Velox Posted February 20, 2012 Author Share Posted February 20, 2012 Aand Remember has been reviewed.We're still allowing three more requests for this cycle, remember! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taipu1 Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 High-Fly MatoranHopefully one of my better works, I'd quite like to get a lot of views, a critic club review is always good for fixing it up to perfection. - Taipu1.HighFly MatoranShowdownBZPRPG ProfilesHave you seen my Blog? I understand if you haven't Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted February 21, 2012 Share Posted February 21, 2012 A review for Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith, please. Thank you in advance. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aderia Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 Perfectionist by Aderia: Toa of Ducklings, s'il vous plait. i think this is my first time using the SSCC, i'm excited (disclaimer: none of this banner art is original, I just smooshed it together in gimp. Torchic, Matau) Those pesky firespitters... Library | The Sculptors and the Smelters | The Ternion | Review Topic Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted February 22, 2012 Share Posted February 22, 2012 Unless my kindergarten level math skills are failing me, I believe that's five requests.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 23, 2012 Author Share Posted February 23, 2012 Unless my kindergarten level math skills are failing me, I believe that's five requests.-TeezyYep; I was just busy yesterday so I didn't assign critics yet.Moment of Fragile Courage - by Grant Sud - Assigned to VeloxJust Another Path - by Lord Darkon - Assigned to Tyler DurdenHigh-Fly Matoran - by Taipu1 - Assigned to YukikoStellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens - by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith - Assigned to Jedi Master J.Perfectionist - by Aderia: Toa of Ducklings - Assigned to TolkienReviews are due by Thursday, March 1st. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mat~ Posted February 24, 2012 Share Posted February 24, 2012 (edited) Abyss by MatoroIgnika, whenever a spot opens up. :3Thanks ahead of time.EDIT: Sorry if this request is invalid or what have you, I didn't even think when I posted this. I've had too long of a day. :/ Edited February 24, 2012 by ~MatoroIgnika~ My BZPower Blog: Lapisland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted February 24, 2012 Share Posted February 24, 2012 Reviewed Just Another Path.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 25, 2012 Author Share Posted February 25, 2012 (edited) Abyss by MatoroIgnika, whenever a spot opens up. :3Thanks ahead of time.EDIT: Sorry if this request is invalid or what have you, I didn't even think when I posted this. I've had too long of a day. :/ Yeah, unfortunately you'll have to re-request your story for review the next time we are allowing requests (should be around Thursday or Friday of next week). Edited February 25, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 As requested, I have reviewed Stellar Quest: The Black Gate Opens. **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 Perfectionist, by Aderia: Toa of Ducklings, reviewed.JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 2, 2012 Author Share Posted March 2, 2012 And I have reviewed Moment of Fragile Courage, by Grant Sud.I know we're still waiting on one review, but I will now accept more review requests. Five more until we close the gates again. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 The Outlaws and the Dream by Cederak.I've never used the SSCC before (mostly because it didn't exist when my SS writing days were more active), but better late than never. Thanks.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 (edited) The Wraith by Kal GrochiLet's hope I make it in on time this time. Edited March 2, 2012 by Kal Grochi profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
~Mat~ Posted March 2, 2012 Share Posted March 2, 2012 Abyss by ~MatoroIgnika~.=3 My BZPower Blog: Lapisland Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted March 5, 2012 Share Posted March 5, 2012 Sorry to see you go, Cap'n. :cAlso, didn't want to have to do this, but...The Royal We by Tyler Durden.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Artorias Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3806Target: The War-Monger - By TahooReview please? Thank you.(sorry for defying post format, I couldn't get the link thing to work...) "The sun is a wondrous body, like a magnificent father! If only I could be so grossly incandescent!" My PBZP: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4267I hadn't even known it was posted until much later... Oops. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 What you want is this.Target: The War-Monger By Tahoo.[url="http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3806"]Target: The War-Monger[/url] By Tahoo. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted March 7, 2012 Share Posted March 7, 2012 What I always do is add my story title to the end of the URL with a space between the two when I'm adding the link, then I just backspace out the URL and leave the link.But eh, to each his own.Anyway, that's five.