Voltex Posted January 12, 2012 Share Posted January 12, 2012 Meh, you guys are better than the Comedies Critics Club. I'm starting to think I might have to start it back up myself. I do appreciate the review, and the insight was very good.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PooZy Posted January 13, 2012 Share Posted January 13, 2012 So.. when can I try getting my story reviewed again? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Velox just completed the last review, so you should be able to resubmit to start the new list, I believe. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted January 16, 2012 Author Share Posted January 16, 2012 (edited) So.. when can I try getting my story reviewed again?As I said in my post:I'll also post to let everyone know that we are taking requests again.Anyway, yes, we are now allowing requests again. We're going back to the assigning reviews to critics. As of right now, we are only letting in five requests at a time. That may change, however, but in the mean time, all reviews will hopefully be done within a week. Again, I thank everyone for your patience. Critics: There were two critics I wasn't able to PM (I left a message on your profile page, Yukiko -- the other hasn't been active), and so if you didn't receive any sort of message from me, please PM (or email me: Toa_Velox@BZPower.com) me ASAP. Edited January 16, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jowm Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Could I please get a review for my story, Scars of War? http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted January 16, 2012 Author Share Posted January 16, 2012 As stated in the main post, please use the proper request format. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jowm Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Oh, my apologies. [url=(http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=2480&pid=100124&st=0&&do=findComment&comment=100124)] Scars of War http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=5700 - My new epic revealing the life of the interesting character we all wish we could have known better before he left us, Karzahni. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Whenever anyone has time, here's a short story that I would really enjoy having reviewed.http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=2773 - Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Lunchables Comic 1 - Tekulo: Toa of GalesI'd be interested in any crticism for this one, if that's alright. It was a story I experimented with, so feel free to be as critical as you like. ^^ Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PooZy Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 Story: Gathering dust http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=2807 - PooZy Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 16, 2012 Share Posted January 16, 2012 The Trial and Execution of Makuta Teridax - ibrow-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted January 17, 2012 Author Share Posted January 17, 2012 (edited) The Trial and Execution of Makuta Teridax - ibrow - Assigned to Cap'n K (Ultraviolence)Gathering Dust - PooZy - Assigned to YukikoLunchables Comic 1 - Tekulo: Toa of Gales - Assigned to Jedi Master J.Into the West - Lord Darkon - Assigned to VeloxScars of War - Jowm - Assigned to TolkienAssignments as listed. Please let me know if you are unable to fulfill your reviews. And as that is 5, no more requests at this time. Critics should finish their reviews in a week, but I'll post saying when we will be accepting new requests. Edited January 17, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 As requested, Lunchables Comic 1 has been reviewed. **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted January 23, 2012 Share Posted January 23, 2012 Reviewed Jowm's "Scars of War."JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted January 24, 2012 Author Share Posted January 24, 2012 And Into the West has been reviewed. Thanks to those who reviewed theirs already, and for those that haven't: Remember you have until tomorrow to complete your review or you will receive a strike. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted January 25, 2012 Share Posted January 25, 2012 My review for Gathering Dust is up. Sorry, I have no such excuse for my lateness, as we have WiFi and ethernet everywhere here. The beginning semester homework hit me quite hard, but I shall adjust in the next few weeks and my review shall turn up in a more timely fashion. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted January 31, 2012 Share Posted January 31, 2012 While this is waiting for recovery, PM me and I'll give you a review.Albeit, it won't be an official SSCC review, but I'll write with the same caliber I normally would for a review.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 1, 2012 Author Share Posted February 1, 2012 Eh, I'll just say we'll allow more reviews now. 5 more until we stop accepting again. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 (edited) You guys gave me a epic review, so here's another short story for ya'.http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3110 (Defiance) - Lord Darkon Edited February 2, 2012 by Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legolover-361 Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Ignition by Legolover-361.Thank you in advance! (( BZPRPG profiles: Kynaera, Nova )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted February 2, 2012 Share Posted February 2, 2012 Alright! Glad I'm not too late to submit a story. Divided We Fall by Grant-SudI like what I've written, but to be honest I feel like it gets repetitive. If I can get another opinion on that, that'd be great. Please and thank you! The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 5, 2012 Author Share Posted February 5, 2012 And two more until we close the requests gates again. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 I suppose I'll take the opportunity here:Remember, by Tolkien.JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 5, 2012 Share Posted February 5, 2012 Just wondering where my review might be, since it looks like all of the other stories that needed to be reviewed were reviewed.-ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted February 6, 2012 Share Posted February 6, 2012 Just wondering where my review might be, since it looks like all of the other stories that needed to be reviewed were reviewed.-ibrowWell, I don't know where Cap'n K is/if he's got a review that simply hasn't been posted, but I went ahead and filled in for him. Here you go. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 Thanks! -ibrow JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted February 7, 2012 Share Posted February 7, 2012 Good news; I might be able to rejoin as a critic fairly soon.In the meantime:All Our Sins Remembered, The Quiet Light. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 8, 2012 Author Share Posted February 8, 2012 (edited) Defiance - Lord Darkon -- Assigned to ZaxvoIgnition - legolover-361 -- Assigned to Tyler DurdenDivided We Fall - Grant-Sud -- Assigned to Tyler DurdenRemember - Tolkien -- Assigned to VeloxAll Our Sins Remembered - The Quiet Light -- Assigned to VeloxIf anyone wants to take some of the ones assigned to me, please PM me -- three critics haven't replied to my PM yet (or been online), and I didn't want to mess up the cycle, but if anyone wants to do a review every cycle (or two some cycles) instead of every other cycle please let me know. Anyway, reviews are due by next Wednesday (Feb 15). Edited February 16, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted February 9, 2012 Share Posted February 9, 2012 And I've reviewed Defiance. Feel free to toss any of those extra stories over to me Velox. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted February 10, 2012 Share Posted February 10, 2012 (edited) Ignition reviewed..Now reviewing Divided We Fall by Grant-Sud.-Teezy Edited February 10, 2012 by Tyler Durden SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted February 14, 2012 Share Posted February 14, 2012 (edited) Undying Love - Kal Grochi Edited February 14, 2012 by Kal Grochi profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 16, 2012 Author Share Posted February 16, 2012 @ Kal Grochi ~ Sorry, we are not currently accepting requests. Check back in a couple days. =]Anyway, I have reviewed All Our Sins Remembered; I'm giving Tyler Durden and myself a two day extension (Friday) on the last two stories (as we both were reviewing more than one). Reviews will be up as soon as possible, and then we will accept 5 more requests. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 Aggh, just barely off time. Ah, well. I'll wait until next cycle I guess. profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted February 16, 2012 Share Posted February 16, 2012 (edited) Question. Would you guys review Short Story Contest entries? Edited February 16, 2012 by Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 17, 2012 Author Share Posted February 17, 2012 Yes, but you cannot use the advice we give until after the contest is over -- once posting your entry you cannot edit it. Otherwise it would be unfair, as it'd be impossible for us to review every entry. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 That's a good rule.Next cycle, then. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted February 17, 2012 Share Posted February 17, 2012 And...Divided We Fall is reviewed.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted February 18, 2012 Author Share Posted February 18, 2012 Aaand last-minute family trip=driving all day straight from school=no time to review...I'll try to get your review done tomorrow, Tolkien, though that depends on what I do with family tomorrow. Anyway, we'll allow 5 more requests, now. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=396 Moment of Fragile Courage - by Grant SudWarning for reviewer, story is cheesy and I have no idea why I wrote it. :B The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted February 18, 2012 Share Posted February 18, 2012 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3427 (Just Another Path) - Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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