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#1 Offline Leraku

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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 01:01 PM

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chron·ic

adjective
persisting for a long time or constantly recurring.
 
 
 
Welcome to Chronic Records, a CYOA comic!
As inferred by the abbreviation, a Choose Your Own Adventure comic runs on community input - you send in what you want to happen next!
 
The comic is based on the MNOG storyline, more or less (creative liberties may apply).
 
Please send in Action Commands prefaced by the character's name. For example:
Tahu: Fight Bohrok.
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Cameos are being handled differently this time around! Cameo characters will more likely just be seen in the background - they won't be integral to the story, most likely.
 
And now... we begin.
 
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You have awoken in a strange new place - at least, it seems strange and new to you. You can't remember where you are, or who you are, for that matter.
 
What will you do?

Edited by -Windrider-, Jun 22 2014 - 04:57 PM.

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#2 Offline Leraku

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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 05:44 PM

???: Enter name.

 

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Various names and terms come to your mind in an entourage of degrading self-depriciation.

 

You find this to be incredibly silly and pointless, though this strange train of thought has jogged your boggled memory.

 

Your name is Takua! It's a good thing you remembered your name. People would probably think you were some kind of nutcase if you couldn't remember your name!

 

 

 

Takua: Look around.

 

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You take a glance around to gain your bearings.

 

You appear to be on some sort of beach nearby some cliffs and mountains. There seems to be some sort of large metal capsule nearby. There is a large indentation in the sand nearby, and some markings like whatever was there got dragged. Nearby, those, there appears to be smaller indentations - footprints or tracks, leading elsewhere.

 

What will you do?


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#3 Offline Leraku

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Posted Dec 27 2013 - 09:10 PM

Takua: Look in the capsule.

 

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You check inside the pod. It's... pretty empty. You sit on the edge after having to crawl in to look into the back. It's a nice spot in the shade, though. Whatever was in this thing must've been taken - unless it picked itself up and walked away!

 

Because that could never happen!

HA. HA HA HA. HA HA.

 

You think you'll stop cackling to yourself nervously now.

 

What will you do?


Edited by Leraku, Dec 29 2013 - 12:56 PM.

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#4 Offline SarracenianKaijin

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Posted Dec 28 2013 - 09:37 AM

Takua: Eat fish.


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Reach Heaven by Violence.

 

And while you are at it, see Bionicle characters as Magical Girls.


#5 Offline Leraku

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Posted Dec 28 2013 - 10:43 AM

Takua: Eat fish.

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Takua: Eat fish.

 

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You don't have any FISH!

This is a quandary that highly distresses you!

 

What will you do?


Edited by Leraku, Jan 23 2014 - 08:52 AM.

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Posted Dec 28 2013 - 03:03 PM

Takua: Do the hokepokey

 

This is funny just a question does this take place before or after the events of monlg


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#7 Offline ArcticFreeze17

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Posted Dec 28 2013 - 04:07 PM

Takua: Bury yourself in the sand and tan yourself.

BTW, this is pretty cool.


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#8 Offline Leraku

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Posted Dec 29 2013 - 07:00 AM

Takua: Do the hokepokey

 

This is funny just a question does this take place before or after the events of monlg

 

 

 


 
The comic is based on the MNOG storyline, more or less (creative liberties may apply).

 


(Yes. During. As in this is the 'start of the game'.)

 

 

 

Takua: Do the Hokey Pokey.

 

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You don't have any hokeys to poke!

You're not sure what hokeys are anyways, so you do a silly little dance in hopes of placating your strange urge to poke hokeys.

 

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Takua: Bury yourself in the sand and tan yourself.

 

Um...

 

...You're not really sure what tanning is...

 

...or why you'd want to be covered in sand again...

 

but...

 

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Are you doing it right?

 

 

 

What will you do?


Edited by Leraku, Feb 07 2014 - 07:57 AM.

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Posted Dec 29 2013 - 10:29 PM

Well, seem legit! :D

 

Takua: Explore.


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Posted Dec 29 2013 - 10:32 PM

Well, seem legit! :D

 

Takua: Explore.

 

I love dis. I can destroy Takua. Right?

Takua: Explore and jump off the tallest tree in the forest.


