Dual Cee

Hello Sirs, I have a question for you... I recently got into pokémon again, and realised I missed a lot of awesome events, now I'd like to get them. I remember myself getting a shiny pichu( for the spikey one) by putting a code in the settings of my wifi. Hower I can't find instructions for that anymore. Can anyone of you help?

No Exams and such are going on here, but those end the 1th of July, so, we'lll see zfter that...

A good story, it's style reminds me of one of my earlier stories on BZP, only this one is far better. I liked the way how the Matoran slowely transmitted into a real membrr of the swarm, and how he became to accept there habbits. There would be only one small thing to fully complete that plot point, and that would be just that the Matoran would first try to very much resist the krana, but slowely start to like it. But except for that little detail, it is perfectly fine.For the rest, I'm not so sure how I feel about bohrok chanting. On the first hand, the silent way they do it, and what they do, is very bohroky, but on the other hand, I just can't bring myself to the idea of them chanting. It just doesn't fit IMO. I can understand it however if you were trying to make the bohrok feel more human-like to make it easyer for the Matoran to blend in. Well, the first sentence looks really odd, it looks like the "Warmth" itself is the subject of the sentence, which at a closer look does not appear true. I'd reccomend to make that more clear. Also I'm not sure what you're going for with the whole "warmth" idea here, I can understand what you are trying to say. I only think that recuires quite a bit imagination, and is not the first thing that pops up how I would feel when a parasite was attatched to my face. But yeah, I can guess what you are going for so yeah, it's ok.Also "Whiteness" , well, after you explained me, I eventually understood, but I could've never guessed what it stood for if you hadn't done that. So I'd reccomend to add a little bit to that word , and say like "the whiteness of the void" or "the whiteness, which was all he vould see." just to explain better about what kind of whiteness you're talking here. Also I liked you went a little creative and went for white instead of the more usual black, just a nice little touch.Just one more thing, and that was the word "hive", it appeared quite some time in your story, but, and this is just personal, everytime I read it I thought of Nui-Rama instead of Bohrok, who I believe where mostly descrined to came from a nest. I could however reccomend you to switch between the two, just to avoid word repetition you know...Last thing, I should've left the Matoran unnamed, I think if you're giving him a name, I believe we should get more background too, which we didn't get, so I believe it could've been left out.Well, overall, I liked the plot, I liked the style, I liked the character. Only a few things were a litle bit odd. But I liked the story.

Anti TwistedGuru, The gorilla. Lvl3

I'm getting myself access to the codes, will give my username once registered.... Thanks for notifying.

I guess we're going to need a new role then, how 'bout a pyro?

I fondly remember the old Kanoka Club, going to shops to copy the codes on the backs and then create an awesome sticker page provided lots of fun.

Ok, I'm definately in favour, Lorax, LET's Do this...

Story I had to review is reviewed...

I can honestly say, this story is different, far different then the stories I'm used to read. Beginning with the writing style you used, it is not something you see all day, I'm not saying it's bad, no not at all, you did a very good job in keeping your writing style consistent throughout the story, so that's good. The plot of the story itself was, rather hard to understand, I had to read te story four times or so to basicly understand what was going on. But then again, I'm not a native English Reader and this style is new to me. But I liked the plot, I loved the way you made a countdown towards the end, and gave us a time regularelyl, except for just random. Well, the story is written good, no grammar or spelling mistakes where mine too see, which is always a good start, the story was off, but creative. And now the little, since it's just writen well, nitpicking: I think the use of the verb "slipping" is not the best choise, since I believ he's puched in it, right? So it makes it confusing and harder to follow the story due you made it look like an "Accident". This paragraph looks odd due to your usage of "you" which did not return in the rest of the story, hower, if you change it to "he" I believe this is the best Part of the Story.There wasn't much too say due the well-writenness of the story. A good, but slightly off story.Keep up the Good Work...

Sounds cool...

...What's the third one?Oh that must be some sort of typo,... Just two... So what do yyou guys think?

Well I actually was about to ask if I could possibly host the continuation of this...But another round would be fun too...

I Can't believe I'm saying this to two highly respectable staff members, but:Sta on topic guys, you have an interesting discussion going on, but it doesn't belong in this topic. (That said, please don't ban me )Now, for Greg...*About the Serials, is there some news?*Velika mentioned "Things" have changed, what things... And why does he wants to keep the Mata alive.

Well, you have to be a staff member to get your reviews posten on the front page... Hower, you could post it in the Set Discussion Topic.

All I can say is that this is a great MOC... The visor goes so well together with the old Bionicle eye cover. The only thin that stands out is are the knee cabs, the piece is good, only the color stands out. The blue has always been an accent color, but there it is a little too much... I'd reccomend to use a black piece and use the minipins to add a blue accent....

As the topic said, it has to be a set, and I just picked the Biggest Villain set Or Wait, take the Bahrag... The Toa couldn't defait them at all... The Bahrag were protocaged by the Toa without much fanfare, compared to the Vakama/Makuta battle (s). You could argue... I don't consider the Protocase as a defait for the Bahrag, you basicly could protocase everyone if you catch them by suprise...

Alrighty, I've got Three Concepts Ready for the Contest, could I ask for opinions on them... *Teridax Reign... Play as the Scattered Toa, Matoran and Free People Across the Universe to defait the Brotherhood... But on the "Good Side, an even more evil character is planning to take over, beware, and find his Identity, before it's too Late... *Spherus Magna: Player is located on the Just reformed SM, and the building of the society has problems, you never know who to trust... Mostly Caused by Velika...

As the topic said, it has to be a set, and I just picked the Biggest Villain set Or Wait, take the Bahrag... The Toa couldn't defait them at all...

Ultimate Dume...

@Electro Spectrum Up for a Champion Match?

So, can someone please tell me where the Planning topic is located?

So: As Free Item I claim the Exo-Toa, as free trainers, I'd like a + 5 Mind....

I would love to have those...

Not me, no theme shall ever be able to limit my twisted Mind, nothing shall stop me from entering..