a goose Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 (edited) Welcome to Pirok the Va-Matoran's Comix!Series 1:Who needs imaginative names?A proper introductionFezpocalypseBig Bang 2(96)Temporal DucksSeries 2:Death Is Not the EndAttack of the KinlukkoRebrickedThe Shocking Return of ProditorThe CliffOriginsThe Beginning...Of the End...Dining with DestinySeries 3:The Coming StormMeanwhile in the VoidA Day in the Life of a VillainThe Power of StormageddonTo Foil a PlotAre we there yet?A Little Rain...Series 4:Just in TimeLike an arrow the kneeScriptceptionNon-Canon:Specials:Hallowe'en SpecialOh, Christmas Tree...A Special AnnouncementHappy EndingsGS Episodes:It's me or the raccoon. Canon comics are added Mondays, Wednesdays and Saturdays. Non-Canon comics don't follow this schedule, though.PGS's:kanohi_masterStormageddon (No BZP username)More PGS's will be accepted. In order to PGS, PM me. I will not accept requests from posts in this topic.Banners:Choose to add an image to your sig, then copy this into the image. I haven't quite finished everything yet: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_2.pngAgain, choose to insert an image, then copy-paste this into the url field: http://www.brickshel...vms_comix_2.pngYet again, insert an image, copy-paste, etcetera: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_3.pngBlah blah, image, copy-paste: http://www.brickshel...ix/banner_6.png Edited January 17, 2012 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BULiK Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 woah, low quality, insignificant backrounds, low story.sorry, there just isnt much to say :\it doesnt even define where they are, and currently has little to no personality for characters. if you up the backrounds and affects a bit, then maybe you would be off to a better start.BUTyou did say the comic was random, and so it was Quote Visit www.BZPRPG.com to view my project of archiving BZPower's RPGs, and also access the BZPower Roleplaying Wiki BZPRPG Profiles - Ghosts Of Bara Magna Profiles Exo-Force RPG Profiles - Six Kingdoms: Apocalypse (Knichou, Berys, Arnex, The Taku, Exuze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 (edited) woah, low quality, insignificant backrounds, low story.sorry, there just isnt much to say :\it doesnt even define where they are, and currently has little to no personality for characters. if you up the backrounds and affects a bit, then maybe you would be off to a better start.BUTyou did say the comic was random, and so it wasIt's the first two comics. And I've never been good with backgrounds...But at least it was random.And has a comic ever started with advanced backgrounds, high quality, and lots of personality? Besides, the raccoon has personality. Edited October 30, 2011 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Good start. Not bad. reminds me of my own comics when I first started. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 Okay, I have created a proper introduction, describing all current permanent characters. I have no problem breaking the fourth wall. Consider it broken. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BULiK Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 (edited) *broken fourth wall lands on my new flatscreen HD tv and smashed my satalite cable, thus destroying my televsion channels* "WATCH WITH FOURTH WALL YOU BREAK" i say and i know this is your first tme, so i didnt want to be harsh in my first post here. and maybe ill make a cheap exqusite backround for you ta-da Edited October 30, 2011 by bulik Quote Visit www.BZPRPG.com to view my project of archiving BZPower's RPGs, and also access the BZPower Roleplaying Wiki BZPRPG Profiles - Ghosts Of Bara Magna Profiles Exo-Force RPG Profiles - Six Kingdoms: Apocalypse (Knichou, Berys, Arnex, The Taku, Exuze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 30, 2011 Author Share Posted October 30, 2011 Thankyou. Any and all donations will be graciously recieved, given credit, and most likely not used. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The Great Spirit DM Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Hey Pirok! Well, it is random, as you said. You certainly don't have good backgrounds, but that's ok. Especially with the Rayg sprites. I had my own comic series on the old forums that I didn't bother to continue after the upgrade, btw. You can see my first and only attempt that I will continue on my sig. Quote Conflux: BIONICLE Tabletop Combat System Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghosthands Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 I like it! And...wait...was that Merror? Or Jaller? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted October 30, 2011 Share Posted October 30, 2011 Time paradoxes. I luv it! And be careful... Leaving the fourth wall broken can do strange things to your comics... Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Thanks everyone! I'll be adding a Hallowe'en special later today.And no, GH, it was Pirok's future self, stuck in the past. :)I don't use characters created by other people without permission. LotTL was the person I got when I did 'Eeny Meeny Miney Mo', so I PM'ed him for permission. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Hello! I am now updating, with my Hallowe'en special! If you're bothering to read this, you obviously have so little sanity left after reading the first two that you have faith that I will get better. 'Fraid not. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BULiK Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 0_O that was random.i'd prefer more of a story Quote Visit www.BZPRPG.com to view my project of archiving BZPower's RPGs, and also access the BZPower Roleplaying Wiki BZPRPG Profiles - Ghosts Of Bara Magna Profiles Exo-Force RPG Profiles - Six Kingdoms: Apocalypse (Knichou, Berys, Arnex, The Taku, Exuze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 Incredible randomness... Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BULiK Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 oh, andThankyou. Any and all donations will be graciously recieved, given credit, and most likely not used.i'm so glad you care Quote Visit www.BZPRPG.com to view my project of archiving BZPower's RPGs, and also access the BZPower Roleplaying Wiki BZPRPG Profiles - Ghosts Of Bara Magna Profiles Exo-Force RPG Profiles - Six Kingdoms: Apocalypse (Knichou, Berys, Arnex, The Taku, Exuze) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Don't worry, the next one is very much story-based. GS comics, Holiday comics and whatnot shall not be story-based, but based in complete randomness. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Here it is, a story-based comic. Enjoy.So, what do you think? My first story-based, and my first two parter? Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Touko Fukawa Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 (edited) Yay, it is up! My appearance was great, this is very random, but I laughed several times. I can not wait for some nice shiny plot! Keep going! More!!EDIT this story comic is great!! What will happen next_Nice to see some actual plot, and I like here this is going! Edited October 31, 2011 by Last of the Time Lords Quote "Only the insane equate pain with success. Only the savage regard endurance of pain as a measure of worth.Only the foolish consider pain to be just wages for being different".- The Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice/Alice:Madness Returns) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 (edited) Yay, it is up! My appearance was great, this is very random, but I laughed several times. I can not wait for some nice shiny plot! Keep going! More!!EDIT this story comic is great!! What will happen next_Nice to see some actual plot, and I like here this is going!Good to have compliments. And as for what happens next... spoilers!EDIT: I am not a spiriah. This appearance is a mockery. Wait, my plan worked? I take it all back! Except the spiriah part.The second part is going to be big. Really big. So big, I thought I'd give you a preview. Enjoy!There we are. And now you have the title. And LotTL's return. Which I didn't check with him, although I'm sure it'll be fine.And an evil villain...And this shall be considered a stand-alone comic. But the comic itself is a preview of another comic. I'm glad you understand. Edited October 31, 2011 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghosthands Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 Ah, OK. I may make an appearance at some point. Though not necessarily as one of my RPG characters... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted October 31, 2011 Share Posted October 31, 2011 Whoo hoo! This comic is on a roll. Breaking the Fourth Wall and Destroying the spacetime continuum in just the first few comics? Wow. Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted October 31, 2011 Author Share Posted October 31, 2011 Whoo hoo! This comic is on a roll. Breaking the Fourth Wall and Destroying the spacetime continuum in just the first few comics? Wow. I can only wonder how the other comics will live up to it. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Touko Fukawa Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Yay, I'm back! And a new villain! Can't wait! Also, why are there so many backrounds? I thought it was a total event collapse? Oh well. Guess I'll have to wait. Alos, glad to see that redundant tagline is fixed! Quote "Only the insane equate pain with success. Only the savage regard endurance of pain as a measure of worth.Only the foolish consider pain to be just wages for being different".- The Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice/Alice:Madness Returns) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 (edited) Yay, I'm back! And a new villain! Can't wait! Also, why are there so many backrounds? I thought it was a total event collapse? Oh well. Guess I'll have to wait. Alos, glad to see that redundant tagline is fixed!You're gonna love it. You're gonna love it.* It's longer than the average comic length (18 boxes). I still don't know exactly how long it's gonna be, but as I said, it's gonna be big.And there's a brand new character, who won't be permanent. A GS comic with a story. Heh heh. This is how you know the universe's ended. *It is incredibly unlikely that you'll love it unless you enjoyed the previous comics* Edited November 1, 2011 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi the Matoran Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Well, this is definitley the best new series I've seen in a while. I like everything about it, so I have no complaints as of yet. I have a feeling you are going to be a pioneer in the next wave of comic makers. Good luck. Quote My comics: Kazi's Comics 3.0 My music: T-MG Music "And now for something completely different." -- Monty Python Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 Well, here we are! Big Bang 2(96)! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 THE RACCOON DID IT! GASP! You might wanna change his name, so next time the universe doesn't explode. Maybe a raccoon named raccoon... Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 THE RACCOON DID IT! GASP! You might wanna change his name, so next time the universe doesn't explode. Maybe a raccoon named raccoon...Oh, don't worry. Temporal Ducks will sort out that. And the universe imploded, rathering than exploding. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kazi the Matoran Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 So if the universe imploded, everything changed colour then? At least that's what I'm seeing. Either way, this plot is really good! Quote My comics: Kazi's Comics 3.0 My music: T-MG Music "And now for something completely different." -- Monty Python Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 this plot is really good!Thankyou. The next episode is called 'Temporal Ducks'. Speculate on that title as much as you wish. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
