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  1. Godmodding is grounds for losing a level, not gaining one. Just try to find someone who disagrees with me.
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    Instead, the Piraka make it to the chamber of the Ignika, only to have the mask fuse to Vezok's head. The Inika arrive to see the Piraka being soundly defeated by their once-ally with his much greater power and even greater greed. Unfortunately he was no match for their special Zamor launcher, and the Inika left the Piraka behind while they carried the mask to the surface. In a completely different part of the universe, the Federation of Fear group is killed by the traps on Artidax, happily ridding the world of Roodaka, Takadox, Lariska, and Spiriah. Miserix remains trapped and becomes easy prey for Teridax as he takes control of the universe. The Order's attack on Destral fails, Tridax keeps the Olmak, and escapes Teridax in another universe. Fortunately, Vezon's insane trans-dimensional journey never happened (whew.). Unfortunately, Lewa and the others are killed after Teridax dumped them into space. What if Takadox was never selected to be a Barraki?
  3. You caught me. I'm making up for Tear's second personality. Thanks everyone. I was honestly worried about the poison too, but hopefully it's balanced.
  4. Unfortunately, as said above, this detail came from canon, not me. I'm glad everyone is happy with it so far. I made a few minor changes, simply changing Dweller and Lariska's species name to Nynrans and Odins, respectively, to reflect their homelands.
  5. It's been over a year since the last topic, and I've learned my lessons, but this is just an idea I don't want to give up. And since the polls (and S&T in general) have slowed down, I submit this new list for potential canonization. I'll ask for your opinions and corrections, post my rebuttals, and make any necessary modifications. But please read the FAQs before you go off on how Brutaka and Hydraxon shouldn't be Steltans... To recap, BS01's Unnamed Species List has a ridiculous number of sapient species in the MU. Many of them were first mentioned in the bios of the Barraki, OoMN, and DH and simply waved off as their own unique species. But as we look closer, there are many characters with similar physical traits, powers, or histories. Many of the inconsistencies are easily explained by mutations or technology, or simply interspecies variations. Just as Matoran and Skakdi have elemental subspecies, many of these other species could be divided up in new ways. For example: Canon 1. Makuta Prototypes Darkness Eliminator Shadow Stealer This species was prototyped in Protodermis by the Great Beings to fill the role of peacekeepers and creators of the Rahi. Different powers were tested and refined until Mata Nui perfected their design and created them in Antidermis. These were given 42 Kraata powers, Shadow, Kaita Dissolution, and the ability to wear Kanohi. 2. Matoran Subspecies Toa Turaga The main inhabitants of the Matoran Universe, built to maintain Mata Nui's inner workings. Each Matoran possesses an elemental affiliation that is manifested as elemental control should they become a Toa or Turaga. They also have the ability to use Kanohi. 3. Skakdi Inhabitants of Zakaz, initially peaceful and powerless until Makuta Spiriah's modifications, from which they gained elemental powers when used with another Skakdi, vision powers, and other abilities, as well as an unquenchable thirst for violence. This species is known for their claws, wide grins, and long spines. 4. Steltan Subspecies Upper Class Brutaka Hydraxon Sidorak Voporak The Steltan Upper Class are tall and vaguely Toa-like. Though they can wear Kanohi, they do not depend on their use as the Matoran do. Even among the upper class of the Steltan society, their members are divided into ranks. Platinum armor is reserved for rulers while gold is a typical middle-class color. Hydraxon was created as the template for this species and future generations were modeled on him after he joined the Hand of Artahka. This species is resistant to Pit Mutagen and grow far more powerful when exposed to Antidermis, a trait that becomes noticable only in large quantities. Servant Krekka The Servants of Stelt, otherwise known as "Bruisers," are large and powerful beings, but their lack of intelligence keeps them from dominating the upper class. They are commonly used as workers or body guards. They are unable to use Kanohi. Slave Gladiator The Slaves of Stelt are even larger and more powerful than the Servants, and their speed and agility is unmatched by the others, but many are somehow forced into fighting for entertainment. 