Velox Posted October 13, 2012 Author Share Posted October 13, 2012 And I have reviewed Sherlock Holmes and the Missing Christmas Presents by Kumata. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted October 14, 2012 Share Posted October 14, 2012 Hello all.I'm not exactly sure how the request process works, so bear with me if I'm wrong here.Anyways, could I please get some critique on Snowfall?Thanks. save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 14, 2012 Author Share Posted October 14, 2012 Hello all.I'm not exactly sure how the request process works, so bear with me if I'm wrong here.Anyways, could I please get some critique on Snowfall?Thanks. Assigned to Yukiko. Thank you for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted October 16, 2012 Share Posted October 16, 2012 Just reviewed Return. Fantastic piece of writing, I highly recommend to to everyone, regardless of what you like to write, this is how emotions should be described. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted October 16, 2012 Share Posted October 16, 2012 I'd like to request a review for Rugged Explorers, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith. My thanks in advance. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 17, 2012 Author Share Posted October 17, 2012 I'd like to request a review for Rugged Explorers, by Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith. My thanks in advance. Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith Of course! Assigned to Zaxvo. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted October 17, 2012 Share Posted October 17, 2012 I would like to request a review for my short story Prisoner of the Red Star by yours truly, Toa Smoke Monster. Thanks in advance. Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 17, 2012 Author Share Posted October 17, 2012 I would like to request a review for my short story Prisoner of the Red Star by yours truly, Toa Smoke Monster. Thanks in advance.Assigned to Zarayna. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted October 17, 2012 Share Posted October 17, 2012 May I have a critique of my short story, Chronicle? -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 17, 2012 Author Share Posted October 17, 2012 May I have a critique of my short story, Chronicle? -CedLooks like it's review-requesting day. But of course! Assigned to Proud Stigma. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted October 18, 2012 Share Posted October 18, 2012 And The Forest is reviewed. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 18, 2012 Author Share Posted October 18, 2012 (edited) And I have reviewed "Unsung" by Nuile.Assignments for this week:Velox: Rules of Engagement, by AderiaNuile: Warm, by Grant SudYukiko: Flash Fiction Marathon Entries by Space: Ocean of Awe (you only need to review 3)Zaxvo: The Bodyguard, by Takuma NuvaProud Stigma: An Assassin's Reflections, by Zarayna(Page 11)I know that some of these have already had an SSCC review, but there is always more to say, even if it is just praise. Those with assigned requests may have two weeks for their charity reviews -- let me know if you need the two weeks, otherwise you will be assigned a new one next week. As usual, reviews are due by next Wednesday, October 24th. Edited October 27, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lord Of Wednesday Posted October 18, 2012 Share Posted October 18, 2012 I have completed the following...To Fly By Peach 00Chronicle By Cederak. Divinator of Dreams.This Is Proud Stigma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LewaLew Posted October 20, 2012 Share Posted October 20, 2012 It's not your traditional short story (It's actually a free verse poem) but I would appreciate if one of you guys could review "Ahkmou", by yours truly, LewaLew. How well will you die? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 20, 2012 Author Share Posted October 20, 2012 It's not your traditional short story (It's actually a free verse poem) but I would appreciate if one of you guys could review "Ahkmou", by yours truly, LewaLew.Looks like it's my turn to review -- assigned to myself. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 And I've reviewed my assigned story. I may need an extra week for the charity review. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted October 23, 2012 Share Posted October 23, 2012 Snowfall has been reviewed.I will definitely need the extra week. Also, I would like to request a two week break after this assignment. This has been an incredibly stressful time for me and I need to rest. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted October 25, 2012 Share Posted October 25, 2012 Reviewed Prisoner of the Red Star. Sorry for the lateness, I had some severe reviewer's block on that story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lord Of Wednesday Posted October 26, 2012 Share Posted October 26, 2012 An Assassin's Reflections by Zarayna, Completed. Divinator of Dreams.This Is Proud Stigma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted October 26, 2012 Share Posted October 26, 2012 I apologize for being so late on this one. But Grant-Sud's Warm, reviewed.Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 27, 2012 Author Share Posted October 27, 2012 And I have reviewed "Rules of Engagement", by Aderia, and "Ahkmou", by LewaLew. I'd also like to announce our latest critic: Jerzy. Tolkien and I both think that he'll be a good addition to our team, so let's give him a warm welcome! Good to work with you again, Jerzy. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Hoping I could get a review for this. Thanks. Nascent - Cederak Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 28, 2012 Author Share Posted October 28, 2012 Hoping I could get a review for this. Thanks. Nascent - CederakWith pleasure! Assigned to our newest critic, Jerzy. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franz Joseph Haydn Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Guess what I got done: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7304&st=0&gopid=443183&&do=findComment&comment=443183 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Thank you much for your timely response to my request, and congrats on joining the SSCC, Jerzy. -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franz Joseph Haydn Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 It's no problem at all. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted October 28, 2012 Share Posted October 28, 2012 Requesting a review of:Shredded Radiance by Zarayna. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted October 29, 2012 Author Share Posted October 29, 2012 Requesting a review of:Shredded Radiance by Zarayna.I'll be assigning this to our latest critic, Jerzy, as well. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franz Joseph Haydn Posted October 30, 2012 Share Posted October 30, 2012 Finished my review of Mr. Zaranya's story: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=7359&st=0&gopid=444979&&do=findComment&comment=444979 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 Well, The Bodyguard has been reviewed. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Franz Joseph Haydn Posted October 31, 2012 Share Posted October 31, 2012 Due to Holiday festivities tomorrow, I wish to inform everyone here that I will not be able to review as quickly as I would be able to normally. Just a heads up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted November 1, 2012 Share Posted November 1, 2012 I have reviewed my assignment.With that, I would like to request a month break. I have too many things on my mind right now, and I really need the time off.Have a Happy Halloween, if it's not over already, lulz. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted November 1, 2012 Author Share Posted November 1, 2012 Velox: FFC Compilation, by DespairNuile: Meanwhere, Elsewhile by MultiverseZaxvo: Love Conquers All, by NuileProud Stigma: Moment of Fragile Courage, by Grant-Sud Jerzy: Non-Bionicle Flash Fiction Entries by Danska: Shadow Master(page 12, the Cybernaut)Due by next Wednesday, November 7th. As usual, for flash fiction compilations, you only need to review three of them (but can, of course, review more if you wish). "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted November 5, 2012 Share Posted November 5, 2012 Your advice would be much-appreciated on Danse Macabre with a Contract, by Giant of Lannister. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted November 5, 2012 Share Posted November 5, 2012 Betrayed by iBrow Voltex - review has been requested, please. JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted November 6, 2012 Author Share Posted November 6, 2012 Your advice would be much-appreciated on Danse Macabre with a Contract, by Giant of Lannister.Assigned to Tolkien.Betrayed by iBrow Voltex - review has been requested, please.Assigned to Nuile.Thank you both for choosing the SSCC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 (edited) Meanwhile, Elsewhere, reviewed.And welcome to the team, Jerzy!Sincerely, Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith Edited November 8, 2012 by My Name is Nuile When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Lord Of Wednesday Posted November 8, 2012 Share Posted November 8, 2012 Moment Of Fragile Courage by Quote (The Traveler) Completed. Divinator of Dreams.This Is Proud Stigma. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted November 11, 2012 Share Posted November 11, 2012 Reviewed Danse Macabre with a Contract, by Giant of Lannister.JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Noble Tehurye Posted November 12, 2012 Share Posted November 12, 2012 I would like to ask if my Short Story could be reviewed. :)It's called Darkness - by me, Tehurye, of course.Thank you! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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