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#4801 Online Toa Onaku

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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 04:16 AM

IC: Ardoku

Location: Po-Koro Hospital

His face took on an intense expression of grief as he sat down again and hid his face in his hands.


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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 08:39 AM

IC: Rannin

 

Rannin coughed, the first sound he had made since he had silently followed the rest of the group.

 

The sand was getting to him.


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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 04:29 PM

IC: Torvoth

 

"Hey. Hey you. Yeah, I'm talking to you. Wakey wakey!"

 

Growling angrily, Torvoth forced his eyes open against the bright morning light. The Vortixx mumbled something incomprehensible and fell back against his yellowed pillow. "Buddy, c'mon. Daylight's precious in Xa-Koro. People to do, things to see. I mean, people to see, things to do. Or is that what I meant?" Torvoth finally sat up and turned to his uninvited visitor who happened to be lounging at his door. Not at his door, actually. Inside his door, in his shack, to be precise. That was somewhat bizarre, but after living on Xa-Koro for some time, such things became less and less unexpected. The being was... much more unexpectedly, himself. 

 

"Hi, me! Good morning! Let's go for an adventure." With that, Torvoth found himself hauled out of bed by himself and propelled out the door. Marching along Xa-Koro's crooked streets, he and himself made for an unassuming sight, given the rest of the mostly criminal denizens of the village. The unlikely duo stopped and Torvoth found himself standing outside of a well-known Xa-Koro bar. 

 

"In the morning?" He asked himself.

 

"Oh. I seem to have messed up the time of day. It's alright, gimme a moment." The other Torvoth snapped his fingers and Xa-Koro became enveloped in the loving dark folds of dusk. That seemed fairly bizarre, but also seemed strangely more familiar. "Much better. C'mon, slayer." They entered.

 

A large Skakdi bouncer glared angrily at them, but let them through and they ended up ordering drinks. "Check out that gal over there," muttered the other Torvoth to Torvoth, indicating a direction with a subtle jut of his chin. Torvoth followed the pointed chin with his eyes until they reached a lovely looking female Vortixx. His eyes opened slightly with realization and they flashed with anger. 

 

"You wouldn't..."

 

"Oh, I won't. But you will. You know you shouldn't, but you also know you will."

 

Torvoth found himself slowly striding towards the other Vortixx and sidling up beside her. He cleared his throat. 

 

"Excuse me miss, but I can't help but wonder... did it hurt?"

 

"What?"

 

"You know, falling from heaven?" 

 

Her response dissolved as she turned into yet another girl, a slender Ga-Toa with the most gorgeous eyes. "Do you have a map, because I keep getting lost in your eyes..."

She giggled nervously, but otherwise remained silent. Torvoth hated silence, so he was thankful when the Toa changed again. And again. And again. 

 

"Darling, I'm fairly certain I have the Key to your Nongu."

 

"I like you a lot, but I've been too shy to say anything."

 

"Hi there-"

 

"STOP IT STOP IT STOP IT!" he bellowed, flailing his arms. His current unsuccessful object of interest recoiled as if stung by a Nui-Rama. The other Torvoth smirked and chuckled and snapped his fingers a second time. The bar thankfully faded away and the two (or would it be just one?) Vortixx ended up in Torvoth's shack once again. A lanky Le-Matoran stuck his head through the door. 

 

"Torvoth? Yeah, I'm here for the Boss. This deal is over. No money for you. Takin' too long. Don't mess up again, or there won't be a second warning." The door slammed.

 

The black-armored inventor cursed and punched his fist into the wall. He had forgotten how bad it felt to lose a contract, let alone an especially lucrative one. He rushed out after the Matoran, but the messenger was nowhere to be found. Just a handful of low-lifes. And a couple of hand-holding criminal couples, enjoying Xa-Koro's not-so splendid views. He went back inside to find his other self squatting atop the workbench and chuckling quietly.

 

"Look at all these unfinished designs," not-him said, waving a slender hand at the detritus strewn across the workbench, "You can't get anything done. You can't get your contracts done on time, let alone get yourself a girl. We all saw how well that went. Mata Nui knows what's going on with your other friends. You're a mess." 

 

"Who are you?" asked Torvoth, with an inkling starting to form in his mind. Friends... he thought to himself. Friends. 

 

"Me? I'm you. But not the present you. Not all of you." 

 

"You're... you're my memories. My subconscious - some or all of it? Something like that. These are obviously my memories that I'm running through right now..." the Vortixx trailed off as his other self picked something up from the workbench and examined it, before tossing it across the room to him. He caught it with ease. Now that he held it in his hands, the inventor was very aware of what exactly he carried, and more importantly, what would happen next. 

 

It was The Judge. The beloved handgun was very different than in its present state: clean, not soot-stained, unmarked, not battered and used, pristine, not completely broken. Glancing at the tiny ammunition counter, he noticed that there was just a single round in the chamber. 

 

"You know what happens and happened next," came the voice from across the room, almost taunting. Indeed, Torvoth did know what happened next. Slowly, the short Vortixx raised the handgun to his temple. "You had a choice then. You have a choice now."

 

"You have a choice."

 

You have a choice.

 

You have a choice.

 

BANG. 

 

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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 04:43 PM

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"More than that. A couple years, I think. It's just strange how fast this island changes, shaped by the innovations of its many inhabitants, but I suspect the elemental groupings of each locale are part of the exact nature of change."

She shrugged.

"Just what I was taught. What I continue to study."

 

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"The elemental whats of what what?"

 

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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 05:56 PM

IC: Nameless Po-Koro Medcenter Doctor (stand-in for Torvoth)

 

"So," he said, glancing at the Toa burying his face in his hands. "If you want to make any last good-byes, now would be a fairly good time." With that, he strode out of the waiting room and opened the door, holding it open with an inviting glance at Ardoku. 


