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Welcome to Atop the Fourth Wall, where bad comics burn!I'm sorry, just had to. :DAnyways, promising stuff. Gonna check later for progress.
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Ah, these comics are actually not bad! I don't know why, but that comic was actually pretty entertaining.Let's see the characters. We have:-One sensible person-One nervous/shy one-Three noobs-One love interest-Two advertisers-One insane/intelligent mind-And one sociopath.Before you get upset, that wasn't an insult. That was just an observation, and I'm eager to find out what the characters will develop to be. :biggrin:BTW, if I PGS, do I have to submit a Chimoru spritesheet?
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Ooh.... that's adorable.And a bit heartbreaking.Poor MG.
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The extra- it's based on a Doug Walker sketch? Um... who? I'm sorry, never heard of him.I just got this inspiration from a friend of mine (whose name actually is Dominic) who has this ridiculously long answering machine that lasts about ten minutes. Never could get a hold of him.
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Okay guys, double feature!First of all, I'm so sorry, but Part 5 is still not done yet! I'm so sorry! My computer hasn't been cooperating with me lately, and I've been busy helping my family do holiday duties.hehe, duty.So for now, I have an Extra! This should hold you over.If that doesn't, then here's a sneak preview of Part 5!I should probably have the end product finished before the end of the year, but if not, I should at least dish out a "Comics Without X", or something.
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Hey, my characters don't have lips, but just give them Xaniskit mouths and boom! Instant oral features!Anyways, not much to say, but nice and amusing comic.
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Part 5!It's almost done. Sorry.So I'll just put the Advent Calender comic here.Day 14!
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@Eljay My god, that song was an earworm. It was funny, your rendition, though!@WVUFan Okay, just wow. WVU, bravo, this is just awesome. I love the Grinch-style story, and the dark humor was just hilarious. It paced well, and the ending made my cry laughing. Or just crying, I'm not sure. I think it's much better than my comic.
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The visuals are freaking awesome!But, maybe the frames are a tad bit too big.
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Thanks for the praise, guys!Oh, and to Diane Pie, yeah, this comic was actually fun and creative, but it wasn't too original. About 30% was original, but 40% was the Spongebob episode "Snowball Effect", and 30% is based on Calvin and Hobbes, which often has Sunday comics that have no speech at all, all just driven by visual stories.
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So that's what the floor looks like bird's-eye view.
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Okay, here's the skinny.I'm in a brief hiatus in Part 5 because I'm currently working in a comic for the 2011 Advent Calender, and I'm for day 18. I'm still working on the comic, so don't expect Part 5 in the next week.Do expect it, though, sometime by the end of the year!Wow, that sounds very pessimistic.
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Eddie's Legacy..........comics ^-^
-Absorba- replied to Silver the Hedgehog's topic in Off Topic Culture
Well, the contrast between the background and text, most of the time is unsettling (best example is Sonic's line in frames 2-3). I've noticed that you tried to fix this in frame 7, by making the text black, but that doesn't work, as it isn't actually on the text where it should be, and it just going from green to jet black is distracting. Oh, also there's another risque line we have in the end. Again, "lap dance" is usually frowned upon here.Other than that, the comic isn't horrible, but not to offend, but it's kind of weak. Sonic's hat is kind of resized incorrectly, and it vanishes after the third frame! Also, it's obvious that Silver wasn't from a regular effected image; the white space around him, which is very obvious, is really distracting. -
Eddie's Legacy..........comics ^-^
-Absorba- replied to Silver the Hedgehog's topic in Off Topic Culture
1. Must be Bionicle-related, whether it be Bionicle Sprites or the same universe. Your comics do not have either.2. If it was Bionicle-related, I can barely see what the characters are saying3. I read the last quote, and "screw you" is kind of frowned upon here.4. However, way to make a title that attracts attention! -
I have a new associate. Help support Sybre's new comic series, who I'm co-authoring!Rise of The Fallen ArmyNow officially in my associations section.
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Not a whole lot to comment on. But looks promising.Edit: I know it may be difficult to comment on the comic given, but please try to find something to offer.Your post as it stands now counts as a generic comment. If you could, please edit it - you may remove this message when you do.-Wind-
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Hoo boy.Let's see, if you're trying to do a spiritual sequel to Bionicle Star Wars from the archives, then good for you for trying.But for right now, I'm a little worried. Graphics aren't that good, but again, not that bad. Not else much to say....
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Now that's the post-streak I like to see. :DAnyways, here's a boring joke to hold you over.At The Movies
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Sorry master. Would'st though wish for me to flog mine self in penance for this mighty treason?-_-No.Anyways, here you go, Part 4 is finished!Part 4
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Guys, stop spamming. I don't want to get a post-count that mainly consists of a minor fanwar....Nor do I wish to actually see one.
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*ponders for a few seconds*Oh. Wow. That's an interesting image.
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Ditto. Also, I'd personally bring a fork.But..... even if it was a desert island or a "dessert" island, I'd bring aSHOVEL.
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Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Open....Close....Gahhhh!!!!!!!!!Anyways, simplistic again, but very effective.
