Nick Silverpen

The end was touching :)It's relatable, Puone being upset that her best wasn't enough. The vaugeness of the story, her memories, was what kept me reading, to find out more, and while the story didn't elaborate fully, it was satisfying. Good job and good luck in the contest!

It's a legacy now, and however we imagine the storyline to go on, whether it be through the fanfics or forums or just let it stop at the battle of Bara Magna. Bionicle is through the fans now

I think Ice the Great believes the murder is an entirely new character. No, its not, already someone we've met,For Hydraxon, I'd like to think so, but the only problem is, why would he want to go into isolation as a jailkeeper of a bubble? Why leave the bigger part of the world?

Gah, sadly I haven't finished my story. I do wish luck to all the entries, and I've seen some good ones so far.

I am all for a combo of chameleon and magnetism, as well as plant control, because theyre all such out of the way powers. I would love to see a Rahkshi of Magnetism in action, because of the long range v short range tactics

Ah, I see I'm not the only one thinking of the Kingdom in the downtime I love, absolutely love, the Turahk heads on the Keetongu yellow. and the custom armor all around is a neat, creative touch. OVerall, this is a kick butt model that really stands out. My only beef with it is the eye color and the slightttt too long arms. Otherwise its a good work!

Very creepy, and very seasonally appropriate. I'm imagining a skakdi without a head cover, so he's just a skull, and its very, very chilling.Your writing style was very short, which was good for the effect of the story. You didn't spend time repeating detail, you just let the details in previous paragraphs add to the overall effect, and I'll amend you for that.Like Hahli historian said, your dialouge is very natural. Keep writing!

Awesome! Maybe I do need a break from my epic....I'll look at the titles till December 1st , but this should be a challenge....

In Federation of Fear, they were nicknamed "bruisers", if that helps. That's from chapter two, I forget where Greg mentioned them being Krekka's species, but the description and context seems to fit, doesnt it?

Finally, a rowing topic!I'm entering my senior year, fourth year rowing, i think i posted on the old forum about this....how are you liking it? What level are you, jv? varsity?

This is the first story i've read in a long time, and the style is simple, but it implies many things. I like the idea of training that you applied, and how simple you made Toa. Good luck in the contest!

Cedrics death is the most powerful in the movies IMO, but Dobby hit pretty hard. I was crying in the theatre, (while beating up the kid next to me who was making fun of me) That was pretty sad, and Hedwig, I was like "No. That did not just happen." .... please not Fred. Anything but Fred next.

Trumpet. 6 years of it. Now retired. I was in the marching band for 2 years of high school, and i took music improv last year, (sophmore year of HS), we did a bunch of jazz and tried streetlight manifesto (absolute fail) Still love the trumpet and jammin to any song with a trumpet on the radio.

My parents made me shave for a college visit today :/ But I'm going as long as I can get away with.... coughnovember31,2011cough

Aw thats sweet! Good luck!

Ah, take your time bink. It's more Greg we're worried about, since it takes a month and a half for each serial chapter to be written (No offense greg) But Around Feb would be cool to update everything cause that's when journey's end does its air on the web, right?

Man, that is funnny..... Those Glatorians must've been pretty frusturated

Ah, man. No wonder the Makuta are immortal. I take it Brutaka and axxon are going to be on a hunt for six other things? But seriously, man. Where are the zombies? Inferi? Last time ol' Harry was around, there were a bunch of Inferi..... Oh wait, I forgot. Didn't they all join Mike Jackson on his "Thriller" Tour? Great one

you are so keeping Soviet Dume. Or else. And Matoro/ Nuju Scenes. Those were freaking hilarious! Takanuva has stay, as well as Avak. I dont really mind if Tahu goes, or the songs, (but they were funny, you have to admit) but nearly everything else has to stay. Hey, make a dupe file, edit the stuff out, and post the edited vid on your flash library. MMK?]

Nice! A new Christine Lorentzen song! You guys actually get to meet her? Lucky. It sounds like an awesome song! Maybe Christine can get some publicity. Dude, I'm pretty sure that Bionicle couldn't be the same without you, Bink. KUTGW!

dude, put me in right this instant. Let's go rebels!

You are kidding me. That is the short story that will be up on bioniclestory? This year's many deaths of Toa Tuyet? Greg, you never cease to amaze me. (Ha! I fixed my error, if you are reading this, Takuta Nui) I must say, I love Toa Takanuva and his adventures. But how many dimensions is he traveling through to get to Karda Nui? And as for if this is and alternate dimension, what decision creates this world? Greg, you certainly an awesome author.

greg, you are one sly dude! So you are just writing Vezon in because he is fun to write? That's pretty awesome! Good thing you never wrote too much bout this guy in the past, which is making him so expandable. And as for Roodaka joining the team, does this mean that we will find out what happened to the Toa Hagah? (If you have notthought about this, you may want to slip in a scentence or two bout them. Brutaka- ah, this guy is pretty cool. Will he be wearing something similar to idris's breathing thing? And as for Spirah, this year is going to be great for the Makuta species. Now we will know about 10 makuta, maybe? Winter 3, summer 3, Winter titan 2, MOMN, Spirah, and possibly a summer makuta? Way cool. And greg, how many serials are we doing next year? 6?But to heck with it, Greg, you are pretty cool, along with being a brilliant author!