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I do very much care for this comic series. I was about to bump this so people would be reminded, but you beat me to it. :PAnyways, great nostalgic lookback! I hope to do my own soon.PS, Did iPenguin actually send that!?

Okay, with that question unanswered, guess what? More filler!AmusementIf you're wondering why I didn't include any PGSs in that last frame, I ran out of room, and also, subjecting you to that would possibly violate the trust factor with you guys.

Oes Noes!Wait, er.... it's not because you have bad storytelling, but is this supposed to be a good thing or a bad thing?I'm sure it's the latter... but......

I'm sorry for not asking earlier, but what is Max's skull supposed to be?

I know it's a little late, but...CAMEO! ヽ(^。^)ノ

Em.... You're sarcastic on the "I'm not sure if I can trust you" part, right? o.0

So... your comics lied to us...They lie...Can we believe anything you say at this point?But I can't believe your answer...My head hurts.I wouldn't say that, Leka's just based off my sister. Her age is regardless, because, you know. Leka is a green semi-biological/semi-mechanical being.

Oh, see, my sister is actually in graphic design in university, and like all college/university students, she stays at a dorm. Or apartment, I actually don't know, but not at my house. That would be sad.

Okay, bit of a progress report. I'm beginning production of my one-shot, which I will announce publicly shortly. However, I've been starting to think on changing mediums, from comic to animation, as I got Adobe Flash a week ago! It's actually not that hard to use, and maybe I'll make the thing an animation, but as of now. I haven't decided.As for TAS, I'm very sorry, but it will have to take a longer while, because this is a JUGGERNAUT of an event for me. With that said, however, I will still be doing extras and Comics Without X, but not official TAS mainstream comics.But in the meantime, here's something to amuse you and possibly cause controversy!

Huh. I just realized something. How the heck do they eat without mouths? Even if the said person wasn't Max, wouldn't it be standard to just jam things in their faces?Also, oes noes! A gun!

Here's something I've actually saved for a while:*AHEM* Congratulations, *insert winners names here*!I've read all the comics, and voting for which one I felt to be the best was by far one of the toughest choices in my BZpower history. You are all my fellow comic writers, and I REALLY wanted to vote for all of you. You all put in hard work, and honestly, everybody had something to like.I'm still a bit peeved that I wasn't able to enter, but what we got in place of my absense was several great mysteries.Congratulations to all the nominees, and all the winners. :DI hope to see you all again for the next contest!

Heh. Sorry.

Oes Noes! A spelling error!Ah well.Anyways, whatever project this guy is working on looks like it won't end well. 0_0

Aw, please don't have the adorable style taken!But... can we have previews of the new styles?

This comic series also has something to do with a location in the BIONICLE universe. Okay, okay, point taken. I withdraw my note of that, but that brings me back to point 2. Does this really lend itself to many interesting posibilities?Then again, this has only been one comic, so let's just see how it fares once it introduces something.

You, sir, are correct!

