Mel Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 The Wraith has been reviewed. Sorry for the lateness. There's a dozen selves inside you, trying to be the one to run the dials [BZPRPG Profiles] Hatchi - Talli - Ranok - Lucira - Ferellis - Morie - Fanai - Akiyo - Yukie - Shuuan - Ilykaed - Pradhai - Ipsudir And some aren't even on your side. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 The Wraith has been reviewed. Sorry for the lateness.I mind not. profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Here it is:[url=http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=3761]SSC #9 Entry: I Will Return[/url] - Lord of the RingsHope I did the format the right way...Thanks very much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grantaire Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 (edited) This is it.Also, the Critics club isn't accepting reviews as of now, you'll have to wait until the next round. Edited March 24, 2012 by Zarayna: The Quiet Light Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 (edited) Here it is:SSC #9 Entry: I Will Return - Lord of the RingsHope I did the format the right way...Thanks very much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the EarthI...think I fixed it. Not quite sure. That was a really odd thing with all the colors and what-not.EDIT: Hey, I did. And Zarayna didn't. I feel so proud of myself. Edited March 24, 2012 by Kal Grochi profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Here it is:SSC #9 Entry: I Will Return - Lord of the RingsHope I did the format the right way...Thanks very much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the EarthI...think I fixed it. Not quite sure. That was a really odd thing with all the colors and what-not.EDIT: Hey, I did. And Zarayna didn't. I feel so proud of myself. Thanks to both, I'm not so practical with those formats!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Here it is:SSC #9 Entry: I Will Return - Lord of the RingsHope I did the format the right way...Thanks very much!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the EarthI...think I fixed it. Not quite sure. That was a really odd thing with all the colors and what-not.EDIT: Hey, I did. And Zarayna didn't. I feel so proud of myself. Thanks to both, I'm not so practical with those formats!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the EarthThe new forum style trips me up sometimes too. For a while I had to switch back to all BBCode to do links, but I figured out how to do that with the regular forum.I don't know how I'll teach you, though. I don't really even know my own process. .-. profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted March 24, 2012 Share Posted March 24, 2012 Well, thanks for the efforts. I'll have to get someone teachin' me!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jedi Master J. Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 As requested, I have reviewed Glatorian Chronicles #11: Obsidian Among the Frost. Apologizes for the slight lateness. **** Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 27, 2012 Author Share Posted March 27, 2012 (edited) And I have reviewed Oasis. With that we are accepting requests again. I'll take the two that were already posted here, since I never updated the main post saying we weren't taking requests, so that means three more requests until we stop allowing them again. Also, there will probably be some slight changes in the way things work in the near future, but I'll announce that later on if things actually happen.(Also, I realize I have not replied to two critics [one a potential critic] who have PMed me...apologies for that, I will try to respond tomorrow) Edited March 27, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WriterofReapers Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 Reinforcements by Despair.First fan fiction I've written, so any criticism is appreciated. ◇ Lacertus ◇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted March 27, 2012 Share Posted March 27, 2012 http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4050 (Blood On The Sand) -Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted March 29, 2012 Share Posted March 29, 2012 (edited) Kingdoms by ClickThanks in advance, I've been wanting some very professional, very thorough critique for a while now! Edited March 29, 2012 by Click ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted March 30, 2012 Author Share Posted March 30, 2012 I Will Return by Lord of the Rings -- Assigned to JinklemeisterReinforcements by Despair -- Assigned to Tyler DurdenBlood on the Sand by Lord Darkon -- Assigned to ZaxvoKingdoms by Click -- Assigned to TheMightyFighty (now some other name which I shall look up later =P)I swear there were five stories, so if I missed one let me know -- otherwise, we will accept one more request, and I will review it. Also, I would like to announce the newest critic: Jinklemeister. I'm sure he'll do great. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted April 1, 2012 Share Posted April 1, 2012 (edited) Well, if you don't have a fifth, I'm jumping in.Shadows by Kal Grochi.I warn you, it will be a weird read until the end, possibly. Edited April 1, 2012 by Kal Grochi profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 2, 2012 Share Posted April 2, 2012 And I've reviewed Blood on the Sand by Lord Darkon . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 I might need an extra day or two to finish my review: I have a killer biology packet (around 285 multiple choice questions alone) I've been working on since Monday, so I'm focusing on finishing that up.Thanks in advance and sorry to Despair for the inconvenience.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
WriterofReapers Posted April 4, 2012 Share Posted April 4, 2012 It isn't a problem. I'd wait for a month if it meant getting some good criticism on something I wrote.Just know that I have pretty high expectations for you. ◇ Lacertus ◇ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 So, it's been over a week now. Are we going to be taking new requests soon?-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 10, 2012 Share Posted April 10, 2012 I'll have my review up today, then I'll be ready. Been a bit delayed with Easter break schoolwork and staying with family.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 11, 2012 Author Share Posted April 11, 2012 Yeah, sorry everyone...I haven't been on the computer much because of the Easter Triduum, Easter itself, and now I'm on vacation. I'll try to get my reviews up soon (I'm also taking Tolkien's from last time, as he's taking a short hiatus). I'll let in more requests once at least a couple more of these are reviewed. Sorry again, and thank you everyone for your patience. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaxvo Posted April 13, 2012 Share Posted April 13, 2012 In the meantime, if any writers want their stories reviewed, or [Velox], if there are any that need reviewing, drop me a PM. I can do them. . {Z} Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 (edited) By the way, TheMightyFighty now goes by Shawn Spencer. PSYCH!! (no, seriously though, double PSYCHED you out in the end!!) Edited April 14, 2012 by Click ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted April 14, 2012 Share Posted April 14, 2012 Uhm, Jinklemeister seems to have taken a vacation... Well, I'll wait some more. It's the entire life I've been waiting for something!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 15, 2012 Author Share Posted April 15, 2012 Alrighty, I've finished my two reviews, and Jinklemeister and Shawn Spencer have been PMed; I will take their stories if they do not reply soon.So with that: We are now accepting five (5) more requests!Sorry again for the delay, everyone. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Grant-Sud Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 Warm, by Grant SudAnother CoT story. :B The Island with a Lot of CavesCurly Brace | Sue | King | Polar Star | Outer Wall Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
otter Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 Alrighty, I've finished my two reviews, and Jinklemeister and Shawn Spencer have been PMed; I will take their stories if they do not reply soon.So with that: We are now accepting five (5) more requests!Sorry again for the delay, everyone. Why thank you, kind sir.This is twice I've had the person in charge of the respective critic club critique my writing. How odd. profiles i guess i'm a south american giant otter now Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted April 15, 2012 Share Posted April 15, 2012 (edited) Rivalry (http://www.bzpower.com/board/index.php?showtopic=4288) - Lord Darkon Edited April 15, 2012 by Lord Darkon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 16, 2012 Share Posted April 16, 2012 And Reinforcements has been reviewed. Sorry to Despair for the delay and thanks to Velox for the extension.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 17, 2012 Author Share Posted April 17, 2012 (edited) ATTENTION CRITICS AND CUSTOMERSStarting today there's going to be a change in how things are done. From now on, there is no "five requests at a time rule." There is no "List" -- or at least not in the way it was used before. Instead, there is no request limit. From this point on, as soon as a request comes in, I will be assigning it to a critic by both posting here and PMing said critic. Critics will then have one week, as usual, to complete their assigned story. I will simply rotate through the list. However, if every critic currently active already has a story assigned to them, we will stop accepting requests until a critic has completed their review. As such, every time I post an assignment, I will include whether or not we are still accepting requests, so keep checking my recent posts.What does this mean for customers?Not much, except that we should be able to accept more things more quickly. All you have to do is, as I said, check a recent post of mine to see if we are currently accepting requests and then read the front page like always and use the proper format when requesting. For those two requests we have currently, I will be taking on and Cederak will be taking the other; from here on out new requests will follow the new system.All critics will be receiving a PM shortly, so if you do not receive a PM, please PM me. Also, I would like to announce that Cederak will be joining me as Co-Curator (who has excellently run the ECC, is a great critic, and has helped me with this new system). SSCC Curator Edited April 17, 2012 by Velox "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 17, 2012 Share Posted April 17, 2012 I think I love this system.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 17, 2012 Author Share Posted April 17, 2012 Warm, by Grant SudAnother CoT story. :BAssigned to myself. Rivalry (http://www.bzpower.c...?showtopic=4288) - Lord DarkonAssigned to Cederak. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Click Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 What about Kingdoms (Mine)? ~ Corpus Rahkshi: Fang | Hoto | Tube | Tear | Canvas | Garrotte | Reda BZPRPG: Azusai | Mitsuri The Scarabax Library | Flickr | Deviantart Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 18, 2012 Author Share Posted April 18, 2012 That and "I Will Return" have been assigned to critics who unfortunately became inactive without any warning. I'm giving them a couple days to respond and if they don't, then either myself or someone else will review them. =] Sorry for the delay, and I appreciate your patience. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Athmos Posted April 18, 2012 Share Posted April 18, 2012 My first Bionicle SS.My Old Friend - thebeggerpie WIP Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mare Tranquillitatis Posted April 19, 2012 Share Posted April 19, 2012 That and "I Will Return" have been assigned to critics who unfortunately became inactive without any warning. I'm giving them a couple days to respond and if they don't, then either myself or someone else will review them. =] Sorry for the delay, and I appreciate your patience. I was born patient, so thanks for the efforts anyways!----- Lord of the Rings -----Titles: Dark Lord, Lord of Mordor, Lord of Gifts, Lord of Barad-Dûr, Lord of the Earth Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cederak Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Rivalry, by Lord Darkon has been reviewed.-Ced Cederak's Library l Blog: Fair Enough Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Velox Posted April 20, 2012 Author Share Posted April 20, 2012 My first Bionicle SS.My Old Friend - thebeggerpieAssigned to Tyler Durden. "As a writer you ask yourself to dream while awake." ~ Aimee Bender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shadow pridak money gang Posted April 20, 2012 Share Posted April 20, 2012 Welp. Guess I should get on that then.-Teezy SAY IT ONE MORE TIME TELL ME WHAT IS ON YOUR MIND Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ALVIS Posted April 23, 2012 Share Posted April 23, 2012 (edited) My first Hero Factory SS, though certainly not my first SS. I don't want to be picky, but a reviewer will get more out of this if they follow Hero Factory. Naturally. XDSundown - Lord Ghirahim (AKA Angel Bob) Edited April 23, 2012 by Lord Ghirahim "You are not entitled to your opinion. You are entitled to your informed opinion. No one is entitled to be ignorant." -- Harlan Ellison Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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