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Posted Dec 30 2013 - 12:41 PM

Takua:  Pretend the pod is your own personal koro

 

 

Sooo, this is a bzpstuck like thing?


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Posted Jan 01 2014 - 11:19 AM

It's like his two(or maybe three?) CYOA comics that he's made in the style of mspaintadventures. But I'll bite.

 

Takua: Take a look around the beach.


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Posted Jan 01 2014 - 01:01 PM

Takua: Go follow the markings and Kill the thing with fire.

What do you mean by "Creative Liberties?"

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Posted Jan 01 2014 - 01:36 PM

Takua: Find a wild animal, kill and eat it. Not necessarily in that order.

 

I have no idea where this thing is gonna go next.


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Posted Jan 01 2014 - 02:57 PM

It's like his two(or maybe three?) CYOA comics that he's made in the style of mspaintadventures. But I'll bite.

 

Takua: Take a look around the beach.

 

The first one was heavily inspired. The second, I was trying to reboot the story due to massive flaws. This one, I'm sticking completely to Bionicle with some webcomic-inspired references.

 

Takua: Go follow the markings and Kill the thing with fire.

What do you mean by "Creative Liberties?"

 

Temporarily story derailing, changing things up a little bit. Just fun little shenanigans.

 

 

I love dis. I can destroy Takua. Right?

Takua: Explore and jump off the tallest tree in the forest.

 

 

Destroy him..? Not necessarily.

 

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Also! For the record. I've got this next strip planned out, so don't worry about sending more until the next update. New Year's just got me a little tuckered out to whip up the panel(s?).


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Posted Jan 02 2014 - 07:14 PM

Takua: Start walking left into the unforeseen environment you now find yourself. Keep walking along the shore line until you find someone, something, or complete a full circle(?) of the map and reach the strange pod.

 

Takua: Explore.

 

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You assume to go to the perspective's left - your right. You won't stop until you find somethi-

 

OW WHO PUT THIS CLIFF HERE

WHO WOULD DO THIS

 

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YOU FIND THIS INCREDIBLY DISTRESSING

(distress intensifies)

What will you do?


Edited by Leraku, Jan 02 2014 - 09:36 PM.

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Posted Jan 03 2014 - 03:15 PM

This is really fascinating. I loved the MNOLG, and this new take is really cool, but I'm excited by the comedic possibilities a CYOA-style story could introduce!


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Posted Jan 10 2014 - 05:24 AM

Takua: Attempt to break the fourth wall.


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Posted Jan 11 2014 - 12:45 AM

Nice to see that I'm not the only person doing a CYOA comic. Though mine's older than yours lol. :D

 

Takua: Spread your wings and FLY NOWWWWW


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Posted Jan 11 2014 - 08:14 AM

Takua: Attempt to break the fourth wall.

 

Takua: Spread your wings and FLY NOWWWWW

 

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...Ow.

 

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Posted Jan 12 2014 - 02:34 AM

Takua: Go find the nearest village.

Seems about right to start an adventure.

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Posted Jan 12 2014 - 02:41 AM

Takua: use TOY DUCKIE on cliff.


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Posted Jan 16 2014 - 02:26 PM

Takua: Get back to the place you were before.

 

Takua: use TOY DUCKIE on cliff.

 

Takua: Go find nearest village.

 

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...Okay. You're back now.

 

Problem is, you don't have a TOY DUCKIE...

...and since you have no idea where you are (memory loss) it could be days of just wandering. Why not give yourself a direction to go in?

 

...Oh. And you suppose you have the power to bypass the FOURTH WALL and exit the panel whenever you want, now. That might come in handy.

 

What will you do?


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Posted Jan 16 2014 - 05:04 PM

Takua: Worry incessantly about that nasty cough.


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Posted Jan 16 2014 - 07:12 PM

Takua: Go West, young man.


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Posted Jan 16 2014 - 07:20 PM

Takua: Go West, young man.

  

Takua: Worry incessantly about that nasty cough.


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Leraku: GET ON WITH THE STORY.

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Posted Jan 16 2014 - 08:24 PM

Pupwa, keep your posts relevant and not spammish, comics take time, it'll be done when it's done.

I too vote west, but stay alert for any unsavory creatures.