5. Vortixx Roodaka Conjurer Tracker The inventive and intelligent inhabitants of Xia. They are typically tall and armored in black. Their society is dominated by the women with little opportunity for men. Conjurer stole their advanced technology and set out for a life of his own and became a ruler of a small group of Matoran. They are able to wear Kanohi. Subspecies Johmak A subspecies of the Vortixx with the ability to shatter their bodies into crystal and reform at will. 6. Zyglak An amphibious species with a hatred for Matoran. Their scaly skin is coated with an organic Protodermis destroying disease. They are immune to Pit Mutagen and virtually invulnerable to elemental attacks. Barraki 7. Carapar Axonn Carapar's race was one of the first created in the Matoran Universe, as implied by Axonn's status as an ex-Hand of Artahka member. This species inhabited the Southern Isles and were dominated by warlords such as Axonn and Carapar, the latter of whom was called to be a Barraki. This species is generally large and powerful and have the ability to use Kanohi. 8. Ehlek In appearance, this species closely resembles Ehlek's mutated form. They are unable to breathe air and are thus most members are confined to the oceans around Zakaz. Each member has been modified by the OoMN, giving them great strength and powerful claws to kill Makuta. They are also able to wear Kanohi. Subspecies Amphibax The amphibious brethren of Ehlek's race with great agility both on land and in the sea. Also possess enhanced vision. These species are known to work closely together, even to the point of Amphibax leading other members of Ehlek's species. 9. Kalmah An ancient race inhabiting the bleak, icy land just south of Odina. The inhabitants are split into tribes led by warlords. Ancient's services once turned each tribe against one another in a great civil war that is rekindled every few thousand years. After the first war came to a close, the Shadowed One and Ancient left their island to capture the neighboring Odina after the first civil war. They will never mention their true origins, and they have been forgotten by their people, but the Dark Hunters always welcome newcomers from this island. This species is equipped with natural weapons such as claws, teeth, tusks, and often bladed tails in addition to powerful abilities unique to each tribe. Though they have the ability to wear Kanohi masks, their long, sheild-like faces with two protruding tusks make it difficult and uncomfortable, and thus few do. Tribes Fire/Heat Kalmah Tyrant Lurker Kalmah was selected to be a Barraki after his great successes as a leader of this tribe. He was eventually replaced by Tyrant, who left his position during the Toa/Dark Hunter War to become a Dark Hunter. At once point, Lurker killed a member of his tribe and was banished. This tribe inherits the ability to absorb and expel heat in great quantities, though Lurker prefers his natural tools, and Kalmah lost this ability when he was mutated. Their armor is typically a vibrant red. Earth/Stone Ancient Guardian After Ancient's departure, this tribe was betrayed by one of their own, and Guardian is the sole survivor. This tribe has the ability to make their armor as hard as stone and highly resistant to physical attacks. Their armor is typically blue with metallic coverings. Void The Shadowed One It is unknown if others remain after The Shadowed One left them. They possessed powerful eyebeams that were able to disintegrate a target. Their armor is typically black. 10. Mantax Trinuma This tall species is known for the large horns protruding from the back of their heads, though these became tentacles when Mantax was mutated. They also are able to wear Kanohi. 11. Pridak Tobduk The original inhabitants of Visorak. Pridak was taken to be a Barraki long before most of the rest of his civilization was destroyed by the Visorak. This species is generally tall and powerful and typically has the ability to feed on emotion to grow stronger. While Tobduk feasts on anger, Pridak's emotion may have been pride. They are able to wear Kanohi. 12. Takadox A species with the abilities to hypnotize others and wear Kanohi. Other 13. Botar Botar's Replacement Another race hailing from the Southern Isles, known to be "savage," perhaps meaning more primitive or superstitious than the rest of the universe. This species towers over most others and has the ability to teleport and use Kanohi. 14. Krahka Triglax A sentient species misclassified as a Rahi due to their shapeshifting habits, though they can also take the forms of other sentient beings. Some are able to copy inherent powers of the forms they take, or merge forms together. Very few remain after near devastation by the Visorak, many of whom remain in hiding or serving under more powerful beings who can protect them. 15. Mimic A species from a distant land that was destroyed in a natural disaster. At least some members of this species possess photographic reflexes. 