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Makuta_of_Oz

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  1. Okay, why don't they report from somewhere else? They don't have to be at that exact location.

     

    I think the location is completely isolated from all new crews and stuff because of how dangerous it was. They don't even have their own local newspaper!

     

    No news crew visits that town because the gang wars had made it far too dangerous.
    Might I ask what town this is, or is that too personal?

     

    It's too personal for him to even tell me. All I know is that it's between Brisbane and the Gold Coast, in southeast Queensland.

  2. Apparently someone in another ward had a poster of a Machop on their wall (don't ask me why; Machop's not that popular a Pokemon).
    In the biz, they tend to call that a "plot hole". In your screenplay pitch, you might want to cover this a bit more. Maybe this random hospital patron can be a character too, and his long lost uncle can be Shigeru Miyamoto.

    If you insist on calling this fiction, then call that character an extra. Nothing was said about him, even when the poster was torn up, and we'll never see him again.

  3. So you fix the minor continuity error of the rap album but don't respond to the getting stabbed in the heart thing?As I'd be interested where exactly he got stabbed. As the heart is a funny thing; stab it in the right place and you can actually survive with minor damage.

    I don't know exactly where he was stabbed, as I wasn't there when it happened. All I was told was "somewhere in the heart".

  4. >attacked by random guy for no reason

     

    Actually, it wasn't random, and it wasn't for no reason, even though that can happen (unprovoked attacks come up on the news all the time).

     

    The attacker was the brother of the guy who killed my friend's parents. My friend has killed that guy, so his brother had come to avenge him.

     

    I can't help but feel there may be more out there. No doubt the entire family hates him now for killing two of their number.

     

    Wasn't this guy just about to release a rap album? :confused: Also, I can't help but find it ridiculous how he managed to survive after being stabbed in the heart. If it's true, then I hope he gets out of trouble soon; if not, well, whoever's inventing this story should try being a little more realistic.

     

    He was going to release a rap album, but changed his mind when he decided to become a policeman. I think he may regain his interest in becoming a rap star in the future. Anyway, if he is unfit to become a policeman (he does have a criminal record), he does have that rap career to fall back on.

  5. Nothing at all, It's just I've been seeing that same picture since forever. If you want my opinion (I don't know if you do, but what/ev) I think you might want to try something new.At least a different image of Machop.

    I haven't had this picture on BZPower for that long, have I? I don't change my avvie that often anyway.

     

    I think Machop is only my third avatar! Before Machop, all I had was Lhikan, and a white kitten before that iirc.

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