Ghidora131 Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 Wow. I'm still alive! *as soon as I say that Lucina writes up my death in script* Also! TEXTERMINATION is updated! You'll find the link to it on the first page of this topic! gogogo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 18, 2015 Author Share Posted February 18, 2015 (edited) Wow. I'm still alive! *as soon as I say that Lucina writes up my death in script* My sincerest apologies [/isn't sorry at all] Edited February 18, 2015 by Lucina 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 *writes will* *will isn't accepted* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Xaeraz Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 See, originally, you were slated to survive the epic but, as Voltex can tell you ANYTHING CAN CHANGE 4 Quote All are not the same But three shall be as one Freedom in the flame The end has just begun Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 18, 2015 Author Share Posted February 18, 2015 *writes will* *will isn't accepted* Nobody gets anything when they die here See, originally, you were slated to survive the epic but, as Voltex can tell you ANYTHING CAN CHANGE I CHALLENGE MY FATE! 5 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 18, 2015 Share Posted February 18, 2015 If I die I get something! I finally will be at peace, dragon warri- oops, wrong movie. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 I'm kinda hoping Chro dies, because that'd mean he was relevant again 1 Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 19, 2015 Author Share Posted February 19, 2015 I'm kinda hoping Chro dies, because that'd mean he was relevant again I think that's the first time anybody has wanted their character to perish Your character is one of those that I wish could have a larger role, but he just never seemed to fit; whenever I could have given him a larger role, characters like Ehks or Portalfig always fit the situation better. 3 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Letagi Posted February 19, 2015 Share Posted February 19, 2015 (edited) Great last few chapters. I've been keeping up, just not always posting. I'm amazed you let my character survive this far without even having him kill anyone else in the process. He's dodged death a very improbable number of times. And apparently he can hold his own against a White Turaga? Cool. Really looking forward to the rest of this! -Letagi I like to think of Letagi as the narrator-level non-narrator.That's definitely cool with me. How'd that come about? There's something else I've been wondering about. Maybe this has been answered previously and I missed it, but are these epics meant to fit with canon in any way? I feel like this could be the story of the Matoran Civil War, but there are a bunch of discrepancies with canon, i.e. the deaths of canon characters that we see later on, and the destruction of the Red Star. How was the Red Star able to crash into Metru Nui, anyways? Metru Nui is located inside Mata Nui's head. Oh, and also: He watched as Chro, Zakaro and the one armed Ehks took down White Eleven -Letagi Edited February 19, 2015 by Letagi Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 I think that's the first time anybody has wanted their character to perishThat's actually surprising I'd figure some G&T folks are bloodthirsty enough for their cravings to be satisfied by their own blood Some G&T folks other than me, that is, because I'm totally cool with dying for a pyrrhic victory Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 Great last few chapters. I've been keeping up, just not always posting. I'm amazed you let my character survive this far without even having him kill anyone else in the process. He's dodged death a very improbable number of times. And apparently he can hold his own against a White Turaga? Cool. Really looking forward to the rest of this! -Letagi I like to think of Letagi as the narrator-level non-narrator.That's definitely cool with me. How'd that come about? There's something else I've been wondering about. Maybe this has been answered previously and I missed it, but are these epics meant to fit with canon in any way? I feel like this could be the story of the Matoran Civil War, but there are a bunch of discrepancies with canon, i.e. the deaths of canon characters that we see later on, and the destruction of the Red Star. How was the Red Star able to crash into Metru Nui, anyways? Metru Nui is located inside Mata Nui's head. Oh, and also: He watched as Chro, Zakaro and the one armed Ehks took down White Eleven -Letagi Not sure why bolded word is bolded. As for the Red Star, it flew through one of the MU's eyes; hence the "flight path" that Ehks had to put in. Regarding timeline placement... no idea. I never really had a solid time frame for this epic. As for Letagi's role, it just sort of came about naturally. I included him in the Coliseum infiltration and then he just sort of... kept popping up. Part of why your character became so important is due to his various scenes with the different narrators; helping JiMing in Chapter 1, playing a large role with both Portalfig and Agent 64. I think that's the first time anybody has wanted their character to perishThat's actually surprising I'd figure some G&T folks are bloodthirsty enough for their cravings to be satisfied by their own blood Some G&T folks other than me, that is, because I'm totally cool with dying for a pyrrhic victory Yeah, but this is a story. Everybody wants their character to be the coolest one man army survivor person. 