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Posted Jan 17 2014 - 05:22 AM

Oh hey, a new is up. Poor Takua, he should really find that toy Duckie. I'm sure he could have very good use of it.

 

Takua: Follow the footprints and draw silly things into them, boy!


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Posted Jan 22 2014 - 08:17 PM

Takua: Go West, young man.

 

Takua: Follow the footprints and draw silly things into them, boy!

 

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Okay, sure. You're not sure if you're going west, but this is one way to have a little fun when following ominous footprints.

You figure you're the best at drawing silly things in sand.

You're pretty sure that's absolutely correct and you are most certainly the best there is.

 

What will you do?

 

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Takua: Go West, young man.

  

Takua: Worry incessantly about that nasty cough.


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Leraku: GET ON WITH THE STORY.

 

 

Goodness. I've left an edit in the OP about this now - I don't think it's that big of an issue anymore, so let's not be pointing it out to people deliberately.

Furthermore, unlike my past comics I don't really have a big story for this! It's mostly just us having some fun going along the MNOLG storyline. Maybe a little embellishment for kicks, but otherwise it's nothing big.


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Posted Jan 23 2014 - 03:59 AM

Leraku, I just love that sand texture up there. It's just point there. No, really. I never really noticed it until now and the drawings are just cute. :D

 

Takua: Take it up a notch, boy! Build silly things out of the sand along the footprints and see if you can pimp them up with whatever the sea has washed on shore!


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Posted Jan 23 2014 - 09:31 PM

Takua:  Suddenly come to the realization that these footprints, LEAD TO A VILLAGE.

 

Environment:  Play suspense music.

 

 

This looks like it might go somewhere fun.


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Posted Jan 25 2014 - 11:03 AM

Water: Block way.

Takua: Forget how to swim.

That sand looks like a carpet.

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Posted Jan 25 2014 - 01:42 PM

Takua: Get lost in some woods.

 

It does indeed look like a carpet.


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Posted Jan 26 2014 - 12:07 AM

Leraku: GET ON WITH IT


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Morally unambiguous.


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Posted Jan 26 2014 - 07:47 AM

Leraku: GET ON WITH IT

 

I've been crazy busy lately. I'm really sorry about it, but I've been swamped with schoolwork, working at relatives' places to raise money, and all sorts of things - including an upcoming birthday. I do have updates 'planned out' in a way - once I see the ACs, I think up an idea to incorporate them. However, /making/ the comic can be time-consuming - especially when I have to make new backgrounds. I know it's just one panel, but I'm just an 'average' comic maker trying to make relatively high-quality stuff - it can take longer than you'd think.

 

So... in short, It'll be done as soon as I can get around to it. I really do want to work on it, life just keeps getting in the way lately.

 

Edit: Furthermore, my right eye is having problems. I hope it'll get worked out soon, but I have barely any peripheral vision in my right eye and have an extremely hard time focusing my eyes on things as a huge portion of the right side of my vision is fluctuating/blurring, which really disorients me.


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Posted Jan 30 2014 - 11:00 PM

Takua: Take it up a notch, boy! Build silly things out of the sand along the footprints and see if you can pimp them up with whatever the sea has washed on shore!

 

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You couldn't find anything along the beach, and it was difficult to shape the darned thing, so you focused on making it at EXACT ANGLES rather than making it all detailed. But you are satisfied.

 

You now rule over a tiny kingdom of sand, and you are its RUTHLESS DICTATOR. Your word is law in this glorious dwelling - none may stand before you and say otherwise in your estate, it is impervious, nobody can stop you now-

 

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ooooooooooooooooooooooooohhhhh nyoooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...

 

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...ooooooooooooooooaAAAAWHO IS THAT GUY

 

 

 

What will you do?


Edited by Leraku, Feb 06 2014 - 07:39 PM.

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Posted Jan 31 2014 - 12:43 AM

Oooh, this looks fun. I likey.

 

Takua: Build your army of sand to stand against this newfound foe and take back your kingdom!


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Posted Jan 31 2014 - 07:33 AM

Takua: Get lost in some woods.


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Posted Jan 31 2014 - 10:03 AM

Takua find a cute little muaka to pet.

 

looks like dictator takua will have some problems with the wave now.


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Posted Jan 31 2014 - 03:30 PM

Takua: And on that day sandkind received a grim reminder.


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