Nick Silverpen Posted January 16, 2013 Posted January 16, 2013 Hunger Games has been reviewed. Disassembly-- Review Collective Works
GSR Posted January 19, 2013 Posted January 19, 2013 (edited) Fate of Yrenta by The Iron Toa has been reviewed. Protip to my fellow critics: when eyeballing assignment length, be very sure all the chapters are there. Edited January 19, 2013 by GSR Hey: I'm not very active around BZP right now. However, you can always contact me through PM (I have email notifications set up) and I will reply as soon as I can. Useful Topics: The Q&A Compendium | The Official RPG Planning Topic Stories: Fractures | An Aftermath | Three Stories | LSO 2012 Epics: Team Three | The Shadow and the Sea | The Days They Were Needed | Glitches | Transformations | Echoes | The Kaita and the Storyteller | Nui BZPRPG: Komae · Soraya · Bohrei Blog: Defendant Lobby no. 42
Steelsheen Posted January 23, 2013 Author Posted January 23, 2013 Enigma has been reviewed at great length. My apologies for turning this in so late; my baby sister got a hold of my iPad and deleted a bunch of apps, my writing app among them. The moral of the story is turn in your review early and keep your electronics locked! -HH Current Epic: Life is a Blank - last post Jan. 22 My Library: The Esoteric Athenaeum Member of the Epic Critics' Club
Aderia Posted January 28, 2013 Posted January 28, 2013 (edited) Reviewed "The Legend of Greno Nui". Just gotta fix up some antagonizing coding. yaaaaaaaay..... Edited January 28, 2013 by Eponine (disclaimer: none of this banner art is original, I just smooshed it together in gimp. Torchic, Matau) Those pesky firespitters... Library | The Sculptors and the Smelters | The Ternion | Review Topic
GSR Posted January 29, 2013 Posted January 29, 2013 Well, the good lady Eponine insists that I have her be the ECC review for this, so consider this an official request.Story: The Shadow and the SeaReview topic: Right over here.Chapter count: 3, for a total of about 20,000 words total.Take it away, madam. Hey: I'm not very active around BZP right now. However, you can always contact me through PM (I have email notifications set up) and I will reply as soon as I can. Useful Topics: The Q&A Compendium | The Official RPG Planning Topic Stories: Fractures | An Aftermath | Three Stories | LSO 2012 Epics: Team Three | The Shadow and the Sea | The Days They Were Needed | Glitches | Transformations | Echoes | The Kaita and the Storyteller | Nui BZPRPG: Komae · Soraya · Bohrei Blog: Defendant Lobby no. 42
Velox Posted January 29, 2013 Posted January 29, 2013 And yep, officially assigned to Eponine. =P "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Cederak Posted January 31, 2013 Posted January 31, 2013 New Beginning has been reviewed. -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough
sonyaxe Posted February 1, 2013 Posted February 1, 2013 Story name and link: The ChroniclesReview topic link: The Chronicles-ReviewNumber of chapters: 4 so far, a few got spliced together somehow.
Velox Posted February 1, 2013 Posted February 1, 2013 (edited) Story name and link: The ChroniclesReview topic link: The Chronicles-ReviewNumber of chapters: 4 so far, a few got spliced together somehow.Assigned to TNTOS. Thank you for choosing the ECC! Edited February 1, 2013 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
TNTOS Posted February 2, 2013 Posted February 2, 2013 (edited) Reviewed Attack of the Bohrok.Edit: Also reviewed The Chronicles.-TNTOS- Edited February 6, 2013 by TNTOS "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010)
Cederak Posted February 8, 2013 Posted February 8, 2013 An Open Letter to the Patrons of the Epics Forum The Library has been marked by such inactivity as of late, and we sought to inspire action through our charity reviews and a concerted effort alongside many others to make the OTC a reality. This was a moment of victory for all authors on BZPower, an opportunity to be explored. We are the ECC, the proud servants of this sub-forum through which writers have prospered and developed under our careful guidance. The insight of seven incarnations has always emphasized a strong rapport with those we serve, those who provide us a reason for our collective's existence, and those we hold most important. We stand before you, accused of bringing harm to those we wish only to elevate. We have been informed that our charity work is an unbecoming statement, a sea of criticism where there ought to exist a brilliant reaction. In light of this determination, we know only unease—a concern for this forum, as our words are forced to recede. The Library's greatest threat is inactivity, trailed by poor writing as a close second. However, we have been asked to step back, to refocus our lens to a wider view. The state of the epics sub-forum is a staff matter before it is an ECC one, but like the staff, this is a responsibility we selected for ourselves. We have made every attempt to be approachable, to remind you that we are your supporters, and yet we were made privy to your disregard from the powers above us. I have spent years in the company of writers here, and only in this instance do I feel a sense of failure lingers over the ECC. And so we have come to a decision we choose to share publicly. Charity reviews will be reworked into a format we believe writers will find more comfortable, while also promoting the critiquing efforts of others in this sub-forum. If you feel we have done your work or the work of others any dishonor, please speak to us. We are always here, ready to listen and grow together with you as we continue to reshape our methodology. We are only young men and women, nothing so special outside of the hours we have spent refining our ability to critique. Our primary objective is to serve you and, with your advice, we predict our endeavors can only improve from here. Thank you. Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough
GSR Posted February 11, 2013 Posted February 11, 2013 (edited) When Rivers Run Blood has been reviewed. Trying to change my charity reviewing style a bit. Edited February 11, 2013 by GSR Hey: I'm not very active around BZP right now. However, you can always contact me through PM (I have email notifications set up) and I will reply as soon as I can. Useful Topics: The Q&A Compendium | The Official RPG Planning Topic Stories: Fractures | An Aftermath | Three Stories | LSO 2012 Epics: Team Three | The Shadow and the Sea | The Days They Were Needed | Glitches | Transformations | Echoes | The Kaita and the Storyteller | Nui BZPRPG: Komae · Soraya · Bohrei Blog: Defendant Lobby no. 42
Protodite Karzahni Posted February 19, 2013 Posted February 19, 2013 Right, my apologies that this took so long but I've finally gotten around to reviewing Destiny Quest. I wrote stories once. They were okay.
Aderia Posted February 21, 2013 Posted February 21, 2013 Well, the good lady Eponine insists that I have her be the ECC review for this, so consider this an official request.Story: The Shadow and the SeaReview topic: Right over here.Chapter count: 3, for a total of about 20,000 words total.Take it away, madam. It’s been a pleasure, monsieur. (disclaimer: none of this banner art is original, I just smooshed it together in gimp. Torchic, Matau) Those pesky firespitters... Library | The Sculptors and the Smelters | The Ternion | Review Topic
Nick Silverpen Posted February 23, 2013 Posted February 23, 2013 "In the Name of Science", reviewed. Disassembly-- Review Collective Works
Pikiru Posted February 26, 2013 Posted February 26, 2013 Hello to everyone in the Epic Critics Club If one of you has time I would most appreciate it if you could review my epic. 1) Its called "Of Rahi and Toa" and it is for the Lesovikk hiatus contest. Here is the topic link. 2) Here is the review topic link. 3) The story has 10 chapters.
Velox Posted February 26, 2013 Posted February 26, 2013 Hello to everyone in the Epic Critics Club If one of you has time I would most appreciate it if you could review my epic. 1) Its called "Of Rahi and Toa" and it is for the Lesovikk hiatus contest. Here is the topic link. 2) Here is the review topic link. 3) The story has 10 chapters. Of course! Assigned to GSR; thank you for choosing the ECC. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Steelsheen Posted March 7, 2013 Author Posted March 7, 2013 Charity review for Glatorian Chronicles # 9 is fin. Sorry about the super delay - I got a full time job about two weeks ago and it's been crazy making the adjustment.-S Current Epic: Life is a Blank - last post Jan. 22 My Library: The Esoteric Athenaeum Member of the Epic Critics' Club
TNTOS Posted March 15, 2013 Posted March 15, 2013 A New Promise has been reviewed. -TNTOS- "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010)
GSR Posted April 4, 2013 Posted April 4, 2013 Whoops, forgot to log my two most recent reviews.Of Rahi and Toa was reviewed on March 9th as requested (thanks for choosing the ECC!), and Chronicles of Tara: Ascension was reviewed on April 3rd as part of the charity initiative. Hey: I'm not very active around BZP right now. However, you can always contact me through PM (I have email notifications set up) and I will reply as soon as I can. Useful Topics: The Q&A Compendium | The Official RPG Planning Topic Stories: Fractures | An Aftermath | Three Stories | LSO 2012 Epics: Team Three | The Shadow and the Sea | The Days They Were Needed | Glitches | Transformations | Echoes | The Kaita and the Storyteller | Nui BZPRPG: Komae · Soraya · Bohrei Blog: Defendant Lobby no. 42
Phoenixian Wraith Posted April 7, 2013 Posted April 7, 2013 I was gonna wait for a few more chapters, but I want to become the best author I can. So, without further ado... Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. Link Bioni-Lords Origins: Review. Link Chapters: Six Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Enjoy. Bioni-Lords Origins = BZRPG Character Profiles
Velox Posted April 8, 2013 Posted April 8, 2013 I was gonna wait for a few more chapters, but I want to become the best author I can. So, without further ado... Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. Link Bioni-Lords Origins: Review. Link Chapters: Six Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story. Enjoy. Assigned to The Tolerable Automation. Thank you for choosing the ECC! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Kanakalackin Posted April 11, 2013 Posted April 11, 2013 (edited) 1.) The Adventures of Sandstorm2.) Review Topic3.) Number of chapters: Seven (So far.) Thanks! Edited April 11, 2013 by Phantom Terror I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE!