3 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Letagi Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 He watched as Chro, Zakaro and the one armed Ehks took down White Eleven Not sure why bolded word is bolded. Whoops, it looked like a typo at first. I thought it should have been "the one named Ehks". Now I get that it's referring to Ehks with one arm. That sentence makes much more sense now. -Letagi 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 I think that's the first time anybody has wanted their character to perishThat's actually surprising I'd figure some G&T folks are bloodthirsty enough for their cravings to be satisfied by their own blood Some G&T folks other than me, that is, because I'm totally cool with dying for a pyrrhic victory Yeah, but this is a story. Everybody wants their character to be the coolest one man army survivor person. Not meeeeeeeee~ Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 Voltex takes on White One in the final confrontation. 2 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Smoke Monster Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 R.I.P. Fighty, Underscore, and all the other members that died in this chapter. Anyways, that was an intense chapter. I liked the beginning where everyone went over which White Council members were killed off. It was kind of like a nice recap for the readers. The battle between Voltex and White One was great too. The reveal that Voltex (AKA Ibrow) was from another dimension where he killed everyone in it was a game changer, to say the least. I bet another two or three chapters could be spent alone on this subject. Like how Voltex/Ibrow deals with remembering what he has done, and what the survivors would think of him if he told them. I don't know if that will happen, but I think it would be neat to see play out. And the Shadow continues to be awesome. With the reveal of Control, Metru Nui appears to be in even more trouble. I can't wait to see how this story ends. (I'm assuming it is, since the end of the chapter said 'to be concluding?') Quote Everyone is one choice away from being the bad guy in another person's story. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Fishers dies, Voltex lives. Well, I guess I was a member of control, so the Shadow wouldn't have a reason to kill me. Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 I managed to predict 3 things... and I did something! Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 i died without becoming relevant gg 3 Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 i died without becoming relevant ggBe careful what you wish for... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 have you not seen all my posts above about how i'd rather my character be relevant than alive Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 i died without becoming relevant ggthe only thing worse than being nonrelevant and alive is being nonrelevant and dead. 2 Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 right - because being dead means there's no chance to reverse the irrelevance unless y'know ibrow never really killed alternate-chro and jm- WAIT A SECOND 2 Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowhawk Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 i is confirmed deadmehworst story evah Quote BZPRPG profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Burnmad Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Enraged, Voltex lunged forward, knocking Zakaro off of his feet and punching the other Matoran in the mask so hard that it fractured, pieces flying off. OK, you did that on purpose. *Snaps fingers* Quote Avatar by Brickeens Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 Guys I made a thing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 R.I.P. Fighty, Underscore, and all the other members that died in this chapter. Anyways, that was an intense chapter. I liked the beginning where everyone went over which White Council members were killed off. It was kind of like a nice recap for the readers. The battle between Voltex and White One was great too. The reveal that Voltex (AKA Ibrow) was from another dimension where he killed everyone in it was a game changer, to say the least. I bet another two or three chapters could be spent alone on this subject. Like how Voltex/Ibrow deals with remembering what he has done, and what the survivors would think of him if he told them. I don't know if that will happen, but I think it would be neat to see play out. And the Shadow continues to be awesome. With the reveal of Control, Metru Nui appears to be in even more trouble. I can't wait to see how this story ends. (I'm assuming it is, since the end of the chapter said 'to be concluding?') This might be the end. But it's a pretty bad one; not just sad, but actually bad. Fishers dies, Voltex lives. Well, I guess I was a member of control, so the Shadow wouldn't have a reason to kill me. Your character is an enigma. Is she actually working for Control? What's going on? Will anybody ever know?The answer is... spoilers. I managed to predict 3 things... and I did something! Wait what did you predict? i died without becoming relevant gg You asked to diejk i died without becoming relevant ggBe careful what you wish for... Says everyone ever but nobody listens have you not seen all my posts above about how i'd rather my character be relevant than alive What about both i died without becoming relevant ggthe only thing worse than being nonrelevant and alive is being nonrelevant and dead. Or non-relevant and still alivewait no that's still better right - because being dead means there's no chance to reverse the irrelevance unless y'know ibrow never really killed alternate-chro and jm- WAIT A SECOND No, your alternate selves are definitely dead. Voltex is the only survivor of his universe. i is confirmed dead meh worst story evah I NEVER SAW A BODY DID YOU SEE A BODY I DIDN'T SEE A BODY Enraged, Voltex lunged forward, knocking Zakaro off of his feet and punching the other Matoran in the mask so hard that it fractured, pieces flying off. OK, you did that on purpose. *Snaps