Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Hmm... good idea writing stories. Certainly have enough of them.I shall try to get on the final poll. Considering the fact that it'll probably be a death match between the RPG heavyweights, again.That's my only goal. Last RPG I wrote up got to the finals, and while shorter, I believe it was much more confusing as a story and less interesting than this one.Of course, short always seems better, so if half the voters don't read it... well, you can't vote on it if you didn't read it. (If anyone else makes a long one, I'll read it though.)Next RPG - titled "RPG"The description - you are Bionicle person in a Bionicle world. You are whoever you want to be. Play.Bam! Instant success.-Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorWhenua Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Believe it or not, I have never submitted an RPG for a contest before. For any of you who consider yourselves new or lightweights, fret not. We're in the same boat. BZPRPG Profiles / Critical Acclaim / Complaints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblitus Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 I can't argue with that, EW. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tosha96 Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Just to make sure, once you post your entry, you can edit it right? One of the leaders for B:NG, so ask me if you have any questions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kal the Guardian Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Yes, you can. If you couldn't, half of the RPGs posted would look like they were half finished compared to when you are able to use reviews to make your RPG even better. I know I probably wouldn't have gotten so many votes in the past if I was stuck with my first draft that I posted for an RPG.Although if you change the name of the RPG then you need to inform Black Six. ----------------------------- --------- “BRUH” -Makuta, probably --------- ----------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Indeed, you can edit up until the contest goes up. You can't edit it after the polls are up - I checked a few contests ago to see if I could fix a typo, and I couldn't do it.Which, of course, I've made a number of edits on this post. Whenever I see a mess up in grammar or spelling I try to correct it, but I still have some in there somewhere... blasted Microsoft Word, y u no have proper grammar software?"Deer Grand Mother, I love ewe so much. -You're Grand Sun"No to mention grandmother and grandson are one word each, not two words. Believe it or not, I have never submitted an RPG for a contest before. For any of you who consider yourselves new or lightweights, fret not. We're in the same boat.Your attempt to comfort has failed. You will never be a good therapist. -Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padishah Mehmet II Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Proof that I am actually working on something.Full imageIs that a Bay of Hodor I'm seeing?-Dovydas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorWhenua Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 "You know what makes me sad? You do! Maybe we should chug on over to Mamby Pamby Land, where maybe we can find some self-confidence for you, you jackwagon!"I think I'd still make a better therapist than a drill sergeant. +Dov, that is totally a Bay of Hodor you are seeing. BZPRPG Profiles / Critical Acclaim / Complaints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tosha96 Posted December 4, 2011 Share Posted December 4, 2011 Alright, thanks. On that note, I'll be re-entering my RPG from last contest with a bunch of changes. It did OK, but not really well. I think part of the problem was that the character and race concepts were so abstract, that it was hard to imagine the world. Hopefully, it will get farther this time. Also, I'm probably going to end up using some of the 3D models from the B:NG project to make my ideas stand out, so that will be cool.+Dov, that is totally a Bay of Hodor you are seeing. If it is the bay of Hodor, it needs to have a little island on it called Bran island, or something to that effect. One of the leaders for B:NG, so ask me if you have any questions! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fighty Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 My entry should be dropping in sometime within the next couple of weeks. Inevitably, I'll be blown away by Captain/Lloyd, Parugi, EW, Levacius, TPTI or Kal, but it'll be good to get feedback and whatnot. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorWhenua Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 You're assuming I'm any good at all at making killer RPGs. XP BZPRPG Profiles / Critical Acclaim / Complaints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kal the Guardian Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Yeah, and I haven't exactly won a contest yet. ----------------------------- --------- “BRUH” -Makuta, probably --------- ----------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Shyyrn Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 (edited) ...Yep, definitely a heavyweight fight. It's very fitting for the first RPG contest of the revitalized forums!"War of Elementum-Nui" is my favorite so far, though I await the Captain/Lloyd's entry with great excitement! :)May the best universe win!