Ghidora131 Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 (edited) Hello, proper thinking world! Welcome to Ghiddy's terrible comic emporium of chaos, horrors and Cheetos. We hope you enjoy your stay, and lease feel free to divulge in a selection of the comics presented below. Pilot ComicHere PGS arrivals~T1S~ Pohatu: Master of Stone FordianL Arzaki Toa Kayn Season 1 Take a selfie...? It's dah bad guy Update 1.1 End of Ghidora?Part 1Part 2Part 3 Character IntroDouble TroubleSpooky Scary SkeletonsA Cake Calamity (Shadow's birthday)A Ghidistic BirthdayDark PresenceAnd then he came back...Tenneesee UPDATE: guest stars can come! please give a list of your character description in good detail, and they will be featured in a comic! (note: by filling out a character form, you are allowing me the right to do as I wish with your character.) Permanent guest stars are through invite only, so don't make a PGS application. There's much more to come in the future, so stay tuned, and watch out for Koalas. ~Ghiddy~ Edited August 22, 2016 by Ghidora131 11 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SaikoRhythm Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 I'd recommend using text bubbles and trying to remove that timestamp on your camera, but otherwise these look good! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakura Nuva Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 I... look... FABULOUS!! XD Good job, Ghidora; I assume this is your first comic? I have no complaints, other than what Saiko suggested. You really nailed my Kanohi Force leather jacket. Looking forward to more in the future! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 18, 2015 Author Share Posted April 18, 2015 I see you like them. I'll be making more tomorrow, so stay tuned! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dallior Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 MOTHER OF MATA NUI... Wow, great job, Ghiddy! Thanks for giving my MOC some good work... and a fez, no less!Also, I could only view the comic once. The folder isn't public. Quote "Remember when the comics forum had a lot of good stuff? Let's make that a thing again." -Kazi the Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 (edited) Is it bad that I spent more time looking at the dates at the bottom corner of the pictures than the comic itself? Edited April 18, 2015 by The Irrational Rock Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arzaki Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 That suit. That fez. That timestamp. I love it. 1 Quote I got Monster Hunter World on PS4, add me at bmrjw2 if you want Also I play FFXIV, my main is Anastasia Willow on Exodus but I've got characters on every NA datacenter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 *Rereads Comic*There aren't any Banshees... AGAIN? 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 Gr8 comic m8, I r8 8/8. Dallior's fez is fantabulous. 1 Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dallior Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 Gr8 comic m8, I r8 8/8. Dallior's fez is fantabulous.U bet, m8! Yeah, Ghiddy, post MOC pictures so I can see how the fez works and I can replicate me!Also, try giving the comics a better title like ~T1S~'s. It looks more... MLG. 1 Quote "Remember when the comics forum had a lot of good stuff? Let's make that a thing again." -Kazi the Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 Excellent work, my friend! Others have already pointed out the few things you could improve on, so if you want a bit of help on that, just skype me or something and I'll show you a little walkthrough. Didn't think you'd be starting this soon, though. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Soran Posted April 18, 2015 Share Posted April 18, 2015 Nice to see another photo comic here. I'll start by saying the comic is pretty entertaining. You've definitely nailed how to make the characters seem expressive, which is one of the hardest parts about photo comics in my opinion. Too many of them look just rigid, but the characters here look like they have some form of personality which is great. The MOCs themselves look pretty fantastic might I add. I think my favorite is probably Ghidora's, the suit is very well done. And frankly it makes the comic look more funnier/sillier. As far as what I'd say can improve the comics, let's see... I'd agree with some other people that the text could be made to be a little easier to see. I think diving into a program like gimp (which is free) might help. Just learning the simple effects like speech bubbles or glowy/outlined text will do wonders to the comic in my opinion. My reasoning for this is so you can easily include effects like in the 2nd to last panel without confusing some readers. In the previous panels you established that Ghidora's text is white, but in that specific panel it's yellow. Obviously since he's the only character present it's assumed that he said it but still in future situations if you wish to use that effect with more characters present, it might be useful to have something like speech bubbles to point to which character is saying it. I can help you with that if you need. This isn't so much an issue in this comic, but it could potentially be one in future comics. If the photo's background is similar or consistent it might be worth it to add a border around the photos so that it'll be easier to differentiate what is exactly happening in what panel. Also lastly is the photo quality. The photos themselves almost all look great, except for the 2nd to last one, the close up shot. Whether intentional or not, it looks odd. I guess it could just be the camera itself. Also as other people pointed out, that text in the bottom left that points out when the photo was taken would be best removed if possible. If it can't be removed then I know I can live with it. All around, it looks like an exciting start of a series and I'm interested in seeing more, ~Soran 3 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dallior Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 I see you like them. I'll be making more tomorrow, so stay tuned!It's tomorrow. Quote "Remember when the comics forum had a lot of good stuff? Let's make that a thing again." -Kazi the Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sybre Posted April 20, 2015 Share Posted April 20, 2015 First off, the fact that this was a photo comic was a pleasant surprise. As for the MOCs, they're pretty pleasing to look at. I especially admire the suit on Ghidora. It's a work of art. The story doesn't have much to comment on yet, but I'll have to check back for more. If there was anything I recommend you fix, it's the hard-to-see text and the time stamps, but you're probably fixing those. Otherwise, I enjoyed this comic. Keep up the good work! 1 Quote mindeth the cobwebs Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 21, 2015 Author Share Posted April 21, 2015 ~T1S~ Makes his appearance... And shows a good reason why the text was bad!