VampireBohrok

nnnnnnnnnnnnooooooooooooo Also Windrider, you're a contest host after all, so your wishes are definitely appreciated as much as anyone's, lol.

I've done seven very sketchy pages and I've just barely gotten started on the story itself. Am I doing it right? OKAY PROGRESS: All 11 and 1/3 pages are sketched out, they now have to be inked and perhaps have some values adjusted digitally. I think I'll make it in time for the deadline.

IC: Cantai"Oh, and not only did we run into him", Cantai added. "He dragged us into getting attacked by another Toa. But then he ran off. According to this other Toa, he was some sort of cannibalistic freak... Looking back, we shouldn't have let him travel with us at all."

I don't think I've ever met a stuck-up scout. They're just plain crazy around here, really. In a kind of awesome way.

IC: Cantai"Cantai", The Toa of Ice said with a quick nod. "So tell me, what business do you have in Ko-Koro?"

IC: Cantai"We managed to run into quite a bit of trouble", Cantai said. "None of that is relevant now, though; our current concern is our damaged friend here.We have to get him to the Koro as fast as possible." He tilted his head towards Sumiki.

For the record Samus, aka the protagonist of the Metroid series, is female. The only similarity I see between her and Evo is the arm cannon, which isn't even remotely similar.And his accent sounds rather american to me. I'm not even sure what you're trying to say with those supposedconnections to stereotyped Asian characteristics. I guess that's what is making me a bit frustrated here; referringto stereotypes like they'd be relevant at all.I really can't see anything 'strange' about Evo as a set, and I'm still a bit dumbfounded as to what the point here is.

IC: CantaiCantai saw the Toa walk away into the snowy mass."Definitely", he said to Sumiki as the Toa vanished. "I suggest that we take the original path. There's no point in taking reroutes.Now, to reach Ko-Koro we need to head... east." With that, the three Toa began crossing the snow-covered lands towards safety.

IC: Cantai"Honestly, between you and me, I don't think his name is what we should be concerned about. That look he gave me when he approached us..."Cantai glared at the hunched gestalt. "... I don't know. I'm just very disconcerted by his presence." A sudden yell was heard from the front of the group. The cloaked being seemed upset, but he did no aggressive movements towards Carraig.And then Cantai realized another being, of his own element, was present. Icy spikes were building up around the small group.The dark being was now yelling something, Cantai could not hear whether it was complete gibberish or perhaps some foreign language.But he had the feeling that this attack had been brought upon them by their new companion.The cloaked one was of no priority to him. But he would be ready to counter any immediate offenses from this hidden attacker sent towards him and his fellow Toa.

IC: Cantai"Ah yes, of course... I think it may take us a while to get there. But surely it should be a manageable distance, for you as well as for us."Cantai fell silent for a moment, while having a quick look at the Iron Toa's injury. "Hm. At this stage I can probably do nothing to make the stride towards Ko-Koro easier for you... This satchel here contains quite an array of medical supplies, but chances are that I would mistreat your wound.My knowledge of the matter is a bit limited, you see... Oh, however, you could use my staff as a provisional crutch of sorts. Here, take it."

IC: Cantai"I'm Cantai", the Toa of Ice said with a quick nod. "And I think you should probably have a seat, that wound of yours really isn't looking too good."

I have a question regarding disturbing/gory content. With the help of a black and a red pen, I've zombified my hand. I've basically just drawn a large wound covering the back of the hand, with exposed bone and tendons, et cetera. Would a picture of this be okay to post, ​or would a staff member want to look at it first before determining whether it's appropriate or not?

This just goes to show how dangerous it is to keep a robot in your home. Thank goodness for reality shifts.Ray: Examine robostrocity.

He's wearing a jacket, even. He's just that classy. Also @ 5x5, I've never liked using the smudge tool. I feel it makes everything look sloppy and it mixes colours in ways that make them look like someone emptied a glass of water on them. I realize it can be useful when trying to create certain effects, but it just doesn't work with my style.

Huh, having a face is all the rage now apparently.

