After only a brief attempt at reading, I must say this really isn't all that enjoyable. Sure, I understand it is beginning, and I did read what you had at the end, but there is a HUGE difference between "potential" and the immediate inability to read. I have fair eyesight, but this I found to be confusing and difficult to understand. The backgrounds seem to be a floor that got on the wrong end of a wood chipper. The sprites in the second panel also seem distorted. There are guides that help with sizing. While this might have potential, there needs to be a lot more work put in to this in later comics. I'll keep watching, and keep on going. Please don't take this as an attack, however. You might find similar posts down the line =/