Lemony Lepid Posted June 24, 2012 Share Posted June 24, 2012 (edited) #logantocomics on facebook Check out the talog kit! Season one The house Smack in da face Guilt trip Lego lovers The storm I The storm II Girls and guys Noisy present Good cat? Lovins Bad dreams LOLWUT? Snicker Terren family reunion the attic New Mask Saga preview 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 (end of new mask saga) Just call us parents! Fridge raid A place to stay TV obsessions Peanuts, arrows, and snipers A title Kalarezka quadrilogy 1, 2, 3, 4 (end of kalarezka quadrilogy) Birthday spirit Season two Got that power? Soarin' thru D skiez The New Mask: Project V2 1, 2, 3, 4- just text (may make a comic soon) (end of project V2) KOTU VS SNICKER 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 ,6 ,7 ,8 Silly snake sweet wevenge Add Delays! Loga sense A party in Pink Haters gunna hate Parallel 1 PGSs (CLOSED FOR SEASON TWO) soran reznaz snicker giggles requested removal RG Tecnokua Flaredrick TNG Malignus Terren Gavla Tahu2014 Have a good day! Thanks to: Soran, My PGSs, My Brain, Friends and family, Paint.net, Justax-Kal, And myself.Oh and Oneker for being in Dr. Who. Edited December 10, 2013 by Loganto The Le-Matoran 1 ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Control_Vee Posted June 24, 2012 Share Posted June 24, 2012 (edited) Okay... unfortunately, not much good to say about this. For starters, some of the character's colors look like they were taken from the default MS Paint color pallet. Then there's the background - there's no shading to add detail, but this can be excused. However, the line distinguishing the floor from the wall is too thick, and it looks odd. The couch looks decent, however, with no shading, it also seems to ruin that fact. Also, the speech bubble looks too smooth to match with the rest of the comic, thus making it seem... well, a little strange on the eyes. Other than that, i commend you for choosing Razor - i don't think there are any on-going comic strips at the moment that use the Razor sheet, so, nice choice on that. Also, i suggest that you should quickly get two more strips up - the best way to start a comic is to have at least three strips, so as people can get a good idea about what the comic is like/is about/how it looks in general. Unfortunately, at the current moment, this says nothing about the comic other than the fact that a couch is miscolored. Good luck, though, an aspiring comic maker is always welcome. Edited July 9, 2012 by Leraku Sisen said:Let's focus on Snail! Snail is the bombdiggity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted June 24, 2012 Share Posted June 24, 2012 Since you just started (and theres only one comic) I can't really judge much from it but anyway, the pixelated background actually looks fitting surprisingly. I'll be able to judge more about it with more comics, so I hope to see more soon. I'll keep an eye on the comics,~Soran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted June 24, 2012 Author Share Posted June 24, 2012 thanks leraku and soran. love your comics. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 25, 2012 Share Posted June 25, 2012 Haven't seen a Razor comic in ages. That's a new one. Or perhaps an old one?Decent attempt at spriting a couch bending from the pressure of one sitting in it in the middle area, but humor is a bit lacking.Keep trying! No comic maker starts out amazingly! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted June 25, 2012 Author Share Posted June 25, 2012 (edited) New comic!http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/comic_b-smack_in_the_face.pngThis new comic introduces Brutico, he is crazy and his favorite food is pizza flavored icecream... and I think he broke my leg... Edited June 25, 2012 by LogantoTheLe-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted June 26, 2012 Author Share Posted June 26, 2012 New Comic!!!http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/loganto_hello.pngThis comic makes me happy. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted June 26, 2012 Share Posted June 26, 2012 I must stress the humor desert problem here. Too much randomness is a bad thing. One thing most good comic makers do is put a storyline that has jokes in it, for a cohesive, yet funny, and not too random comic. The door slamming, to be honest, was not that funny. The Y U SMACK DOOR IN MY FACE Was slightly better, but you really need to take our advice, while you still can. Don't make a habit of doing what you're doing right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 8, 2012 Author Share Posted July 8, 2012 http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/legos.pngnew comicPS: this is all about randomness. random is funny to me. and I hope you. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
iPenguin Posted July 9, 2012 Share Posted July 9, 2012 It's a rarity that first tries are awesome. And, unsurprisingly, this is no different. Keep working at it though. It only goes uphill from here.Oh, and randomness is soooo 2006 Majhost sucks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 9, 2012 Share Posted July 9, 2012 All right, you did it! Awesome! I wasn't expecting that. Creepy how Brutico would be anywhere near his bathtub though... O_oBest comic you've ever made. Keep it up! Randomness as a plot device, just like I said many times before. This is precisely what I meant. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 10, 2012 Author Share Posted July 10, 2012 wow! I thought I did good, but not as good as you say! thank you very much!!! Creepy how Brutico would be anywhere near his bathtub though... O_oBtw, it is a huge bin, I have one at home, 90% full, mostly bionicles. Booyah. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 10, 2012 Author Share Posted July 10, 2012 (edited) new comic!NVM Edited July 29, 2012 by Loganto The Le-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 12, 2012 Author Share Posted July 12, 2012 new comic!http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/da_pow.png ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 12, 2012 Author Share Posted July 12, 2012 (edited) new comic!http://www.brickshel...ling_heads2.pngno more razor. sorryAbout the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps.thanks! Edited July 12, 2012 by -Windrider- ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted July 12, 2012 Share Posted July 12, 2012 That was entertaining. Its funny for me because of how true it is. Nice effect in the last panel by the way. I also liked the "previously on LTLM" panel at the top. Its a great idea to include when your doing story arcs.Great job on the comics and keep up the good work,~Soran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted July 12, 2012 Share Posted July 12, 2012 About the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 12, 2012 Author Share Posted July 12, 2012 (edited) new comic!http://www.brickshel...pyface/gfvg.pngI dont know how... anyway, my GF kotu is here. Edited July 12, 2012 by LogantoTheLe-Matoran ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 13, 2012 Author Share Posted July 13, 2012 new comichttp://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/noisy_present.pngkitten! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 13, 2012 Share Posted July 13, 2012 Nice kit switch. You should probably double size everything though. EVERYTHING. Panels, sprites, everything. OH KARZ THE FOURTH WALL WAS BROKEN METEORS--Second comic was funny. I've done that before, though in a less ridiculous way.Third comic is why I don't have pets. No, really, it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 13, 2012 Author Share Posted July 13, 2012 I put him there for fun. I like cats.done. and. done.....MWAhahahhahhahahahaha!meow. :3new comic!http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/lovinz.pngRESPECT ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
No longer active Posted July 13, 2012 Share Posted July 13, 2012 new comic!http://www.brickshel...ling_heads2.pngno more razor. sorryAbout the links.When putting a link in, type the name of the comic and then highlight it and click link and paste link in.I hope this helps.thanks!Your Welcome.You can also do it in your posts. 2020 STATUS UPDATE: If you've come across any of my topics such, as my comic series which are now lost, I just want to say is I have since DISOWNED them as of 2020. Looking back at them I'm no longer proud of what I've made here on BZPower. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 13, 2012 Author Share Posted July 13, 2012 yup. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Which Is Posted July 13, 2012 Share Posted July 13, 2012 Love your comics so far, the humor is pretty good so far.Good job, bro. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 14, 2012 Author Share Posted July 14, 2012 Sup, new comic.http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/in_da_wowald.png ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted July 14, 2012 Share Posted July 14, 2012 The kitten appears to have brainwashed Loganto! That diabolical cat, messing with our minds. I'm starting to wonder what the cat's purpose is in the story. Perhaps its a talking, sarcastic cat. That could prove interesting. Or its just a cat... Either way, nice comic, but it appears to be lacking a little in humor.~Soran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 15, 2012 Share Posted July 15, 2012 I see you took my advice to double-size everything. Definitely looks better, and does justice to the kit. (Chimoru R's details do not show well in small size.)The owner is really the cat's pet. That's why I don't like them XDYep. Brainwashing. NEVER trust a GLOWING, FLUORESCENT CAT. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 15, 2012 Author Share Posted July 15, 2012 (edited) heheheh. well. did you know brutico has a bad snoring problem? New comic.http://www.brickshel..._bad_dreams.pngOK, My PGS Comic is almost done! Edited July 23, 2012 by -Windrider- ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Terra Nuva Posted July 23, 2012 Share Posted July 23, 2012 OMG that last comic has happened to me so many times. D: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 23, 2012 Author Share Posted July 23, 2012 lol, terra is in my new comics!but first....http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/snicker.png BOROMIR! ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 The classic madhouse intro. Nice work.I knew most girls wouldn't like living in a comic setting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
That Which Is Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 *barf* HOT DOG? WITH FAKE CHEESE? EEEEEEWWWW!!!!! THAT'S GROSS!!! With that outta the way, great job.The whit sox *shutter* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
vataki Posted July 24, 2012 Share Posted July 24, 2012 Every thing in that comic would anger/sicken my sister in real lifeYou are my new best friend naw man Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 24, 2012 Author Share Posted July 24, 2012 why thank you. anyway... my new comic! http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/terra_nuva_comic.png ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 25, 2012 Author Share Posted July 25, 2012 New comic?http://www.brickshelf.com/gallery/LogantoTheLeMatoran/happyface/lolwut.pngI blame snuggle wuggles for this. ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 25, 2012 Share Posted July 25, 2012 He needs to get paid for that doorman job. XDHowever, you may want to tone down the randomness.Ok, screw toning down the randomness! I just read the other comic, and that was hilarious and unexpected. Nice work. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 27, 2012 Author Share Posted July 27, 2012 haha. terra nuva REQUESTED randomness... yet he is cool and collected... and sarcastic.... hmmmmmmmmmm....... ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenuk Posted July 27, 2012 Share Posted July 27, 2012 You're comics aren't too bad but I think you could try and develop your characters a bit because so far none of them seem too unique. As far as graphical changes I can't really see anything I think you should improve other than learn how to make actual speech bubbles. Don't Click It Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lemony Lepid Posted July 28, 2012 Author Share Posted July 28, 2012 (edited) New comic!!!http://www.brickshel...milyreunion.pngBTW... Like my new mask?<--- Edited July 28, 2012 by -Windrider- ~~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted July 28, 2012 Share Posted July 28, 2012 Lol. As long as you don't have to share your room, eh? Looks like Loganto has quite the bad luck streak. Brutico wasn't smashed at all! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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