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Very nice. The tiles make the surface smooth and sleek and the paddle is really neat. It looks a lot like a canoe. 9.5/10

That is the most creative use of that Visorak/Hordika launcher piece I have ever seen. I also really like the arms and torso. The legs, skinny like this, are perfect. The arms are pretty good with some nice use of the 2.0 HF pieces. The head is really nice, with the antenae and stuff. The back is nice, very smooth. Is that helmet from some Knights Kingdom set from way back? I don't really recognize it. Overall, this MOC gets a 9.75/10 from me.

Yay, welcome back, Tohu!But what are you looking at like that?...

2008 was a great year, story was great, so were sets, silver is one of the best colours, Tarix is absolutely awesome, squid launchers were the best shooting weapon ever (especially looked great with the green/blue squid), Hahli Mahrii sucked awfully (unlike all the other Mahrii) , and Pohatu looks better in orange.

Most impressive. She looks very movie-accurate.The chains on the head work very well, like dreadlocks. They are nicely attached.The eyes work perfectly, I didn't notice them at first. Great work there.This is one of very few MOCs I've seen where blue pins look good. The Rahkshi heads are beautiful, I like the tubes on the body a lot, too.Both the upper and lower arms are perfectly built. You managed to get proportions ideal. The hands and staff are good.So are the legs. Great use of pieces. The feet could be a bit better, but they aren't bad as it is.The general shape is the best I have ever seen on a female MOC. She looks tough and powerfull.And although I like her a lot as a MOC (10/10 definately), I'd really not want to actually meet her in person.

The whole MOC is beautifully built, yet kinda creepy, with a nice colour scheme, the blue pin I did not notice until you mentioned it, and even then I had to look closely for it. I like his head with the little propellor on top, as well as the Bohrok shields and tubes used to attach the arms. The truth is, there is nothing here that I do not like, 10/10

Although I kind of like every set in it's own way, I'll say Whenua Hordika was the worst. Although he had good pieces, the set itself was not great. Not to mention those things he had as weapons.

Although they are not very versatile, the 1.0 cores are by far my favourite. Translucent colours are great, but I also like their shape a lot. The 2.0/3.0 cores were the worst IMO, the new Breakout ones are good for MOCs and stuff, but I don't like the way they look on sets.

I definately agree on that. Some early Mandos, like Jaster Mereel and Tor Vizsla from the Death Watch would make awesome minifigs. I am a Mandalorian fan, so basically everything to do with Mandos is great for me.

That's basically what I do, too. Some friends I got and had no idea who the heck they were (as I take any friend request), most I just had a conversation with in a topic and now they're on my list, others I frequently converse with.

The colour scheme on this MOC is amazing. The use of system pieces is fantastic, aspecially around his knees. The backstory you added was nice too. The proportions suit him very well. One thing that is not 10/10 in this MOC is, IMO, the sword. A bit too wide, looks more like an axe or something. However, everything else, especially the legs, custom head and torso are perfect. 10/10, obviously.

Chapter 13 Killing your conscience is wrong. Evo: I'm taking a Jetrax T6 down to the big department store to get cookies.Nex: What do I care?Evo: You certainly are nice to have around, Nex. You've got so much enthusiasm.Nex: Shut up and go get your stupid cookies.Evo: Cookies aren't stupid. Cookies are great.Nex: You're stupid. This tiger suit is stupid. Everything's stupid.Breez: Sorry to interrupt, but have you seen a camouflaged landmine anywhere? I dropped it on the floor and can't find it.Evo: That can't be good. Either way, I'm leaving. *leaves in hisJetrax*Breez: It's not. It was really expensive and I'd hate to have it blow up under some regular loser's feet. So I advise everyone to just stand where you are for the rest of eternity.Brutaka: Actually, there's a better plan. * throws a whole bunch of ants on to the floor, who frantically run around the whole house. One of them stumbles upon the camouflaged mine.*Mine: KaBoom! *explodes*Tarix: *gets thrown off his feet, as he was standing right next to the mine.*Breez: Are you okay, Tarix?Tarix: I am, but not my pile of boring documents I was holding. They got burnt and ripped and will likely make me lose my job as the money manager.Breez: On the bright side, if you lose your job you wont have to bore everyone in this house talking about the economy and financial stability and whatever else it is you want us to hear.Tarix: On the even brighter side, I can now blow all this money on Krika's pancakes!Ackar: Or you can help the elderly with it.Tarix: I can help the elderly without it. *Whacks Ackar on the head and blows the money on Krika's pancakes*In the big department store Evo went to.Human shop clerk: Can I help you, sir?Evo: I want a whole bunch of cookies.Human shop clerk: That will be 692$.Evo: No chance. *runs off with the cookies.*Shop clerk: Have a nice day, sir.Evo: Nice, I've got 692$ worth of cookies and I didn't have to pay anything.Evo's conscience: Oh, that was wrong. You should have payed for the cookies.Evo: Shut the up or I shoot you.Evo's conscience: Swearing is wrong. Threatening to shoot is even worse.Evo: *shoots his conscience*After Evo comes back home.Evo: Boy, this is fun! I love shooting everyone I see!Breez: Told you so earlier.Brutaka: I'll give you the sniper rifle for only 200% of the original price.Evo: Great! What a deal! *buys sniper rifle.*Two seconds later.Evo: Wait a second...Brutaka: Returns not accepted.In another room.Takanuva (original 2003 version): Oh man oh man oh man! How will Doctor Who escape those Daleks?!Gresh: I think you may be addicted to the TV, Takanuva. You've been watching it non-stop since November 23d 2003. That's when we first bought you.Takanuva: Well, what else should I do?Gresh: We still have the body of your 2008 and 2010 versions. Why don't you change bodies?Takanuva: The 2008 version is too dark and 2010 too small. Now be quiet, this is my favourite soap commercial and I have only seen it 578 times.Gresh: Why don't you go fly around on your Ussanui then?Takanuva: I gave that to some green loser with dreams of flying and he crashed it into Stormer's house. Now get out, I'm missing the third rerun of "Lost".Gresh: See you in a couple of years, probably. *leaves the room.*Takanuva: Finally! Back to concentrating on the TV.End of chapter 13Words: 611

