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#1 Offline The Forgotten Chronicler

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 04:48 AM

Hello! The Final Binary here bringing you, comics! Yay! So, I don't have much to say other that. Feedback and opinions are welcome. Let's get on with it, shall we?

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Comics:

 

Season 1: The Adventures of Geha and Friends

Chapter 1: Beginnings

Chapter 2: Every Hero Needs Backup

Chapter 3: Happy B-day, you...

Chapter 4: Evil Awakens

Chapter 5:

Part 1: The Final Stand

Part 2: The Finale

Chapter 6: An Ending

 

The New Comics

Intro: YOU'RE BREAKING THE LAW

(Translation)


Specials:

A New Look (A Parody of Evil Awakens)

 


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Joining:

 

To join, all you have to do is PM me and I'll get it sorted out. :)

 


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T1Shadow: The Artisan

Petewa

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T1Shadow: The Artisan for making all this possible, without him this would have never existed


click.giffor the remake of Geha, Kasha, Turagava and the episode. Thanks Click!


Kohnoh Toa of Trees for the creation of Geha


And Everyone Else for their feedback, decision to view these, and for sticking with me as I keep improving and creating


© Chronicler Studios 2015-2016


Edited by The Final Binary, Oct 24 2016 - 12:04 AM.

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#2 Offline evil_jaga_genius

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 07:32 AM

Erm... the link to the comic doesn't work...


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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 08:40 AM

It's just brick shelf being unreliable, don't worry. I recommend switching to Flickr or Imgur.
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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 09:12 AM

I respect a late Brickshelf user, a fine act of bravery. But seriously, Brickshelf is very unreliable at times. You shouldn't start a brand-new series on Brickshelf.

 

On the comic, I like the MOCs, (although they're very colorful) and I like the plot. To be honest, each panel could use some sort of border. It is a bit hard to see where an old panel starts and where a new one begins.

 

And hey, I didn't do much, but thanks for the credit, friend.

 

EDIT: One last thing! Your signature should not use the work of someone else. Try making your own signature. Make it unique and memorable. Something related to your comics.

Like my red couch. The red couch was the first thing I sprited in my comics, therefore I made it the symbol of my comics in general. Something totally unique to me. Try to do that with your comics.


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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 10:27 AM

Woohoo, new comics! It's always great to see another face in the photo comics scene, especially someone who's really energetic about it!

 

Good job on this comic! In future I'd recommend a.) a banner, b.) borders, and c.) a vertical flowing comic. :P

 

Actually, horizontal flowing is really cool. KEEP IT :P


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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 12:39 PM

Just noticed this is not in the comics forum, it's in General Art.

 

Mods, could you kindly move this? :D Once Brickshelf lets me see the comic, i'll make a more relevant post.


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#7 Offline The Forgotten Chronicler

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 01:33 PM

I am very sorry for all the problems everyone has, I will try to move this to the comic section. Borders will be placed, and I'll try to fix the link. T1S is in the progress of making me my own banner for this, until then I will do my best for an advertisement banner. Thank you


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Jul 31 2015 - 01:52 PM.

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#8 Offline The 1st Shadow

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 01:51 PM

Hey, glad I could be of help. ;) Always nice to see a new face and new talent at work in the Comic Making business. Looking forward to more!

 

(But, yes this is in the wrong forum. It's supposed to be in Comics, as I linked you to last night. ;) )


Edited by T1Shadow: The Artisan, Jul 31 2015 - 02:10 PM.

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 02:17 PM

I am very sorry for all the problems everyone has, I will try to move this to the comic section.

 
No worries, I'll send this over to the correct forum.


Edited by -Windrider-, Jul 31 2015 - 02:20 PM.

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#10 Offline The Forgotten Chronicler

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Posted Jul 31 2015 - 03:26 PM

Thanks! All of you guys are great help!


I respect a late Brickshelf user, a fine act of bravery. But seriously, Brickshelf is very unreliable at times. You shouldn't start a brand-new series on Brickshelf.

 

On the comic, I like the MOCs, (although they're very colorful) and I like the plot. To be honest, each panel could use some sort of border. It is a bit hard to see where an old panel starts and where a new one begins.

 

And hey, I didn't do much, but thanks for the credit, friend.

 

EDIT: One last thing! Your signature should not use the work of someone else. Try making your own signature. Make it unique and memorable. Something related to your comics.