Velox Posted April 11, 2013 Posted April 11, 2013 1.) The Adventures of Sandstorm2.) Review Topic3.) Number of chapters: Seven (So far.) Thanks! Assigned to our very own wonderful Director, Steelsheen! Thank you for choosing the ECC! =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Kanakalackin Posted April 25, 2013 Posted April 25, 2013 My patience has almost run dry... I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE!
Steelsheen Posted April 26, 2013 Author Posted April 26, 2013 (edited) My patience has almost run dry... My review is actually ready, (and long) but for some reason, every time I try to post it or PM it to you, I get an error message."Fatal error: Allowed memory size of 134217728 bytes exhausted (tried to allocate 523800 bytes) in /home/bzpower/public_html/board/converge_public/sources/classes/text/parser.php on line 434"I'm trying to figure out how to fix this, but in the mean time, please hang tight, okay?-Steelsheen Edited April 26, 2013 by Steelsheen Current Epic: Life is a Blank - last post Jan. 22 My Library: The Esoteric Athenaeum Member of the Epic Critics' Club
Kanakalackin Posted April 26, 2013 Posted April 26, 2013 Thanks for the review Steelsheen. I now know what I need to do in part two. I tried to post the review from my email, but it wouldn't let me. I got the same message that you did. I have an Instagram page where you can see these pictures and more like them! Just click HERE!
Protodite Karzahni Posted May 8, 2013 Posted May 8, 2013 Hey there. Sincere apologies that this is so inappropriately late but I've finally completed the review for Bioni-Lords Origins: Phaenyx. I tried as best I could to compensate for the delay with length but we'll see how it turns out. I wrote stories once. They were okay.
Hahli Husky Posted May 9, 2013 Posted May 9, 2013 I already answered this is the rules topic, but I'll post here to make sure everyone sees it. Kinda surprised that an ECC review would be too long for a single post, but Steelsheen can post it in parts as long as he mentions at the top of both posts that he has my permission to double-post in that one case. I'm fine with letting this happen once, but in the future, please refrain from writing reviews that are too long to post. If the problem is pointing out many instances of incorrect grammar and/or spelling, I would recommend just posting about a few of those and sending the rest via PM.
Phoenixian Wraith Posted May 17, 2013 Posted May 17, 2013 @The Inquisitive Automaton. Thank you so much for reviewing and worry not about how late it was - I understand perfectly that, despite our best efforts, life has a habit of interfering with what we want to do. Bioni-Lords Origins = BZRPG Character Profiles
Steelsheen Posted July 30, 2013 Author Posted July 30, 2013 NOTICE: Cederak is back! We are currently transitioning the necessary positions internally, but your beloved (somewhat snarky) Head Critic has resumed his seat in the library halls.-Steelsheen Current Epic: Life is a Blank - last post Jan. 22 My Library: The Esoteric Athenaeum Member of the Epic Critics' Club
Velox Posted July 31, 2013 Posted July 31, 2013 Good to have you back, Caleb. =] "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender
Kaanfight Posted August 7, 2013 Posted August 7, 2013 Name: Shadow Destiny http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10088&do=findComment&comment=563801Review topic: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10089Number of chapters: 13 Thank you for your time, I will enjoy the feedback TANNOHK-KAL FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! In a world filled with peace, one shadow will spark a war My epic, Shadow Destiny: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10089
Steelsheen Posted August 7, 2013 Author Posted August 7, 2013 Name: Shadow Destiny http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10088&do=findComment&comment=563801Review topic: http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=10089Number of chapters: 13 Thank you for your time, I will enjoy the feedbackAssigned to Aderia. Thanks for coming to the ECC!-Steelsheen Current Epic: Life is a Blank - last post Jan. 22 My Library: The Esoteric Athenaeum Member of the Epic Critics' Club
Hahli Husky Posted December 2, 2013 Posted December 2, 2013 (edited) As the past couple curators are currently unable to oversee the Epic's Critics Club at this time, I'm closing the topic so as to avoid confusion and unfilled requests. If anyone would like to run a version VIII and feels capable, please contact me. Also, please PM me if you're looking for someone to critique your story and would like to see the club come back, so I can scope demand level. Thank you! Edited December 2, 2013 by Hahli Husky
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