- JL - Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 I dont get it. I seriously dont. Too random, and for the story, All I know is Proditor wants to kill Pirok, Raccoon wants to do something, and the world just got messed up. Quote GT: Jl1223 X <----add me :3 (╯◕_◕)╯ BZPRPG Profiles 2013 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 I dont get it. I seriously dont.Too random, and for the story, All I know is Proditor wants to kill Pirok, Raccoon wants to do something, and the world just got messed up.It seems one can't please everyone. *Sighs*But I will do my best to explain: Proditor, due to the events of BZPRPG, is dead. He is also insane. And bored. Never a good combination, especially when there's a comic nearby. He doesn't want to kill Pirok, he just wants to destroy the comic. As for the raccoon, he only wants continued existence. And the universe suffered a Total Event Collapse, meaning that everywhen and everywhere don't, never have, and never will exist. I hope this clears things up! :bzp:And a trip to Games & Trivia should sort out any confusion related to LotTL's split personalities, the title, and the subversion of jokes causing the word 'Fezpocalypse' to become a trigger for a Total Event Collapse. Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Touko Fukawa Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 Yay, big episdoe! Well, I made a funny cameo, and now Pirok has a moral dilemna! Oh no! Whether 'tis nobler in the mind to sufer the slings and arrows of outrageous fortune... Yeah, kind of random, but good all the same. Would these 'Temporal Ducks' have any relation to 'No ducks in the duck pond?' Hope next ep is up soon. Quote "Only the insane equate pain with success. Only the savage regard endurance of pain as a measure of worth.Only the foolish consider pain to be just wages for being different".- The Cheshire Cat (American McGee's Alice/Alice:Madness Returns) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 Would these 'Temporal Ducks' have any relation to 'No ducks in the duck pond?''Fraid not. What's the first phrase that pops into your head when you think of ducks?Hope next ep is up soon.TBH, so do I! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Angrok Va Mata Posted November 1, 2011 Share Posted November 1, 2011 I read the comic. It's OK, but it's too random, but it's funny. This comic is very rushed, and beats Bionicle Glatorian comics 6 and 7 by a long shot! Still good comic nonetheless. Quote "You listen well, brother--" *WHAP!* (gets hit by Iron Man)"...I'm listening."Thor and Loki, Marvel's The Avengers Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share Posted November 1, 2011 What is this people are saying about 'too random'? The past 2 have barely been random at all!Besides, you can NEVER be too random, IMO. Which is probably why people are saying this is too random... Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 2, 2011 Author Share Posted November 2, 2011 Okay, here it is. The Series 1 finale, Temporal Ducks.Don't worry, I'll be making Series 2 soon. I meant to make one a month, but October's was delayed, so there'll be two this month.And Series 2'll be longer, as well.That's all, folks! Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
King Joe Posted November 2, 2011 Share Posted November 2, 2011 Series 2? Already? Ah well, carve up your comics however you see fit. Anyway...I see there's a spacetime crack in your comics. Whoo hoo! This'll be fun!Something I noticed, and it may just be due to the kit you use, but your characters don't move much. They have one pose, and don't change much at all, and their expressions are stoic as well. Maybe you can shake it up a bit next time? And you can do wonders with expressions with just a few pixels around the eyes. Give it a shot!Good comic, not trying to shove you down or anything, just giving some tips! Quote My Old comics, Of Hedgehogs and Lego Bricks - My Epic, Hero Factory: The Biosteel ChroniclesTrifecta! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 2, 2011 Author Share Posted November 2, 2011 (edited) Series 2? Already? Ah well, carve up your comics however you see fit. Anyway...I see there's a spacetime crack in your comics. Whoo hoo! This'll be fun!Something I noticed, and it may just be due to the kit you use, but your characters don't move much. They have one pose, and don't change much at all, and their expressions are stoic as well. Maybe you can shake it up a bit next time? And you can do wonders with expressions with just a few pixels around the eyes. Give it a shot!Good comic, not trying to shove you down or anything, just giving some tips!Don't consider them as series, more as... story arcs.And I'm gonna do more with poses and expressions in S2. I've already begun work on 'em. Massive twist at the start! And nice job noticing the crack! That's another important bit. Pretty soon, I'll have an S2 banner ready. It'll be a .GIF.Nevermind, having trouble making a .GIF. Edited November 2, 2011 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
a goose Posted November 2, 2011 Author Share Posted November 2, 2011 (edited) S2 preview! Be warned, it's very much timey-wimey. And here are a few new expressions, in order: 'Normal', 'Bored', 'Surprised', and 'Oooo! Shiny!'. Edited November 2, 2011 by Pirok the Va-Matoran Quote [BZPRPG PROFILES] Nikarra - Kaelynn - Ronan - Muir - Donal - Aerus - Montague - Kira - Koura - Learu - Alteora - Fuacht - Caana - Nessen - Merrill Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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