-Shyyrn Edited December 6, 2011 by Shyyrn "Let me realize that my past failures at follow-through are no indication of my future performance......They're just healthy little fires that are going to light up my resolve." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 My entry should be dropping in sometime within the next couple of weeks. Inevitably, I'll be blown away by Captain/Lloyd, Parugi, EW, Levacius, TPTI or Kal, but it'll be good to get feedback and whatnot.Its not like I've never been beaten before. Early Days got knocked out in the semi-finals despite already having a player-base. It got just got edged out by Trapped in a Map I think Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Just edit'd my Entry to look better.Looking at how many players normally play in a RPG, I may need a co-host. Any takers?Also, am I the person with the least amount of posts to every enter a RPG contest? I ave 470, including this post. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kovolta Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Its not like I've never been beaten before. Early Days got knocked out in the semi-finals despite already having a player-base. It got just got edged out by Trapped in a Map I thinkWould just like to point out that in the above case, Early Days beat out TiaM, and tied for third with the Fall of Four and One, which is probably what you meant.Also, am I the person with the least amount of posts to every enter a RPG contest? I ave 470, including this post.Definitely not. Take a look at my post count, I'm not that much farther ahead of you, and i've been entering for a few years yet. BBCC #68 The Iron Tiger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Wyrd Bid Ful Araed Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Its not like I've never been beaten before. Early Days got knocked out in the semi-finals despite already having a player-base. It got just got edged out by Trapped in a Map I thinkWould just like to point out that in the above case, Early Days beat out TiaM, and tied for third with the Fall of Four and One, which is probably what you meant.I remember there was one where it was a tie and ED ended up on the losing end, and that TiaM was involved somehow. So did you get bumped down to fourth by the tie? Whoops, sorry about bringing that up again then Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kovolta Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 Yeah, but I did make it to the final poll in the next contest. However, I lost third to Gangs of MN by one vote. I did beat out Island of Pain in that one though. BBCC #68 The Iron Tiger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 I bet anything my RPG won't even get past the first round.Oh well. it was fun to design. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr. House Posted December 6, 2011 Share Posted December 6, 2011 I'm certain mine will make it past to the second round, at least. I occasionally return to BZP for a nostalgic trip back. Hit me up on discord if you need anything. BZPRPG Characters that I will possibly revive, Mons-Shajs-Tarotrix-Aryll Vudigg-Jorruk Yokin-Senavysh Angavur Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 I have yet to read yours. Shall go do that right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Never be certain of anything. You can hope. I hope my RPG will pass to the finals. I can't be certain of it. Only a few things are certain - BZPRPG will always be there, because it's staff controlled, and bacon is delicious.If great fusion of horror movie monsters your RPG passes to the second round (probably the finals), it was not because of certainty but that you did a good job. Likewise Darkon you may very well pass to the finals - maybe win.Actually, one thing is certain. The Captain will win unless, you know, he breaks his hands and can never type again. But that's pretty unlikely, and he'll probably find somebody to post it for him. :PPeace out (because it's for hippies).-Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EmperorWhenua Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 (edited) Epoch of Despair is out NOW!There are doubtlessly some typos and formatting issues, so be sure to point them out to me in the review topic. Edited December 7, 2011 by EmperorWhenua BZPRPG Profiles / Critical Acclaim / Complaints Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fighty Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 (edited) Epoch of Despair is out NOW!There are doubtlessly some typos and formatting issues, so be sure to point them out to me in the review topic.Alright, since that response was filtered let's try some rewording...Thine entry hath caused me to soil mine trousers. Edited December 7, 2011 by TheMightyFighty Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padishah Mehmet II Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Techna is my favourite so far because I've been promised a co-GM spot.... Hm, let's blackmail you all a bit: if it wins, I promise GoMN returns next season.