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Grant-Sud

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  1. I have to agree with you. People always seem to talk about the more negative aspects of their lives. I also don't like it when people "1Up" negativity, that really gets on my nerves.
  2. I'm no poet, but for me, this was done very well. I really enjoyed the meaning behind all the different "truths", and I'm glad that you placed all of those aside to finish it off with that what's important is helping one another first. At least that's what I got from this. It wasn't too wordy and really pulled me in. Nice job Cederak, though I'm probably not the best person to review this, I really enjoyed this a lot!(And congrats for making your first CoT poem a fresh one that isn't dark/depressing/drama!)
  3. Thanks a lot Nuile. I was going for the most realistic marriage tone I could imagine, mainly from my own parents. I'm really glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for bringing out those errors. The only thing was the writing style which I'd like to ask you about if that's fine. Did you just not enjoy the present tense cause I know that's annoying sometimes, or did I do it completely wrong? =B Cause I think that was my first time writing it that way and I'd like to get it right.Either way, thank you ton. =)
  4. I agree, I should have added more to her personal thoughts. Looking over the story, there isn't much to go on what she's thinking... Still, thanks a ton for the review and I'm really glad you enjoyed it! Totally my first thriller/suspense story so I'm glad I got that right. =DI'll look over those grammar mistakes. You're also extremely tactful with your corrections. Thanks for that, cause not many people can kindly point them out. =/ Thank you again for the review Velox!
  5. Hey I'm sorry for the extremely late reply here. I'm going through all the stories I haven't responded to, and realized I was going to miss this one. Jedi Master J thanks a ton for the review, and I really appreciate you looking over it for me. The story was meant to be about mothers, but it can be interpreted in a lot of ways, mainly just single parents. Or even people with large responsibilities that don't seem to know exactly how to handle it.Thanks again, and your review was great ^^
  6. Grant-Sud

    COT Epic

    Or, go read mine? :3
  7. lol just give him a pat on the back!
  8. You're an exceptional man, and your dad saying that is probably the best compliment you can get. But still, if it helps, we'll all say it too.
  9. I dunno... =/ It seemed like The Dark Knight Rises speech with Iron Man videos. I do hope the movie is awesome though.
  10. Grant-Sud

    Upgrades

    It could just be me, but, I have a weird feeling... I could be off... You like Halo don't you? =X
  11. Kind of a Toy Story/Anne deal, the girl was sweet and I enjoyed Sam's role and meaning. The descriptions really put it over the top though, imagery is just fantastic which is what I expect from ya. I don't have too much to say for this story, but for something that's meant to be short, you placed a lot of heart into it. Nice job!
  12. Wonderful book. Thought Atticus and Scout were amazing characters. Especially Atticus, he's the greatest hero.
  13. Yeah if you can do it well, I'm all for it and don't mind the occasional strong accent
  14. I'd just be on the look out for teenage vampires.
  15. Grant-Sud

    getting up early

    I'll say one of two things. 1. That's all impressive guys. But I go to sleep at 5AM and get up at 6AM every DAY. So Sumiki you have absolutely nothing to complain about. 2. Bummer Sumiki, get some rest bro! =( I'll go with number two as number one is an extreme lie/over-exaggeration.
  16. I think you did a great job here and that Taka Nuvia would probably be proud. I'm not the biggest artist so I'm having a little trouble giving criticism. I like the coloring throughout and that there aren't any disproportional body parts. (such as one arm looking somewhat disfigured) I also really like how her wings are large enough to cover her whole body, which is pretty cool as I usually see these human/dragon pics as having smaller wings.Anyway, you draw very well and if you have more stuff like this, you should totally post it up here Ezorov. =D
  17. The sun is shining today, there isn't a cloud in the sky, the grass is green and the sky is like the sea, with one look I feel like I can swim in it. The world right outside my door is just radiating... Beautiful day. =D

    1. Naina

      Naina

      Mr. Blue Sky, please tell us why you had to hide away for -so- long.

    2. Grant-Sud

      Grant-Sud

      I was thinking Dear Prudence myself!

    3. Naina

      Naina

      Similar songs, maybe.

  18. lol I haven't watched Sailor Moon in forever.
  19. I'm in the middle. I mean it was great for a long time, and if they bring it back to what it once was, then sure why not. If not, ah I won't lose sleep over it. It's like a really really great book, it's over and there isn't a sequel.
  20. I keep asking for reviews, hope you all don't mind if I get Weeping Stars reviewed?
  21. Silly Tekulo, watch Aria the Animation instead of Angel whatever. =D
  22. It's a lazy within a lazy.
  23. Ah, I don't have high hopes.
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