wow, these actually look pretty cool! I like the use of almost exclusively rahkshi parts on Nevomen, gives it the look of a rahkshi that has been wildly mutated. The colour scheme is limited - on the one hand this makes the figure look very themed, which is a good thing, but it might also be good to add some highlights of brighter colours to break up the monochrome a little. Gorog is visually very imposing - the first thing that struck me when I saw it is how fierce it looked I really love how everything is covered in spikes, making it look pretty mean...on a related note, that's a really creative use of the piraka head piece. To improve I'd suggest maybe using different weapons, since the blades are the only silver on the model and therefore stand out a bit. Also maybe streamline the head (which, by the way, is a really original design) so that is fits with the rest of the model a bit better... As for Shalan, I have to say that's pretty neat - again, by using lots of the same parts it makes the figure look consistent, like its an actual set. The rider is the icing on the cake, and I think his colour scheme is just different enough to distinguish him. As for what would add to it, maybe reducing the amount of silver a little would help, at the moment it's a bit of an overdose. However, I do enjoy how jagged it looks, so I'm not sure what a good alternative would be. These are all pretty good, and its cool that you've come up with a backstory for them too - hope you can find time to make the other three