Thanks for taking the time out of your road trip to respond to that chunk of text I gave you. When I PM'd you, I had imagined that you would just give me some quick recognition and a few questions, not an assignment to explain etymology! It's good to know that I've retained my ruthless editing style after nearly a month without practicing it. Responses and explanations are in boldface, black, Georgia font. I plan on linking you two a document including my criticisms involving plot and characterization, which should be up tomorrow. (This time, I'll just edit this post.)~ BioGio