Character
-Things he/she/it is guilty of- points
--total points
---Result
----Comments
Lefty
-Does the character have more than one name (i.e. a nickname or a pseudonym)?- 1
-A some other species- 1
-Own his own lab?- 1
-A firearm- 3
-My weapon has laser atributes such as a lightsaber or a laser gun- 4
-My weapon is made out of a material stronger than protosteel- 3
-Takes a Boat/Airship That He/She owns?- 2
-I built it from scratch.- 3
-Does the character magically learn an opponent's moves (and/or how to counter them) just by looking at them being used?- 2 (How to counter)
-Does your character get away with doing things that other people would get into serious trouble for?- 3
-Because I need more power/wealth/personal goods/whatever- 2
--25
---Fanfiction authors, you might just want to start over. Role-players and original fiction authors, at this Point your characters are likely to provoke eye-rolling and exclamations of "yeah, right!" from your readers. (Well, at least from me.) Immediate work over is probably in order.
----Well, I'm not surprised by this. Lefty is my guy who plays all sides afterall
Robo
-Does the character share the Author's/Player's name?- 10
-A some other species- 1
-A firearm- 3
-My weapon has laser atributes such as a lightsaber or a laser gun- 4
-My weapon is made out of a material stronger than protosteel- 3
-Does the character save other character(s)?- .5
-Does your character accomplish something single-handedly that others have not been able to accomplish, or have been able to accomplish only at great cost, such as killing a Makuta?- 5
-Does the character magically learn an opponent's moves (and/or how to counter them) just by looking at them being used?- 2 (How to counter)
-Has your character ever killed someone after being provoked?- 2
-Has your character ever destroyed a fortress, Koro, or similarly major piece of real estate?- 2
-Does your character get away with doing things that other people would get into serious trouble for?- 3
-Does he or she make authority figures look like bad guys in the process?- 2
-Is your character adored by the majority, undeservingly or otherwise?- 1
-Because some things just need to be done.- 3
--41.5
---Kill it dead. Or make sure you read the instructions properly (some people don't do this, which causes freakishly high scores) and take the test again.
----Anyone who knows me knows Robo, and also knows that this score is probably an understatement
Sunimek
-A some other species- 1
-Travel the world as a wanderer?- 1
-Is your character the sole survivor of anything?- 1
-Reasons? You mean I actually need those?- 5
--8
---Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.
----Not bad, not bad. Took an old, unintelligent animal into a sentient character for the first time.
Toa-mon
-Does the character share the Author's/Player's name?- 10 (was Toa-mon before I became Robo )
--A Toa- 1
-Did your character suffer a traumatic effect in his/her past?- Yes, but no point value given
-Was an ordinary Matoran/toa until Something Happened- 2
-Fight Evil- 1
-Travel the world as a wanderer?- 1
-A firearm- 3
-My weapon has laser atributes such as a lightsaber or a laser gun- 4
-Does your Toa control an unorthodox power?- 1 (Sound)
-Does your Toa control Light/Shadow- 5 (Shadow)
-Hau- 2
-Does the character save other character(s)?- .5
-Does the character feel guilty about something from the past?- 1
--31.5
---Kill it dead. Or make sure you read the instructions properly (some people don't do this, which causes freakishly high scores) and take the test again.
----Mildly surprising. He's my first real 'character' that I put any effort into, so it make sense that he'd be a Mary Sue
Uncala
-A some other species- 1
-A knife- 1
-A spear- 3
-A sword- 3
--8
---Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.
----Brand new character made for the lulz
Shiika
-A Rahkshi- 1
-A pirate?- 2
-Reasons? You mean I actually need those?- 5
--8
---Most likely Not-Sue. Characters at this level could probably take a little spicing up without hurting them any.
----New character made for a fun time, based on a character I always thought was cool.