Like my red couch. The red couch was the first thing I sprited in my comics, therefore I made it the symbol of my comics in general. Something totally unique to me. Try to do that with your comics.

Thanks for the feedback! I'll get that fixed right away.

You actually helped create Geha, you made the sprite, I made the personality and name. From there, Geha was born   


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Jul 31 2015 - 02:35 PM.

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#11 Offline The Forgotten Chronicler

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Posted Aug 01 2015 - 05:26 PM

Part 2 is out!


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Posted Aug 01 2015 - 09:38 PM

EVERY HERO NEEDS BACKUP.

 

Good second comic! So far, so good!


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Posted Aug 01 2015 - 11:02 PM

Thanks! I'm in the progress of making backstories for my PGS, and how they got on the island. (Every hero needs backup, get my reference?)


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Aug 02 2015 - 02:29 PM.

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Posted Aug 02 2015 - 12:46 AM

A Guest Star comic has been released, Shadow's Loss


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Aug 02 2015 - 02:29 PM.

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Posted Aug 02 2015 - 11:18 AM

Shadow u has a girlfriend


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Posted Aug 02 2015 - 02:28 PM

He's in a relationship, though the way I displayed it was not right. I've took down the comic for copyright-ish reasons. Now I will only make a guest star comic if a PGS wants me to. Until then, no guest star comics


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Aug 15 2015 - 05:20 AM.

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Posted Aug 02 2015 - 07:43 PM

I liked it! You fixed everything! But a love interest can be awkward at times. They usually end up being a 2d character. I hope her character becomes a bit more than "I love so and so. We will always love eachother. Love love love. Gehu Gehu Gehu."

 

Anyway. Character development. It is a good thing! :D


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Posted Aug 02 2015 - 08:24 PM

HEY! The links are finally working for me! Sweet!

Good star so far, can't wait for more!

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Posted Aug 03 2015 - 01:43 PM

I liked it! You fixed everything! But a love interest can be awkward at times. They usually end up being a 2d character. I hope her character becomes a bit more than "I love so and so. We will always love eachother. Love love love. Gehu Gehu Gehu."

 

Anyway. Character development. It is a good thing! :D

Yes, Kasha is going to change, the way she acts is part of her youth, but she will mature over time. Geha, on the other hand, is a little bit older than her and cares about his duties. Unless he has some free time. I'm trying to keep it calm between them. Besides, it's just her. Geha doesn't even know Kasha loves him. He does know that she cares deeply for him though. How that started is just because they were on the unknown island together for a long time. Patience = Product.   

 

I will also need ideas for more villains and company for Geha and Shadow. 


Edited by The Forgotten Chronicler, Aug 09 2015 - 10:27 AM.

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Posted Aug 03 2015 - 04:45 PM

I'll shoot you my cast list sometime before the general public gets to see it. BEWARE: SPOILERS. Hopefully that'll give ya some ideas.


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Posted Aug 03 2015 - 06:28 PM

Alright, thanks!


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Posted Aug 10 2015 - 12:06 AM

New update: I won't be making another comic for a while, due to:

 

Trying to improve the characters

 

Traveling

 

School

 

Lack of time

 

I hope you guys understand.  :)


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Posted Aug 10 2015 - 07:05 PM

No worries, everyone runs into those problems sooner or later.
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Posted Aug 10 2015 - 09:20 PM

I will be making a comic with you in it for the last comic for a while.

I might be able to finish Season 1 if I can think of ideas for the comics and cram them all in.


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Posted Aug 10 2015 - 11:48 PM

Don't orient your comic panels horizontally, they make reading a hassle.
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Posted Aug 11 2015 - 12:53 AM

Don't orient your comic panels horizontally, they make reading a hassle.

Noted


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Posted Sep 07 2015 - 09:00 AM

After about a month, I might finally get the third comic up. I'll also make the first special comic.
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Posted Sep 10 2015 - 09:14 PM

Chapter 3 is out. There is a part where the font is different, I had to use it to make a bit of space so the text wasn't covering Geha's eyes. Your welcome for the nostalgia at the end if you get what I did there. ;)  


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Posted Sep 10 2015 - 09:19 PM

Almost a month late :P

 

Ah well.

 

Still grate.


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Posted Sep 10 2015 - 09:22 PM

Nice one! :D Love the new layout. 


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Posted Sep 10 2015 - 10:10 PM

Petewa said,

Almost a month late  :P

 

Ah well.

