Chro Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 I don't think he was fully in control beforehand Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 I'm alive simply by the merit of having not showed up yet, and I think I'm okay with that. but dang like the first chapter and already a bunch of people have died I'm scaredInterested to see how Voltex's conditioning is gonna affect him though, and whether or not he'll be fully in control now that the White Council has messed with him. To Be Fair, All Of The Deaths So Far Have Been Characters That I Took From Canon Who Barely Existed. Nobody From BZP Has Died Yet. I don't think he was fully in control beforehand Yeah, This Isn't The First Time Someone Has Tried To Rip Voltex's Mind To PiecesWhen You Think About It, It Really Is Strange That Everyone Still Wants To Follow Him. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 Luroka: Breaker Of Minds. That Should Be A Member Title, But I Kinda Like The MOPE Title. Also, Congratulations On Two Pages. I Guess People Follow Him For His Mental Strength And Perseverance. He Has Gone Through Plenty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 White One is still scary. Verily so. Generally, I really like the White Council, because it totally works as an antagonist organisation. Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 21, 2014 Author Share Posted December 21, 2014 Luroka: Breaker Of Minds. That Should Be A Member Title, But I Kinda Like The MOPE Title. Also, Congratulations On Two Pages. I Guess People Follow Him For His Mental Strength And Perseverance. He Has Gone Through Plenty. Voltex is definitely one of the stronger characters mentally I guess. But you could say the same thing about Xaeraz too. It depends on how you look at it - do you admire someone who has been tortured to insanity for their strength in surviving, or do you acknowledge the fact that they probably are no longer capable of leading an army? White One is still scary. Verily so. Generally, I really like the White Council, because it totally works as an antagonist organisation. I think White One will become a lot scarier before everything is over. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted December 21, 2014 Share Posted December 21, 2014 [...]I think White One will become a lot scarier before everything is over. I'm really looking forward to that. Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Voltex is definitely one of the stronger characters mentally I guess. But you could say the same thing about Xaeraz too. It depends on how you look at it - do you admire someone who has been tortured to insanity for their strength in surviving, or do you acknowledge the fact that they probably are no longer capable of leading an army?I know that I wouldn't (or don't) follow you because I think you're insane (and deceitful) despite being mentally strong (or clever). Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 Voltex is definitely one of the stronger characters mentally I guess. But you could say the same thing about Xaeraz too. It depends on how you look at it - do you admire someone who has been tortured to insanity for their strength in surviving, or do you acknowledge the fact that they probably are no longer capable of leading an army?I know that I wouldn't (or don't) follow you because I think you're insane (and deceitful) despite being mentally strong (or clever). I find the assertion that either Voltex or I is worth following more amusing than anything else. That having been said, I'd say surviving torture's impressive, if not explicitly admirable, but that's a minor quibble. 1 Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 Celebrating my sixth anniversary on BZPower, I bring you: FROM THE FILES OF VOLTEX! This begins a small little "mini series" that I will be updating within the epic, giving us more-indepth looks into certain characters and what they've been doing. You'll be getting another of these on Friday. 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 64's proving to be one of the most interesting ones so far, given the dubiousness nature of her alliances. And by dubious, I mean I have no idea who she's working for. But, I knew having a secondary nervous system would be handy. I keep it in my hindbrain. Or, should I say, my SPINEDBRAIN i'm not sorry. 2 Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 22, 2014 Author Share Posted December 22, 2014 [...]I think White One will become a lot scarier before everything is over. I'm really looking forward to that. I am as well. Voltex is definitely one of the stronger characters mentally I guess. But you could say the same thing about Xaeraz too. It depends on how you look at it - do you admire someone who has been tortured to insanity for their strength in surviving, or do you acknowledge the fact that they probably are no longer capable of leading an army?I know that I wouldn't (or don't) follow you because I think you're insane (and deceitful) despite being mentally strong (or clever). Your character follows Voltex JSYKso HA Voltex is definitely one of the stronger characters mentally I guess. But you could say the same thing about Xaeraz too. It depends on how you look at it - do you admire someone who has been tortured to insanity for their strength in surviving, or do you acknowledge the fact that they probably are no longer capable of leading an army?I know that I wouldn't (or don't) follow you because I think you're insane (and deceitful) despite being mentally strong (or clever). I find the assertion that either Voltex or I is worth following more amusing than anything else. That having been said, I'd say surviving torture's impressive, if not explicitly admirable, but that's a minor quibble. Yeah, impressive is probably closer to what I was originally thinking. 