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#121 Offline Sycron

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Posted Jul 03 2014 - 04:52 AM

Takua: Be awesome.

Aukat: Be awesome with Takua.

Maku: Drink a Pina Colada.


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#122 Offline Makuta Luroka

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Posted Jul 03 2014 - 01:17 PM

Takua: Be awesome.

Aukat: Be awesome with Takua.

Maku: Drink a Pina Colada.

YES.


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#123 Offline Leraku

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Posted Jul 06 2014 - 07:08 AM

Takua: Be awesome.

Aukat: Be awesome with Takua.

Maku: Drink a Pina Colada.

 

YES.

 

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YEEESSS.

 

YEEEEEEESSSSSSS!

 

Okay, done.

Now what?

 

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I just had to.


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#124 Offline Makuta Luroka

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Posted Jul 06 2014 - 10:08 AM

 

[Takua]: That rock outcropping way out in the sea kinda looks like fingers. Notice this. Now call it "Three Finger Island," and claim it as a territory for your kingdom of sand.

 
 

Takua: walk to the cliff to your left, and look at that sand circle with the white rock and that black rock. Seems suspicious.

It appears as if it will occupy at least a few minutes of your time.

Takua: that device on the side of the cliff opposite the circle looks interesting. Seems as if it will probably distract you for several more minutes.

 

 

[Takua]: Continue to ponder about this strange cliff that popped up into your head.
 
[Maku]: Obtain the attention of that strange red and yellow matoran with the blue Pakari that doesn't appear to fit right on his head.
 
[Takua]: Be distracted by a blue matoran who has just called out, then be distracted by the stairs on that cliff behind her.

 

Plot: Advance.
 
Takua: Stop goofing around.

 

Vee: Advance the plot.


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Posted Jul 06 2014 - 12:00 PM

All three: go up to the telescope and start cliffdiving.
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#126 Offline Quisoves Pugnat

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Posted Jul 06 2014 - 01:30 PM

Takua: Decide that an awesome person like yourself should only wear his mask for a minute at time, every ten minutes. Furthermore, decide that awesome persons like sealing and activating mysterious canisters and that you should do so as well  (after cliff-diving, of course.)

Aukat: After cliff-diving, explore the watery depths (shadows don't need to breath, after all.)

Maku: After cliff-diving, sail to Po-Wahi. Afterall, the Po-Matoran could help your village, and that Pina Colada invigorated you, so you're not too exhausted.


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#127 Offline Dapper-Sama

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Posted Jul 07 2014 - 12:10 PM

Leraku: Completely ignore the other commands so you can do the most recent one.


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#128 Offline Tagolrip

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Posted Jul 07 2014 - 12:43 PM

Portal: Realize that you've been COMPLETELY SILLY and had FORGOTTEN ABOUT THIS.

 

Aukat: Sneak around, looking for objects to take.

Aukat: Steal everything that isn't tied down.

Aukat: Yes, even that.

Takua: Learn to become a sandbender.

 

Oh my gosh I can't believe I didn't realize that this was still happening. =O


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#129 Offline Calvirick

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Posted Jul 08 2014 - 10:58 AM

Leraku: Stop listening to the demons that prevent you from production. 

 

Takua: Agree with me.  

 

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Posted Jul 08 2014 - 05:23 PM

Takua: Punch Aukat.

 

Aukat: Punch Takua back.

 

Maku: Slap them both.


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#131 Offline Toa Brian Nuva

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Posted Jul 08 2014 - 07:12 PM

Takua: pick a direction to go in (one with out water or a cliff) and walk till you find something.

Maku: take a nap, help will come when it comes.

Aukat: do some thing so stupid that its funny.


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Posted Jul 09 2014 - 06:18 PM

Maku: Throw a rock at the dancing Takua and Aukat to get their attention.

 

Aukat: Phase into the walls.

 

Takua: Throw a rock back.

 

Let the rock wars begin!


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#133 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Jul 15 2014 - 03:11 PM

Takua: keep calm and find a stairwell.

