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BIONICLE Mafia XVII: Burnmad's Carnival of Death


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Done.

 

The Second Chapter

First Day of the Carnival

 

SmoothJazz to be Hanged

 

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The Village gathers.

 

SmoothJazz is led through the crowd.

 

They all fall silent.

 

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Taka wipes her brow.

 

SmoothJazz ascends the gallows.

 

Voltex sighs, relieved.

 

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The hangman beckons.

 

Smoothjazz says his final words.

 

"Wasn't me, this time."

 

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The lever is thrown.

 

SmoothJazz falls through open air.

 

The rope is pulled taut.

 

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The Acrobat dies.

 

Innocent, and yet guilty.

 

Hanged on the first day.

 

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The crowd mobs Kaiser.

 

They push him after SmoothJazz.

 

He climbs up the stairs.

 

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Kaiser is hanged, next.

 

The Clown, the true killer, dies.

 

Hanged on the first day.

 

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What was with this scene?

 

Does Burn emulate Zer0?

 

He just likes haiku.

 

- :burnmad:

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Friends, family, delinquents, colleagues, acquaintances, fellow players, and Host. Know that I did not want Toa K to be killed. I did not want any of my fellow brothers or sisters to be killed. I was a puppet marionetted by a mad mendacious psychopath who wish to cause death and destruction to innocents who refused to go to his twisted carnival. I swear to you in my ditch, this MONSTER will face an unmerciful death upon the hands of justice.

 

 

 

 

Btw. I was typing this on an Xbox.

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Alright, everyone, I've finished the second night scene.

Before we begin, I should say that even though I

Could just neglect this game to play Destiny all

Day and night, I'm committed to finish this for you guys.

Ending that message, I present to you the

Finished Night 2 scene:

Guided by the light of a full moon, a Brakas monkey

Headed down the street with its distinctive screech of "kau kau".

In the buildings along the street, MT was woken up by the noise

Just after he had gotten to sleep. Storming out of the house, with the intention of

Killing the pest, he found the streets utterly empty. As he

Looked around for the source of the noise, he saw the monkey

Marching along about 100 yards down the street. A scuffling

Noise above him went unheard as he followed the beast.

On his reaching it, it repeated, much louder this time. A second monkey, which had

Probably been following him on the rooftops, had now jumped off, and landed on MT.

Quickly, the two Brakas, joined shortly by several others, pummeled the Matoran,

Reducing him to a mass of bone fractures and contusions. He was a Villager, killed on the

Second night by the Rahi Tamer.

The animals returned to the one

Under whose command the crime had been carried out. Elsewhere, a

Very suspicious gift

Was being opened by a nervous Matoran, the Detective was investigating his man,

X was being X, and an unfortunate soul was being interrogated by the Guard.

Yours truly was eagerly awaiting the release of Destiny, and all the others were catching

Z's in their beds.

 

Edit: Er uh

 

A suspect list might help

 

Ehks

Rahkshi Guurahk

Watcher on the Walls

Zakaro

 

- :burnmad:

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