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  1. JohannDakitsch
    Wow! Insanely cool. A pratically perfect rendition of one of the most underestimated batman villains... And in the form he appears in the Animated Seies, wich is just awesome! The shapes you got with Bionicle and HF pieces here are insane. Even tough I'm not a big fan of LDD MOCs, this is a Masterpiece! Too bad most of those pieces don't come in these colors...
  2. JohannDakitsch
    Maybe, but I'm not really into revamping MOCs or reposting it... I rather move to the next.Oh yeah, now that you said I think I have some idea of how to make the tube arm more poseable... but would look very ugly...Anyway, thanks for the feedback, folks!
  3. JohannDakitsch
    Good one. A bit 'fat', tough, and could use some more orange on the rest of the body, so color scheme would be more consistent... Limbs could be improved a bit, and why does it have fingers only in one hand? Anyway, overall nice MOC.
  4. JohannDakitsch
    Another Horseman of the Apocalypse, following the line of my Famine .This time its Pestilence:So yeah, I know it should be "Conquest", not "Pestilence", but the last sounds much more cool and I already had something in mind for it.Anyway, I'm pretty satisfied with this MOC. Legs were kinda rushed, but they still work for me. Originally it woudln't have any silver, but was running out of good white pieces, so had to use it. But yah, I still like it.MOCPages, with more pictures, a more detailed commentary and background music(adds to the creepy factor). I suggest taking a look at it.So that's it, folks! Hope you enjoy it.
  5. JohannDakitsch
    Nice. I like the closed, solid design, altough I think it could have more flowyness... Anyway very cool one.
  6. JohannDakitsch
    GLaDOS is a central computer system thing, like a HAL 9000 with a body... Also a main character from the Portal games... Anyway, great MOC, dude. Very well done with a cool shaping, The head is lovely.
  7. JohannDakitsch
    Right-click the picture and select "show image"(not sure if its the right expression, my computer is in portuguese). Anyway, its public now... As for the MOC, it looks nice, and I'm diggin' the head. But could use some work on the rest, as its a bit basic and with some color inconsistency. Legs could be beefed up a bit too. But most important: make pics with clean background. The boxes behind it hel nothing and, in fact, do get in the way, making it very hard to see the creation. Keep that in mind next time
  8. JohannDakitsch
    Nice one, Lighting is good, and the nynrah technique is quite interesting. I only think it could use some more stuff on the leg/tail... Also, not sure about the bladed arm. Still nice, anyway.
  9. JohannDakitsch
    Nice one. The tohunga feet are indeed odd, tough, and I think you cold improve the forearms and hands... About the scythe, don't do much, just add a bigger blade(or combine some to do one), and extend the hold... If you can use some angled connectors to make it more twisted, it would also help.
  10. JohannDakitsch
    Haha, great! Looks very good and oddly accurate. Nice mohawk too.
  11. JohannDakitsch
    Fantastic. Looks very solid and flowy, and with a great overall design (the gun and that padron on the body are great). Much better than your previous tank..
  12. JohannDakitsch
    Awesome! Build is great, I'm loving the chest and legs.Those hands are also pretty sweet.
  13. JohannDakitsch
    Very nice. CReative ue of the cores, altough I'm not sure if the colors worked so well... Head is cute, but defnetly needs some substance on the neck, specially the base. All-in-all, very good, I like it!
  14. JohannDakitsch
    Very nice one. Creative look and use of parts.Picture quality is not so good, tough, pretty blurry and dark... I would like to see more views of it too.
  15. JohannDakitsch
    Cool one, but I gotta say the 'limbs' don't please me so much... specially the legs, the nuva armor is kinda awkward. But is still a very ncie oen, nonetheless... And the pilot creeps me out too.
  16. JohannDakitsch
    Tough choice... I was in serious doubt between Trunx and Hisss... But I went with Trunx, I think in overall its better built (The snake, apart from the brilliant head, is more basic). Good luck to all!
  17. JohannDakitsch
    It depends... If you trust your story and you think you can do a good job with it right now, go ahead. But, be careful not to rush things, let the story take its time, let it mature on your head (but be careful to not let it rot). The idea of short stories is a good, one, but I believe that would be better when the main story universe is already developed well enough, so you just expand and detail it on the shorts... But thats just me... I have a plan for a big story too, but I'm not writing it now, I just don't feel I have enough experience and knowledge to write it. But, again, that's just me... Anyway, if you want a personal advice, thats it: Write. Do it always as possible, as much as possible. Actually, try to write something everyday. Anything. It may be a paragrah, a phrase, a poem, whatever, just practice. There's not really other way of getting better (unless you're an amazing natural talent)... And don't wait for that epyphany of inspiration to come: there's not this kind of imagical inspiration, you gotta work it out, and believe me, when you begin writing, the ideas do pop out. All you have to do is let yourself get in the story... But, in the very end, there's no universal advice in writing: everyone will say something different, but after all, you just gotta find your own process and style. And that takes time... So yeah, do whatever you feel is better.
  18. JohannDakitsch
    Nice one. Simple, but effective build. I only suggest more care with the colors: the new gold don't go well at all with the rest, and you may want to cover up that black liftarm on the chest. Shoulders have a bit too grey, but I don't know how you could replace those with white... But overall, its good.
  19. JohannDakitsch
    Wow, impressive creation. Very well done, and with a greta integration between system and Bionicle elements. I'm making a not here: Huge succes
  20. JohannDakitsch
    Thanks! Well, the idea was that it brings famine on the world, consuming everything, so, yeah, it was all intentional (kinda). i've done aquick research on the subject (the Four Horseman), just to have some base... Also, I've been wanting to make a MOc with a mouth on its chest for some time already, so I just enjoyed it
  21. JohannDakitsch
    Oh yeah, on the next ones I'll try do polish them a bit more, and give some better work on the limbs (but in Pestilence there might be some intentional gaps). As for the lips, yeah, it could be a good idea, but I would possibly have to use non-purist elements(unless there is a black lego rubber band).. Anyway, I dont find it very necessary, the lack of lips makes it creepier in my opinion.
  22. JohannDakitsch
    "For 12" , by Other Lives
  23. JohannDakitsch
    Very interesting design and some nice techniques. Not very fond on the head, tough(at first I tough it was the center part of its chest, and I would prefer it that way). Nonetheless, great work!
  24. JohannDakitsch
    Nice. Works well, and technically very well done. Its not so appealing aesthetically, but the functionality makes up for that.
  25. JohannDakitsch
    Thanks! The staff is a scale. I did a small research and found out that the biblic passage that describes him says he carries a pair of scales, so I added them.
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