Oh, Lord almighty....This... okay, I have to do bullet points all over again. Sorry:1. The pictures are really displaced from where the actual panels are. If you have trouble putting the image in the frames properly, then you should use the magnification tool.2. I'm not sure if this idea of trains in Spherus Magna lends itself to a comic adaptation. Just.... this doesn't sound like it'll lend itself to any opportunities in which it would appeal as a webcomic.3. The missing splotches in where white should be can be very simple to solve. Use this:Your right-hand color is pure white by default, so if you use the bottom one, it'll make it transparent. Simply use the top one, or switch the right-hand color by right-clicking one.4. I've already said this in your last comic, but please do not do the Star Trek intro. If you won't look back, here's a copy-paste from the previous topic: "Please don't use intros like that. Seriously, Dark709, lavaside rahi, Gavla, do any near-professional-level comic topics have ANYTHING LIKE THAT? No. I know it seems nice at first, but it comes off more noobish, as it seems you're putting more dedication into a few lines of someone else's work on the topic than the actual comic itself."5. Spherustracks.... um.... sounds a lot like Spirit Tracks. As in The Legend of Zelda: Spirit Tracks?6. Is your character floating? Throughout each panel, it seems that he's floating off the grass. Just a question: WHY? If he's keeping the same position throughout the entire comic, wouldn't it make more sense to just copy and paste the first frame, or better yet, make him move? It really doesn't look appealing seeing something talking with no movement.7. The last five panels are completely unnecessary. Of course this is fictional; this is a webcomic based off a toyline featuring semi-sentient/robotic beings. Which brings me to....8. Again, what in the name of Hapori Dume does this have to do with Bionicle? It's much better than the last topic, but again, so far, all we have in relation to it is a Bohrok with a Hau Nuva, which again, isn't really sufficient. The fourth panel doesn't even make sense; what trains?I'm sorry if I'm coming off as a total troll here, but this is just really frustrating seeing such low-quality work in comparison to even lavaside rahi's comics. Please follow my advice this time.

No, it's fine!Look, let me just give you a bit of the summary of the rest of the comic: That yellow and green guy is a spirit, and this building is indeed haunted. He captured Jack(The brown guy)'s friends for a deal that would have Jack find a way for the spirit to leave the complex, for that he was cursed to roam the world as his former family left for the light in the sky. The mystery part ensues as Jack is trying to find out how to get the spirit out, but to also figure out why he's stuck in the tower.In the end, it is revealed that the spirit is something more, and it reveals itself as a poltergeist. He had planned an intricate gambit to make a story up so that Jack would end up having his life sucked out, so that the ghost could be mortal again. Jack realizes this, and somehow ends up sealing the ghost for good, and rescues his friends.In a bit of a cliffhanger, it would be shown that the sealing somehow broke the section of land that the building was on (in early panels, it was sort of shown to be a body secluded from land), trapping them on the island.RO, I appreciate your help, but... I have bigger ambitions to go for. Just you wait. I'll announce my next move later.

I'm..... I'm Sorry I really am.

DANGITDANGIT! I'M WORKING SO HARD ON MY COMIC!*sigh* Well, I still haven't finished the comic. :(Good luck, everyone. I wish there was another deadline.

I have to say, in all honesty, that would be what I'd actually do. XDAside from King Joe, I'm actually laughing by the fact that a horrible zombie plague is being taken so casually, like the daily grind. Sort of like TF2's Sniper's killing sprees.

Oh, if I had the patience to do this.

Woah.... that is the best character sheet I've ever seen! That last thing in the bottom-right corner pretty much sums it up.Hm. My head's color is a little screwed up, it's just supposed to be grey with a TINGE of cyan, but this works fine!If anything, it makes me stick out! Yay!

Sorry, that was just a sneak preview that I whipped up in about 5 minutes. I intend to release the entire thing once it's done, which it barely is. (I HATE TIME CONSTRAINTS! THE DEADLINE DOESN'T HELP EITHER.)All I'm going to say for people who can't read it, is that my CC entry will NOT have any relation to That Adventure Series, it will star four completely different characters in an alternate setting. I also intend it to be a sort of mystery (no duh.) while having a slight horror-esque feel to it. Don't worry, no scary imagery that bypasses BZpower's guidelines. :DJust be patient, guys, and be sure to vote for me once it's done!

Okay, I've felt that recently, this topic is getting a little dusty, so.... here's an easter egg!0110100001110100011101000111000000111010001011110010111101110111011101110111011100101110011011010110000101101010011010000110111101110011011101000010111001100011011011110110110100101111011001110110000101101100011011000110010101110010011110010010111101101010011000010110001101101011011100110111010001101111011011100110010100111000001110000011010100101111010000010110111001101001011011010110000101101100011100110010111101100011011000110111000001110010011001010111011001101001011001010111011100101110011100000110111001100111