Macku: keep calm and be impatient

Aukat: go die in a hole, Unholy beast!

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Posted Jul 15 2014 - 04:41 PM

Looks like fun...might as well try. Let's see here...

 

Takua: Pie Maku

Maku: Throw pickles at Takua

Aukat: Paint yourself gold


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#135 Offline Leraku

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Posted Jul 19 2014 - 08:13 AM

Takua: Punch Aukat.

 

Aukat: Punch Takua back.

 

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Aukat is still intangible.

 

He also doesn't seem to be very aggressive at all.

 

Maku: Slap them both.

 

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Aukat is still intangible.

 

Takua, however, has been successfully slapped.

You feel strangely satisfied.

 

Maku: Explain your dilemma.

 

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You explain that your village needs help.

It was attacked by a monster, and everyone got trapped in a hut that fell beneath the waters.

You say you should be able to get there quickly using your boat, but you'll need help.

 

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OH HEY LOOK THERE'S A THING LET'S GO OVER THERE

 

WAIT WHAT

 

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You walk away from that strange chattery girl talking about some sort of floating water village. Pffft, like that could ever happen. Water doesn't float!

 

You saw some rocky stuff over by where that guy you threw sand at was earlier.

Which guy? The shadowy guy.

What do you mean, 'which shadowy guy'?

The guy that was -

 

You're just going to stop explaining things before your head starts to hurt.

Ow. Already is.

 

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What will you do?

 

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Wow! Finally got this done, with all these panels.

 

Anyways! I'm going to /try/ to pull off a weekly comic. Hopefully sometime on the weekends. I would have had this done last Sunday, but all sorts of life stuff was thrown at me. I'm going to do my best to stick with this schedule, but I'm only human.

 

I fiddled a bit with how Aukat looks mid-comic to test things... I think he'll look much better now, but due to how I accidentally saved it I couldn't edit out his head-light on the first couple of panels.

 

 


Edited by Leraku, Jul 19 2014 - 08:14 AM.

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Posted Jul 19 2014 - 08:18 AM

Takua: Those woods up ahead, the burn't ones, they look enticing. investigate.


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Posted Jul 19 2014 - 10:22 AM

Takua: Get hopelessly lost and encounter a red matoran.

 

Aukat: Follow Takua and become hopelessly lost.


Edited by ArcticFreeze17, Jul 19 2014 - 10:23 AM.

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Posted Jul 19 2014 - 05:16 PM

Takua: stop being a idiot and help her NOW.

Aukat: you should fly. shadows don`t walk.

Maku: tackle the colorful dude.


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#139 Offline Quisoves Pugnat

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Posted Jul 20 2014 - 12:52 AM

Maku: Stealthily employing your martial arts skills, relieve Takua of consciousness. Take his prone form, stuff it in the canister, seal the canister, and attach it to your boat. Then sail to Po-Wahi to seek aid for your village (Takua can be used as a handy expendable, if necessary.)

 

Takua: Dream of a pretty blue Matoran (whose name, you strangely recall, is Gavla) playing a dulcimer, and singing of Mount Ihu.

 

Aukat: Realize that, as you are a shadow, you can expand or contract your form as you please. Go to the edge of Ta-Wahi and grow. Grow so large that you not only cover all of Ta-Wahi, but all of Ta-Koro as well (those poor Ta-Matoran won't know what hit'em.)


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Posted Jul 21 2014 - 04:04 PM

Takua: Use Aukat's intangibility to your advantage. 

 

Aukat: Realize your full potential. 

 

Maku: Be annoyed by both of them.


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Posted Jul 21 2014 - 08:17 PM

Maku: Lasso Takua with some impromptu kelp. I don't even know if you can call kelp impromptu, but whatever.

Maku: Promise Takua that this quest actually gives decent exp.


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Posted Jul 29 2014 - 02:41 PM

Takua: Find your canister again, and furnish it


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Posted Jul 30 2014 - 11:53 PM

[Maku]: Forget the colorful wacko and bring his handsome shadow to your village instead.

