock." Flufskiron said."Fly them there by myself? It will take hours!" Nihiscream said."Not if you SHUT UP AND GO NOW!" Flufskiron said. Nihiscream tilted his head, then went to pick up the pillars.KONGU'S BUILDING (near it atleast)Pohatubee drove to Kongu's building, with Jaller sitting nervously in the front seat. He was afraid that Kongu may have killed Hahli and his family, or made them listen to Friday or watch Batman and Robin, and if he was really bad, at the same time."I can tell you're apprehensive, Jaller." Pohatubee said."That sounded very creepy." Jaller said."Oh, sorry. I'll try the radio." Pohatubee said, turning the radio on. <And in other news, a recent string of attacks around the city, made by the bad robots, has caused fires and some casulities. You'll notice that the sky line looks especially morbid tonight, what with a few fires around the black night of Metru-Nui> "Pohatubee, do you go out of your way to find the most unpleasent things on the radio?" Jaller asked."Seems like it." Pohatubee answered. Jaller looked back out the window. A few fires could be seen, the amount concentrating the closer they got to the Tohu Memorial, and Kongu's building."Well, what could possibly go wrong here." Pohatubee said. Pulling up infront of the building, they saw Blue Flame, who was none to happy to see them."Well, nice that you all decided to come back!" Blue Flame said, transmocing, and Wipeout appearing next to him."Wipeout, shouldn't you be up with Hahli and my parents?" Jaller asked him."I was, until Hahli told me to get lost for helping you figure out that info about Kongu." Wipeout said."Well, where are they know?" Jaller asked him."Top floors, I belief. And if Kongu is really a bad fellow..." Wipeout said.Without really thinking, Jaller ran up the steps of the building and entered it."Shouldn't you have followed him?" Pohetubee asked Wipeout."What? Why me? You guys can barely remember my name half the time!" Wipeout said."Well it's not like Pohatubee and I can walk up the stairs in there, now can we?" Blue Flame said."Fine." Wipeout said, walking into the building "But you guys owe me one!"When he was gone, Pohatubee turned to Blue Flame. "Well, bad news...."Jaller got to the elevator first, already heading up it by the time Wipeout got to it. "Fine, guess I'll find my own way up." Wipeout said, transmocing and flying up the staircase. Since Jaller had hit the "express" button, the elevator got to the top floors in lightning fast speed. Running out, we went for the room called "totally not a trap or anything".Well, if the people you loved were possibly being killed by a creepy suck-up Le-Matoran, you might not read all the signs you needed to either.Running in, he tripped on a wire and fell, then suddenly he was grabbed and picked up by several Po-Matoran."Jaller, Jaller, Jaller, did you really walk into that? I honestly expected more from you." Kongu said."Well, that was rather embarassing. WHERE ARE THEY??" Jaller yelled, refering to his family."Now, now Jaller, calm down. You're among friends here." Kongu said. And then, like a vast, predatory bird, Lasorhawk flew down, landing nearby and aiming his machine guns at Jaller."Stay calm now, Matoran, I'd hate to... suicide you." Lasorhawk said."So you are working for the Deceptikuta!" Jaller said."You are a genius." Kongu said sarcastically "Of course, you did figure it out rather early, I will have to admit. You and that Sector Six agent. And Wipeout, who is flying up the stairs even as we speak. It would suck if anything... happened to him." Kongu said.Jaller hadn't been aware that Wipeout had followed him into the building. "He can take anything you throw at him!" Jaller said, not sure if that was true or not.Kongu smirked. "He may be an Autotoabot, but even they aren't invincible, as Mataus demonstrated earlier today." "Jaller, I don't know if you know this, but I have your parents, and the beautiful Hahli, held trapped in here. In fact, show them, Lasorhawk!" Kongu said. Lasorhawk made a hissing sound, then pulled back a curtain with his tail, revealing Hahli handcuffed to a desk."Jaller!" she said."Hahli!" Jaller said."How romantic! A hero, unable to save his princess! Tell me Jaller, do you want to know how I came to work for the Deceptikuta?" Kongu asked Jaller."I don't really want to know, actually." Jaller said."Oh, really? Because the story was really good." Kongu said."Was it?" Jaller said."Too bad! You're gonna hear it anyway!" Kongu laughed "It started with my father, who was the actual first Matoran on the moon. You see, he worked for the Ko-Matoran, and since they didn't want one of their own precious members being harmed in space, they sent an expy; my father. It didn't matter if a Le-Matoran was killed, as long as the Ko-Matoran looked good! As I'm sure you've found out, they found that crashed Autotoabot ship on the moon, as well as drag marks. What I'm sure you don't know is that the Deceptikuta were there at the time, and they had a little chat with my dear ol' papa." Kongu said.Jaller