This is beautiful. Sleak, streamlined and with a great clour scheme. The fact that it's the first in a series of eight is even better, can't wait to see the rest! 10/10

Great chapter. I noticed two grammar mistakes, but they are totally justified because of being in very funny sentences. Should be: "Tell me where Fire Minotaur is." Should be "lets the Piraka fall on sand)"Funniest moments: I find the idea of throwing your own head at someone just hilarious. Daniel is a good name for you, Rocka. Accept it.' That certainly is lucky. Way to go, Bulk! That was really funny. Keep up the great work!

Thanks! You are correct about Kopaka.Chapter 12, I had some good ideas for it, but not a lot of time to write. So it ended up being this short.Iruini is Rahaga.Next chapter probably up tommorow.

Chapter 12 Name problems. Ra Koon: Do you have any more minifigures in this house?Lewa: A few City policemen, one Happy Rotter minifig and that red ninja.Ra Koon: So I won't have anyone to command except Commander here?Commander: You know, I am sick of everyone calling me "commander". I have a name you know.Ra Koon: But I thought we all agreed your name is awful and that you don't want to use it.Commander: Well, it's better than being called "commander" all the time.Ra Koon: As you wish, Commander Bean Dip.Commander Bean Dip: On second thought, lets go back to "commander". Or think of a new, cool name for me.Lewa: Iruini, Commander Bean Dip wants your help.Iruini: What kind of new name would you like?Commander Bean Dip: I don't know, but all the cool clones have names, like Rex or Cody or Stinky.Iruini: What about "Commander Repulsive"?Commander Bean Dip: Do you WANT to get punched in the face?Iruini: Well, what about "Commander Nameless"?Commander Bean Dip: Brutaka, I think somebody wants to get shot in the head.Brutaka: You?Commander Bean Dip: Iruini.Brutaka: Iruini, do you want to get shot in the head?Iruini: What do you THINK?Brutaka: Well, Commander said you do, so I can do you that small favour.Iruini: Well, I don't. Are you really that stupid?Brutaka: Even if you don't, you should NEVER call someone with a bazooka stupid. *shoots Iruini*Commander Bean Dip: Could you think of a good name for me, Brutaka?Brutaka: Depends if you would want to help me in my weapons testing.Commander Bean Dip: Sure! I love weapons testing!Brutaka: Great. Then you'll be "Commander Living Target". Or would you preffer "Commander Soon To Be Blown To Smithereens"Commander Bean Dip: I think the idea of weapons testing no longer appeals to me.Brutaka: Rats. *walks away*Elsewhere.Evo: Cookies!Ehlek: Mine! *eats cookies*Evo: Why did you just eat those cookies?Ehlek: What should have I done with them?Evo: Given them to me.Ehlek: Why should I have wasted a bag of wonderful cookies on someone who lost all his purple?Evo: Because I like cookiesEhlek: So do I.Evo: Well, I'm known as the cookie lover since the beginning.Ehlek: Well, you suck.Evo: Because I don't have purple. Not my fault.Ehlek: Whatever. *eats some more cookies* :popcorn:Evo: I hate that emoticon unless it's in my speech/action.Back near Commander Bean Dip.Commander Bean Dip: Yes! I have the perfect name!Ra Koon: Go on...Commander Bean Dip: Oh, wait, that would be an insult to myself.Ra Koon: *sigh* Again?Commander Bean Dip: Oh, come on. That's only the 2510th insulting name I've come up with yet.Evo: How about "Commander Cookie Retriever" ?Commander Bean Dip: OK, it'll do for now.Evo: Good. Now go retrieve me a bunch of cookies.End of chapter 12Words: 493

