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#1 Offline Chro

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 07:30 AM

Posted ImageJerbraz, invisible OOMN agent.Feedback is appreciated.
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#2 Offline Van Hohenheim

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 07:57 AM

exactly how I thought of him. the legs are good, the upper torso is nice, but the lower could use some work. but that's not really noticeable. I only noticed it when I was trying to find something bad in it :P


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#3 Offline AdaptingChaos

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 08:42 AM

:D nice torso design!

Like all the poses very much! :D


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#4 Offline Mohamed Marei

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 09:14 AM

That's very clever of you :P btw where did you get that mask? Looks epic :D:tohu:
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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 09:19 AM

Blue pin on the shoulder sticks out a bit, you want to try and cover that up or something. 


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#6 Offline Paleo

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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 09:23 AM

A fantastic blend of colors and textures! I really like the clean transition between the waist and hips, though the posing could be a bit more realistic. The shoulder and chest connection could be cleaned up though. The hands look great, but could flow more if you used a different piece for the thumb. Overall, it captures his likeness perfectly.


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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 09:26 AM

1/10

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I would say change the colour scheme. Way too much grey.


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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 09:42 AM

Just as I imagined him. I like how you made the torso.
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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 10:36 AM

I can't see anything. Don't know if it's a problem with MOCpages, or a joke.


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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 10:57 AM

The MOC is nicely designed. I especially liked how you built the legs and the torso. The color scheme could use a bit of work though. Nothing looks good if it's just one color.
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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 11:01 AM

... Is this a joke?@Phantom Terror: Jerbraz is permanently invisible.
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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 11:12 AM

I knew that. But I would really like to see him.


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Posted Apr 01 2013 - 01:43 PM

I thought it was pretty obvious that it was a joke, considering I apparently MOCed an invisible character. :PThis topic will likely be locked (or even deleted, I don't know) after today, but it was worth it. :lol:


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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 12:52 AM

I thought it was pretty obvious that it was a joke, considering I apparently MOCed an invisible character. :PThis topic will likely be locked (or even deleted, I don't know) after today, but it was worth it. :lol:

I think it deserves to be kept open, seeing as this is one of the better Troll Day pranks I've seen.

 

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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 05:44 AM

Really? LOL. I must admit I was surprised by how many people fell for it. :lol:Well I suppose it's up to the staff. The day's over and with it the joke. It was fun, I don't care what happens to the topic, haha.
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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 06:48 AM

The sexiest most awesome creation I have [color=rgb(255,255,255);]n[/color]ever seen.

 

Keep up the work Ben! =D


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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 07:25 AM

Well, he's not completely invisible in the pictures. We still have the one linking to the gallery, remember?And his hand looks kinda really cool, BTW =)
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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 07:58 AM

I'm laughing on the inside, while looking at your joke after one day it has passed.


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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 09:32 AM

Well, he's not completely invisible in the pictures. We still have the one linking to the gallery, remember?And his hand looks kinda really cool, BTW =)

Good point, Zeene. :P That's just a "ghosted" shot of Osmur, another MOC of mine (which I do intend to revamp).

The sexiest most awesome creation I have [color=#ffffff;]n[/color]ever seen. Keep up the work Ben! =D

Thanks Auron. :lol:

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Posted Apr 02 2013 - 11:30 AM

Seeing as April Fool's is over now...Topic closed.
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