16. Nocturn Sentrakh Four-armed OoMN member A four-armed and powerful species with the ability to regrow lost limbs. They are immune to Pit Mutagen. Their home island was destroyed by Nocturn with few survivors. Sentrakh was taken before or after and heavily modified by The Shadowed One. 17. Nynrans Dweller Vanisher Vengeance This is one of the few MU species to grow as they age, ranging from just below Toa height to towering titans. Their common traits include long, thin wings and horns atop their heads used to channel their psionic subpowers unique to each individual. They originally hailed from Nynrah and are still known to craft there, though members of their species proven to be too violent/not inventive enough were outcast. 18. Odins Lariska The original inhabitants of Odina. Lariska is the only known survivor after she betrayed the rest of her people to the Dark Hunters. 19. Primal Seeker These two are the last survivors of a four-legged race whose island was ravaged by Visorak, and afterwards all but Primal were killed by The Shadowed One. Seeker was recruited as a servant of the Brotherhood of Makuta and escaped the destruction. They are known to be agile and strong. To be reclassified as Rahi Airwatcher Airwatchers' backstory seems to imply he is one of the last of his kind. Perhaps the others were hunted to extinction or killed themselves off due to their own dim-wittedness. Airwatcher possesses wings and a chest launcher, the latter may have been the result of Dark Hunter modification. Poison A species nearly wiped out by Matoran as they were mistaken for unintelligent Rahi. Their poison, which is ejected from their mouths, paralyzes the victim and is lethal within half an hour, though they are not immune. They also possess stunning tails. FAQs 1. Why are Brutaka and Hydraxon classified as Steltans?! In the original topic, Akavakaku proposed a theory that Hydraxon, Axonn, and other members of the Hand were created about the same time as Toa Helryx and later used as templates for the rest of their species. Hydraxon likely never lived on Stelt. Brutaka's backstory mentions he was a "prominent figure" of his society before he was recruited by the Brotherhood and likely spent little time on Stelt as well. Brutaka was also known to have gained a large amount of power after being submerged in Antidermis. Though several members of this classification were known to fight Makuta, they were likely exposed to only trace amounts of Antidermis and the effects were less noticeable. But perhaps in early years the Steltans used this ability to gain dominance over the much stronger Servant and Slave classes. 2. But why can't Hydraxon be put with Axonn and Carapar?! My original list had this pairing, but so many people denied it, saying Hydraxon and Axonn have very few physical characteristics in common and felt like the only excuse was their similar names. So they're separated now. 3. But why can't Hydraxon be put with Trinuma and Mantax?! I really, really don't want to get into this debate again. Simply put, Trinuma's species is confirmed to have large and prominent horns, and these are noticeably lacking on Hydraxon. I see no reason to make allowances to dismiss Hydraxon from this canon detail when he could easily be a Steltan. 4. But not all of "Kalmah's race" have tails! Admittedly, this is pretty much the only obstacle with that huge leap that merged several species into an interesting race. Canonically, they all come from a land ruled by warlords and locked in a civil war. Physically, most of them have claws, tusks, digitigrade legs, and some manner of tail. However, Guardian is noticeably lacking this last trait. It could be he lost his tail in the wars or as a result of Dark Hunter modification. Maybe not all members of this species have tails. Whatever it is, these characters fit too well together in my mind to ignore for one tiny detail. 5. Why does Dweller's species have to live on Nynrah? Because honestly he's the only one that fits. Many of these characters are described to be the last of their species or their island destroyed or in war... Dweller (and the others categorized under him) has very little backstory and what little there is seems close enough to the known inhabitants of Nynrah. 6. Wait, Greg said Krahka was a Rahi and Triglax wasn't! Why are they sapient species when Airwatcher and Poison are not? We still have intelligent Rahi like Keetongu! "Rahi" is a very relative term in Matoran. It literally means "Not Us." There is no clear line between sapient species and Rahi with the exceptions like Airwatcher and Keetongu. This puzzled me and I asked this question in my What is a "Rahi?" topic. Basically the consensus was that it was entirely Matoran-defined. They see a creature and classify it based on its behavior. Krahka commonly shapeshifts into Rahi, while Triglax mimics other sapient beings, so it would be easy to see how a Matoran might mistake Krahka for a Rahi. 7. Where does Jerbraz fit into all of this? Given how little we know about Jerbraz's appearance before he turned invisible, it isn't really reasonable for me to try to figure out which one of these species he fits into. I'll leave that to another topic.
