Spritely Sickness (comic contest #3)

[Rahkshi Lalonde]

My hand really hurts and i still think i was cutting corners here but whatever:
 

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I honestly had planned to add color, but the deadline approached a lil fast so i left it b&w, which kiiinda makes the sprite sections look odd? idk, i'll let you judge my scribbles uou

[Logan Tec]

Ha thats a good use of Sprite and hand drawn interesting story. but should ppl know those characters from some where?

[Rahkshi Lalonde]

Ha thats a good use of Sprite and hand drawn interesting story. but should ppl know those characters from some where?

 

nope, Vahki-tan, Emmel, and  Rorkshi are fresh out of the blue, designed to simply resemble the average cast of a peak BZP studio comic u:

[Petewa]

Well, I'm definitely not voting for myself this time around.

[Click]

This is one of my favorite comics I've seen on here for a long, long time (you know, counting actual comics, not Nova Orbis). Not only is the art well-done (as always), but I love the characters and the humor presented in here. You have my vote!

[Tarn]

This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me.

BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever.

[Rahkshi Lalonde]

This is one of my favorite comics I've seen on here for a long, long time (you know, counting actual comics, not Nova Orbis). Not only is the art well-done (as always), but I love the characters and the humor presented in here. You have my vote!

 

that is really good to hear since i wasworried the rush i ended up putting on it (put off a lot of work till the last few days as usual) would heavily impact any quality. thanks!

 

 

This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me.

 

BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever.

 

oh yeah, i see what you mean. oops. x:

 

panel layout is one of my enemies in comic making, alongside pacing, dialogue, and background art. uou

[Tarn]

 

This is good stuff. Funny, and the art's nice. As a minor critique, though: some of the panel placement was a bit dodgy in page 2 and 3 and broke up the flow quite a bit. I actually lost my place at one point and had to backtrack a panel to understand why it seemed the dialogue had jumped ahead of me.

 

BUT this is minor and it's a contest so you can't fix it so whatever.

 

oh yeah, i see what you mean. oops. x:

 

panel layout is one of my enemies in comic making, alongside pacing, dialogue, and background art. uou

 

The dialogue and pacing was good, actually, so...

[evil_jaga_genius]

Oh man this is perfect, the hazmat suit =P

 

Question: what software did you use, because I'm using Gimp and I can't get the lines that clean.

[Rahkshi Lalonde]

Oh man this is perfect, the hazmat suit =P

 

Question: what software did you use, because I'm using Gimp and I can't get the lines that clean.

 

thanks, Rorkshi was probably the most fun to draw, <:

 

(odd, i use Gimp for all my stuff, tho notably i did draw bigger here n i usually  do, and it depends on if you have a  tablet, and set the pressure variables on or not. o: )