Velox Posted April 24, 2012 Author Share Posted April 24, 2012 Sundown - Lord Ghirahim (AKA Angel Bob)Assigned to Charlie Brown (Jedi Master J.). "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 Has there been any word from Shawn Spencer? I still haven't gotten my review on Kingdoms. ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Eyru Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 If you're still taking requests for reviews, I would greatly appreciate a review for Redemption BRPG Forum Rules • BZPRPG Starter Topic • Q&A Compendium • SK:A Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 Has there been any word from Shawn Spencer? I still haven't gotten my review on Kingdoms.Unfortunately no. Guess he "psyched" you on that. Terrible jokes aside, I'll be assuming control of the situation. Expect a review from me on Kingdoms in the next 48 hours. -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 24, 2012 Author Share Posted April 24, 2012 (edited) And "I Will Return" will be reviewed by Jedi Master J. (many thanks for volunteering), since Jinklemeister is still MIA.If you're still taking requests for reviews, I would greatly appreciate a review for Redemption Assigned to Zarayna.Edit: And I have reviewed Warm, by Grant Sud Edited April 24, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 And "I Will Return" will be reviewed by Jedi Master J. (many thanks for volunteering), since Jinklemeister is still MIA.Ok, thanks! MIA made me laugh, dunno why... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Athmos Posted April 24, 2012 Share Posted April 24, 2012 The Mystery of Death by thebeggerpie WIP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 Kingdoms, by Click has been reviewed.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 Thanks for getting it done so quickly Cederak! I'll have to keep in mind a lot of the things you mentioned next time I write. I can't believe I missed so many spelling errors! ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 Redemption has been reviewed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 The Mystery of Death by thebeggerpieRegrettably, your last request (My Old Friend) has not yet been critiqued, and thus, we cannot accept The Mystery of Death at this time. See the "One story at a time" rule in the SSCC's initial post. Once Tyler Durden has critiqued the first short story, feel free to return with The Mystery of Death. Thank you! -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Athmos Posted April 25, 2012 Share Posted April 25, 2012 The Mystery of Death by thebeggerpieRegrettably, your last request (My Old Friend) has not yet been critiqued, and thus, we cannot accept The Mystery of Death at this time. See the "One story at a time" rule in the SSCC's initial post. Once Tyler Durden has critiqued the first short story, feel free to return with The Mystery of Death. Thank you! -Ced Huh. Details DO matter. Sorry, I'll wait. WIP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 Speaking of which, that should be done tomorrow.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nick Silverpen Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 (edited) Requesting a review on my storySlipping Through http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4570by Nick SilverpenThanks! Edited April 26, 2012 by Nick Silverpen Disassembly-- Review Collective Works Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Peach 00 Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 Angel by Peach 00I'm not sure if things are filled up or not, but if you guys can review it, I'd really, really appreciate. (Just as a side note, for critics MIA, I'd love to help out if that's fine, just as a temporary critic - only if critics are busy, that is. If that's cool, I'm happy to help. ^^) On the day the wall came down / They threw the locks onto the ground And with glasses high / We raised a cry / For freedom had arrived On the day the wall came down / The ship of fools had finally run aground Promises lit up the night / Like paper doves in flight I dreamed you had left my side / No warmth, not even pride remained And even though you needed me / It was clear that I could not do a thing for you Now life devalues day by day / As friends and neighbors turn away And there's a change that even with regret / Cannot be undone Now frontiers shift like desert sands / While nations wash their bloodied hands Of loyalty, of history / In shades of grey I woke to the sound of drums / The music played, the morning sun streamed in I turned and I looked at you / And all but the bitter residues slipped away slipped away... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted April 26, 2012 Share Posted April 26, 2012 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4534(Delving Too Deep) - Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted May 4, 2012 Share Posted May 4, 2012 Angel by Peach 00I'm not sure if things are filled up or not, but if you guys can review it, I'd really, really appreciate. (Just as a side note, for critics MIA, I'd love to help out if that's fine, just as a temporary critic - only if critics are busy, that is. If that's cool, I'm happy to help. ^^)While I can't speak for Velox on whether or not we need any temporary assistance right now, I'll be taking your request for Angel. Expect a review sometime in the next 48 hours.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted May 5, 2012 Share Posted May 5, 2012 Angel, by Peach 00 has been reviewed.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted May 7, 2012 Author Share Posted May 7, 2012 (edited) Apologies for the lateness of this...I've been sick recently so kinda forgot about this. =PRequesting a review on my storySlipping Through http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4570by Nick SilverpenThanks!Assigned to Zarayna. http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4534(Delving Too Deep) - Lord Darkon Assigned to myself. Oh and @ Peach ~ Thanks for your offer as always; I'll keep that in mind! Though, surprisingly, I think we're good right now haha. Edited May 7, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALVIS Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 I'm not sure whether or not to count the downtime, but it definitely has been at least a week since I applied for a review. There's no need to jump to it, though; I suppose I'll just write something else and wait for my friends to review it. "You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant." -- Harlan Ellison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 I'm not sure whether or not to count the downtime, but it definitely has been at least a week since I applied for a review. There's no need to jump to it, though; I suppose I'll just write something else and wait for my friends to review it.Even without the downtime, the critic assigned to handle your request has exceeded their seven day deadline. Upon glancing at his profile, it would appear he will be away until the 11th. I'm not sure whether Velox was informed of that beforehand. In any event, I'll try to speak with Velox later today about this matter. On behalf of the SSCC, I apologize for this unanticipated (to my knowledge) setback.