  6. IC: Tear - Infirmary Tear tried to keep her neck still as Fate helped her. It wasn't too bad.
  7. I've been hoping for something like this for some time now, so it's good to see something is finally going on.
  8. IC: Tear - Infirmary Laid back on the bed and nods, wincing with the small movement.
  9. IC: Tube - Gym "Master said you got hurt real bad, so we're taking you to Palma!" Tube explained cheerfully, seemingly hardly bothered by Slif's massive weight. IC: Tear - Infirmary "I... I don't know. I just... w-woke up with this p-pain in my neck." She turned her head to give Fate a better view. "That Rahkshi you were talking to... he d-didn't say anything about... me, did he?" IC: Melody - Infirmary Melody stepped back to let Fate do her work, but determined to stay close by for both Tear and Fate's safety. She glanced up at Sim, impatiently waiting for Palma to arrive. IC: Canvas - Hallways "Oh... right." It didn't sound right, but if he said so. Canvas squinted at his brilliant white armor covered in lightstones. It wasn't helping her headache. She leaned up against the wall again. "Well, thanks for the help, Vlad."
  10. IC: Tube - Gym "Okay!" Tube only half-listened to their Master's instructions, but still handled Slif with the utmost care as they helped the huge Rahkshi up. Their strength and slowness sure would come in handy here. IC: Canvas - Hallways She stepped forward woozily, realizing too late that Vlad didn't offer a hand. "Canvas," she said simply.
  11. IC: Tear - Infirmary Melody seemed to relax, so Tear muttered her name in a voice barely audible. "T-Teer."
  12. IC: Tube - Gym "Ooh! Ooh!" Tube was waving their hand in the air like they were waiting to get called on by their Master. "Can I help the leaky one?" IC: Canvas - Hallways Canvas took a deep breath to calm herself... then another, before turning to the others. "Thank you all so much for helping me with that guy. I... I really appreciate it." Her vision felt all spotty again. She casually leaned up against a wall and tried to focus instead on changing her armor to a more friendly brown of Quick Healing, with her own splash of white like Palma. She always liked those colors. IC: Melody - Infirmary She watched curiously as the unfamiliar Rahkshi wheeled a cart from Tear's injured friend to Tear herself. Nervously, she asked, "C-c-can we h-help y-y-you?" Tear turned with those words, fixing her bleary, teary eyes on the tools as Fate sorted them.
  13. IC: Canvas - Hallways She was still thinking over his last question. "Oh, thank you. It's good to be out of that maniac's shadow."
  14. IC: Canvas - Hallways She was watching Draco resolutely. Hollow was no concern of hers with all these Rahkshi around. "There is enough violence in this school. What it needs are those willing to set an example of settling matters peacefully. "As for the argument, we had just gotten through talking matters over with this guy and I... I don't know, I guess I blacked out. When I woke up, his brother was carrying me and I panicked. I tried to apologize, but he didn't seem to understand. He... he didn't even remember our friend's name, the name of the one who started the Fellowship. That was the last straw. I'd given him several chances, but it was obvious he didn't care for the group like I did."
  15. IC: Canvas - Hallways If the meathead could deduce this Rahkshi's role, don't think it slipped past Canvas, who devoted her whole life to studying Rahkshi. She was the innocent one, and she had the truth on her side. "We had an argument," Canvas explained, growing tired of saying so. "I didn't think he was right for the Fellowship of Peace any more."
  16. IC: Canvas - Hallways "And in his search for his brother, which I have been complying with completely, this lunatic hasn't just threatened my life, but the lives of several other students in the school, as this Rahkshi can attest." She gestured to Vlad, more grateful than ever that he was there.