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 9, 2012 Author Share Posted March 9, 2012 (edited) The Outlaws and the Dream by Cederak -- Assigned to VeloxThe Wraith by Kal Grochi -- Assigned to Velox YukikoAbyss by ~MatoroIgnika~ -- Assigned to Tyler DurdenThe Royal We by Tyler Durden -- Assigned to Velox ZaraynaTarget: The War-Monger By Tahoo -- Assigned to ZaraynaOnce again, if anyone wants to take any of the extra ones I've assigned to myself, just let me know before you do. And reviews are due by Friday, March 16th. Also, an easy way to create a URL: Simply copy the URL, type what you want the link to say (i.e. "Target: The War-Monger"), highlight what you typed, then click the link button, paste the URL into the box that comes up, click "ok" and it should be good. If that doesn't make sense I can explain it better. Edited March 11, 2012 by Scriptophobia "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 ^Velox, since couldn't manage that review last week I'll gladly take on some of yours. I have spring break now. So everything's good. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 I'll take The Royal We, in the case, as well as my own. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 10, 2012 Share Posted March 10, 2012 I'll take the Wraith then. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 Reviewed:Target: The War-MongerBy Tahoo -- Assigned to Zarayna Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 11, 2012 Author Share Posted March 11, 2012 Thanks, guys. @ Yukiko ~ Were you also going to do the review for High-Fly Matoran, or did you want me to? "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted March 11, 2012 Share Posted March 11, 2012 (edited) ^I can take both ^^EDIT: And High Fly Matoran is reviewed! Edited March 13, 2012 by Yukiko There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TNTOS Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 Glatorian Chronicles #11: Obsidian Among the Frost by TNTOSWould appreciate a review.-TNTOS- "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PooZy Posted March 16, 2012 Share Posted March 16, 2012 Oasis by PooZyA review would keep me entertained :3 Thanks for reading. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 I should have my review up by sometime tomorrow morning, Velox: Internet problems are preventing me from doing a lot of good with a proper review. Sorry for the inconvenience.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 17, 2012 Author Share Posted March 17, 2012 And I have reviewed The Outlaws and the Dream. Also @ TNTOS and PooZy, while we weren't technically accepting requests when you posted, we are accepting requests now, and since it's only been a few hours, you don't have to re-request your stories.So! Three more stories until we stop accepting requests again.@ Zarayna and Yukiko ~ you won't be striked right now since you both took on more than one review, but please complete them ASAP. And, Tyler, that's fine. Thanks for letting me know. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 Reviewed Abyss. Highly recommended debut Short Story from a great writer. Look forward to reading more from him.Thanks to Velox for the twelve-hour reprieve, and I look forward to my next review.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Haecceity Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 Corrupt Destiny: Vakama by Toa Vahi: toa of time(Note: the style is a bit odd.) Thanks in advance. If you found this text, know that Kevin isn't real. He's a fairy tale to scare children. Kevin. Is. Not. Real. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 17, 2012 Share Posted March 17, 2012 (edited) Sorry, Velox. A curse upon my absentmindedness: I completed my second review in time, but forgot to say so here. :/BTW, requesting review for:The Land of Forgetfulness, by Zarayna: The Quiet Light. Edited March 17, 2012 by Zarayna: The Quiet Light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 18, 2012 Author Share Posted March 18, 2012 And one more request until we're full again...anyone? "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jinkmeister Posted March 18, 2012 Share Posted March 18, 2012 (edited) War for BZPower by JinklemeisterEdit: Thanks Kal, sorry about that. I'm still figuring out the new BB Codes. Edited March 19, 2012 by Jinklemeister Check out my Chibi Kute Kit! Follow these steps, and BZP will only get better Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 War for Bzpower by JinklemeisterFixed it for ya. profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 19, 2012 Author Share Posted March 19, 2012 Glatorian Chronicles #11: Obsidian Among the Frost by TNTOS -- Assigned to Jedi Master J.Oasis by PooZy -- Assigned to VeloxCorrupt Destiny: Vakama by Toa Vahi: toa of time -- Assigned to TolkienThe Land of Forgetfulness by Zarayna: The Quiet Light -- Assigned to CederakWar for BZPower by Jinklemeister -- Assigned to ZaraynaAnd there we go. With that I'd also like to announce the latest critic: Cederak. ECC Curator and a great critic, he's definitely very welcome here. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 YEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH.WEEK OFF.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted March 19, 2012 Share Posted March 19, 2012 The Land of Forgetfulness, by Zarayna: The Quiet Light has been reviewed.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 21, 2012 Share Posted March 21, 2012 (edited) I am glad to welcome Cederak, and I greatly approve his honest reviewing technique. :)Spawn: We should force you to join me in one review a week. :fear:EDIT:War for BZPowerby Jinklemeister -- REVIEWED (by Zarayna) Edited March 21, 2012 by Zarayna: The Quiet Light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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