64's proving to be one of the most interesting ones so far, given the dubiousness nature of her alliances. And by dubious, I mean I have no idea who she's working for. But, I knew having a secondary nervous system would be handy. I keep it in my hindbrain. Or, should I say, my SPINEDBRAIN i'm not sorry. Agent 64 still remains one of my favorite characters. She's one of the best fighters in the series, but she's also super mysterious. That said, she also gets some nice character development in Extermination as well. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted December 22, 2014 Share Posted December 22, 2014 (edited) Well, well. There truly is a war going on. The latest chapter/interlude definitely made that clear. Edited December 22, 2014 by Fairy Paladin Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 I find first person writing is wonderful to read and/or write, now and again. It gives better understanding of a characters thoughts and feelings. Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 23, 2014 Author Share Posted December 23, 2014 Well, well. There truly is a war going on. The latest chapter/interlude definitely made that clear. The "Files" series will probably give you all a better idea of what the war has been like than the main epic; while there are battles and skirmishes in the epic, Extermination is mainly dealing with the very end of the war. The "Files" series, meanwhile, details the thoughts of certain characters both before and during the war. I find first person writing is wonderful to read and/or write, now and again. It gives better understanding of a characters thoughts and feelings. That is one thing that is making the Files a fun side-project for me; it allows me to dig a little deeper into the characters. With Voltex it's probably not much that we haven't already seen, but with others I think you'll gain some valuable insight. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted December 23, 2014 Share Posted December 23, 2014 (edited) By confirming that Chro follows Voltex you've given me more insight into the story than you probably intended JSYK Actually, not much So HA I really hope that Files actually reveals someone's guilt at some point, it's always interesting to have a plot twist that the somewhat unreliable narrator doesn't tell you til later (along the lines of "this happened, and Chro died, and by the way I'm the one that killed him" albeit not so compact) Edited December 23, 2014 by Chro Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 23, 2014 Author Share Posted December 23, 2014 By confirming that Chro follows Voltex you've given me more insight into the story than you probably intended JSYKSo HA HardlyI have a few tricks up my sleeve yet Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 26, 2014 Author Share Posted December 26, 2014 I really hope that Files actually reveals someone's guilt at some point, it's always interesting to have a plot twist that the somewhat unreliable narrator doesn't tell you til later (along the lines of "this happened, and Chro died, and by the way I'm the one that killed him" albeit not so compact) There IS actually at least one that shall include a plot twist of a sort. So you're in luck.But for now... --- FROM THE FILES OF BURNMAD - We get Burnmad's perspective on the war as well as some news about what has happened since the rescue that took place during Chapter 1. I hope you all enjoy! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted December 26, 2014 Share Posted December 26, 2014 Dr. Negative, Dr. Positive. It's nice to have the differing perspectives. Voltex is not happy, while Burnmad is looking at things from a more optimistic angle, it seems. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted December 27, 2014 Share Posted December 27, 2014 I agree with fishers. You need a bit of optimism now and again. Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted December 27, 2014 Author Share Posted December 27, 2014 Dr. Negative, Dr. Positive. It's nice to have the differing perspectives. Voltex is not happy, while Burnmad is looking at things from a more optimistic angle, it seems. Yeah I feel like Voltex is always unhappy. I feel kind of like a masochist trying to make him suffer as much as possible but I just can't help myself I agree with fishers. You need a bit of optimism now and again. Optimism is good, yes! It makes the horrible bits even more horrible. 5 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 8, 2015 Author Share Posted January 8, 2015 Click the banner above for chapter 2! And... we meet our villain... in a rather... tragic manner. 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Blessed Blade Posted January 8, 2015 Share Posted January 8, 2015 That chapter... Wow... I'm actually kinda speechless, but just, wow. That weapon is deadly. =O Quote The Pokemon TopicPokemon: Rise of the Rockets - Rise of the Rockets Discussion Topic - Rise of the Rockets Side Stories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ride Another Day Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 I should be like Elijah Wood In that Spy Kids movie. Show up on my shining kikanalo with a flowing cape saying "I shall save you!" then instantly take a sniper shot to the head. 2 Quote Thanks Photobucket. Love you too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 I really enjoyed the new chapter! It had a lot of great action and the villain looks to be a challenging one. I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out. Also, R.I.P. Burnmad. Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 This new foe is highly interesting... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 That chapter... Wow... I'm actually kinda speechless, but just, wow. That weapon is deadly. =O Yes. You might remember that Xaeraz used a prototype of it upon Luroka back in Chapter 4 of Extraction... I should be like Elijah Wood In that Spy Kids movie. Show up on my shining kikanalo with a flowing cape saying "I shall save you!" then instantly take a sniper shot to the head. *Resists urge to make it real* I really enjoyed the new chapter! It had a lot of great action and the villain looks to be a challenging one. I can't wait to see how the next chapter plays out. Also, R.I.P. Burnmad. Burnmad is the first BZP character to die! And he was a narrator, to boot. Nobody is safe. This new foe is highly interesting... That is the intention, so that is good! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ride Another Day Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 I should be like Elijah Wood In that Spy Kids movie. Show up on my shining kikanalo with a flowing cape saying "I shall save you!" then instantly take a sniper shot to the head. *Resists urge to make it real*I'm pretty sure my friend the RNG will make it so. Quote Thanks Photobucket. Love you too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Portalfig Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Yep I like that chapter a whole lot. A whole, whole lot. And I am still kinda in shock that you killed Burn. Man. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 I should be like Elijah Wood In that Spy Kids movie. Show up on my shining kikanalo with a flowing cape saying "I shall save you!" then instantly take a sniper shot to the head. *Resists urge to make it real*I'm pretty sure my friend the RNG will make it so. *Spins RNG* Yep I like that chapter a whole lot. A whole, whole lot. And I am still kinda in shock that you killed Burn. Man. I did consider Ehks instead, until I realized that killing Ehks would be a massive pain in the butt to make sense of, since he died in Book 2So it was Burnmad that died just as I had originally planned 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 Oh, wow... just wow... RIP Burnmad The Shadow is very interesting, though he reminds me of something but I can't put a finger on it. Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Taka Nuvia Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 ... I'm lost for words, apart from "Ow. Oh dear." which reading this chapter made me exclaim aloud. And that weapon is super scary. D:R.I.P. Burn. Nobody is safe indeed. 2 Quote My art collection topic - updated! (21/09/2021) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted January 9, 2015 Share Posted January 9, 2015 "The Shadow" is a disappointingly generic name, but you probably have your reasons Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 9, 2015 Author Share Posted January 9, 2015 Oh, wow... just wow... RIP BurnmadThe Shadow is very interesting, though he reminds me of something but I can't put a finger on it. I've done my best to make the Shadow interesting... as for reminding you of someone, who knows? ... I'm lost for words, apart from "Ow. Oh dear." which reading this chapter made me exclaim aloud. And that weapon is super scary. D:R.I.P. Burn. Nobody is safe indeed. The Shadow is the greatest threat that the cast has faced, and is the one character that Voltex will never be able to defeat, no matter what. "The Shadow" is a disappointingly generic name, but you probably have your reasonsIt's almost like I'm concealing the Shadow's identity from you all! Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 I remember now. They remind me of Lord Vile... plus a rust cannon. Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 10, 2015 Author Share Posted January 10, 2015 I remember now. They remind me of Lord Vile... plus a rust cannon. I have no idea who Lord Vile is but that is ok Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 "The Shadow" is a disappointingly generic name, but you probably have your reasonsIt's almost like I'm concealing the Shadow's identity from you all! But you could still have gone with a more unique pseudonym Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 10, 2015 Share Posted January 10, 2015 ... Interesting... Off the top of my head, but this "Shadow" is the 1st shadow, right? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted January 10, 2015 Author Share Posted January 10, 2015 "The Shadow" is a disappointingly generic name, but you probably have your reasonsIt's almost like I'm concealing the Shadow's identity from you all! But you could still have gone with a more unique pseudonym Nah. The more generic it is, the harder it becomes for you to guess their identity. ... Interesting... Off the top of my head, but this "Shadow" is the 1st shadow, right? It is not, no. Fighty is the only member that did not sign up who has a prominent character within this epic. The Shadow is someone else. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted January 11, 2015 Share Posted January 11, 2015 Considering it's sponsoring EXTERMINATION~ http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/16811-textermination-lives-at-steak/ 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
user-402520536 Posted January 13, 2015 Share Posted January 13, 2015 (edited) Shadow's lines are obviously based off of Lockdown's from Age of Extinction, and the rust cannon reminds me of that of DOTM Sentinel Prime. Edited January 13, 2015 by Gukko Lord Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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