 

Still grate.

 

I said,

Yeah, sorry about that. Had no Wii fee for 6 days and lost my laptop under the bed for all of August somehow


Anyone notice Haki peeking out when Shadow and Kasha are walking to the lab?


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Posted Oct 31 2015 - 11:29 AM

Just in case anyone's wondering, this is still going.


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Posted Nov 29 2015 - 12:34 PM

Almost everyone who replied to this is part of the Kanohi Force. :P


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Posted Nov 29 2015 - 02:38 PM

Almost everyone who replied to this is part of the Kanohi Force. :P

That's one thing I like, and Dane hates, about the KF.


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Posted Jun 06 2016 - 10:59 PM

If this is still a thing, I would like to GS/PGS for the next season.


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Posted Jul 30 2016 - 10:15 AM

You sir, have just saved these comics. I was literally about to close them because they weren't doing good enough. But you may register for next season
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Posted Aug 05 2016 - 10:14 PM

To be perfectly honest, I have just about no clue how any of the events connects to each other, why characters do or say the things they do, or basically even the overall plot itself. This comic thus far has left me with quite a few questions that I hope are answered if I plan on following this. 

 

First and foremost, what is the conflict? Sure, Geha has to find a way home, but why does he form a team? What is he planning to do besides get home? I think you should have introduced some apparent conflict earlier on. The plot jumps from place to place with no time to breathe. I know you've only released six comics in the main chronology, but that is way too late to present a difficult conflict and is way too early to have a climactic battle.

 

Who is the character next to Geha who is introduced in the fourth installment? We've never seen him before and he was never even named in the comic itself.

 

Why should we care about the Daughters of Katia-Nui? 

 

Why does Kami do what he does? Geha just showed up and doesn't even know about this dude, yet the guy hates him for some reason. He shouldn't know that Geha is a threat, and Geha shouldn't even be gearing up to fight anyone except Makuta because he's a direct threat. There's no reason for him or is expanding roster of friends too either. Is he just inherently evil? Why, though? Also, the fight with him at the end didn't really have enough buildup.

 

What is a Deathless? Why is Geha a Deathless? How is Geha a Deathless? What is the Infinity Blade, and why can it kill a Deathless?

 

I can respect that this is one of your first attempts at comic-making and storytelling, but I am very lost on just about everything. All in all, this feels like a big mess to me. A little explanation here and there would be very helpful. At least, to me it would be.


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Posted Sep 10 2016 - 08:36 PM

To New Age Retro Gunhaver:

 

1. Yes, I did realize how bad they are, and how much I regret making them. The reason the setup kept changing is because I live with my siblings and I used to have to share a room with them, and I couldn't find a good setup. And remember, I'm just 13 with ADD, of course these are going to be bad. I didn't even production of these for almost six months. I kept reading Erin Hunter's Warrior series (Great author by the way, check her out) and viewing Marvel comics to see how I could make this all flow together. In the end, I guess I didn't think too deep about it, just my usual.

 

2. He did have a name. I didn't put it in the comics though. I think his name was Takuanuva or something like that.

 

3. I really don't know. I'm just glad I made that Infinity Blade reference in E5P1 so four of them were dead. Now to finish off Kahi. They were supposed to have been hired by Kami to give him info about Geha and the group.

 

4. I was going to have a plot twist where you guys find out that Kami is that Matoran I never introduced. The reason he hates him should be pretty obvious (as in not very obvious). Notice how Geha never speaks of him, nor does anyone else. He never speaks either, except when Geha falls off my trunk. The reason behind this was supposed to be that Kami was jealous of Geha being the "cool kid". This whole comic thing worked out better in my head.

 

5. To be honest, I really don't know how Deathless can only die to the Infinity Blade either. I guess it's something like "Oh, this guy can only be killed with poison," or something like that.

 

This really works better in a YouTube video, I'll make one for the sixth comic instead.

 

I hope the video, this post, and these new comics will sort everything out.


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Posted Oct 05 2016 - 08:52 PM

Hey, thanks for this reply. Reading through it, it clears some things up, but it also kind of makes me feel a bit disappointed. The ideas that weren't included would've most likely cleared up most of my confusion. I do see that you put effort into it and I'd like to see your work improve as time goes on. Well, if you choose to keep making comics for the forum. 


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Posted Oct 23 2016 - 11:07 PM

You got it :)


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