was wondering why it was taking Wipeout so long to get up the stairs."As Lasorhawk here can atest, Soundprah was very persuasive. My father went back to the Ko-Matoran with a warning: go back to the moon, and all the Matoran would die. Surprisingly, the Ko-Matoran listened, and the moon was left alone. But they stayed in touch with my father, who fed them information enough that they found out about the AllShiny, and sent Blacktaka to steal enough information to locate it and Makutatron. The rest, well, you were there for." Kongu said.Jaller had no idea who Soundprah and Blacktaka were, but he knew Makutatron and the AllShiny."And when pops passed away in a terrible accident invovling his car and a terribly placed cliff, I became the Deceptikuta's representitive on Metru-Nui." Kongu said."So this is all your fault." Jaller said."Well, yep." Kongu said, patting Jaller on the head. Jaller noticed his shiny Rolex. "And now you carry on our legacy Jaller." Kongu said as his watched transmoced into an insect like Deceptikuta and crawled down Jaller onto his wrist, where it transmoced back into a watch. Suddenly Jaller's wrist hurt like fire."It hurt's don't it? Neuro-zappings or another, which ruin your day. You my friend, are going to find out information from the Autotoabots for us, or Hahli and your parents here..." Kongu said. The end of Lasorhawk's tale turned into spikes, and it swung infront of Hahli's face.Kongu put a cell phone in Jaller's hand. "Call the number on this phone when you have anything useful for us, otherwise..." Kongu said."I'll gut her like a fish." Lasorhawk said."And it would be such a shame too. She is so pretty." Kongu said."You're evil." Jaller said, his wrist feeling like it was tearing him apart."I'm just doing my job. Drop him!" Kongu said. The Po-Matoran dropped Jaller, then went and hid behind some potted plants. Lasorhawk pulled the curtain back infront of Hahli, then it transmoced into a TV. Kongu got Jaller to his feet just as Wipeout burst through the wall, his hands turned into machine guns and his mouth in shoop-cannon mode (as seen in Transonicle 2!)"Ah, and here's the unforgettable Wipeout, dynamic as always." Kongu said.Wipeout looked confused."It's.... it's ok Wipeout." Jaller managed to say."I'd love for you all to stay, but Hahli went to Ga-Metru to get some milk. She was making cookies, and we were all out of milk to dip them in. She's such a sweet girl." Kongu said."That doesn't sound like Hahli at all." Wipeout said, lowering his guns."She's like an ocean. You can see the top, but the insides are deep and murky, just like Hahli." Kongu said."We should go, Wipeout. See how 12345 is doing." Jaller said, bent over and in excruiating pain."Why, what's wrong with him?" Wipeout asked."I'll explain on the way down." Jaller said.As Jaller and Wipeout left, Kongu shouted out to him "Don't forget to call!" VOYA-NUIDreadinock sat in his favourite command chair on the Terragator, watching his smaller gunships and soldiers preparing. And then he saw Nihiscream land on the mini landing strip on the front of the Terragator."Excellent." Dreadinock said to himself, standing up. Walking through the entrance to the landing strip, Dreadinock welcomed Nihiscream."I've brought the space bridge pillars. I believe you know what to do with them." Nihiscream said, throwing down the 6 pillars he brought with him."Excellent." Dreadinock said again, some drones picking up the pillars. "Capture him." Dreadinock then said. Surprised, Nihsicream was grabbed and cuffed by several large drones."What is this? What are you doing?" Nihiscream cried, struggling to escape, and sending a missile off."I'm going to kill you Nihiscream, but It's only fair you get to see the destruction of this world first. As is only fair." Dreadinock said, watching Nihsicream be taken into the Terragator. He turned to some other drones. "Set those pillars up around the Terragator! Make the final preparations!" And he watched them do as he ordered. THE TOHU MEMORIALNorik Prime looked at the control pillars at his feet. Nearby were the other 1200 pillars, which would complete the plan. He looked in another direction. Flufskiron, Sleedat, Shockvak, Soundprah and a damaged Makutatron watched. In the back was Panrashot, Daedulus, Enderth and those other not-quite as important guys (like Barritax, Viewdok, etc.)"Are the ships on the moon ready now?" Norik asked Fluskiron.Flufskiron shook his head. "They have to wait for a little bit. We need to kill the Autotoabots first." Flufskiron said."Wouldn't it be easier to bring all the ships then?" Makutatron said."You're thinking too obvious, Makutatron. They'd expect that from you." Flufskiron said. Makutatron clenched his fists.Flufskiron held up one of the pillars. "We will only need one control to get it over here?" Flufskiron asked Norik."And 5 normal ones." Norik said. "Very good. Thunderstrike, Skystrike, Ramstrike, set these pillars up!" Flufskiron shouted. The three Strikers ran forward, Thunderstrike and Skystrike picking up two each