Chapter 11Return of minifigs.Ra Koon: We sneak inside when he opens the door.Stormer: *doesn’t open the door for at least two hours*After two hours have past.Ra Koon: Oh, forget it. There’s that big house with the garage on fire further up the hill. Lets go live there.Commander: I think it has Bionicles living inside. Then again, they might be those “prototype robots” like that orange dude we met a couple of days ago.Ra Koon: If we can’t live with them, maybe they can at least fix our shuttle. *goes to the house and knocks on door*Mazeka: Somebody just knocked on the door and now there’s no one here?Commander: We’re standing in front of you, old friend.Mazeka: What? Oh, right. Little minifigs. Hey, you look just like Ra Koon.Ra Koon: I am Ra. Crashed in a shuttle a few hundred meters away.Mazeka: Ra? Ra Koon? Great to see you again!Commander: Can we live with you?Mazeka: Sure!Ra Koon: *goes inside, followed by Commander*Lewa: Hi, Ra. We have a few Star Wars dudes living in the attic, you can join them if you want.Ra Koon: Depends. Who are they?Lewa: Admiral Ackbar, along with his newly-opened “Ackbar’s Snack Bar”, a few Stormtroopers and some Battle Droids that play cards all the time.Ra Koon: Does “Ackbar’s Snack Bar” sell good food you can eat?Lewa: Well, definitely better than “Krika’s Pancakes” or “Nuju’s Ice Cream”Ra Koon: What’s wrong with those?Lewa: Krika eats all the pancakes himself and Nuju grabs your money and runs away.Mazeka: Sorry to interrupt, but we have a new Kopaka that Ignika made alive.Kopaka: *texts Lewa*Text message: I’m back! And now I’m in command, so get off my throne. Rule #1 shall now be: hand all weapons over to Kopaka The Great. Rule #2: Do not start or participate in a protest against Kopaka The Great. Rule #3: Worship Kopaka The Great and do anything he demands. That will be all for now, thank you for your attention.Brutaka: *hands a big bomb with a lit fuse to Kopaka.*Kopaka: *texts Brutaka*Text message: Your cooperation is greatly appreciated.Bomb: KaBOOM! *explodes in Kopaka’s hands.*Kopaka: *guess what*Brutaka: No more of Kopaka’s tyranny in this house.Lewa: Thanks for that, Brutaka.A few hours later.Brutaka: Uh, guys, we’ve got a small problem.Lewa: What is it?Brutaka: I built this big mech armed with machine guns and now he’s spreading havoc around the house. He broke all the weapons, too.Mech: Die! Die! Die! *shoots everything around himself with machine guns*Lewa: I think I have the perfect solution. Reapa! Come here, supper is ready!Toxic Reapa: Where?Lewa: *points to mech*Toxic Reapa: *eats him* Mmm, mechs are good, but a bit greasy.Brutaka: I was hoping I could at least salvage the machine guns…Elsewhere.Splitface’s red half: Hello Krika! Could I buy a pancake?Krika: Depends if you gives me money. Price raised to 240$ now.Splitface’s red half: Certainly, my friend! *hands Krika the money*Krika: *puts the money in his pocket* On second thought, you can’t buy it. Me run outta ingredients.Splitface’s red half: *hands Krika 1000$ more.* Here, buy the ingredients. And have a nice day!Krika: Guys in dis house are either mean or dumb. Me like de dumb ones more.In “Ackbar’s Snack Bar”.Admiral Ackbar: Can I take your order, sir?Kalmah: What do you have with honey?Ackbar: Zamor filled with honey, and Kanohi filled with honey.Kalmah: And what do you recommend?Ackbar: I recommend you give me your order, stay in this restaurant, tip me well, spread good information about me and buy me a clone legion I could have as waiters.Kalmah: I meant what food do you recommend?Ackbar: Fried calamari. You two will go together perfectly.Kalmah: I’ll take the calamari. I need friends that are like me.Ackbar: Sir, perhaps you are unclear on the concept of food.Kalmah: Please, sir. I have decided. Now get me the calamari.Ackbar: *walks away, then returns 20 minutes later with the food*Kalmah: Oh my god! They’re dead! Every single one of them! This is so sad, how did it happen? That poor, poor squid ammo is dead!Ackbar: I think you are unclear on the concept of food, that I fried these so you can now eat them.Kalmah: You?! You murderer! And you expect me to eat my deceased brothers?! *stomps on Ackbar and kills him*End of chapter 11Words: 766

Happy birthday Turakii!

That chapter was really funny! I noticed one grammar mistake: Should be: "Suddenly, I feel I'm no longer alone."And a bunch of hilarious parts: Well, you DID die earlier, Kalmah. Yay, a breakout! Gresh is right. It can't be Scorpio, they are nice little animals that eat calamari.Great chapter!The next chapter of my comedy should be up tommorow.

That was definately the best chapter yet. A couple of times I literally LOLed. I'm pointing that out for 2 reasons. 1. It's hilarious. 2. I think that should be "replaced his brain with a Muaka's"More funny moments: I like Nuju already. Cool you include MOCs of yours too. Calamari are good. Yay, exploding cities!Keep up the great work!

Oh, LOL. That chapter was even funnier than the previous one. Some of the best parts are: That is probably the funniest part Oh well, everybody can forget they're dead from time to time. That sure aint gonna make him less mad.Great work, can't wait for more.

Yeah, although because in the movie his name tag was crooked, I remember him as Ian now.