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InnerRayg

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    Bzpstuck

    Smeag is absolutely the one with facial hair for what I hope are obvious reasons.

     

    Also if we are being likened to sing-songy, somewhat suspicious peddlers trying to push our wares on an innocent and unsuspecting populous then I have to say....

     

    Spot.

     

    Freaking.

     

    on.

  1. I actually read an interesting expose on something called the hatchet order. It goes a little something like this. You start out with the original, IV, move on to V which gives you the huge reveal and serves as a major downer. Then, you go to II. Why not I? This is why it is called the hatchet method. The article basically explained that there is literally nothing of value in the movie, so it's cut out completely. Just don't watch it. Ever. You see Anakin's fall to darkness and it mirrors what is happening to Luke in such a way that now you can be legitimately worried that he might follow his father's path. It's not just something to build tension, it's a real possibility. Then when you finish II and III, you come back to IV and watch it all come to a big conclusion. Yay!

  2. Yeah, a lot of your lines are not quite as smooth as they should be, and you've got a real problem with your tangencies - you need to get down in there and work each individual line as an object, not just as a stroke. Look at the part where the yellow intersects with the dark blue line and the Orange - very unsettling transition. The ear to the head is another point that needs some work on it. Keep going at it, and if I can I'd suggest to you the book "Vector Basic Training", it's one of the best books in the industry and will give you the key to always having smooth lines and curves.

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