 

[Aukat]: The blue matoran beckons you. Somewhat forcefully. You should comply.

 

[Takua]: The burnt, mutilated forest looks delighting. Go there.


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#144 Offline Leraku

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Posted Aug 01 2014 - 10:47 AM

Why is it that whenever I start to do really well on a comic series, life always gets in my face and keeps me down?

 

I've been so busy with planning things, trips, housework, curriculum issues, and overall work that I've been extremely drained of a creative drive.

 

I feel really bad about this, everyone - sincerely I do. I apologize for letting you down, but I'm going to get the next post up as soon as I can. Already got it scripted out, and I should be incorporating some of my favorite ACs for this round. Hopefully it should be entertaining, but for now I need to kind of get my life train back on the rails so I can get back to this.

 

So, yeah! Feel free to give your ten cents as to the situation, encouragement, discussion, whatever. No more ACs are needed for now, but I sincerely appreciate how many have come in since my last OOC post. Thank you so much to everyone who's stuck along with this comic so far. Only four pages and we've already had quite a journey!

 

I hope that we can get right back in the swing of things very soon. Sincerely... well, me. Were you expecting someone else?


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Posted Aug 07 2014 - 10:05 AM

I hope that we can get right back in the swing of things very soon. Sincerely... well, me. Were you expecting someone else?

 

At least you got tons of material to work with when you do!

 

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Posted Aug 07 2014 - 10:24 AM

Takua: Attempt to eat the ash now covering the ground and determine if it is as tasty as sand.

Aukat: Follow Takua like any good shadow should.

Macku: Drag Takua to your boat, ferry him off to Ga-Koro, and then go search for Gali.


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#147 Offline Leraku

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 06:41 AM

So I'll be gone until about the 30th due to the annual family camping trip.

Meaning no comics, or likely work on comics, until then.

I have the script planned out for the next one, I've finished half of the necessary images.

 

However, due to packing, I just haven't had time to finish... this!

 

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Enjoy your teaser, ladies and gents.

 


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#148 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 03:24 PM

So I'll be gone until about the 30th due to the annual family camping trip.

Meaning no comics, or likely work on comics, until then.

I have the script planned out for the next one, I've finished half of the necessary images.

 

However, due to packing, I just haven't had time to finish... this!

 

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Enjoy your teaser, ladies and gents.

Wow, you sir are a troll to all the good people. Kudos.


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#149 Offline ArcticFreeze17

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 04:55 PM

So I'll be gone until about the 30th due to the annual family camping trip.

Meaning no comics, or likely work on comics, until then.

I have the script planned out for the next one, I've finished half of the necessary images.

 

However, due to packing, I just haven't had time to finish... this!

 

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Enjoy your teaser, ladies and gents.

 

By the Great Beings...

This has got to be the best trailer I've seen.

There's so much information, yet it doesn't spoil anything.

It's so promising.

 

Aukat: Try using dark magic to become an independent Matoran.


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#150 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 06:09 PM

 

So I'll be gone until about the 30th due to the annual family camping trip.

Meaning no comics, or likely work on comics, until then.

I have the script planned out for the next one, I've finished half of the necessary images.

 

However, due to packing, I just haven't had time to finish... this!

 

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Enjoy your teaser, ladies and gents.

 

By the Great Beings...

This has got to be the best trailer I've seen.

There's so much information, yet it doesn't spoil anything.

It's so promising.

 

Aukat: Try using dark magic to become an independent Matoran.

 

The sad part is I know exactly what it is, but I am forbidden to tell. *evil laugh*

 

Have fun guessing. |:3


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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 06:28 PM

Ta-Wahi


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#152 Offline Loganto The Bo-Matoran

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 06:31 PM

Ta-Wahi

Close, but you didn't hear it from me.


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#153 Offline Makuta Luroka

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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 07:16 PM

Ta-Koro


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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 07:24 PM

Its the background to the charred forest, isn't it?
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Posted Aug 22 2014 - 07:41 PM

Its the background to the charred forest, isn't it?

I bet that's actually what it is.


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