fingers* Did what on purpose Guys I made a thing I can now add "MOCs" to the list of various things this epic has inspired =D 1 Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Cyrix Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 (edited) and then watched Underscore get torn apart by Control while saving the lives of Quisoves and Cyrix.YESyet only nine Matoran had walked away.NO Edited February 20, 2015 by Cyrix 1 Quote [Cyrix] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chro Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 yeah, I know alt!chro and alt!jmj are both dead it was just interesting that chro and jmj were the two left behind by the resistance Quote save not only their lives but their spirits Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rahkshi Guurahk Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 (edited) yeah, I know alt!chro and alt!jmj are both dead it was just interesting that chro and jmj were the two left behind by the resistanceAnd alt!RG probably was sniped or something about 5 months before that or something. =P EDIT: RG y u no type right Edited February 20, 2015 by Rahkshi Guurahk Quote -Rahkshi GuurahkGENERATION 3: The first time you see this, copy it into your sig on any forum and add 1 to the generation. Social experiment.If I actually tried putting all the stuff I like on here, the sig would burst. (This banner is created by http://www.bzpower.com/board/user/59020-onaku/ ) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 and then watched Underscore get torn apart by Control while saving the lives of Quisoves and Cyrix.YESyet only nine Matoran had walked away.NO MAYBE yeah, I know alt!chro and alt!jmj are both dead it was just interesting that chro and jmj were the two left behind by the resistance I just selected random names, tbh yeah, I know alt!chro and alt!jmj are both dead it was just interesting that chro and jmj were the two left behind by the resistanceAnd alt!RG probably was sniped or something about 5 months before that or something. =P EDIT: RG y u no type right Almost certainly Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ehksidian Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 So wait.I assume all the people taken by Luroka are (currently) the only survivors, correct? Everyone not listed probably died?well that's lame. Quote Steam name: Ehksidian Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Makuta Luroka Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 LUROKA MVP! 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 20, 2015 Author Share Posted February 20, 2015 So wait.I assume all the people taken by Luroka are (currently) the only survivors, correct? Everyone not listed probably died?well that's lame. Well I mean Anybody serving Control is probably alive as well LUROKA MVP! We all know you did it for entirely selfish reasons Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
fishers64 Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 LUROKA MVP!Great contribution to the battle, yo. I'm sure you worked wonders from your lair without even having to actually enter the battle and kill people. (Sarcasm Level: 50%) Quote Hero Factory RPG | Bionicle Mafia XXIX: Storyline & Theories Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shadowhawk Posted February 20, 2015 Share Posted February 20, 2015 i is confirmed dead meh worst story evah I NEVER SAW A BODY DID YOU SEE A BODY I DIDN'T SEE A BODY wait what ... ohhhh okay ima change my mind best story evah you so da man vol-tex Quote BZPRPG profiles Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
In Between the Shadows Posted February 21, 2015 Share Posted February 21, 2015 I managed to predict 3 things... and I did something! Wait what did you predict? 1. Shadow works for Control2. Brainwashing powers3. ... I can't remember 1 Quote ~Just call me Shadow_Ignited~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kayn Posted February 21, 2015 Share Posted February 21, 2015 I now understand what you said about Kayn before. You sneaky writer. Quote Kayn's Thought: My hiatus of Bionicle has ended Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 21, 2015 Share Posted February 21, 2015 I disappeared... Am I alive? have I fallen under the control of control? did I escape elsewhere? VOLTEX YOUR KILLING MEE WITH WAITING Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voltex Posted February 23, 2015 Author Share Posted February 23, 2015 LUROKA MVP!Great contribution to the battle, yo. I'm sure you worked wonders from your lair without even having to actually enter the battle and kill people. (Sarcasm Level: 50%) Yeah, Luroka's job so far has been "sit at home and then not even bother to teleport all of the remaining survivors". i is confirmed dead meh worst story evah I NEVER SAW A BODY DID YOU SEE A BODY I DIDN'T SEE A BODY wait what ... ohhhh okay ima change my mind best story evah you so da man vol-tex Which isn't to say that Shadowhawk will be reappearing, because he won't. I just cannot confirm or deny whether he's actually deceased.I see him as the kind of villain that always seems to find a way to stay alive, though. I managed to predict 3 things... and I did something! Wait what did you predict? 1. Shadow works for Control2. Brainwashing powers3. ... I can't remember Ah yes, good predictions. I now understand what you said about Kayn before. You sneaky writer. Kayn is always evil. I disappeared... Am I alive? have I fallen under the control of control? did I escape elsewhere? VOLTEX YOUR KILLING MEE WITH WAITING Just wait a few more hours until tomorrow. Quote JOIN AETHERGARDE Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ghidora131 Posted February 23, 2015 Share Posted February 23, 2015 *dies of waiting* Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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