evil_jaga_genius Posted July 10, 2015 Share Posted July 10, 2015 Or he could try getting it to ricochet off a wall. That might take some practice though. Then again, it's hard to get a 50-lb boulder to bounce off of anything... =P 1 Quote Avatar by Nicholas Anderson (NickonAquaMagna)My blog: The Jaga's Nest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted July 23, 2015 Author Share Posted July 23, 2015 My comic is done and I'm ready to continue Nova Orbis at last! Now I just need to turn to Gatanui to- "The member Gatanui cannot receive any new messages." ....well, shoot. how am I supposed to reach them privately, now? This puts a wrench in my plans for announcing its return for real... Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted July 23, 2015 Share Posted July 23, 2015 Put a message on their wall telling them to empty their darn inbox. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted July 24, 2015 Author Share Posted July 24, 2015 All righty, then... How to I do that? Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
The 1st Shadow Posted July 24, 2015 Share Posted July 24, 2015 All righty, then... How to I do that?Go to their profile, and click 'Profile Feed.' It should take you to the page they post their status updates on, and you can put one there like you would on Facebook. Quote ~Your friendly, neighborhood Shadow ~Credit for Avatar and Banner goes to NickonAquaMagna~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 1, 2015 Author Share Posted August 1, 2015 Aaand we're back! http://bzpower.com/story.php?ID=7835 Whoooooo >> http://nickinamerica.deviantart.com/art/Bionicle-Nova-Orbis-Return-of-The-Toa-Miro-Ch-1-550422042 (that's the first chapter of the new story) Feedback, as always, it most appreciated. I know some of you have been waiting to jump back into this for a llllonnng time. 2 Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 Yes! Glad to see this making a return. I was confused a few times, having trouble remembering some stuff from last year, but it came back to me decently quickly. It's interesting as always though. Ultio's got quite the strong jaw apparently. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ford Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 YES! IT'S BACK! I'm really interested to see where this goes. I wonder who those other poor Matoran are, but I bet we've already been introduced to them in some way, shape, or form. Quote http://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gifhttp://i.imgur.com/O8CcqC5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Imrukii Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 can someone explain to me exactly everything about this? it's like relearning BIONICLE but with everything from the first 10 year thrown in your face all at once for me, Could someone briefly explain to me the story thus far? (also I would like to know why certain Matoran look biological like the Agori, are the Agori just counted as equal to the Matoran and as thus counted as them?) 1 Quote Quote: "Love has no fear, and no vengeance." | :i: | Andekas ⴳ A RUDE AWAKENING - A BIONICLE G1 Continuation and Video Game Project (ARTIST AND CONCEPTUALIST) | I am an ENFP, that is my Personality. Check Out Makuta Teridax: Reaper of Darkness | Check out my Taknuva Stars MOC | ⴳ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 Oh wow. It's back. And already there's property damage. This is looking to be one heck of a second arc. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
silo Posted August 2, 2015 Share Posted August 2, 2015 YUS! Nova Orbis is back in business Quote . Kathok Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 2, 2015 Author Share Posted August 2, 2015 can someone explain to me exactly everything about this? it's like relearning BIONICLE but with everything from the first 10 year thrown in your face all at once for me, Could someone briefly explain to me the story thus far? (also I would like to know why certain Matoran look biological like the Agori, are the Agori just counted as equal to the Matoran and as thus counted as them?) This picks up thousands of years after the original story ended. A new generation of Matoran has been created, with a higher percentage of organic tissue and more complex organs than earlier "builds," save the Ba-Matoran, who have barely changed at all. Think of these modern Matoran as a hybrid of old Matoran and Agori. A group of these went to space, to look for other planets Mata Nui visited before he fell asleep. For reasons we'll get into later on, they crash landed on Nova Orbis, which already had its own natives, fully organic beings like us. Most of these natives tolerate the Matoran, but some of them want these "alien robots" gone. Macku, Taipu and Kopeke are Turaga now. Ahkmou tagged along and eventually becomes a Toa. That's about the gist of it. You can find links to all of the chapters written so far in the opening post.Yes! Glad to see this making a return. I was confused a few times, having trouble remembering some stuff from last year, but it came back to me decently quickly. It's interesting as always though. Ultio's got quite the strong jaw apparently. A strong jaw, but not so strong teeth...YES! IT'S BACK! I'm really interested to see where this goes. I wonder who those other poor Matoran are, but I bet we've already been introduced to them in some way, shape, or form. Heheheheh... Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil_jaga_genius Posted August 3, 2015 Share Posted August 3, 2015 Wow, great comeback! Even though Voima's supposed to be bad (being Tenius' captor and all) I can't help but like her. This chapter just made her my favorite so far (no offense Ahkmou!) And radiation poisoning? Well, this is gonna be interesting... Quote Avatar by Nicholas Anderson (NickonAquaMagna)My blog: The Jaga's Nest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Jaxus Posted August 4, 2015 Share Posted August 4, 2015 Wow, great comeback! Even though Voima's supposed to be bad (being Tenius' captor and all) I can't help but like her. This chapter just made her my favorite so far (no offense Ahkmou!) And radiation poisoning? Well, this is gonna be interesting...I didn't get the feeling that she was evil, only ready to do anything for her duty. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Specter Knight Posted August 5, 2015 Share Posted August 5, 2015 OH YEAH! STUFF'S HAPPENIN'! To be honest, the First chapter got off kind of slow, and I'm now desperatley waiting for chapter 2 to come out. then again, isn't that the magic of periodic stories? Quote (I'll do this eventually, I swear...) My BZPRPG Characters Corpus Rahkshi Characters: Kol Arsenal Swarm Amalgamation Skyrise Characters: Zavon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 8, 2015 Author Share Posted August 8, 2015 Chapter 2 should be up tomorrow, if all goes well. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Btw, whenever you have a character take visible damage, do a reference sheet of it so that it doesn't just disappear without explanation. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 8, 2015 Author Share Posted August 8, 2015 Btw, whenever you have a character take visible damage, do a reference sheet of it so that it doesn't just disappear without explanation. Oh, um... all right. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volatile Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Fallout took place in Nova Orbis confirmed. I really liked this one but who was that guy in the begining? Quote Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do great things. It's called garbage can, not garbage cannot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Onaku Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 And I say reference sheet as mainly for yourself so that you don't forget injuries and such for future panels. It's mainly a tool of convenience. My suggestion to you. Quote BZPRPG Profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 8, 2015 Author Share Posted August 8, 2015 Fallout took place in Nova Orbis confirmed. I really liked this one but who was that guy in the begining? Wait and see. And in other news, heeeere's chapter two! http://nickinamerica.deviantart.com/art/Bionicle-Nova-Orbis-Return-Chapter-2-552237095 This one should give us a lot to talk about. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Specter Knight Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Oooooh! The plot thickens! Then again, it always does. I still kind of feel you should've elaborated more on the final part in Ta-Koro, instead of still keeping us waiting. You know how impatient I am. Wait, you don't? Well, I'm not very patient. at all. Anyway, back on track, what could the word on the scroll be? It's probably the name of a plot-relevant character, like Ultimo was last time. Also, the part where Ahkmou tests his Pakari was rather amusing. Good work, as usual! Quote (I'll do this eventually, I swear...) My BZPRPG Characters Corpus Rahkshi Characters: Kol Arsenal Swarm Amalgamation Skyrise Characters: Zavon Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volatile Posted August 8, 2015 Share Posted August 8, 2015 Kanohi Pikari eh? Quote Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do great things. It's called garbage can, not garbage cannot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 8, 2015 Author Share Posted August 8, 2015 Whoops... it's Pakari, isn't it? Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted August 9, 2015 Share Posted August 9, 2015 Yeah, it's Pakari. Nice chapter. I particularly liked Ahkmou's scene in the mask room for some reason. Gives a cool feeling. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volatile Posted August 10, 2015 Share Posted August 10, 2015 (edited) Through the whole thing I was like "Isn't this stealing?". Edit: why is chapter two not on the front page? Edited August 10, 2015 by Toa Aeron Quote Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do great things. It's called garbage can, not garbage cannot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted August 10, 2015 Share Posted August 10, 2015 Through the whole thing I was like "Isn't this stealing?". Edit: why is chapter two not on the front page?Susurri did tell him to see if he could find anything useful. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 10, 2015 Author Share Posted August 10, 2015 Edit: why is chapter two not on the front page? We only announced chapter 1 because this was the story's big return after being absent for over half a year. I'm not going to pester Gatanui to put every chapter on the front page. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 12, 2015 Author Share Posted August 12, 2015 (edited) Sorry to double-post, but if all goes well, you'll get to see chapter 3 today! Just letting you guys know ahead of time. Edited August 12, 2015 by NickonAquaMagna 1 Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 12, 2015 Author Share Posted August 12, 2015 (edited) In today's installment, the Toa Novus learn some shocking things about themselves, and each other. Hope you're ready for some truth bombs. http://nickinamerica.deviantart.com/art/Bionicle-Nova-Orbis-Return-Chapter-3-553232287 Feedback is always appreciated. Next chapter should go up over the weekend. Edited August 12, 2015 by NickonAquaMagna Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ford Posted August 12, 2015 Share Posted August 12, 2015 Great as always. A lot of interesting revelations in this chapter. I knew it! I knew Gemma was a seer!Also, I guess Outo will come in when we turn our attention to that native in Ba-Koro. Quote http://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gifhttp://i.imgur.com/O8CcqC5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 12, 2015 Author Share Posted August 12, 2015 (edited) Great as always. A lot of interesting revelations in this chapter. I knew it! I knew Gemma was a seer!Also, I guess Outo will come in when we turn our attention to that native in Ba-Koro. You guessed correctly... both times. Edited August 12, 2015 by NickonAquaMagna 1 Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
evil_jaga_genius Posted August 14, 2015 Share Posted August 14, 2015 Somebody whack that conniving bueraucrat of a Ta-Turaga with a frying pan... =P 1 Quote Avatar by Nicholas Anderson (NickonAquaMagna)My blog: The Jaga's Nest Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Volatile Posted August 14, 2015 Share Posted August 14, 2015 Edit: why is chapter two not on the front page? We only announced chapter 1 because this was the story's big return after being absent for over half a year. I'm not going to pester Gatanui to put every chapter on the front page.I was talking about the front page of this topic... Quote Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do great things. It's called garbage can, not garbage cannot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 14, 2015 Author Share Posted August 14, 2015 Edit: why is chapter two not on the front page? We only announced chapter 1 because this was the story's big return after being absent for over half a year. I'm not going to pester Gatanui to put every chapter on the front page.I was talking about the front page of this topic... Whoops! Fixed. Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted August 14, 2015 Share Posted August 14, 2015 Well...I can honestly say I can sympathize with this. Finding out that everything you've seen and heard has been seen and heard by someone else. Not to the same degree, but for a year, I went to this one spot with a friend after school, and we would talk about stuff, mainly the sort of thing no one else could be allowed to hear. Then we found out that an air duct had been carrying our conversations into a room full of businessmen, who as a result heard everything and knew things about us most of our other friends did not. It's worse here though, since the information is most likely intended to be used for something...bad. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 15, 2015 Author Share Posted August 15, 2015 (edited) Well...I can honestly say I can sympathize with this. Finding out that everything you've seen and heard has been seen and heard by someone else. Not to the same degree, but for a year, I went to this one spot with a friend after school, and we would talk about stuff, mainly the sort of thing no one else could be allowed to hear. Then we found out that an air duct had been carrying our conversations into a room full of businessmen, who as a result heard everything and knew things about us most of our other friends did not. It's worse here though, since the information is most likely intended to be used for something...bad. It's more about that tired old "If you're doing nothing wrong, you have nothing to hide" mentality. The Matoran race is kept on a very short leash. Also, dang... that sucks. Can I say that, here? I gotta. Edited August 15, 2015 by NickonAquaMagna Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Axilus Prime Posted August 15, 2015 Share Posted August 15, 2015 Well...I can honestly say I can sympathize with this. Finding out that everything you've seen and heard has been seen and heard by someone else. Not to the same degree, but for a year, I went to this one spot with a friend after school, and we would talk about stuff, mainly the sort of thing no one else could be allowed to hear. Then we found out that an air duct had been carrying our conversations into a room full of businessmen, who as a result heard everything and knew things about us most of our other friends did not. It's worse here though, since the information is most likely intended to be used for something...bad. It's more about that tired old "If you're doing nothing wrong, you have nothing to hide" mentality. The Matoran race is kept on a very short leash. Also, dang... that sucks. Can I say that, here? I gotta. Ah. That's definitely an unfair way of treating the Matoran. It does suck, but thankfully, the information seems not to have spread. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
NickonAquaMagna Posted August 15, 2015 Author Share Posted August 15, 2015 On another note... WHAT DOES IT MEEEEEEEAN? Quote The Toa- A Bionicle Retelling by NickonAquaMagna http://www.bzpower.com/board/topic/25275-the-toa-a-retelling-of-bionicle/ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ford Posted August 15, 2015 Share Posted August 15, 2015 On another note... -SNIP- WHAT DOES IT MEEEEEEEAN?Judging by the "Turbo from Slizer" look, as well as the small black grains, I'd say... Mech/Vehicle/Other Thingamabob? Quote http://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gifhttp://i.imgur.com/O8CcqC5.pnghttp://i.imgur.com/kbP5Svg.gif Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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