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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 06:25 PM

IC: Ardoku

Location: Hospital

Ardoku sighed heavily. "Yeah." he muttered as he stood up and walked heavy steps to where Torvoth was.


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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 06:35 PM

IC: Oceanna

 

Oceanna's guitar dinged as she began to tune it. 

 

"She means the six koros Peho...six different regions."


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Posted Aug 28 2015 - 06:42 PM

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"Okaaaaaaaay, but how does that affect how things change?"

 

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Posted Aug 29 2015 - 02:08 PM

IC: Nameless Po-Koro Medcenter Doctor (stand-in for Torvoth)

 

"We've done all we could for him. It's up to him now, and bio-mechanically speaking, it's simply not feasible for him to survive. He probably won't be able to hear you or notice you..." he paused and coughed quietly as they arrived at the threshold of Torvoth's room. "I'll leave you two be," he said to the Plasma Toa, before walking away.

 

Torvoth lay stiffly, completely unmoving atop the surgical slab. For the first time in anyone's memory, Torvoth also happened to be not wearing his trademark battered Kadin-helmet. Glazed eyes stared into the ceiling from a stoic face. Some of his armor had been removed for surgical procedures, leaving bare hydraulics and muscle tissue visible in certain places. The only thing doing any real activity at all was the Vortixx's heartlight, slowly and dimly pulsing on his chest. Slower and dimmer with every pulse. 

 

Slower and dimmer until it stopped. 


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Posted Aug 29 2015 - 03:39 PM

IC: Ardoku

Location: Torvoth's deathbed

He had been too late. He hadn't managed to bring Torvoth under medical care in time. And now, he watched as the final ounces of life faded from him, until the heartlight seemed to simply give up.

 

There he stood, right by Torvoth's side, watching as a person he had only for a short time thought of as a friend die. After Ardoku's caretaker had passed away, leaving him only his mask and his sword, Torvoth had been the only person to show even the remotest interest in him. And now he was gone as well.

 

As the young toa of plasma sat down on a chair in the room, teardrops escaped from his eyes and down the cheeks of his mask. But he did not weep for Torvoth. On the inside, he felt only emptiness.


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Posted Aug 29 2015 - 03:51 PM

IC: Torvoth

 

The black-armored hand was fairly unremarkable for a hand. Like any other hand, it was composed of metal and muscle. In this case, only metal was visible. This particular metal was, as mentioned earlier, black, but also chipped, scratched, and slightly scorched in a couple of places. What was remarkable about this slender hand is not its form, but what it did. 

 

Slowly but surely, servomotors and muscle, bonded together by the impossible forces that forged them, moved. The hand silently clenched into a fist. 

 

Ardoku wept quietly, but eventually seemed prepared to leave. As he stood up, still shaken, a gauntleted hand grasped his wrist with surprising strength.

 

"I've made my choice."


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Posted Aug 30 2015 - 11:37 AM

IC: Ardoku

Location: Torvoth's deathbed

Ardoku was utterly shocked when Torvoth's hand grabbed his arm. A measly "Wh-wha-what...?" was all he could muster in response.


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Posted Aug 31 2015 - 03:50 PM

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"Well, you have to think about why the villages were separated as they were when Mata Nui was first settled - why mainly Ga-Matoran grouped together to form the village of water, Ta-Matoran; the village of fire... and so on. Each Koro is so different from the next. There are immense carvings here, in Po-Koro. The fiery-spirited citizens of Ta-Koro live above a lake of fire... The elements are everything to our civilization. They shape us."

She took a moment to breathe.

"There's just so much more to it. If we could only decipher the Spectrum, then we'd have one of the greatest insights into the true nature of the elements..."


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Posted Aug 31 2015 - 08:30 PM

IC: Torvoth

 

"I've made my choice," I repeated, slowly turning my head to look at Ardoku. I was going to try to explain myself, but then I abruptly noticed that surprise and grief were written all over the Toa of Plasma's face. 

 

"Wait. You-" Despite my best efforts, somehow I couldn't choke out the words.

 

"You cared."


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Posted Aug 31 2015 - 10:18 PM

IC: Erike & Samera

 

 

 City of Stone! The Stone! The Stone! Little...Stone...Matoran. Why have we come?

 

 "To seek work, our fortunes, and anything else that will shut you up." Erike muttered, pulling the hood tight over his face. The Po-Wahi heat was near unbearable, and wearing this hood didn't help things at all. At least it did keep the sun off.

 

 Energy. I provide. Help. Help. Heat kills. Energy lives. Samera boasted in his mind. She had been doing this for a good day or so as Erike heading to Po-Koro. Taunted him with the energy she could give him to get there faster. Energy and power.

 

 Erike shook his head and ignored the creature. He name it "Samera" after an ex-girlfriend years ago for being the same; clingy, demanding, and a bit annoying. Unfortunately, with this Samera, he couldn't just up and leave it. He was stuck with her for the rest of his days.

 

 That thought he could ignore; he couldn't ignore Samera.

 

 City! Distance! Closer! she cried in his head. Erike looked up from the desert floor. Samera was right: There, maybe less than a day's walk, was Po-Koro. City of Stone. He smiled a little, and walked faster.


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Posted Sep 01 2015 - 04:42 AM

IC: Ardoku

Location: Torvoth's (ex)deathbed

"I... w-well..." Ardoku gazed in disbelief upon the vortixx that lied alive before him. "What... what choice? What are you...  what are you talking about?" He managed to stammer out, still somewhat in awe of what he was witnessing. 


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