Okay I guess I should do the welcoming since no-one else has volunteered. Welcome to BZPower! It's a magical place, which I guess you might have known for some time, since this place is pretty famous. Second order of business: your MOC! Truth be told, it's a bit of a "clone", which essentially means that the MOC does not incorporate any unique features; just prefab limbs, head, and body (something that irks quite a lot of Bionicle builders). That and the fact that the MOC only uses white on the forearms. This is an example of color incoherence, which takes away a bit more from the overall appearance. Finally, the MOC's rather bland color scheme is another minus IMHO. That being said, the silver lining (hehe, see what I did there) is the fact that the armor is creative in some places, which does seem to redeem it in some aspects. I don't mean to offend you at all; forgive me if my tone has done anything of that sort. The fact of the matter is that when you post here, you're pretty much expecting criticism. Which is a good thing, because people who criticize your MOC's mean to help you improve what they think is wrong with it. It's not a bad MOC, but it's not special.