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Roodaka, even though Gali is so great. It's mainly because of my MOC of her (soon to be posted).
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Excellent to hear - I've already suspected that was his reason.
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The FEET! Oh, that design is just so ... amazing. Simple but with perfect flow. The overall look of this avian Bionicle is great, although are the chronicler's staffs silver or gold? They ought to be gold. And the beak ... maybe not silver? If only that part came in gold ... but there are plenty other parts to choose from for a beak. Splendid MOC!
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Well, the build is awfully reminiscent of Axonn's - the Piraka torso should not be gunmetal grey, but red, black, or silver. I'm not sure why a random orange piece is above the waist. The chest could use some filler. And dark blue on the feet? Along with sockets as a base? Well, I would suggest re-doing the bottom of the feet, replacing the lower arm and leg ligaments (Piraka and Vahki legs) with custom builds, and adding some bulk (probably with tubes) on the torso. Overall, this is a neat-looking MOC. It's just the details that need some fixing. Nice work.
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I could see these being one of the BrickMaster (am I correct about the name?) club monthly sets. Asher and Mila definitely need to have those black vahki waists exchanged for their proper colors, dark red and dark blue respectively. Asher aught to have all red, no black, sockets. Preferably have the arm/torso ones be regular red, like the foot bulbs, and the hands be dark red (follow Mila's pattern). For Kithi, there are lime green bulbs, thus the arm/torso sockets ought to be lime green and the hands ought to be dark green. Otherwise, nice little MOCs.
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Surprisingly, the color scheme here works. As you said, the Inika build is painfully overt. However, the weapon is awesome. Yet I really object to using rubber bands in construction - while it doesn't look terrible here (with the amount of them) I just have an aversion to the whole idea. Anywhoo, this is a very creative MOC.
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Very nicely done. However, the chain around the neck doesn't belong, And the bohrok legs seem out of place. And perhaps the forearms could use some more under-armor (at the moment they seem shelled and empty). But great original designs and use of the dragon head.
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Great custom designs. If the third one could have trans-yellow eyes, that would be best. And light blue and dark grey! YES! That is a great color combination. Nice work with all of them.
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Very nice custom. The torso is great, and the arms are pretty good too. The lower legs, however, just don't work with the feet. I would first try to bulk up the feet, and if that isn't possible then a redesign of the legs is needed. Maybe a bit more yello spread arounf would be nice too, especially on the feet. Otherwise, very nice work.
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Wow, this is sensational. Structurally, the only parts I can critique are the wings: they're too rigid. I do think the pistons are a great touch, but the beams make them look unbendable, not collapsible, as they ought to be. In regards to color scheme, nicely done. On this scale, blue and dark blue work well. I only think that using white and silver at the same time is detrimental. Since white is probably the way to go for the teeth and claws, I would suggest making the wings blue (I don't know about the pistons, though). Alternatively, and probably easier to do, is to switch out the white pieces for silver ones. At any rate, this is a splendid MOC that is nearly without fault. Well done.
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This, THIS is what a Toa of Plasma should look like. Very nice custom stuff, although some places could use some filler. Overall, great MOC.
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Elements Project: 1 Hydrogen
Fsnorglepuff replied to Radioactive Moo's topic in Bionicle-Based Creations
This is neat - however, I don't normally associate Hydrogen with green (Chlorine would be better suited). Regardless, this is a great little figure, and your plan sounds very neat. -
Neat - I suggest using one color for the socket pieces, all black or all grey (I suggest all black if you're going for Krakua-like). Also, the Inika armor on the arms ought to be gunmetal grey, not grey. Otherwise, this is very good for an Inika build - however, I always suggest making custom limbs, torsos, everything.
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Really great, although the Bohrok limb would be better as light grey, not dark grey. Otherwise, awesome work!
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Whoa, it took me a second to tell that this was Bionicle. Really great editing work, along with a very creative use for Visorak bodies. Nicely done!
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Wow, I'm blown away. All of these are really well done, and creative. Combustible is just sublime, in every way except poseabiliy. And F33-X2 is stunning. The Thaleen General is awesome - I really need to get myself some HF limbs. Anywhoo, great work.
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Really well done. The color scheme is great, and the build is solid - aside form the waist. It is fine being thin, but some armor would be nice. And I'm not a fan of open sockets (the feet as armor). All in all, this is an excellent MOC!
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Oh it is so nice to be back on BZP - after months, though, I am still working on my many MOCs (Toa Nuva, Roodaka, Trans-dimensional Vezon, Kapura) who all require either sculpting, painting, or both. Soon, maybe ...
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Awesome! I suppose the body could be made rounder by using some grey tire spoke/hub/wheels (that go inside the rubber tire), capping them off with the white dish. Or, one circular 2 x 2 plate capped with a 3 x 3 dish (the next larger dish from the white one used). Regardless, this little creation shows a lot of ingenuity - nice work.
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Quite good, particularly the chest build and the color layering (silver to grey to dark red to yellow). Now, the arm joints have much to be desired (articulation). However, it looks great.
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Superb! Everything looks great except for the legs, which become too thin at the shins. Add some more bulk there (perhaps just by raising the gold already there with some black parts). Otherwise, absolutely ingenious!
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Great MOC - very original design work. However, the hands seem a bit small (relative to the forearms) and the rakshi heads seem to be loosely connected. Great color layering, though. Nice work!
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Nice work, looks MUCH better, and the color scheme with more grey is greatly enhanced. Nice work making it compatible.
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This is a stunning feat of Bionicle engineering - Hydraxon should have been THIS. I can only say that the hands could be better articulated, and the Knights Kingdom armor on the leg is too bulky. Otherwise, spectacular work!
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Yay, for myself as well - BZP being offline for the past several months was very, very disappointing. Now I get to post MOCs and so forth. I guess since you had a hiatus you didn't miss BZP due to its downtime ... lucky you! And we've all been waiting for months now (before BZP's forums went under) to find out who the Great Being is ... I'm still betting Kapura ...