I respect a late Brickshelf user, a fine act of bravery. But seriously, Brickshelf is very unreliable at times. You shouldn't start a brand-new series on Brickshelf. On the comic, I like the MOCs, (although they're very colorful) and I like the plot. To be honest, each panel could use some sort of border. It is a bit hard to see where an old panel starts and where a new one begins. And hey, I didn't do much, but thanks for the credit, friend. EDIT: One last thing! Your signature should not use the work of someone else. Try making your own signature. Make it unique and memorable. Something related to your comics. Like my red couch. The red couch was the first thing I sprited in my comics, therefore I made it the symbol of my comics in general. Something totally unique to me. Try to do that with your comics.