IC: CantaiThe second Toa was clearly a Toa of Stone. The Muaka had been knocked over by his elemental powers and wasdesperately flailing its claws around, trying to get a grip on the frozen ground.Cantai approached slowly and cautiously and as he did, he used his elemental power to collect crystals of icefrom the ground. And then, with a gesture, he sent them hailing at the enraged feline.This had no apparent physical effect but the Muaka reacted strongly and attempted to retreat, still lying on its side.Cantai sent another hail of ice at the Rahi. It was furiously scrambling, and suddenly it managed to get a grip on the ground.It got upright and snarled aggressively.But now it seemed to realize that it was facing three opponents. The gray Toa had retrieved a piece of peculiar weaponry and the Toa of Stone appeared ready to use hiselemental powers again. Cantai continued approaching the beast, knowing it was a risk-filled tactic,however it had a high intimidation factor.For a moment the Muaka lowered its head and appeared to calculate which one of them would be the easiest target. But then it started retreating again, while still keeping eye contact, and a final hail of ice made it turn around with a single growl anddisappear into the white, whirling blur.

IC: CantaiCantai's brief rest was interrupted by a echoing cry of rage. He was sitting at the side of a large rock, and even thoughhe had been there for quite a short time, a tiny pile of snow had collected on his shoulders and head. As he rose up, the wind carriedit off him like a white cape before assimilating it into the snowy haze surrounding him.Slightly desorientated, he took a quick look around the immediate area. All he could see was icy structures, shaped by the relentless wind.No sign of whatever could have been the origin of the enraged roar.He decided not to move beyond his current spot. Not before using his Arthron.He started to focus on - very roughly - mapping out the terrain around him, but primarily on finding any moving entities nearby.After a moment of concentration he sensed something moving in his direction. An attacker?He grabbed the curved handle of his staff. The plains were dangerous, but he'd hoped to be left out of any possible mischief goingon out here, if only this one time. But it seemed like he was in for a fight.He picked up the staff with both hands and pointed the twin blades at the point of the entity moving towards him.But then he hesitated.Another gestalt was picked up by the Arthron's sonar power. This one was larger. And it was most certainly faster.Cantai heard the furious roar again. The moment after, he saw what appeared to be a Toa emerging from the whirling shroud, furiously limping.The Toa looked back, and there was a large monstrous shadow, plowing through the snow at great speed."You've gotten yourself in some trouble, mate", Cantai mumbled to himself. Then he rushed through the deep snow to aid his fellow Toa.

I unintentionally went back to the rough style on this one. I might redo it if I feel like it. Colours were also hard to get right and I don't really like how they came out.

Thanks a lot for the feedback, folks. :> I am totally cool with that - it makes me feel kind of honoured that someone would want these hanging in their room, lol. Oh yeah, I think they all do, lol. I guess I thought it would be a bit boring for all of them to haveorange eyes though, so I changed both Antroz' and Chirox' eye colour. I've taken both your and Sumiki's advice and started drawing the Mistika Makuta in a slightly higherquality than these are. I guarantee they'll get their own topic once they're all done. They're all wearing jackets. I think you'll have to wait and see as to why they are, though. I could probably do that, although there's a chance that the style would be slightly altered.I work in different ways when I do different things, I guess. I'll definitely take that in consideration though.Thanks again, everyone.

This is brilliant. I love Hussie's way of telling stories and it'll be great to see what you guys make of it.

Name: CantaiSpecies: ToaElement: IceGender: MalePowers: Sonar(Arthron), standard Ice powers, twin-bladed staffAlignment: Lawful GoodAppearance: Concept sketchCantai wears white, smooth segmented armour. His kanohi is an Arthron.Personality: Cantai is generally polite, but although he doesn't always show it, he is also quite cynical.Weaknesses: Some amounts of skepticism can lead to Cantai making himself a hard person to cooperate with under certain circumstances.This mainly occurs when he is to be part of an action or a plan, but rarely when he provides supplies(See history section).He usually does not trust commanders and tends to do things his way, should he be able to - given that it doesn't create more risks. He can be easily defeated in close combat and relies on his asset of self-designed weaponry to keep foes on a distance.History: Cantai is an engineer and is usually occupied with building everything from construction machinery and tools toweaponry that channels and amplifies elemental powers. His inventions are mostly implemented by Toa factions, but he willoffer his services to anyone who has the money and what he considers a righteous cause.Cantai also has basic medical knowledge. He has a satchel with such supplies that he will bring whenever he's going somewhere.

Thanks for all the nice comments guys. Well, not really. I guess it's kind of there to make him slightly more alien, but I really just put it there spontaneously, lol. Also I am in full support of an art game reboot.