~T1SK~ ~T1SK~ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jakura Nuva Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 (edited) Pffffft... Also, what's this about banshees I be reading? (Nice work ) Edited April 21, 2015 by Jakura Nuva Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 21, 2015 Share Posted April 21, 2015 AHAHAHAHA!! I love it! My green is a little hard to see, so I might suggest using some better lighting as much as you can. But that entry line totally sounds like me. Well done! Do I have to change everyone's text individually? Or did my little trick affect the whole series? Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 22, 2015 Author Share Posted April 22, 2015 ...Depends... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 22, 2015 Share Posted April 22, 2015 ...Depends... I can just picture a comic in which everyone forms a line and I just change their text for them, resulting in them doing or saying something ridiculous. Eventually, it drives me up the wall. Then again, you don't have many characters (yet ), so it probably wouldn't be too bad. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Pohatu: Uniter of Stone Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 Can I be a PGS? All you have to do is buy Pohatu. Quote I HATE SCORPIOS ~Pohatu Master of Stone, 2015 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 (edited) Can I be a PGS? All you have to do is buy Pohatu.He already has Pohatu. Didn't you see what mask he gave me? lol Besides, you're a founding KF Leedur--Of course he's including you! ...Right?... Ghiddy? EDIT: Wait a minute... I just noticed something in the Pilot comic... You have a datapad, too! Is that the BZPad 2? Doesn't appear to have the hologram screen like mine, though. I've got the 3. Edited April 23, 2015 by The~1st~Shadow Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ford Posted April 23, 2015 Share Posted April 23, 2015 (edited) May I be a PGS?My self-MOC is black, silver, and gray, with a touch of light trans blue. He is a Toa of Sonics and wears a Mask of Truth.He also has a pair of tuning forks that rest on his shoulders, kind of like spikes, I guess.If you need another quick reference, just let me know. Edited April 23, 2015 by FordianL Quote http://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gifhttp://i.imgur.com/O8CcqC5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 Sure, just Axxon will be showing up now and then, and... You won't be seen in the same room together. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 And we have another wonderful nightmare to deal with! Pohatu has arrived! ...But who is the other guy? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Arzaki Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) Do you happen to have a Kualsi laying around? Just wondering. Not like my self-MOC uses a Kualsi or anything. Yeah. Edited April 24, 2015 by Arzaki Quote I got Monster Hunter World on PS4, add me at bmrjw2 if you want Also I play FFXIV, my main is Anastasia Willow on Exodus but I've got characters on every NA datacenter. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 *quickly starts searching Ebay* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) Its... Its... VAALKU!!!White and Blue text=Electricity Rahkshi=VaalkuMissing Limbs=VaalkuLong Claws=Vaalku. Its Vaalku. Edited April 24, 2015 by Dragon11603 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 Dragon, leave, never come back.In other news, I actually liked this a little bit, although your self MOCs legs make me want to puke. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) Dragon, leave, never come back.NEVAH!!!Anyway, who's thinking that suddenly Vaalku will Start teaching everyone the Harp? Edited April 24, 2015 by Dragon11603 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 I hope to god not. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dallior Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 *cough cough* edit the first post *cough cough* Yea for Vaalku! Quote "Remember when the comics forum had a lot of good stuff? Let's make that a thing again." -Kazi the Matoran Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 Vaalku can burn in . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 You wish.PART 2 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) That ending is great. Now I am Compelled to become a PGS... Maybe in the near future... Edited April 24, 2015 by Dragon11603 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 Dude, that ending Please tell me you're keeping the Rahkshi character. Every good comic needs a goofball Rahkshi, I say. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted April 24, 2015 Author Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) Much to the displeasure of Dane, Vaalku will be head design manager and main musical nutjob. Also... I'm Jakman. Edited April 24, 2015 by Ghidora131 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 Much to the displeasure of Dane, Vaalku will be head design manager and main musical nutjob. Also... I'm Jakman. YAY!! He and Cyrahk must meet up sometime. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Dane-gerous Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 I take it back, I hate these comics now. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Irrie Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 I take it back, I hate these comics now.Ah yes. Good 'ol strongly opinionated Dane. Ghiddy, I'd like to point out that the timestamp has been stalking the characters ever since the comic started. Is he the main villain here? 2 Quote bZpOwEr Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
McNugget Posted April 24, 2015 Share Posted April 24, 2015 (edited) I take it back, I hate these comics now.Ah yes. Good 'ol strongly opinionated Dane. Ghiddy, I'd like to point out that the timestamp has been stalking the characters ever since the comic started. Is he the main villain here? ^Do it Ghiddy.^ EDIT: I Would like to be a PGS... Great Miru, Black torso, Green upper limbs, Gray lower limbs, Jetpack, Le-Matoran, Perhaps a Flick fire missile here and there, and a Flip Phone. Edited April 25, 2015 by Dragon11603 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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