  17. That "color-swap trick" was my method of letting you know something was up. If you noticed, every single post leading up to the attack had "IC: Tear" in grey and teal letters. And that wasn't the only tip I gave in that scene. If you were paying close attention like Spindle might have been, you could have figured it out, OOC at least. I was giving you a chance. The thing is that Spindle calling Tear a drug addict was completely out of character and was obviously you enjoying your own private joke that I didn't find very funny. And I'll believe that you are not tied to your characters when you can create a likeable, sensible, and intelligent character as Nato has done with Era. I've done everything I can think of to get your characters off my back, so please enlighten me as to how I, as you say, "twist them the right way.' Funny how Hollow only became extremely irritating after Tear tried to kill Spindle.
  18. IC: Canvas - Hallways "The fact that you're looking for him right now proves you do not have control over his life. He can be my friend, and he can decide not to be my friend when he chooses, and he did. I left him here because he didn't belong with the Fellowship any longer, and I left him crying, alright? Whatever happened next, you would probably know better than me because you know so much about him."
  19. You haven't been exactly lenient in the past either. Besides, if Hollow is a brainless walking meat bag, that's how he's going to be played. ...not... lenient? After I saved Vaalku's life twice, tolerating, not only him, but also Spindle and Xi when no one else wanted to, as well as letting Spindle walk away from Tear's murder attempt because you asked nicely? As I've said in the past, the only reason Tear attempted to kill Spindle was because I was staying in his psychopathic character and you were playing with his head. And after all of that, you torment me with Hollow and Spindle and call one of my characters a drug addict for fun. I'm sick of it, Ghidora. If I'm not coming across as lenient to you, it's because my patience with you is wearing very, very, very thin.
  20. IC: Canvas - Hallways "I already told you we had an argument, and before you even think of accusing me of killing him again, remember that Xi is my friend, more so than you, and I'm the one who's offering to search the school from top to bottom to find him."
  21. IC: Canvas - Hallways "What were you expecting to find?! The broken remains of his body?! Why can't you just believe me when I say he was here and he walked away by his own power? When have I ever lied to you?"
  22. We're actually working on a temporary solution to Wyrd's absence, but stay tuned in the meantime. And I have to admire your dedication if you really want to read through all 620 pages of Corpus. But if not, we do have a Timeline we put together. It's a little outdated, but at least you'll skip the first 500 pages of reading. 74, thank you very much. You're probably the only one. Ditto. I'm not the only one who's tired of you toying with my characters Ghidora.
  23. IC: Canvas - Hallways Canvas prayed to just about anything she could think of that Hollow wouldn't take the mechanical Rahkshi's bait, and luckily it seemed she had little to fear for now. She picked up her pace, trying to keep the lumbering moron off her back while also getting away from the mechanical Rahkshi and the Fellowship. She almost wanted to leave the strange glowing one behind as well, but she found his protection comforting. It wasn't long before they came across where Canvas had argued with Xi. Her memory couldn't be wrong, and yet there was no sign of the four-armed Rahkshi. She turned back to Hollow desperately. "He was right here, I swear! He... he... must have gone back to his room, or... or somewhere!" IC: Melody and Tear - Infirmary She took a seat on Tear's bed and looked over the Rahkshi. Crusted fluids dripped down her neck under a poorly made wrapping. "W-what happened t-to you?" Tear shook her head and winced. "I... I don't know. The l-last thing I remember w-was Lucid's dream. Then... then I woke up o-outside." Fearful tears were creeping into her eyes. Melody rested a hand on her shoulder, trying to quiet her. "It's a-alright, it w-was you who w-woke up afterwards. Y-you went off with y-your friend, r-remember?" The thought only filled Tear with more panic. "I... I did? No... no, h-he couldn't have!" "W-what is it?" "That w-wasn't me... and n-now my friend is getting p-patched up over there." Tear pointed weakly, and Melody gasped. "T-Tear, I'm s-sorry. I... I'll t-try t-to keep an eye on h-him."
  24. IC: Canvas - Library Without waiting for another response, Canvas quickly strode toward the door with a quick, "Come on then," to Hollow. The only one causing problems for her reputation was Hollow himself, and she was quickly growing tired of it. She was far more angry than scared now. Strangely, her own armor shifted from pink back to white as she walked.
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