-Dovydas Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 You're bluffing. GoMN will return next season anyways. -Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Simulacrum Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 What's GoMN?Anyway, I edit'd my RPG For the LAST time. So go read it already. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Padishah Mehmet II Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 (edited) You're bluffing. GoMN will return next season anyways. -Toa Levacius Zehvor Dangit. My bluff has been seen through. Dang you, Levacius.What's GoMN?Anyway, I edit'd my RPG For the LAST time. So go read it already. I refuse to respond to this post out of spite. How dare you not know.J/k. Gangs of Metru Nui, my RPG a precise couple of seasons ago. Won. Was pretty badbehind, too.-Dovydas Edited December 7, 2011 by Dovydas the Nerevarine Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legolover-361 Posted December 7, 2011 Share Posted December 7, 2011 Just because the heavyweights are entering doesn't mean I'm out of the competition yet. (( BZPRPG profiles: Kynaera, Nova )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Skarloth Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Just because the heavyweights are entering doesn't mean I'm out of the competition yet. Oh yes it does.Though all my votes go to EN: TSW, Techna, and maybe this new Arena of Honor thing...And another if someone begs. >:3(jk)-Skar Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Oblitus Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 (edited) If we're talking voting then I'll go for: Techna, Arena of Honour, and deciding on either mine, EN2:TSW, ED, IoP, or KD. Edited December 8, 2011 by Rakata Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Fighty Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Right now I'm leaning Techna, Epoch of Despair and whatever Captain / Lloyd have up their sleeve.And my own of course, but if I get knocked out those are the ones I'm going for. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legolover-361 Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 At this point I'd vote for Epoch of Despair, Arena of Honor, and (no, really) Techna. But then, my opinion may be a little biased. (( BZPRPG profiles: Kynaera, Nova )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kal the Guardian Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Finally! Dreamland is posted! Unfortunately, I can't get any images to work yet and the spacing seems to keep warping out of proportion, but it's up! Now to do some more reviewing. ----------------------------- --------- “BRUH” -Makuta, probably --------- ----------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 All right! I'll try to review as quickly as possible.-Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Parugi Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 No DR? D:but... but... we're so close to finishing... Just one more season. Then you can all enter your RPGs and win. Follow me on YouTube! ~ Rise of the Rockets (I II)/Discussion Topic/Side Stories ~ Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Levacius Zehvor Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 (edited) I guess I might as well post my faves as well -Shamelessly I will vote my own RPG. :PI really like Epoch of Despair and Island of Pain (obviously to the latter) and will vote for them, along with my own (if any of the three make it) in the finals. Those two I would enjoy playing.After that, not in order of how good they are, but how much I would like to play, they are -Dreamland (unless Kal somehow made it worse from last time), Knives in the Dark, Techna, Arena of Honor, Dark Mirror, Enemies of Justice, Bionicle: Mystery Voyage 2001-Toa Levacius Zehvor Edited December 8, 2011 by Toa Levacius Zehvor "I disapprove of what you have to say, but I will defend to the death your right to say it." - Evelyn Beatrice Hall (often attributed to Voltaire) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Legolover-361 Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 I hope Dreamland's entry hasn't knocked me out of the competition for good. Seriously, it seems really good with a unique twist. (( BZPRPG profiles: Kynaera, Nova )) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kal the Guardian Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 I hope Dreamland's entry hasn't knocked me out of the competition for good. Seriously, it seems really good with a unique twist.Well, thanks. I haven't read yours yet, so I can't say by how much Dreamland is better than it. Naw I'm kidding.Yeah, I took inspiration from Lev's timeline and am creating a detailed history for the island. It probably won't be seen by anyone except for me, but it'll sure help me in making the RPG have an awesome, deep story instead of the hastily thought out plan that it was last contest. XD ----------------------------- --------- “BRUH” -Makuta, probably --------- ----------------------------- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Toa Kovolta Posted December 8, 2011 Share Posted December 8, 2011 Wow, people are already posting favs. I'm really honoured that I'm on some of these lists, but there's still two more weeks left in the contest...Anyways, gonna try and get some reviews done now. BBCC #68 The Iron Tiger Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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