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted May 7, 2012 Share Posted May 7, 2012 I'm not sure whether or not to count the downtime, but it definitely has been at least a week since I applied for a review. There's no need to jump to it, though; I suppose I'll just write something else and wait for my friends to review it.Sorry about that, apparently Velox forgot to mention that I PMed him to inform you all that I won't be able to write up a review for either of my assignments here until after I am finished with my finals this week. And well, that won't be until after this Wednesday. So if you can wait just two more days, I should be able to get my review up for you by then. Once again, sorry about that.Even without the downtime, the critic assigned to handle your request has exceeded their seven day deadline. Upon glancing at his profile, it would appear he will be away until the 11th. I'm not sure whether Velox was informed of that beforehand. In any event, I'll try to speak with Velox later today about this matter. On behalf of the SSCC, I apologize for this unanticipated (to my knowledge) setback.-CedAgain I did contact Velox here (On the day that forums came back.), so this information should of been pass along already. However I admit I probably should of made a post here, so I am sorry about that and I'll try to be mindful of doing that in the future, if something like this happens again.But anyway, like I said above, if he can wait another two days, I should be able to get my review up for him. Right now, I can't though since I got stuff to review for my finals this Wednesday. "I'm a heartbreaker...My name...Charles." **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted May 7, 2012 Author Share Posted May 7, 2012 Yeah, that was my bad; I glanced at the PM at a time when I was sick/doing other things so didn't do anything about it and then unfortunately forgot about it. I echo Cederak's apology, and on behalf of the SSCC would like to offer you a complementary coffee mug!...I wish. We need licensed products for the SSCC. Anyway, sorry again, and we appreciate your patience. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted May 8, 2012 Share Posted May 8, 2012 No coffee, thanks! :PWhatever, I'm waiting patiently and I thank Charlie Brown for taking my request, along with Ghirahim's one. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted May 9, 2012 Share Posted May 9, 2012 I'm officially done with school for the summer, so I can take requests if they come up. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted May 11, 2012 Share Posted May 11, 2012 (edited) As requested, I have reviewed Sundown. Apologizes for the lateness. Edited May 13, 2012 by Charlie Brown **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted May 13, 2012 Share Posted May 13, 2012 I reviewed Slipping Through yesterday. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted May 13, 2012 Share Posted May 13, 2012 As requested, I have reviewed I Will Return. Apologizes for the lateness. **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted May 14, 2012 Author Share Posted May 14, 2012 And I have reviewed Delving Too Deep.Just reminding people that we are open for requests! "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted May 15, 2012 Share Posted May 15, 2012 As requested, I have reviewed I Will Return. Apologizes for the lateness.No need to apologize, IMO. Thanks! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TNTOS Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 Glatorian Chronicles #12: The Future Begins Where the Past Ends by TNTOS.-TNTOS- "It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood; who strives valiantly; who errs, who comes short again and again, because there is no effort without error and shortcoming; but who does actually strive to do the deeds; who knows great enthusiasms, the great devotions; who spends himself in a worthy cause; who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement, and who at the worst, if he fails, at least fails while daring greatly, so that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who neither know victory nor defeat." - Theodore RooseveltA Writerly BlogThe Tasty Library of Sugary Goodness(My Little BIONICLE: Friendship is Explosive Completed 01/05/14){The Shika Trilogy Omnibus Completed 03/31/14) (Review Topic)(In the End Completed 09/01/14) (Review Topic)The Biological Chronicle: (2001) (2002) (2003) (2004) (2005) (2006) (2007) (2008) (2009) (2010) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted May 19, 2012 Author Share Posted May 19, 2012 Glatorian Chronicles #12: The Future Begins Where the Past Ends by TNTOS.-TNTOS-Assigned to Yukiko. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted May 19, 2012 Share Posted May 19, 2012 To Take The Stars From The Sky (http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4874) - Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted May 21, 2012 Author Share Posted May 21, 2012 To Take The Stars From The Sky (http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4874) - Lord Darkon Assigned to Tolkien. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Nuile the Paracosmic Tulpa Posted May 25, 2012 Share Posted May 25, 2012 In the Jungle, by Nuile: The Daft Wordbender, please. I appreciate the quality of the reviews given here. It's nice in general when someone reads your story and comments, but you don't get quality reviews from every reader in the library.From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith When I know I can't live without a pen and paper, when I know writing is as necessary to me as breathing . . . I know I am ready to start my voyage. A Musing Author . . . Want to read my books? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
JRRT Posted May 26, 2012 Share Posted May 26, 2012 To Take the Stars from the Sky, by D.A.V.E., reviewed.JRRT BZP Blog: In a hole in the ground there lived... || A Matoran Dictionary, 2nd Edition (c. 2013) || Matoran Grammar: A Primer=====Tumblr: outofgloom.tumblr.com || Matoran Language Resources=====Brickshelf || Majhost Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted May 26, 2012 Share Posted May 26, 2012 In the Jungle, by Nuile: The Daft Wordbender, please. I appreciate the quality of the reviews given here. It's nice in general when someone reads your story and comments, but you don't get quality reviews from every reader in the library.From the desk of Nuile: Lunatic Wordsmith Yes, the SSCC prides itself on quality. On that note, Zaxvo will be handling your request. Thank you, Nuile. -Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mel Posted May 28, 2012 Share Posted May 28, 2012 GC12 has been reviewed. I apologize for the lateness; I know it means a strike against my name. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kaleidoscope Tekulo Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 Hey guys. I'm sure everybody and their muaka is asking for a review what with the contest and all, so don't worry if you can't get to this one for a while.Lhii the Surfer - Tekulo: Toa of Gales Executive Vice President of Tomato Throwing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
BBBBalta Posted May 29, 2012 Share Posted May 29, 2012 (edited) I might as well...Shadow of the Wind - BaltaEDIT: A topic has been made. Edited May 30, 2012 by Βalta Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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