and Ramstrike just getting one. His arms were reattached if you were wondering.Norik held up the control pillar they would use for this. Suddenly there was a flash behind them, and Norik was tackled and knocked over. The Wreckinators appeared, firing their weaponry, LesoSpinn dropping smoke bombs and normal bombs, disorientating the Deceptikuta. Phoenix swung his swords, slicing through a drone and Sleedat over.Norik tried to get up, but Matanui Prime held him down. "Get off of me!" Norik yelled, sturggling."You have some explainign to do first!" Matanui said. Suddenly he was thrown off by Flufskiron, who turned a fist into spikes and went to stab Matanui. Matanui rolled back up and epicly uppercutted Flufskiron, sending him back. Norik ran off with the control pillars, desperate to save them."NORIK!" Matanui yelled, chasing him."Keep the Deceptikuta away from Matanui!" iBrow yelled, firing his shotgun at Panrashot, nearly blinding the Deceptikuta."MAKUTATRON!" JackaL yelled, firing his cannon at Makutatron, hitting the Deceptikuta leader in the shoulder. Back on Metrutron, during the final battle, Makutatron had killed two Wreckinators, ripped out one of LesoSpinn's optics, nearly ripped out iBrow's spark and severly damaged JackaL, as well as ripping out Pohatubee's vocal processor.He wasn't their favourtive Deceptikuta.The Wreckiantors fired everything they had at Makutatron, who in his weakened state, was sent rolling back, blue energy leaking out of his chest. The Wreckinators probably would've killed him if Panrashot, Barritax, Sleedat, Daedulus, Enderth and some Strikers hadn't been there to distract them. Phoenix sliced through a drone, stabbed Panrashot in the leg, spun and dodged a missile from Sleedat.Norik threw the pillars to Soundprah as the Deceptikuta ran past, then Norik was tackled by Matanui once more. Rolling, they landed on a little statue thing the Deceptikuta hadn't bother to destroy in the three years they'd been in the Memorial.Norik got his sword out and held it to Matanui's neck. "Why Norik? This was our home!" Matanui said, struggling to pull away Norik's sword."Metrutron is our home! This is like a cheap RV we're stuck in! I'm only doing this for the good of our race!" Norik said."And what about Mataus?" Matanui asked, pushing Norik back."Mataus was an unfortunate loss, and I didn't know Shockvak would do that." Norik said, looking over to the Wreckinators and Phoenix Prime valiantly holding back the Deceptikuta, with Shockvak walking forward, firing his own cannon. So far the Drill Dragon was no where to be seen."So betraying us, killing Mataus and innocent Matoran is alright to you? Mataus was an Autotoabot, a Metrutronian, and those Matoran were our allies!" Matanui said, unable to bring himself to use weapons against his old friend."The road to victory is paved with sacrifice. Remember that Matanui, if nothing else I taught you." Norik said, his voice softening. Moving back, he lowered his sword "You were friend once, Matanui, and I don't want to kill you. Do not make me regret this. Our world msut be saved." Then Norik took the Sun Matrix, and attached it to a control pillar he pulled out. Sending it up, it connected in a ring with the other 5 pillars up there. A ring of blue energy went out between them, then across. The combatants below looked up.The front end of the Terragator came through, several smaller, five-propellared gunships going through as well. Opening fire on the Autotoabots, Matanui retreated as Norik watched."Autotoabots, retreat!" Matanui said, running from the explosions. Phoenix and the Wreckinators got to him as fast as they could, then Phoenix teleported them out of there.Norik watched as all 300 feet of the Terragator came into view, and remembered how that same ship had shot him down at the final battle on Metrutron, having already been reknown for killing countless Autotoabots.Norik found that he didn't care.END OF CHAPTER Fun commentary: Norik is going to become more and more.. well, not good, as the story moves along, don't worry. The Terragator missed the Autotoabots simply because it would be like shooting ants from 100 feet up in the air, and the Wreckinators are good enough fighters that they held back those Deceptiktua. If they're so good, how come they beat Makutatron so quickly? Simple, Makutatron used to be very strong and tough and such (if you remember in the first Transonicle, he single handedly beat down all the Autotoabots). And now he's not.And Norik doesn't know that the Terragator used to have Icarax on it....MTL

All of a sudden I see what you mean. Having a conversation like this with a mysterious robot is only logical. And Motor oil can fix anything if it talks :)Another good chapter, and Mesoquack's evil scheme of evilness should be suitibly evil. Or not.MTL

Well, how about we go by "Southern British Columbia, Canada" time? It's about 6:50 PM, Thursday here.......Tahuswipe had his share of lines in chapter 19 (kinda) and more in the one where the Deceptikuta attacked Jaller's house.MTL